||OS: A Filmy Confession.. Pg #15|| - Page 9

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Special Facility For Likarsh 😆

"Kya hai?" - What?


"Aap ro rahe the?" - Were you crying?

"Nahi toh." - Nope!

"Aap jhoot bol rahe hai." - You are lying.

"Mohan ji, bataaiye kya baat hai? Aap ko pehele toh kabhi aise rote huye nahi dekha' kya hua? Mujhe bataaiye." - Mohan ji, tell what happened. Never saw you crying like this before.. what happened?

"Kaha naa kuch nahi hai. And please for god's sake, leave me alone."- Nothing happened and please for god's sake, leave me alone.

"Aap ro rahe hai." - You are crying.

"Kastur, please so jaao. I need some time by myself." - Kastur, please go to sleep. I need some time by myself.

"Dost ko dil ki bataane mein kuch galat nahi hota." - There's nothing wrong in sharing what's in your heart with a friend.

"Tum mujhpar vishwaas nahi karogi." - You won't trust me.

"Karungi' I promise." - I will, I promise.

"Nahi kar paayogi vishwaas. Please don't ask me anything." - You won't be able to trust me. Please don't ask me anything.

"Bharosa rakhiye aur apni dil ki baat kehe dijiye." - Have faith in me and say what's in your heart.

"Meri degree nakli hai." - My degree is fake.

"Par that doesn't mean ki maine cheating kiya hai. Meri majburi thi, iss liye main degree nahi laa paaya." - But that doesn't mean that I cheated. I was helpless, that's why I couldn't have my degree.

"Kya majburi thi?" - What was your helplessness?

"London mein kaafi saare loans liye hai maine kyunki'" - I have a lot of debts in London because...

"Kyuki mujhe gambling ki aadat lag chuki thi." - Because I got the habit of gambling.

"Tumhe lag raha hai ki maine sabko dhoka diya hai, haina? Main jaanta tha." - You are thinking that I betrayed everyone, right? I knew it.

"Mujhe aap par pura vishwaas hai. Aap ne kisi ko dhoka nahi diya.", - I trust you completely. You didn't betray anyone.

"Main kisi ko dhoka nahi dena chahta tha, Kastur. Main toh maa aur pappa ka sapna pura karna chahta tha lekin agar jaldi India vapas nahi aata toh woh casino waale meri jaan le lete. I was helpless." - I didn't want to betray anyone, Kastur. I just wanted to fulfill my parents' dream but if I wouldn't come back to India asap, the casino people would have killed me. I was helpless.

"Kuch nahi hoga. Sab theek ho jaayega. Hum dono milkar sab theek karenge." - Nothing will happen. All will be alright. We both will set everything right.

"So jaaiye." - Sleep.

"Mere paas raho naa please." - Please be with me.

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Posted: 14 years ago
#82
I don't know what to say. I don't know whether to squee in delight, or congratulate you on what I think is your best OS here to date.

I will first squee🐷🐷🐷

And the rest... I want such emotional MohUr scenes on the show. That's all I can say. And I want her back on the bed. (Unlike others I actually wouldn't mind if we were to find out she is back on the bed, but if we were to see such a scene with her coming back on the bed, I would let go of my wish that she's back on the bed currently in a hot second.)

Amazing, Bidzy. MohUr were developed emotionally so well and and to such heights in an OS. 👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
#83
And thanks for the translation. 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
#84
Haha thank you so much 🤗 I'm truly glad that you liked it. 😃

Well, everything I write is what I want in the show. Hopefully we'll get it. Thanks once again. I wanted to write a romantic OS actually but it turned way too emotional. 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
#85
I prefer emotional over romantic anyway. Just not OTT emotional, which yours in no way is.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#86
^^ And my preference probably explains why I like this one the best out all of your MohUr OS so far.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#87
Awww...thank you 🤗

Just now I realized that my OS facility is weekly. 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
#88
👏Oh Bidzy its a Superb OS⭐️. Absolutely it cheered me up and gave me an hope to expect something better😃. It was so well written i think CV's should learn from you how to develop the story and the respective characters emotionally😆. Keep it going and make it twice a week yaar😊


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Posted: 14 years ago
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that was adorable n cute one bidzy n yeah here i go with likarsh i too lik emotional turning romantic situations(it reminds me now 1 of kis desh scene 😍)like this OS turnd @end..

but least happning thing ryt coz mohan wont share this problm with kastur..after what happned with degree toh pakka nai 😆

n abt OS i loved it 👍🏼 without pm maine padhliya...orelse i wud have missd it.so next time bhulna math.

love
saba
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Posted: 14 years ago
#90
very cute os's..can umake index..

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