Rikara os- phir bhi tumko chahungi(part 2 updated on pg 4)

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nyctophile25

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Loved it...Waiting for the next part. Update soon!! 😛

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rikara94

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

thnku all for the lovely comments

mujhe nahi pta tha aap sab ko psand ayegi meri stroy..

i will update next part asap👍🏼

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Senapatichandri

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

nice one...agar yeh chees sachme dbo me hui hoti to dhammaal ho jata

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rikara94

@Raghav_Rao

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Senapatichandri
nice one...agar yeh chees sachme dbo me hui hoti to dhammaal ho jata

yeah...main b aisa e kuch chahti thi k dbo mein ho but nahi huya isliye maine yeh kr diya😆😆

thnks for liking and commenting😊

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rikara94

@Raghav_Rao

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Naaz25
Loved it...Waiting for the next part. Update soon!! 😛

thnaku Naaz25...i will update next part asap😳

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rikara94

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU
awesome Loved it
it tooo emotional...plz continue this

thanks for the love dear😊

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rikara94

@Raghav_Rao

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Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: writergenie17
First off, thanks for the shoutout. I'm just doing for you what a lot of amazing people did for me on the forum. And you're super new to the forum... in a few days, you'll be swimming in friends luv.
That aside, great start at an interesting plot point.
You write well and are able to convey the different emotional states of all various characters very nicely.

Keep up with the good work and post an update soon!

Looking forward to reading more of this...

p.s. welcome to the high pressure life of a fanfiction writer! May your days be filled with unresolved ideas and nights resound with the tappings of your keyboard 😆

aww sho shweet of you my friend...thanks fr the support😳😳

i will update soon😆