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Posted: 16 years ago
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Ok i am back..
I think namrata and I almost had the same ending...so doesn't matter...
i will start from when Rahul looks towards muskaan for permission.

Muskaan looks back at him, slowly. and blinks.
Rahul gave her a smile and got out of the car and walked towards Nikita.

R: Kya hua?
N: Yeh dekho na..meri car, aaj hi aur ab hi kharaab honi thi.
R: Dont worry, hum tumhe ghar drop kar lenge.
N: hum? (and she looks at his car to see Muskaan staring back at them!) Ohh.. ofcourse. Par, are u sure rahul? Main tum ko..
R: Ab itni raat ko koi mechanic to milaga nahi, kal hi theek karne padegi na...to phir.
N: ok.

Rahul walked her over to his car and Nikita sat in the back seat.

N: Hi muskaan.
M: Hi..
N: Wo meri car .....
M: Its ok, hum tumhe drop kar denge.
Rahul was happy to see that Muskaan was not jealous anymore.

In the car.
While driving, Rahul slowly brought his hand and grabbed muskaan's hand. (not looking towards her)
Muskaan jerked and stared back at him.
And tried freeing her hand from his grip.
Nikita saw this and smiled.
Rahul would not her hand go...
Muskaan: Rahul!! Chhod mera haath. (And hit him on his shoulder.)
R: OUCH!!
N: bas bas ...yahi..mera ghar aa gaya...!

Rahul stopped car,
R: Kal main tumhe pick up kar loonga, ok?
N: Main taxi se aa jaungi..
R: msch..Nikita...main aa jaunga! Byeee..
N: Par...
Rahul staarted his car...Nikita just smiled.

Muskaan was flaming again! This Rahul ka bachha!

M: Abe, ghadhe ki tang, Tune mera haath kyun pakda tha?
R: Teri problem kya hain,, Main to sirf nikita ko dikhane ki koshish kar raha tha, ki we are happily married. Tum yahi chahti thi na?!
Muskaan was shut...she didnt know what to say.
M: haan theek hain theek hain.

I am sorry for such lame update...
Couldnt think of anything now....
but please continueeeeee!!



Edited by mits002 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#22
hey people im really sorry i didnt see that mits002 updated, i think thers something wrong with IF because it was never there.. and my update had come on the second page, and now its sumhow on the 3rd.. well great job mits.. sorry dunt know your real name. i realy liked ur part.. please continue soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#23
koi to continue karo yaar!

Kaha gaye saare ke saare RM fans??

😔
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Posted: 16 years ago
#24
v r here itself....coti nue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#25
wow. why is no one continuing this? its so sad...
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Posted: 16 years ago
#26

loved it!!!!! SOME ONE PLEASEEEEEEEEEE CONTINUE

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Posted: 16 years ago
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ok ill continue now:
next morning... muskaan woke up before rahul..
she goes but because of his pillows she tripped and fell on him while he was still sleeping.. she wanted to be angry a him but she somehow felt somthing inside her that didnt want her to move
rahul got up like this and saw muskaan staring at him..
THEY HAVE AN AWESOME EYELOCK! After a few seconds muskaan reallizes that rahul was awake and that both of them were staring at each other
m: uhmm... er.. woh... rahul.. humhe sanjeevani jaana hai... tum jaldi se tayar ho ja.. she quickly ran away from there so that she didnt have to face rahul
and there rahul is still laying down smiling!
they got up and were driving to sanjeevani in silence... both of them wanted to talk but they felt as if they didnt have the right words... so instead rahul put some music
m: rahul, please ye music bandh kar na mere sar me bahout dard ho raha hai
rahul got all tensed
r: muskaan! tune mujhe kuch bataya hi nahin.... chal hum wapas ghar chalte hai aur main tujhe dawaai dehta hoon
m: rahul nahin theek hai.. main theek hoon.. hum sanjeevani hi chalte hai warna hitler humhe overtime duty de degi.
r: are u sure??? mujhe koi farak nahin parta agar mujhe over time duty mille, bas teri fikar hai, tu theek hai na?
muskaan saw him in the eyes, and realized that there is something between them because this is their first conversation where they didnt fight or argue not even once.
hope you all liked it! someone please continue soon!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#28
awesome namrata...continuing!!

Rahul suddenly remembered that he had to go pick up Nikita. 😉 (A promise is a promise)

He started going other direction,
M: Kaha Jaa rahe ho?
R: Nikita ko pick up karne..bhool gayi, uski car kharab ho gayi hain.
M: Tok ya tune uska theka le rakha hain.
Rahul rolled his eyes.

M: Aur waise bhi, agar late pahuche to hitler hume .....
R: Tu kabhi chup nahi reh sakti. Ab muje sar dard kar raha hain. Agar tu chahe to main tuje pehle drop kardu phir jaaon nikita to lene.
M: Petrol ke paise kaun, tere chacha bharenge.

They went to Niki's house.
She was ready and waiting for them...

Rahul pulled over and was smittened by what she was wearing. His jaw dropped and eyes widened. Muskaan admitted to herslef that she was looking really good.

Muskaan hit him real hard on the shoulder.
M: ABE! aise hi use aakh phaad phaad ke dekhega to aankhe kya, pura ka pura dimag bahar aa jayega.
Rahul got out of his car and greeted her...opened the door for her and made sure she was comfortable.

Muskaan was like .

Muskaan was feeling really awkward. Rahul and Nikita talked the whole way thru.
They finally reach sanjivani.
He dropped Muskaan and Nikita off and went to park his car.

N: Chale. Warna late ho jayenge.
M: Uhm...haan, tum chalo, main abhi aati hoon.

How can Muskaan let Rahul let away with that. She had to do something to maza chakhaofy!
She told the one of the peons to keep Rahul busy at the door and make him late.

M: Ab dekhti hoon, wo kaan khajura kaise hitler ki daant nahi khata.!!

Her plan worked and he was late for the briefing. He heard an earful from keerti and also a night duty.

He was stressed out the whole day.....too much work!
Muskaan saw this and started to feel bad.

- I wanted to continue more....but i guess its too much for one post...!
Excuse my smileys 😆
Edited by mits002 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#29
poor rahul. he can't help it after all he is still a guy😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
#30
Cant wait!! Continuing 😆

Muskaan was feeling bad that poor Rahul had to do all the work just because of her silly joke.
But how could she express her concern. ?! She is a girl after all...!

Their duties were finished but Rahul had to stay back for the night duty.

Nikita offered Muskaan a ride back home but she "politely" refused!
Rahul came in the locker room to get his file...
Muskaan was there, sitting on the bench, trying to sleep.

R: Muskaan?
M: Huh! (waking up)
R: Tu so rahi hain! baki sab kaha gaye.
M: Abe dhakkan..duty kabki khatam ho gai.
R (looking at his watch): ohh! sab ghar chale gaye?
M: To kya yaha teri wait karenge?
R: To tu yaha pe kya kar rahi hain?

Muskaan was loss of words.
uhmm..uhmm..wo muje bahot neend aa rahi thi isiliye.
R: To ghar jaake so ja.
M: Nahi...mera matlab hain ki...itni neend aa rahi hain...ki..aaj main yahi so jati hoon.
R: Muskaan! pagal ho gayi hain kya? yaha..kaha pe soyegi?
M: arre idhar...ghar jaane ka mood nahi hain.
R: huh?
M: Arre tu jana..apna kaam kar..aur muje jo karna hain wo karne de.

Rahul pager rings and he goes.
While going:
R: Ghar chali jaana..!

At 2:00 am.

Muskaan peeps in the General Ward where Rahul is still checking on patients files and filling out information.
M: chh chh..
Rahul not listening.
M: (loundly) chh chh...
Rahul turned!
R: Muskaan?
He came outside in the lobby..
Tu yaha kya kar rahi hain? is waqt?
M: wo muje bhook lagi hain. cafe chale?
R: par tu ghar nahi gayi...
M: tu sawaal bahot puchhta hain. Chal na..aana hain to..
R: aa raha hoon hain na..bhadakti kyun hain.

They get something to eat and sit down at the table....
R: Muskaan...sach sach batana..tu ghar kyun nahi gai... (he said looking straight into her eyes)

Muskaan could not escape his questions...
M: wo..wo..muje raat ko akele bahot darr lagta hain..(she said embarrasingly)
Rahul started giggling...
"aur...jhoothe hi sahi..pati ho tum mere. "

Rahul stopped giggling at once..and couldnt believe his ears ... (thats his dialogue!)
He looked at her with his intensity and passion. He did not blink once...and Muskaan slowly managed to look at him too...! She was not hungry anymore..and she wished that that moment never ended.! 😳

ok guys i am done for now...
byee...
but please continue!!!!!
Edited by mits002 - 16 years ago

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