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...Aphrodite... thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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I'll try my best guys...😊

Muskaan felt totally embarrassed and couldn't bare looking at him again...did she just say what think she said??...something about Rahul just made her make no sense and after every conversation with him she was left more confused than ever before. 😳😳

His pager beeped:
"SABHI NIGHT SHIFT INTERNS AAP GHAR JAA SAKTE HAI, AAPKI DUTY KHATAM HOGAYI HAI"

Rahul (who seemed to be too wrapped up in what had just happened) jumped and realised he finally had the night and Muskaan all to himself...finally.
"chale memsahib??" 😉
They got into Rahul's car and drove home...Rahul was so tired he fell asleep straight away but Muskaan on the other hand was wide awake.
"Hai babaji yeh mujhe kya hua...yeh kamina mujhe din mein bhi nahi chen se jeene deta hai or raat ko bhi!!....Uski yaadein raat ko theen baje mujhe kyun saatane lagi??" 😡😡
Frustrated to the max she got up out of bed and jumped into the bath. Feeling completely relaxed she slipped into her black silk nighty...she never wore this when Rahul was around but it was too hot and hey he was sleeping...why not?
She looked out of the window whilst she dried her hair and admired the moon which seemed to give her a radiant glow and the silk black nighty she was in hugged her figure perfectly whilst the moon light bounced of it.
"Poonam ki raat?...Kehte hai full moon mein log aur halat ajeeb se hojate hai...what rubbish!"

Just then she felt two firm hands making their way across her waist pulling her closer to a warm body. She could feel her heart beating against her chest, but no...what was she doing??
"Rahul yeh teekh nahi hai...mujhe chod do.."
But he didn't care anymore...nothing could or would stop him...
"aaj nahi muskaan"
He moved her hair to one side sending shivers down her spine and as he kissed her neck slowly she leaned back into his warmth as he held her closer.

Drifting in and out of consciousness she sighed "Rahul...nah-i..."

But this spurred him on even more than before... he whispered from behind into her ear..

."Mere aankhon mein dekh ke naa kaho Muskaan"

He turned her around from her waist and scared to look up into his eyes knowing well what effect they had on her she refused to look up.
Eventually she plucked up the courage and raised her eyes...they could've been there for 5 minutes or 50 but time had stopped.
And as they stood there immersed into each other she realised she just couldn't do this anymore, she couldn't fight her feelings...fight herself anymore...but she also couldn't fall for Rahul. She was making a mistake.
So as Rahul leaned in...a single tear strolled down her face and she ran away.
Rahul couldn't take it any more...he didn't know who he was more angry at Muskaan or himself...he couldn't take being so close yet so far....
his frustration got the the better of him and as he plummeted his fist against a wall, a weeping Muskaan hearing this next door held her knees and cried all night ...😭


sorry for the lack of dialogue...i was trying to make them talk more but hey maybe the next person will....
hope you guys enjoyed...that was my first 😳😳
Edited by Shrina1503 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#42

OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!!

I fell of my chair reading that! 🤪
When i imagined that whole part 😍, I almost skipped a beat!
As I was reading it...i was like..."uh oh! its getting serious!" but u know what, that's high time...
we are in the 6th part...they gotta act like 23 year olds rt? 😆
awesome update!!!
Edited by mits002 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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The next day, Rahul woke up and the first thing that struck his mind was Muskaan. He came outside the room but she was not there. He looked everywhere. He eventually gethered strength and knocked keerti's room.
Keerti coming out..
R: Good Morning Mam.
K: Good morning, Dr. Rahul...kuch kaam tha?
R: Haan..woh..Muskaan kahi dikhayi nahi de rahi.
K: Oh..haan...Aaj subhe ko wo mere paas aayi thi..kuch udaas si lag rahi thi..pata nahi..muje bol rahi thi ki aaj wo early morning shift karna chahti kyunki use kahi bahar jaana hain dupahar ko..
Rahul was confused!
K: Kuch hua aap dono je beech? (keerti asked reluctantly, not trying to interfere)
R: Nahi...actually wo kal raat ko...uhmm...i mean kal raat se kuch ajeeb behave kar rahi thi. (HE lied)
K: Oh..wo Sanjivani mein hogi abhi..aap use wahi kyun nahi mil lete..
R: hmm...
Rahul was in Sanjivani in next half hour.
He went all around in the Sanjivani but couldnt find her..
He looked at the Duty Chart and saw that Muskaan was supposed to assist Shubhankar in a surgery.
He ran to the OT and saw only Shubhankar operating..
he waited till the surgery was over ...
When Shubhankar came out:
R: Hello Sir!
S: Hello Dr. Rahul...aaj itni subah subah..aap ko bhi early morning shift hain kya?
R: Nahi..wo..muskaan aapke saath...nahi hai?
S: Wo thi..lekin aap to jante hain ki use surgery mein kitna darr lagta...lekin aaj kuch alag sa darr tha..I had to tell her to leave...
Rahul was soo worried..Why did he do what he did last night.
He went to his locker room..and saw a letter stuck to his locker.
he opened it..
Hi Rahul,
Main jaanti hoon, ki tum muje dhoond rahe ho..lekin main tumse milna nahi chahti. Main yeh bhi jaanti hoon ki hamare bich jo kuch bhi ho raha hain in dino mein..wo pehle kabhi nahi hua..
Hum shayad yeh jhoothi shaadi ko sach samaj rahe hain. aur main ye nahi chahti.
Main kuch waqt chahti hoon, akele.. HUM ko samajne ka..apne aap ko samajne ka..
I hope you understand.
Muskaan
Rahul closed the letter and went to the place he knew Muskaan would be there... the terrace.
ok ok... i know this was soo lame compared to the one before me...but i couldnt stop myself...
Edited by mits002 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#44
wow shrina. that was something. gave me shivers.
good job mits.
i wish i could write like you guys.
😛
Edited by stellarwind - 16 years ago
...Aphrodite... thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
#45
Thanks guys...well done Mits...cool update!
I was going to carry on but i'm not sure because I've just seen the 7th series come out.
But i really want the story to carry on....what say guys...can we request the creator of this thread to carry on with this story.
It's only just started to get good.
x.sonia.x thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
#46
sounds good to me.
we can start the 7th next weekend.
and do continue. awaiting more.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#47
ill continue:
rahul went to the terrace like running as fast as he could and there he saw muskaan sitting down crying with her knees close to her and her chin resting on her knees.
seeing her like that rahul felt extremely guilty, he walked towards her..
r: muskaan, im really sorry, mujhe tujhe dhuk nahin dena chata tha.. please mere vaja se tu itna udas ma ho, agar tujhe chahiye to main sanjeevani chorke chala jayunga lekin tu mat ro please
muskaan cried even harder and hugged rahul
m: rahul, please mujhse vada kar ki tu mujhe chorke kabhie nahin jayega, main mar jayungi... maine bahut socha aur tujhse acha ladka mujhe kabhie nahin milega
r: kya? tu....
m: haan rahul, i love you!!!!
r: i love you too muskaan!
and they both hug and felt like the whole world has stopped and they didnt want to think of anything else, both of them didnt want to leave, they just wanted to stay in this postition and never move!!
the weekend is ending, so i thought i should write a confession, so next week we can start another one! this weekend fun with rm was really fun! great job!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#48
lol!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NICE ENDING OF THE WEEKEND... I REALLY LIKE IT 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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i als olyked that
next weekend v ll have a blast
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Posted: 16 years ago
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heyy this was a cool way of ending n im really waiting for the next weekend....

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