Rikara os- phir bhi tumko chahungi(part 2 updated on pg 4)

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Phir b tumko chahungi(part 1)

Gauri is standing alone in the garden nd racalls omkara's words(Jo krna hai kro,jehar kha k mar jayo lekin meri zindgi se dfa ho jayo..tumhara naam is ghr ki kulpatri mein nahi aan chahiye) n crying..

"Sankar g aisa kya kr diya humne jo aap hume itni badi saja de rhe o? aap to jante hai na hum waise nahi hai jaise omkara ji hume samjhte hain.. arre hum to unki khusi k liye yha se jane k liye b tyyar hain pr...pr har bar kisi na kisi wajh se hum yha se ja e ni pate or woh samjhte hain ki hum natak kr rhe hain ..yha se jana e nai chahte nd crying...

"woh to bs yhi samjhte hain ki hum yhan iss ghar mein sirf or sirf paison k liye hain..pr woh nai jante hum unse pyar krte hain is liye yhan hai ..unko apna bhagwan mante hai isliye yhan haiin

Next day in kulgotra puja

After finishing the aarti,, both shivika and rikara standing together

Gauri talk to herself "omkara ji aaj to hum apki zindagi or iss ghar se hamesa hamesa ke liye chle jayenge har harayike..phir apko hmari wjh se koi taqleef nahi hogi

Songs plays...

Bahon mein teri aa k lga

mera safar toh yahin tak hai

(gauri looks at om nd recalls the moment when om lift her in his arms takes rounds around fire)

tumse shuru tumpe hi khtam

meri kahaani tumhi tak hai

(she recalls om fills her maang with his blood)

dil ko jo de rahat si

tujme hai woh khamoshi

sau baar talaash liya khudko

kuch tere siva na mila mujhko

(om looks at her with full of anger)

saanson se rishta tod bhi loon

tumse tod na paungi...hmmm..

(she looks down nd tears fall from her eyes nd she wipe her tears nd no one notice that she is crying)

mai phir bhi tumko chahungi-2

iss chaht mein mar jayungi

main phir bhi tumko chahungi

(she again looks at her omkara ji) Aankhen khule toh main dekhun tujhe
Sirf yeh hi farmaish hai
Pehli toh mujhko yaad nahi
Tu meri aakhiri khwahish hai

(she recalls her bitter memories with om nd again tears falls from her eyes. she quickly wipes her tears and this time she is noticed by om)

Seh loon main ab teri kami
Mujhse yeh hoga hi nahi

("tum ro kyu rhi ho??he ask with confusing voice..then suddenly realize..oh toh tum yha se jana nahi chahti isiliye na..tumhe jitne paise chahiye lo or yha se jaldi daffa ho jayo or dobara mujhe apni shakal kabhi mat dikhana)

Tum aise mujhme shaamil ho
Tum jaan meri tum hi dil ho
Shaayad main bhula doon khud ko bhi
Par tumko bhool na paaungi
Ho..

Main phir bhi tumko chaahungi-2
Iss chaahat mein marr jaaungi
Main phir bhi tumko chaahungi

Now it's time to write the name of bahu's in the kulpatri.

As we saw in ms( Guru ji says bahu's name is written in golden words in this Kulpatri .Guru ji says eldest bahu will write her name first. Shivaye asks Anika to write her name in Kulpatri. Anika goes and writes her name in Kulpatri. Guru ji asks younger bahu to come and write name. Saathiya...plays... She thinks I promised I will not force myself on Om. She thinks of Om's words. She faints. Om holds her. Everyone asks what happened. Om recalls his words and thinks did she really eat poison.

Buamaa says she will be fine. Om says she is not fine, we will do rasam later, we can write name anytime. Shakti asks why not now. Om says Gauri is unconscious. Shivaye asks him to write name, its same thing. Om asks how can I write. Buamaa says I will handle it, its mahurat, go)

Om sees Gauri. She is stil unconscious. Om writes Gauri's name.

Om again holds gauri . ..gauri utho nd he slowly murmurs in angery tone apna natak band kro or utho jaldi, jo hona tha woh ho chuka hai, tumhara naam is ghar ki kultpatri mein na chahte huye bhi add ho gya hai,koi ek kam bhi tum dhang se nahi kr skti ,ab yeh apna ghatiya natak band kro or utho yha se jaldi.bt she is still unconscious and doesn't give any response to him.. meanwhile buamaa holds gauri's hand "uhto beta, gauri utho

Now everyone in tension b'coz she is not responding. Om also in tension becoz he finally understands the situation that gauri is not doing any drama,there is definately something wrong. Om recalls his words again n think "kahin isne sach mein to jehar nai kha liya

Suddenly the entire family get another big shock when they see some white foam falling from her mouth.

Shivaye-"om yeh kya hai? Isne galti se kuch kha to nahi liya?

Om- "I don't know shivaye he answered in tensed voice(tears brimming at his eyes)

Shivaye-"hume gauri ko jaldi hospital le ke jana hoga

Jhanvi-"yes shivaye hume or der nahi krni chahiye pehle hi hum gauri ko hosh mein lane ke liye bahut time waste kr chuke hain ab or time waste nahi krna chahiye jaldi se hospital chalet hain

Shivaye- "g badi mom, main or om gauri ko hospital le jate hain aap sab yahin rukiye

Anika-"main bhi aapke sath chalti hoon shivaye.

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nice start continue 😉

this is damn emotional..
Gauri ne sach mein zeher pee liya..
OMG!!!
ab kya hoga?
jaldi jaldi uodate dena..

U r awesome dear

This was amazing...
I loveed it..
Pleasee continue soon..

Its awsm ... Continue asap.. I love tadpukara

This is really.insame of gauri to eat poison omkara Isa jerk aur jerk k liye aoni jaan nhi dete anyway update soon

awesome Loved it