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Originally posted by: smrithy14
U r awesome dear
loving this plotmy poor gauri did wat on asked hernow we will get caringkara and emotionalkara milegaplz update next part soon
Originally posted by: chandiniebinda
This was amazing...
I loveed it..
Pleasee continue soon..
Originally posted by: ...Anabella...
Its awsm ... Continue asap.. I love tadpukara
Originally posted by: IlaTanwar
This is really.insame of gauri to eat poison omkara Isa jerk aur jerk k liye aoni jaan nhi dete anyway update soon
Hiii friends... I am back with another part😳😳I am very happy that you liked previous part of my os😳😳thanks for this love friends.. here you go...
Hospital scene
All three are standing in different corners, they all are worried ..om does not know how to face this situation bcoz he does not have any idea that gauri sach mein aisa kuch kregi uski life se jane k liye.tears finaly fallen from his eyes. he recalls some bitter memories with gauri and also sweet memories with chulbul. Shvika can clearly see the fear on his face.shivaye goes near to om and put his hand on om's shoulder and " doctors check kar rhe hain na ,don't worry,kuch nahi hoga hmari gauri ko ,she is strong girl.
Then doc came "mr. oberoi
S - "Doc kya hua gauri ko
Doc- mr.oberoi patient ne kafi heavy quantity mein poison consume kiya hai, humne jehar to nikal diya hai
(om closes his eyes and take very deep breath)
Lekin...
Om- lekin kya doc?(he ask from doc with tension and fear)
Doc - agle kuch ghante patient ke liye kafi critical hai. Aap pray kijiye ta k jaldi se jaldi unko hosh aa jaye, kai bar jahan dwa kaam nahi aati wahan duaa kaam aa jati hai..hum apni or se poori koshish kr rhe hain..
Anika- kya hum gauri se mil skte hain?
doc- afcourse,
Or aap baki ki formalities poori kr dijiye mr.oberoi
S- g doc
Next scene...
Om is standing in front of ganpati bappa in the hospital. He slowly joining his hand and his hands are shivering,his eyes are teary. "I am sorry bhagwan g,maine usko kitna bura bhalla bola..usko kitna kuch sunaya..woh kya kehna chahti hai uski bat tak nahi suni..mujhe lga woh sirf paison ke liye yeh sab kr rhi hai..main jo bolta woh krti rahi ,maine bola mere room se chali jayo woh gyi ,maine bola chup rho to woh chup,maine bola jehar kha k mar jayo to usne...
He cries very badly...
Mujhe nahi pta tha bhagwan g k gauri sach mein jeahr kha legi,plz aap gauri ko jaldi se theek krdo plz...main aage se uske sath kabhi bhi rudely behave nahi krunga bhagwan g I promise. Main uski har baat sunuga or use samajhne ki koshish krunga bas aap mere chulbul ko jaldi se theek krdo.(he wipes tears) Agar usko kuch ho gya toh main apne aap ko abhi bhi maaf nahi kar payunga...apko gauri ko theek karna hi hoga
In the next scene :Anika is sitting beside gauri and sweetly holding her hand. Gauri is stil unconscious. Shivay enters and ask to anika "om kahan hai? Usko toh gauri ke sath hona chahiye na.
Om- main yhan hoon shivaye(he enters...)
S-"tum kahan the om?tum mujhe bahr bhi nahi dikhe or yhan aya to yaha bhi nahi the
O- "woh main bas...bas doc se baat krne gya tha gauri k bare mein.
S- "don't worry om kuch nahi hoga,gauri kl tak poori trah se theek ho jayegi or fir se apna woh kon sa style hai uska?
O- "dabangg stylewith smiling face.
S- "han wahi,apna dabangg style dikhayegi hum sb ko(with smiling face)
(Om ,anika smiled)
A- "Om tum itna dur q khade ho? Ayo gauri ke pas baitho.
She quickly stand up and pointing om to come here and sit with gauri. Om slowly goes near to the bed where gauri is laying unconsciously, while shivaye says to anika:
S- "anika tum kafi thaki huyi lag rahi ho, main driver ko bolta hoon k tumhe ghar pe drop krde. Main or om to hai hi yhan pe,jab gauri ko hosh aa jayega main tumhe call krdunga (om turns)
A -"nahi shivaye main theek hoon
O -"nahi bhabhi ,shivaye sahi keh rha hai, aaj itna kuch ho gya ghar pe ,aap bhi thak gye hoge..waise bhi rat ho chuki hai,apko ghar chle jana chahiye...
S -"om sahi keh rha hai anika
O- "infact main toh kehta hoon shivaye tum bhi bhabhi k sath ghar pe chle jayo, wahan pe bhi sbhi preshan honge or main hoon hi yha pe gauri ke paas
S- "but om tum yhan akele sb kaise manage kroge, main rukta hoon na tumhare sath,,tum jayo anika
O-"main sb manage kr lunga shivaye don't worry, or waise bhi gauri is still unconscious toh tum dono yhan ruk ke kya kroge
Anika slowly murmurs to shivaye-"aap itni tadi kyu maar rhe hain billu ji, om gauri ke sath kuch quality time spend krna chahta hai toh aap kyu jabardasti kabab mein haddi ban rhe hainthey both smiled
O- "kuch kaha aapne bhabhihe said with questioning face
A- "Nahi toh...oh han main to shivaye se bas yahi keh rhi thi k tum theek keh rhe ho hume chalna chahiye ghar pe b sab preshan honge na..haina shivaye
S- "han...han hum chalte hain,or agar koi bhi help chahiye ho toh plz mujhe phn krna I'll be there for you...
Chlo fir kal milte hain,(he sees gauri) aur mujhe tum dono se kuch bat bhi krni hai kal(this time he is in serious tone bcoz he want to know gauri ne aisa kadam kyu uthaya ,he want to know the reason behind this...he did not ask any question to om about this bcoz he already very upset with all this happening..)
O- "hmm
They left by saying gud nyt. Om again turn towards gauri and sit beside her. he holds her hand gentaly and talk to himself "mujhe pata hai shivaye tumhe kya bat karni hai ,or main yeah nahi janta ke tumhara kya reaction hoga jab tumhe pata chalega ke gauri ne yeh sab meri wajah se kiya hai , I don't know how to handle this mess.
He suddenly feels the movements in her hand which he holding. A smile occur on his face and he feels relaxed bcoz he feels that gauri is in consciousness now and(he stood and caressed her hairs and face) says "gauri...gauri are you ok na(but she is still not responding) plz yar utho na...I am sorry meri wajah se tum yhan pe aise..look agar tum nahi uthi na toh...toh main tumhe fir se dantunga,tumpe gussa karunga(she still not answering) he cries and he kissed her forehead and sat down on the stool next to the bed holding her hand in his. And doc enters in the room and he check the gauri s condition. Om said "doc abhi abhi gauri ke hath mein movement huyi but jab maine usko bulaya toh usne koi response nahi diya , doc kab ayega gauri ko hosh..kitne time se woh aise hi leti huyi hai,woh hosh mein kyu nahi aa rhi hai,,,plz doc aap meri gauri ko jaldi se theek krdo main usko khona nahi chahta
Doc- "relax mr.oberoi ! I understand your situation. Mrs.oberoi ki haalat ab pehle se better lag rhi hai and uski body mein movement huyi it's a good sign...aur waise bhi main yahan apko yahi bataane aya tha ke aapki wife ko kal tak hosh aa jayega. And I must say aap apni wife ko bahut pyar krte hain mr.oberoi. aur pyar hi woh reason hai jiski wajah se woh jaldi se recover kar rhi hain..mai chalta hoon
He left the room
Om recalls doctor's words "I must say aap apni wife se bahut pyar krte hain or his own words aap meri gauri ko jaldi se theek krdo main usko khona nahi chahta
Om thinks "kya main sach mein gauri se pyar...may be..shayd isiliye main usko khone se darr rha hoon..uhh.
he spent whole night (with thinking about his love for her) sitting next to her and ultimately fell asleep next to her laying his head on the bed while sitting on the stool.
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It was 8AM when she tries to wake her up...she slowly opened her eyes and feeling very heavy..she have no idea where she was..she looks here and there and she realize that it is hospital room.tears brimming at her eyes and "ganesh ke pappa apne hume kyu bchaya , hume mar kyu nahi jane diya, aapko toh pta hai na hum omkara g pe bojh nahi ban na chahte,isliye to humne yeh sab...omkara ji hume maaf kr dijiye, hum toh aapse se dur jaane ki poori kosis karte hain har hrayike..fir bhi na jane kyu kismat fir aapke samne la k khada kr deti hai..ab aap toh yahi sochenge na k yeh bhi ek natak tha ta k hum apke ghar se kahi na jaye tears fallen from her eyes and when she about to wipe her tears, she feels very heavy on her hand,she look at her hand and she sees It was her omkara ji asleep next to her laying his head on her hand while sitting on the stool.she trying to pull her hand slowly.suddenly om woke up from this efforts.he sees toward gauri.
He is very happy to seeing her conscious .he hugged her tightly and say "tum theek ho na gaurihe breaks hug and put his hand on her cheekstum ro kyu rahi ho?
G - "woh hum...hume maaf kr dijiye omkara ji. Humne is bar pkka plan bnaya tha aapse door jane k liye, or dekhiye na fir se humara plan fail ho gya,aap sahi kehte hain..hmare plans ghatiya hote hain tears rolled down from her cheeks.om put his finger on her lips and "shhh
"And tumhari himmat kaise huyi yeh sab karne ki? Tum pagal ho kya? Jehar kyu khaya? Agar tumhe kuch ho jata toh? U know what ek baar toh mujhe aisa laga ke maine tumhe kho hi diya. Ab chup kyu ho ,jawab do mujhe aisa kyu kiya?(his finger still on her lips)
She sweetly remove his finger from her lips and "aap hume bolne doge toh hum kuch bolenge na
O- " woh ... I am sorry..but tumhe batana toh padhega k kyu khaya jehar who bhi itni heavy quantity mein, agar tumhe kuch ho jaata toh?
G- "woh aapne bola tha na ke jehar kha ke mar jayo , toh humne kha liya
O- "toh main job bhi kahunga woh..woh krogi
G- " han..kyu nahi karenge,aapne hmari jaan bachayi,hmari maa ki dekhbhal kar rhe hain,aapke aur aapke parivar ke liye agar hume apni jaan bhi deni padhe.. toh hum de denge..(dialogue taken from 1st june's episode)
He hugs her with teary eyes..I am sorry gauri,mujhe maaf kardo,maine tumhare sath bahut bura behave kiya,bina soche samjhe tumpe itne iljaam lga diye or maine tumhe samjne ki koshish bhi nahi ki..tumhe na jaane kya kya keh diya..
G -(by breaking the hug) "yeh aap kya keh rhe hain omkara ji,aap humse maafi kyu maang rhe hain. Aapko jo sahi laga aapne wohi kiya ,isme aap ki kya galti
O- " no gauri , it's all my fault. Abhi life mein itne dhokhe kha chukka hoon, pta hi nahi chalta kya sach hai or kya jhooth.tumhe samjh hi nahi paya main. Tumne toh sab btaya bhi tha ke tum chulbul kyu bane... maine hi tumpe yakeen nahi kiya...maine tumhe characterless,dhokhebaaj or...or na jane kya kya keh diya..mujhe toh apne aap pe sharm aa rhi hai ab. (Tears rolled down from his eyes and gauri wipes his tears.)
G- "nahi omkara ji , sab humari hi galti hai , agar hum hi aapko sab kuch pehle se bta dete toh...toh aap humse aisa bartav nahi krte,sab hmari hi galti hai..aap apne aap ko doshi kyu maan rhe ho
(he holds her hands sweetly)
O- "tumhe pta hai uss freezer wale incident ke baad jab tumhe hosh nahi aa rha tha toh..main almost tumhe kho hi chukka tha,lekin kal..kal toh tumne meri jaan hi nikal di thi(sathiya palys...)pta hai main kitna darr gya tha,mujhe lga ab main shayd tumhe kabhi dekh nahi payunga. Aisa bhi koi krta hai kya?
(gauri looks at him lovingly)
"Tum aise kyu dekh rahi ho?
G -"hum dekh rhe hain aap kadwe karele se mithe chirote kaise ban gye
O- "what? What do you mean?
G- "hmara matlab hai,aap nandi se itne bhole kaise ban gye?
O-"tumne mujhe fir se akdu kaha?
G-"humne kab aapko akdu kaha?
O- "han toh nandi kaha na abhi,,,woh akdu hi to tha
G- "gussail bhi
O -"tumne mujhe gussail bhi kaha
G- "nahi,,humne aapko kab kaha..humne toh nandi ko kaha
They both laughed at their payari- payari nok jhok
O- "I am sorry gauri,ab main tumpe kabhi gussa nahi karunga,or na hi kabhi rudely behave karunga
G- "aap aisa mat boliye omkara ji..aap kyu humse baar baar mafi mang rhe hain, hum aapse bilkul bhi naraz nahi hain..sankar ji ki kasam..or kabhi ho bhi nahi sakte
He smiled
O- "gauri I want to confess something
G -"conf...confex kya?(she confused)
O- "I mean main tumse kuch kehna chahta hoon
G- "g kahiye na
O- "I ...woh main...main...
G- "kya bakri ke jaise main main kar rhe hain,saf-saf btayie na aap kya kehna chahte hain
O- "ab tumne mujhe bakri kaha(he point his finger on her)
G- "sarry omkara ji ...aap kahiye
O- (om holds her hand gentally and kisses on her hand, and she feeling shy) "woh.. jo maine abhi kaha...meri jaan hi nikal gayi thi or maine tumhe almost kho hi diya tha...woh sab maine aise hi nahi kaha tha, I mean it...
(gauri looks at him with confusion)
Male saathiya plays...
(Jo na keh sake tum
Jo na keh sake hum)-2
(Kehne lagi...dono se woh
Khamoshiya...o sathiya..)-2
(Sathiya...sathiya...sathiya...sathiya...)-2"
main woh ...I love you gauri...I really love you...
tears rolled from her eyes
(female)sathiya...sathiya...
"Omkara ji
O- "tum ro kyu padhi?...i am sorry,agar maine kuch galat keh diya toh...
Its okey..agar tumhara answer NO hai toh ..toh main tumhe force nahi krunga...don't worry "
G- "nahi omkara ji..aapne hmare liye kitna kuch kiya..hmari jaan bchayi...jaan bchane k liye apko humse shaadi karni padhi...
Hum toh tab se hi aapko apna bagwan maante hain,
Log toh apne bagwan ki kitni pooja karte hain na..unko kitna pyar karte hain...
O- "toh kya...kya tum bhi apne is bagwan ki pooja karti ho?
G- "han karte hain na..bahut karte hain
O- "or pyar?
G- "woh toh hum apne aap se bhi jyada karte hain(suddenly she stop and realized that what she said and she took down her eyes)he smiled at her
"toh kya kaha tumne abhi he smirked
G- "woh
O- "han main sun rha hoon..woh kya gauri?
G- "who..hum..hum bhi apse bahut pyar karte hain omkara ji
He hugged her tightly
Song plays ..
Bahon mein teri aa k lga
mera safar toh yahin tak hai
(he put his hands on her cheeks and kissed her forehead)
tumse shuru tumpe hi khtam
meri kahaani tumhi tak hai
suddenly a voice disturb them. "ahmm ahmm
(om turn back and he sees the doc)
Doc -"congratulations omkara,finally apki wife ko hosh aa gya om smiled
Doc checks her pulse,eyes,and then reports while om continuosely looking at his work
dil ko jo de rahat si
tujme hai woh khamoshi
(Gauri sees her husband and his movements and also his face)
O- "koi tension wali baat toh nhi hai na doc
Doc- "no omkara,she is absolutely fine now...bas thodi si weakness hai..uske liye apko inke khane pine ka poora dhyan rkhna hoga or baki jo medicine leni hongi woh main prescribe kar dunga
O-a sigh of relief on his face"g doc
(Doc left and om turns towards her)
sau baar talaash liya khudko
kuch tere siva na mila mujhko
saanson se rishta tod bhi loon
tumse tod na paungi...hmmm..
(he sit next to her on the bed ,holding her hands)
Main phir bhi tumko chaahungi-2
Iss chaahat mein marr jaaungi
Main phir bhi tumko chaahungi
They smiled..tum theek ho na? she nodded "g omkara ji,aur ab toh aap hmare sath hain..fr hume kuch ho sakta hai kya ?
He kissed her cheeks and she blushed
Another interrupt "ahmm ahmm
om rolled his eyes and "ab kon hai?he turn and saw shivaye and anika who is standing next to him.
A- "kya baat hai, hospital mein romance ,wow!
S- "stop it anika
(Rikara blushed)
S- "ab kaisi ho gauri tum?
G- "hum theek hain bade bhaiya
A- "woh toh hona hi tha...itna romantic pati jo mila hai,jo kahin bhi shuru ho jata hai..
S- "anika?
A- "sorry sorry main toh bas in dono ki khichayi kar rhi thi
O-"shivaye tumhe humse kuch baat karni thi na ..isse pehle tum kuch pucho..main tumhe kuch batana chahta hoon..
S- "uski koi jarurat nahi hai om...badi mom ne mujhe sab kuch bta diya hai,tum dono ki shadi ke bare mein...yeh bhi btaya ki tum is shaadi ko nahi mante..but...
O- "but what ?
S "but yahan aa ke aisa kuch laga nahi ke tum is shaadi ko nahi maante(teasing him)
O- "shivaye tum bhi...
S-"jokes of part ,ab tum dono mujhe seriously btayo...kya tum dono saath mein rehna chahte ho ya nahi?
A-"yeh bhi koi poochne ki baat hai shivaye,abhi-abhi jo dekha usko dekh kar apko lagta hai ke dono sath mein nahi rehna chahte?
S-"fir bhi anika,main in dono ke muh se sunna chahta hoon..bolo om,gauri
O- he turn to gauri,sit with her on bed and give her a side hug "shivaye maine decide kiya hai ke main gauri ke sath rehna chahta hoon, and I realize my love for her and he sees into her eyes
S-"gauri tumhara kya decision hai?
G-"bade bhaiya hum bhi inse bahut pyar krte hain...aur inke sath hi rehna chahte hain
S-"toh theek hai fir...ab jaldi se theek ho jayo fir hum aage ki rasme continue karenge
Rikara is very happy and shivika pass smile to each other by seeing them happy
Sathiya plays...
The end....
I knw this is part is too long😆😛I hope you all will like it...plz like and comments...
Originally posted by: Annika_Ishqbaaz
Yay!!!
this was lovely...
Originally posted by: vrindagupta
Superb ending
Bechara omkara2 times Ahm ahmWhy is everyone hell bend on interrupting their romanceEven Omkara get angryWho it was the last time