New Beginnings- series of one shots updated 9/25

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Ramona

@PristineSoul

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Heya,
part 3 was cute n romantic. Love the way u have showed their romance.
Well done

Edited by KriYa_life - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

hola, it was so fab,...i was blushing yaar, completely gone now...i wish u wud b d CV of d show...

i luved it wen she pulled him thru his collar nd caressed his cheek, awee, i know she finds herself most beautiful inhis arms...

nd d slight confession in2 his ears was so dreamy...u r so risght yaar, one day jhanvi will say him,nd it indeed means d whole world 4 him, he lives 4 her...

plsss write more, i m refreshed aftr reading it...

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Ramona

@PristineSoul

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Part 2:
sum1 is getting over protective haan?? 😉
Enjoyed it

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Lekha Ishwar

@-Destiny-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

look who decided to jump here😆🤗

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Sonali

@adventure_gurl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: -Destiny-
look who decided to jump here😆🤗

hey dear how are you? So glad to see you! What is your real name again sorry it's been awhile

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Lekha Ishwar

@-Destiny-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

hey dear how are you? So glad to see you! What is your real name again sorry it's been awhile

lekha😳

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Sonali

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Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: -Destiny-
lekha😳

yep I have you on facebook right?

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Sonali

@adventure_gurl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#28

awesome please do give me feedback after your exams dear, hope you ace all of them!😃

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Priya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#29

Loved it, the confession wasn't dramatic or cheesy, it wasn't overly romantic or long either. It was plain and simple, few words that meant the world to Raghav and could last him a lifetime. I love how you've described Jhanvi, it's quite realistic and the essence of her character remains to be intact. The bond both Raghav and Jhanvi share is just beautiful and I love how you've showed Jhanvi to be healing bit by bit in each of these OS's. Raghav seeing Sia's scars is something I would like to see in the show too, maybe in one of the shots Jhanvi could trust him enough to tell him how she got them from Viraj? Brilliant writing, would love to read more!

Cheers,

Pri