Ritwick-Palak OS [Webs of Hatred]

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Dristy

@arjuhi-forever

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#11

wow... What an intense and beautiful os... Exactly describing the kind of situation they probably will be in the upcoming episodes. .loved every part of it and the kiss it was something unexpected but hope the next one would be out of their mutual consent 😉😆😆

Keep writing

..lkng forward for more!!! 😊

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Tanvig_02

@Tanvig_02

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Posted: 7 years ago

#12

Very well expressed and nicely written...

Keep writing

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Humayra_Emma

@Humayra_Emma

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Posted: 7 years ago

#13

It's amazingly written 👏

You described their feelings so beautifully!! And the kiss

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mistofshadows

@mistofshadows

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 7 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Arjuhi_dreamer
Omg!! New os...runs to read!

To my first reviewer in this forum,

Thank you very much for reading and reviewing. It really means a lit.

Niki

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mistofshadows

@mistofshadows

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 7 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Arjuhi_dreamer
Good God Damn.. what a beautiful description of Palak's emotional state 😭
Damn they kissed☺️ though better than first but it too wasn't celebrated one 😆

Keep writing more because...

Rithwik--Palak 💔

Ritwick and Palak are LOVE

I am glad you enjoyed it

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mistofshadows

@mistofshadows

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 7 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: mirhacreations
This was Amazing 👏
Full of Passion & Emotions ❤️
Loved each & every bit of it especially the last scene ❤️
Do write more on them 😳

Thank you very much for appreciating my work.😊