Samyukta Pt18-Dharam gets Siya’s scroll - Page 3

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thank u sooo much Shradhha 😊 for updating the story though u r not feeling well. so how r u feeling now?I found such a dedicated writer in u who wants to continue her work in any condition 👏

This was also one of the best part till today😊 because I the orphanage scene which I liked the most. which clearify veer's character that how much he cares for other people though he knows that these people r shramik. but u described his feelings very deeply when he was enjoying their company n when he gave the name Sonu that new born baby 😊 It ws sooooooo cheeeewttt. he still remebers that girl!! n most importantly sakshi could spent some time with her brother 😊
That bhimsen 😡 how can he ask dhruv n sakshi to join him. but i like the way Dhruv denied his offer 👏 , but i m afraid that in future too he wont force them to do that 😕 otherwise it will be worse for sakshi and dhruv. but I like that veer overheard everything. so now he can prepare for their any kind of action or revolt.
Dharam got Siya's message 😳 but he is soo budhhu 😆 , i think he knows what she was trying to say in the letter but he didnt want to accept it without any proof as he knew the fact that she got engaged with Harsh. u made a lovely scroll!! it gave the impact of the real story...i really like it. keep doing something new like this in future too 👏
veer came and read the letter n came to know abt the real situation..it was like ek gutthi sulaj gayi ki unko pata chal gaya ki kon kon shamil hai ye sab saazish mai!! n they also discussed abt shera who was rying to creat misunderstanding betwn them. but dharam 😡 still defending her.why??
and loved the scene when veer asks dharam for authority n dharam replied to him,"Veer you were right... deceit can only be won with deceit... we have to break the rules sometimes...forge pitaji's seal if you have to... abduct Sanjaya if you have to... but dispatch the regiments and arsenal... I will not allow my kingdom to be vanquished at the hands of traitors!" chalo finally kuchh to samaj aaya dharam ko ki har bar rules follow nahi kar sakte but kai bar situation aisi ho jati hai ki hume rules todne bhi padte hai!! 👏 👏 👏

like the way veer make dharam realised what is sia trying to say (her feelings) in the letter n make him ready to write a reply to sia. but wait what is this?? he doesnt even know what to write? how come veer knows these things?? 😆
what will happen when he will hv to propose sia? 😆
veer wrote a letter for him and he said," Veer! Your handwriting has not improved one bit". it was sooo funny 🤣 he is not writing his letter himself n whn veer is writing for him he was finding fault in it n worried about the scroll which being untidy becoz of veer's handwriting 😆
n veer signed his signature in place of dharam...lol...what will happen next when sia will read it n find i that veer wrote the letter not dharam 😕 she will definitely get sooo angry with dharam as will get the idea the letter is not written by dharam n will think that he cant even write a single letter for her 😆 lagta hai dhram ke bure din suru honewalw hai 🤣 🤣 🤣 kya shradhha ye kya garbad ghotala hai?? hopefully it wud create fun not tension 😕

n veer is going to protect aryanagar n dharam will protect border 👏
n in the end they all hug..lovely scene 👏 🤗
All I can say u r a fantastic writer n moreover i love the way u desribe ur story with sooo much deep feelings 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wowww lashy superb here comes the late latif sonu but i told u na my internet is not working properly but now back to the topic i loved each and every scene 😳 lovely lashy lovely sakshi asked veer to name the child..ahh beautiful scene.. this behna is treating veer as her chota bhaiya so sweet 😊 ...your villain makes lots of sence i hate bhimu he is planning against aryanagar but thank god veer overheard everything
Agni was trying to provoke dharam but he got his answer 😆 funny 😆.mujhe toh iss dialogue par bada maza aaya 🤣 she was trying to communicate her feelings to a prince who likes to act like an old man 🤣
Veer signed his signature in place of dharam oh poor dharam 😆.dharam cant u even write a letter 😆 he needs help in letter writing also 🤣 but i also want to see veer's handwriting 😆 😆
maza aa gaya lashy...waiting for the next part 😳
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