||OS: A Filmy Confession.. Pg #15|| - Page 7

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks Bidzy. We're all going on about Kastur needing to get back on the bed, and that it should happen, and you write an OS about it.

So cute and sweet. So you really think Kastur made up that pencil box bit, huh? 😆🤣

Unlike your OS though, Mohan just may squirm more than he had to here.😆 Which is okay by me. But for the OS, it was perfect. 😃

Thanks again for the translation, bidzy.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Anyway I'm out for the night. Talk you later.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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omg...its damn cute dear...kash DP ki story writer bhi aap hi hoti, seriously...lvd it, lvd it, lvd it...plz write more dear...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: -mesmerised-

Wow Bidz... brilliant OS! 👏 Loved every bit of it! ❤️


You understand the characters so well don't you? Kastur hiding her pain behind her unaffected outward persona and Mohan not only confused by her behaviour, but searching for something in her eyes that she's lost... and he knows he's to blame!

The track has only just started but i can totally imagine Mohan being affected by the change in her like you've written here... we've seen hints of it already.

Loving your writing, keep them coming! 😃


Hey Aysha 🤗

Thank you sooo much... I'm glad that you loved it! 😃 Umm understanding the characters... hopefully yeaa 😆 Anyways thanks once again! 🤗 Will write more for sure! 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: likarsh

Thanks Bidzy. We're all going on about Kastur needing to get back on the bed, and that it should happen, and you write an OS about it.


So cute and sweet. So you really think Kastur made up that pencil box bit, huh? 😆🤣

Unlike your OS though, Mohan just may squirm more than he had to here.😆 Which is okay by me. But for the OS, it was perfect. 😃

Thanks again for the translation, bidzy.


Yep the pencil box thingy is made up by Kastur for sure 😆
Decided that I'd write an OS on the things we want to happen, so this is the beginning 🥳
Thanks a lot and your welcome! 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: payalHarshiya

omg...its damn cute dear...kash DP ki story writer bhi aap hi hoti, seriously...lvd it, lvd it, lvd it...plz write more dear...


Thanks a lot sweetie for the biggest compliment 🤗 Will surely write more 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Dreams, Emotions, Care...

Standing beside the window and staring outside, Kastur was silently shedding tears. She was blankly looking at a point and seemed in deep thoughts. Some bitter memories struck her mind. Her husband didn't love her but he cared. Her mother-in-law only hated her. These two facts were creating storms of pain inside her.

Her dreams of a happy marital life didn't get fulfilled. Yet she stayed strong. Months passed but she kept tolerating her mother-in-law's taunts and didn't utter a word. All these she did was just because she hoped for her dream to be real. But how long? How long would her hope stay alive? Can she live her life with friendship of her husband and taunts of her mother-in-law? She asked herself but found no answers.

"Kastur", she said Mohan calling her name and entering the room. Quickly she wiped off her tears, brought a smile on her face and turned around to face him.

"Kastur, bohot thak gaya hoon. Aaj bohot jyada kaam tha." Mohan said, exhausted, threw himself on bed and closed his eyes.

"Main aap ke liye paani lekar aati hoon.", Kastur sweetly said. Mohan only muttered "Hmm!"

Kastur went outside and brought a glass of water for Mohan. "Yeh lijiye", she said.

Mohan adjusted herself in a sitting position and took the glass from Kastur, just then; he noticed her eyes, and found something unusual.

"Kastur", he said after drinking water and placing the glass on the side-table.

"Haan!", Kastur replied plainly.

"Yaha baitho.", Mohan said softly pointing to his side.

Kastur sat down and looked at Mohan. She was trying her best to be normal, to smile but seemed like Mohan recognized the fakeness of her smile.

"Tum ro rahi thi?", Mohan asked concernedly.

Kastur nervously lowered her eyes. "Nahi toh.", she said.

"Tum jhoot bol rahi ho. You know you can't do that, right!"

"Nahi, sach mein! Main nahi ro rahi thi."

"Maa ne kuch kaha kya?"

Kastur raised her eyes looking at Mohan and said, "Arey nahi! Maa ne kuch nahi kaha. Woh bas aise hi."

"Theek hai. Tum mujhe bataana nahi chahti toh theek hai." Mohan irritatedly said, stood up and went to the washroom.

As Mohan left, Kastur went near the window and cried her heart out. "Sapne kabhi sach nahi hote.", she sobbingly said. "Chahe main jitna bhi koshish karlu, maa ke dil mein kabhi apne liye jagaah nahi banaa sakti aur Mohan ji kabhi mujhe pyaar nahi karenge. Adhura hi rehega mera sapna."

Just then; someone tapped on her shoulder and in jerk, she turned back and found Mohan.

"Aap so jaaiye. Kal subha kaam par jana hai naa.", Kastur instantly smiled and said, trying to be normal and was walking towards the couch.

"Sapne sach hone mein thoda waqt do.", Mohan intensely said and Kastur froze her steps.

Kastur turned back to face Mohan and smilingly said, "Matlab?"

Mohan went close to her and held her hand. "Matlab.. rone dhone se sapne pure nahi hone waale. Be patient and you'll surely get a positive result. Don't worry.", he said.

Kastur couldn't control her emotions anymore. Tears unknowingly flowed from her eyes, and Mohan, immediately wiped them off.

"Tum hasti huyi jyada acchi lagti ho.", he said looking friendly at Kastur. This brought a little cute smile on her face.

"That's better!", Mohan genuinely smiled with her and suddenly Kastur hugged him. "Thank you.", she said.

Mohan hugged her back and said, "Your welcome."

They broke their hug and went to sleep; Mohan on bed and Kastur on couch.

"Kastur, tumhe udaas dekhna mujhe accha nahi lagta. Pata nahi kyun par jab bhi tumhe udaas dekhta hoon, lagta hai ki mere andar kuch mar sa gaya hai. Pata nahi yeh kaisi feeling hai... khair jo bhi ho, I hope ki tumhe woh mil jaaye jo tum chahti ho aur tumhara sapna puraa ho jaye." Mohan thought looking at a sleeping Kastur and closed his eyes.

Kastur opened her eyes and looked lovingly at her Mohan. "Mohan ji, pata nahi, mera sapna kabhi sach bhi hoga ya nahi. Par humesha yehi dua karungi ki aapka har ek sapna pura ho aur aap humesha khush rahe." She thought looking at sleeping Mohan with so much love and care.

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Nothing special OS, just a normal night in MohUr's life yet so much dreamy to watch. Waiting for your reviews and thanks for the previous ones. Love you all.

Edited by Bidz_cutegal - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Dialogues Translation in English (Specially for Likarsh 😆)

"Kastur, bohot thak gaya hoon. Aaj bohot jyada kaam tha." - Kastur, too tired. Today, had a lot of work to do.

"Main aap ke liye paani lekar aati hoon." - I'll bring water for you.

"Yeh lijiye" - Have it.

"Haan!" - Yep!

"Yaha baitho.", - Sit here.

"Tum ro rahi thi?", - Were you crying?

"Nahi toh." - Nope!

"Tum jhoot bol rahi ho. You know you can't do that, right!" - You are lying. You know you can't do that, right.

"Nahi, sach mein! Main nahi ro rahi thi." - No, really. I'm not cying.

"Maa ne kuch kaha kya?" - Did Maa said anything?

"Arey nahi! Maa ne kuch nahi kaha. Woh bas aise hi." - Arey nope! Maa didn't said anything. It's just like that.

"Theek hai. Tum mujhe bataana nahi chahti toh theek hai." - Okay. If you don't want to tell me, then fine.

"Sapne kabhi sach nahi hote.", - Dreams never come true.

"Chahe main kuch bhi karlu, maa kabhi mujhe accept nahi karegi aur Mohan ji kabhi mujhe pyaar nahi karenge. Adhura hi rehega mera sapna." - No matter whatever I do, neither Maa will never accept me nor Mohan ji will love me. My dream will always remain incomplete.

"Aap so jaaiye. Kal subha kaam par jana hai naa.", - You go to sleep. Tomorrow morning, you gotta go to work too.

"Sapne sach hone mein thoda waqt do.", - You need to give some time for the dream to be fulfilled.

"Matlab?" - Means?

"Matlab.. rone dhone se sapne pure nahi hone waale. Be patient, work hard and you'll surely get a positive result. Don't worry.", - Means.. Your dreams won't get fulfilled if you cry like this. Be patient, work hard and you'll surely get a positive result. Don't worry.

"Tum hasti huyi jyada acchi lagti ho.", - You look good when you smile.

"Kastur, tumhe udaas dekhna mujhe accha nahi lagta. Pata nahi kyun par jab bhi tumhe udaas dekhta hoon, lagta hai ki mere andar kuch mar sa gaya hai. Pata nahi yeh kaisi feeling hai... khair jo bhi ho, I hope ki tumhe woh mil jaaye jo tum chahti ho aur tumhara sapna puraa ho jaye." - Kastur, when I see you sad, I don't feel good. I don't know why but whenever you are sad, I feel like something is dead inside me. I don't know what type of feeling this is. Anyways, whatever it is, I hope that you get whatever you want and your dreams may get fulfilled soon.

"Mohan ji, pata nahi, mera sapna kabhi sach bhi hoga ya nahi. Par humesha yehi dua karungi ki aapka har ek sapna pura ho aur aap humesha khush rahe."- Mohan ji, I don't know if my dream will ever come true. But I'll always pray that each of your dreams may get fulfilled and you stay happy always.
Edited by Bidz_cutegal - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#69
Bidz...its so sweet 😍..love the parts unsaid in their respective abodes...just wish they would think for each other in the same bed...alas, if only...

Btw, I just noticed your full name...Bidushy...😊...sounds lovely...what does it mean (you can PM me if you wish...)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Bidushy means the intelligent and wise lady 😳 Anyways, thanks Anjali and I promise to write my next OS as a romantic one, which includes their sharing of bed as well. 😃

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