Ritwick-Palak OS [Webs of Hatred]

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mistofshadows

@mistofshadows

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Posted: 7 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: jusschillin
Hey Niki, that was absolutely amazing. It was so intense and just mind blowing. Loved their conflicting relationship with each other. Very cohesively written. Keen on reading more.
❤️

Thank you very much for reviewing. I am glad you liked it. While this is an OS, I definitely plan to write more works in the forum.

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mistofshadows

@mistofshadows

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Posted: 7 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: arjuhi-forever
wow... What an intense and beautiful os... Exactly describing the kind of situation they probably will be in the upcoming episodes. .loved every part of it and the kiss it was something unexpected but hope the next one would be out of their mutual consent 😉😆😆
Keep writing
..looking forward for more!!! 😊

I hope their next kiss is mutual consent too😆😆

On that note, Thank you very much for reading and reviewing.

NIKI

Edited by mistofshadows - 7 years ago

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mistofshadows

@mistofshadows

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Posted: 7 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: Tanvig_02
Very well expressed and nicely written...
Keep writing

Thank you😊

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mistofshadows

@mistofshadows

Rocker

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Posted: 7 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Humayra_Emma
It's amazingly written 👏
You described their feelings so beautifully!! And the kiss

I am glad you liked it.

Thank you very much.

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_khushi09_

@_khushi09_

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#25

Thanks for the OS

Loved it

You wrote it very well

Keep writing more

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SnMkmh

@SnMkmh

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#26

How did I miss this passionate os, this seemed so real and I can actually see something like this happening in the show (not sure about the kiss thing on tv but alt for sure😉 )

Lovely OS would love to read more and if possible then would love to read the sequeal.