Samyukta Pt18-Dharam gets Siya’s scroll - Page 2

@ kiran

welcome aboard kiran.. as usual the first one to be here and me love it.. 😛and for a change hun you are going to have to translate your hindi muhawara to me.. i mean i understood the jist of it.. but what is durusat? hee hee aapki pm ki laaj rakh li? 😆 choo chweet...

you know the fact that you were so fond of Dhruv came as a bolt out of the blue to me... i never realized that you liked him.. those were some pretty pleasing words i must say.. 😳 thats why i am reluctant to post a painting of it.. wondering if he would live up to everyone's expectations.. hopefully one day ill find a picture of this handsome 25 year old simple Aryavrat villager.. 😊

and you raised a lovely point about Veer doubting Aryavrat laws... since that is my biggest grudge with the serial where the brothers dont seem to stick to one prototype..

awwww thank you for the Sonu bit... woh nahi hoti tho Samyukta hi nahin hota.. so that was a bit of an ode to that little girl.. and also to remind how Veer had got and still remains strongly attached to that child...😭

awwwww revolutionaries + Agni/Jai - brilliant twist? 😳 thankooo jee..

phew the scroll took me an entire day.. me dont think me going to get so adventurous with future letters...this one was special.. 😆 but thank you so much...

after seeing how no one was on their side, Dharam finally believes that rules should be broken only when necessary (he still has not completely changed to become Veer, but he has shown leeway😆)... agar woh ab bhi nahin maanta... then Aryanagar would be submerged now... but he is a very devoted and capable prince..😊

"Poor girl...how was she to know that she was trying to communicate her feelings with a prince who likes to act like an old man?" -------------------this takes the scene of the epi award👏 Eventually running out of space in the scroll; Veer is forced to interrupt Dharam's thoughts "Dharam... that's enough... I mean... don't you think she must have got the message…" omg omg I was rolling on the floor🤣

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😆 i really enjoyed writing that part.. i could just imagine watching it too... 😆😆

Lashy does ur story lacks twists, its already got so many of them now what new thing is ur wicked mind upto with veer signing of the letter in his name…………………poor dharam 🤣🤣

poor sab ke sab... siya, dharam, veer, daksha.. everyone... 😆 it was more a sweet mistake than a twist.. id say.. 😆

The next one part is obviously serious... par uske baad the story takes a lighter turn...in fact for a long time... 😊since we've been dealing with war for a while now its time for Aryanagar to rebuild itself after the spoils of war, at the hands of its capable princes..

@ Spandy

hello jeeee.. how are you? thank you for the complements and hope i maintain some consistency in the storyline and keep up your expectations in the future... 😳

wow thank God you didnt fall off 😆 Hey Bhagwan Doyle is one of my favourite writers...uske saath mat compare karo please.... he would be churning in his grave...

Veer is an absolute sweetheart... his intentions were absolutely right... but it was an overlook on the part of both Dharam and Veer.. balki Veer ke bagair tho Dharam chitti dhang se bhi nahin padtaa... in fact this mistake of filling wrong stuff it is something i do commonly too.. when you write for someone else its only natural you fill your details into it.. 😆 God knows how many forms ive filled female for my brother or written my DOB for my sister.. 😆

Dharam and Veer are both equally smart.. smart in their own ways and means.. 😆

awwww thankoo so much for your comments... 🤗

@ neeri

yayyyyy longgggg time... neeri.. my Jc.. dont worry about siya ka gham me trying to more than make up for it here.. 😭

thank you so much for your complements... i am feeling much better now...😳

Imagine a prince came on a horse to my place.. thats exactly how id be behaving too 😆 awwww it took me a while to pen the orphanage scene cos it was just supposed to be a by-chance thingy.. so didnt want it to seem rushed but couldnt go on and on.. as i sometimes tend to do 😕😆 but yes because of of their MU d and v werent together and D missed it.. 😕 but ahem ahem...a *hint* in a way it was delibrate...it was also to show how veer slowly relates himself more with such things than the life at the palace, administration, etc etc.... hence, how he still couldnt forget Sonu.... 😊

I'm glad to see Dhruv back... and 'Balaram ji' too... 😃

oh Dhruv will always come and go.. his work is always there in the background of Samyukta.. 😊

and 😆 for a change bhalla wasnt talking about food or sleep.. 😆 for a change in some places he was making more sense than D and V atleast till they solved the MU.. 😆

poor DV... how many people do they have to fight against... i hope they'll be able to handle this situation... itni kam umar main becharo ko itni badi musibat main daal diya apne chech... 😆

honey just cos i like them kyaa karein... i cant be partial..😆 they both are in their late teens... how many kings of India ascended the throne by this age, got married had families, wars, fought kingdoms etc etc... dont worry D and V na.. they'll do well.. 😛

sia.. bless that girl... 🤗 her letter reached dharam at the right time... dharam's so innocent... he missed out the hints that sia was giving him - "all through i wondered if i had already met the prince with whome i had had many beautiful moments with and whether i had only failed to realise it, when he was here." 😆 😆 😆 what is going to happen to this boy i dont know...

i can just about feel your protective grip around Dharam saying "What are you doing, my dear? Cant you read properly?" 😆 ok more than Dharam being innocent....while reading the first few lines itself he became heartbroken and resigned himself to becoming a devdaasi sanyaas for the rest of his life.. 😆 plus obviously with his veer MU and his other problems he just didnt bother delving into the lines properly for the first time.. 😊

i loved veer's response to dharam - "Stop acting like an ignorant gentleman!" "Poor girl...how was she to know that she was trying to communicate her feelings with a prince who likes to act like an old man?" 😆 😆 😆 trust veer ( and u? 😉 ) to come up with such things... 😆

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Veer had to stop the rajdhani express - "Dharam... that's enough... I mean... don't you think she must have got the message…" 😆 😆 😆

😆 i enjoyed writing that scene a lot for some reason... how i wish we could get to see something like that on screen.. 😭

but seriously ye dono launde na bilkul hopeless hain... veer signs his name instead of dharam's and dharam ji the great comments on veer's handwriting but does not notice the biggest blunder ever... 😆 😆 😆

omg neeri i was laughing yesterday when i read your comments and still laughing now... what they say....Old habits die hard.... dharam cant stop scolding veer about his careless presentations ever since the gurukul days.. and veer cant help getting done with one work only to jump to the next.. 😆

i cant imagine what sia will think when she reads the letter... poor thing's gonna be maha confused... 😆 😆 😆

😆 i know.... first of all such a messy scroll and to top it all dharam's words with veer's signature...😆 a slight shock

the last part was the best - 😭 😭 😭 dont know how many times i've told u chech that u are an absolutely brilliant writer... 🤗 🤗 🤗

when i have amazingggggggggg readers like you who follow the story faithfully..... words just pour out...🤗

Originally posted by: lashy

@ neeri

yayyyyy longgggg time... neeri.. my Jc.. dont worry about siya ka gham me trying to more than make up for it here.. 😭 oh u always make up for whatever dissapointment i feel over the show... 🤗

thank you so much for your complements... i am feeling much better now...😳 yippee!!!! does that mean u'll post parts 19 n 20 together like u said once?? 😳

Imagine a prince came on a horse to my place.. thats exactly how id be behaving too 😆 awwww it took me a while to pen the orphanage scene cos it was just supposed to be a by-chance thingy.. so didnt want it to seem rushed but couldnt go on and on.. as i sometimes tend to do 😕😆 but yes because of of their MU d and v werent together and D missed it.. 😕 but ahem ahem...a *hint* in a way it was delibrate...it was also to show how veer slowly relates himself more with such things than the life at the palace, administration, etc etc.... hence, how he still couldnt forget Sonu.... 😊

I'm glad to see Dhruv back... and 'Balaram ji' too... 😃

oh Dhruv will always come and go.. his work is always there in the background of Samyukta.. 😊 great!!!! i really like that guy... 😳

and 😆 for a change bhalla wasnt talking about food or sleep.. 😆 for a change in some places he was making more sense than D and V atleast till they solved the MU.. 😆 awww!!! 😳 bhalla's such a sweet friend to DV... and what do mean chech?? that people who love sleeping and eating are not sensible.... 😆 dont underestimate him... he's very sensible...

poor DV... how many people do they have to fight against... i hope they'll be able to handle this situation... itni kam umar main becharo ko itni badi musibat main daal diya apne chech... 😆

honey just cos i like them kyaa karein... i cant be partial..😆 they both are in their late teens... how many kings of India ascended the throne by this age, got married had families, wars, fought kingdoms etc etc... dont worry D and V na.. they'll do well.. 😛 oh i know they'll do well... they are dharamveer afterall... 😳

sia.. bless that girl... 🤗 her letter reached dharam at the right time... dharam's so innocent... he missed out the hints that sia was giving him - "all through i wondered if i had already met the prince with whome i had had many beautiful moments with and whether i had only failed to realise it, when he was here." 😆 😆 😆 what is going to happen to this boy i dont know...

i can just about feel your protective grip around Dharam saying "What are you doing, my dear? Cant you read properly?" 😆 hee hee... 😆 agar main wahan hoti toh zaroor woh kehti..... 😉 ok more than Dharam being innocent....while reading the first few lines itself he became heartbroken and resigned himself to becoming a devdaasi sanyaas for the rest of his life.. 😆 plus obviously with his veer MU and his other problems he just didnt bother delving into the lines properly for the first time.. 😊

i loved veer's response to dharam - "Stop acting like an ignorant gentleman!" "Poor girl...how was she to know that she was trying to communicate her feelings with a prince who likes to act like an old man?" 😆 😆 😆 trust veer ( and u? 😉 ) to come up with such things... 😆

😆😳

Veer had to stop the rajdhani express - "Dharam... that's enough... I mean... don't you think she must have got the message…" 😆 😆 😆

😆 i enjoyed writing that scene a lot for some reason... how i wish we could get to see something like that on screen.. 😭 fat chance of that happening... 😕 unless of course u join the creative team... 😃

but seriously ye dono launde na bilkul hopeless hain... veer signs his name instead of dharam's and dharam ji the great comments on veer's handwriting but does not notice the biggest blunder ever... 😆 😆 😆

omg neeri i was laughing yesterday when i read your comments and still laughing now... what they say....Old habits die hard.... dharam cant stop scolding veer about his careless presentations ever since the gurukul days.. and veer cant help getting done with one work only to jump to the next.. 😆 kabhi nahi sudherenge na.... 😆 thats why me loves them so much.... 🤗 i usually have soft corners for hopeless cases like them... 😆

i cant imagine what sia will think when she reads the letter... poor thing's gonna be maha confused... 😆 😆 😆

😆 i know.... first of all such a messy scroll and to top it all dharam's words with veer's signature...😆 a slight shock slight!!!!!!!! 😆😆😆 if i was in sia's place i'll probably faint of shock... 😆

the last part was the best - 😭 😭 😭 dont know how many times i've told u chech that u are an absolutely brilliant writer... 🤗 🤗 🤗

when i have amazingggggggggg readers like you who follow the story faithfully..... words just pour out...🤗thank u chech!!!!!!! luv ya... 🤗

me back with more comments 😊 🤗

What I loved :

"In their bid to usurp the throne, the lowly Agni and Jai mama have teamed together so many vile people to create chaos and destroy Aryanagar...first Gadhwar...now the revolutionaries...we stand alone and defenceless, while the obstinate Maharaj and nobles choose to trust Agni and Jai mama over us... we don't have time...I have to rush back...to inform Dharam…" I love it when veer thought of the maharaj as obstinate 😆😆 , I understand his anger as his loved ones and countrymen will be hurt in the war. 😭

I like his spirit as that he will fight no matter what happens

me feel for dharam when he was looking at the maps, he is so stressed and enter the evil agni. I like how dharam's is standing up for veer and his rely that he has gone for a short ride. 😭

Agni gets jealous of the bond between them and bhalla's answer ka toh kya kehna, 👏👏it is so true they cannot live without each other but they still fight. 😆 I loved it when dharam thinks about what bhalla said and then asks "Actually...do you know where Veer is?" 🤣🤣 I loved how you describe the loyalty and honesty of the man who delivers the message. I mean he has risked to come and deliver the message and the dialogue 👏👏"I did not do this deed for money...I owe the Niphaudi monarchs, including Rajkumari Siya; my very life for the support they have given my daughter and my family, for all these years... I give you my word Rajkumar... that everything about this message shall remain a secret..." such loyalty Me happy that dharam got siya's message 😃 the scroll and handwriting used is shuban allah 👏👏👏 how dharam turns into devdas the minute he reads about siya's engagement.😭 I feel like going up to him and saying that abhi to shaadi nahi huui hai so dont worry, siya is only yours 😳 i like how siya says in order to keep formalities i had to meet rajkumar harsh. this confirms that she had no choice but to meet harsh, if only our dharam would read the words properly 😆 aww she remembers his promise 😳 😍❤️ and his assurance😍😍😍 this line was just 😍 😍😍 "I wondered if I already met the prince with whom I had many beautiful moments and whether i had only failed to realise it when he was here" so romantic 😍😍❤️ , the words say so much about how much siya loves him. i really want to see this scene in dharam veer that dance competitions 😭

"Consumed by numerous troubling thoughts; the disheartened Dharam remains incognizant to the purport of Siya's hints, while he continues reading lifelessly, without answering any of Bhalla's queries. " Typical in some boys. always miss the obvious thing that is staring them in the face 🤣🤣🤣 siya has told her feelings so clearly in the scroll and he has not even noticed it 😭😭 He needs lessons in understanding princesses 😆 or Veer just needs to knock dharam on the head so he realises this 😆 😆🤣

• dharam's shock when he reads the full scroll and realises that rajkumar harsh is also helping agni and jai 😭

will come back with more comments. I love the way you have written the words in the scroll 👏👏

Originally posted by: lashy

@ kiran

welcome aboard kiran.. as usual the first one to be here and me love it.. 😛and for a change hun you are going to have to translate your hindi muhawara to me.. i mean i understood the jist of it.. but what is durusat? hee hee aapki pm ki laaj rakh li? 😆 choo chweet................even i dont know what durusat means😆the whole muhawara means that although its late its worth the wait, 😆, haan thank u phir se hamare pm ki laaj rakhne ke liye😆😆

you know the fact that you were so fond of Dhruv came as a bolt out of the blue to me... i never realized that you liked him.. those were some pretty pleasing words i must say.. 😳 thats why i am reluctant to post a painting of it.. wondering if he would live up to everyone's expectations.. hopefully one day ill find a picture of this handsome 25 year old simple Aryavrat villager.. 😊..............yeah dhruv is the typical smartian hero, u just love him for the kindness of his heart😳this saakshi is so lucky to get a real smartian hero rather than a budha bhimsen😆

and you raised a lovely point about Veer doubting Aryavrat laws... since that is my biggest grudge with the serial where the brothers dont seem to stick to one prototype.. ............yeah i think the sagars keep forgetting what they showed previously coz the next time they start showing completely opp to what they showed before and make there chara look so half baked and inconsistent😆😆

awwww thank you for the Sonu bit... woh nahi hoti tho Samyukta hi nahin hota.. so that was a bit of an ode to that little girl.. and also to remind how Veer had got and still remains strongly attached to that child...😭................yeah someone veer is attached to so kiran has to bhi attached😆but she was one sweet girl who will be so hard to forget, i hope u show her in the orphanage and that she is not dead actually but has been saved by dhruv and being raised in the orphonage now.....................i will love dhruv even more if he has really done this😆😆

awwwww revolutionaries + Agni/Jai - brilliant twist? 😳 thankooo jee.. .........thank u for entertaining us so much😊

phew the scroll took me an entire day.. me dont think me going to get so adventurous with future letters...this one was special.. 😆 but thank you so much......................yeah the effort shows but its a very beautiful touch. 👏

after seeing how no one was on their side, Dharam finally believes that rules should be broken only when necessary (he still has not completely changed to become Veer, but he has shown leeway😆)... agar woh ab bhi nahin maanta... then Aryanagar would be submerged now... but he is a very devoted and capable prince..😊........................yeah and this dharam is someone we would like to see on the throne😊

"Poor girl...how was she to know that she was trying to communicate her feelings with a prince who likes to act like an old man?" -------------------this takes the scene of the epi award👏 Eventually running out of space in the scroll; Veer is forced to interrupt Dharam's thoughts "Dharam... that's enough... I mean... don't you think she must have got the message…" omg omg I was rolling on the floor🤣

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😆 i really enjoyed writing that part.. i could just imagine watching it too... 😆😆.......................omg now u raised my hopes sky high if the sagars show something like this i wont complain abt them copying ur ideas😆😆u read this sagars kiran wont complain😆

Lashy does ur story lacks twists, its already got so many of them now what new thing is ur wicked mind upto with veer signing of the letter in his name…………………poor dharam 🤣🤣

poor sab ke sab... siya, dharam, veer, daksha.. everyone... 😆 it was more a sweet mistake than a twist.. id say.. 😆.......................omg i can just visualise this drama unfolding😆😆😆

The next one part is obviously serious... par uske baad the story takes a lighter turn...in fact for a long time... 😊since we've been dealing with war for a while now its time for Aryanagar to rebuild itself after the spoils of war, at the hands of its capable princes.. ....................oh wow me waiting impatiently then for the week next to come😊

Originally posted by: *Jr.Nancy_drew*

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sirf reserve karti ho aajkal 😭

@ reena

here comes my instalment commentator 🤗thank you so much for your comments on part 18.. and yes the scroll took me ages...😆

you seem to love the the Veer-didi aspect dont you? 😳 and yes Veer helped her cos she was sakshi.. shera ko shaayad lift bhi nahin deta.. 😆

we all know how veer likes to cause a stir wherever he goes. sakshi giving the kids the look which translates into dont touch or do anything and the kids obeyed as well. 😆This reminded me of my mum giving me the look many times

show off bandaa hai bilkul and yes Sakshi is like a mom to everyone there..thank you so much for all your comments on the orphanage scene... 😳

me want to see veer's expression the minute he sees the bawling baby 😆😆 love sakshis reply "one more to the unruly mob" 😆 and it was so sweet when she asks Veer to name the baby 😍

awwww me too... would be nice to see this scene in DV.. 😳

awww he named her sonu after the girl who has died😭😊

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my god, I am glad that veer hears bhimdev's plan on attacking Gadhwar 😊 I can imagine veer's shock and pain 😭😭 that everyone around them are traitors.

if Veer hadnt heard those plans.... he might have lost his family in the palace.. so yes he was very very lucky..

@ minoo

OMGGG.........This story is getting better and better with age. Is stttorryy mein action hai drraamma hai, trragedy hai, rrommance hai..........and much more... 👏

*blush* 😳 thankooo

I can't help but marvel over machinations of Agni....... *grudgingly admits* 'He is evil and intelligent' Oh dear DV are trapped.

yes trapped on all sides 😕

And Veer's rendezvous with the kids at orphanage. I half expected the little ones to run with pen and autograph books. ....... and then that bad Bhimsen came to harrass everyone.I was mesmerised by everything ....... even by the fact that Veer was unable to see Bhimsen clearly. Thank God he didn't jump in the middle flashing his sword, challenging everyone on earth
hee hee your comments are so hilarious minoo.. 😆 ye veer thoda zyaada sensible hai DV veer se

I always hated Bhimsen...... So now he has joined hands with Agni(an Aryavrat?) in his insurrection against the Aryavrats. With such squalid thoughts, he hopes to over-throw the current monarch.............. only to let another one come over ....... he is definitely in a lose-lose situation. And if he has dreamt of anything better, than he is definitely😕

all selfish... in the last sentence of his dialogue he mentions na that he knows that agni is using them and then would kill them off.. but he would kill agni off before that.. he is just using the money and weapons that agni supplied them with... both agni and BS using each other for selfish motives.. 😊

Sia's letter to Dharam........ it was the sweetest part....I loved"I wonder if I failed to realise when he was here" subtle yet direct. 😍.........I wanted to steal the line.😉...........but alas.... ab its no use😆.......

awww so glad you liked the letter... 😳ab no use kaise ho saktaa hai.. 😆 soch ke dekho kahin na kahin kisi na kisi ke liye use tho kiyaa jaa sakta hai...

And this little boy Veer, he can't do a thing properly.

😆 why minoo...

So now they have realised Shera's devious plans........... And Dharam, boy , why are you so noble? 😭You can't see reality when it strikes you hard........ That 'tribal girl' WAS trying to create mis-understanding between u and ur bro.I am definitely looking forward to an encounter between Shera and Veer now😳

dharam being dharam.. 😛 and by encounter.. you mean encounter of the unpleasant kind? 😆

How sweet of Veer and Bhalla to make Dharam realize Sia's feelings....... If not for them, Dharam will definitely go the Devdas way.

very well said... 😆 crazy fellow... he just read the first few lines and resigned to his fate.. 😆

And a loving sweet letter, dictated by Dharam,....... but ouch it is signed by Veer😳😆😃............. Daksha will suffer a major heartbreak, when she realises, Veer likes Sia😲

hee hee 😆 i can see most seem to be looking forward to the revelation scene.. 😆

Very well penned Shraddu........... For u👏You have got all the ingredients of your masala right.😛 Everything that starts has a logical ending or for that matter a sweet beginning.......... like the lil girl Sonu

awwwww thank you... i am touched 😭

😆@ minzy

Hello minzy... 🤗 thank you so much... and its lovely to see you here... thank you so much for asking... yes i feel better now.. 😳

Samyukta is somethin which makes me forget all about my books,my xams and about myself, but enter an altogethr New World! 😃 Tats why i lovv it! 😛

awwww that was so sweet of you to say... 😭

Aryanagar - The Orphanage at Sawai forests
The beuty by which u described the orphanage is jus FANTASTIC! 😃 I can imagine all kids joinin around Veer as if an alien has come to pay thm a visit! 😆 Such a sweet n cute scene! 😳 Naam karan of the new born baby was juss cute! 😃 Sonu! aww! i remmb'r th girl! Veer still rembr's her! 😳

awwwwww i know...

Bhimsen wants Sakshi n Dhruv to join him! Very Bad!!!I lovvd the wayy Dhruv stood upto Bhimsen! 👏 👏 👏 Wayy to go!!! 😳 M sort of likin Dhruv's chara! 😉 A powerful one! 😳 haha! so Bhimsen blaabber'd evrythingyy to Dhruv n our dear Veer ovaheard! 😃 wow! 😛Tat means Veer will be cautious and destroy the Revolt! 👏

yes warna the remaining Aryavarts would have all been destroyed..

I felt so patriotic readin the Oath of Veer! 😳 Anythin for his Country n Brother! 😃

Aryanagar – Dharam's tent; Military camp near the border
Agni!! haha! he got the replyy he wanted!! 😆Well done Dahram!!..😃kisi ki nazar na lage is dosti par!

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I hv been waitin for this letter,i came to read this Update keepin all my works pendin with the eagerness n curiosity to read wat Sia wud hv written for Dharam! 😃 WAt a well written letter! 😃 i loved the wayy u uploaded it in a Scroll! 😳 So the girl is more naughtier than i thought! 😆 haha! leavin Dahram a hint of her actual buterflies in stomach!...😆 The sequence of th letter was juss so sweet to read!..😃Loved each n evry line n word of it! 😛

thank you soooooooo much for your complements on the letter 😳 they really meant a lot lot lot lottttttttt to me... 😳 i am so glad it was up to your expectation.. 😳

So Veer's goin to Face Revolt,and Dharam gurading at the borders! 😛 erm! ..mm!!...😳Take care both ff uuuu!!...😃🤗

yes.... 😃

So Veer wrote the letter?..and add to that signed by his name(VEERAWARDAN-lubb to write with initials😆) too?? 🤣 🤣 🤣 Do u think Sia will realize it? Or will she hv galath fami that Veer is in lovv with her?? i want Daksha to read it! 🤣 🤣 🤣 hehe!!

everyone seems to be looking forward to this bit 😆

Wat a hilarious wayy to end!!....🤣 🤣 🤣 Well thoughtttt plot Lashhhh chechh!!...😃 👍🏼 🤗Hope Sia replies to Veer! 🤣 🤣 🤣 hope she advices Dharam to learn to write!!..

you are one clever girl.. 😆

Awww! 😃 Lashh chechh!!! after each episode of urs i read!!...I feel so much freshed up!!..😃 As though i am with full neww Energyy boosted up!! 😃 I want to tell uuu...."U ARE SUCH A FABULOUZZZZYYY WRITER" 🤗 🤗 thnkuuu so much again for takin time to write this! 😃

thankoooooooo🤗

@ neeri

oh u always make up for whatever dissapointment i feel over the show... 🤗😳 yippee!!!! does that mean u'll post parts 19 n 20 together like u said once?? 😳

hee hee will try.. at this point looks a bit unlikely since i havent even finished 19.. 😆

awww!!! 😳 bhalla's such a sweet friend to DV... and what do mean chech?? that people who love sleeping and eating are not sensible.... 😆 dont underestimate him... he's very sensible...

ok baba... dare i say henceforth...that people who love eating and sleeping are not sensible

😆 i enjoyed writing that scene a lot for some reason... how i wish we could get to see something like that on screen.. 😭 fat chance of that happening... 😕 unless of course u join the creative team... 😃

😭 i wish i could... imagine watching RT, VM Mugs from close quarters 😍

DV kabhi nahi sudherenge na.... 😆 thats why me loves them so much.... 🤗 i usually have soft corners for hopeless cases like them... 😆

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😆 i know.... first of all such a messy scroll and to top it all dharam's words with veer's signature...😆 a slight shock slight!!!!!!!! 😆😆😆 if i was in sia's place i'll probably faint of shock... 😆

omg neeri... 😆 hopefully she should just learn to see through their innocent intentions i guess... like all us girl-kind end up doing for the boy-kind.. 😆

@ shona

Aww Dhruv's back! The kids trying to just get a glimpse of Veer-so cute. I'm glad veer got to know about the revolt and now atleast he will be prepared
thank you... 😳

I was glad Dhruv never joined Bhimsen-but why though?

dhruv is an amazing person yaar.. he is actually not a shramik na.. he is an aryavrat.. his father is one of the corrupt nobles in the court... remember he told them when he first met them and they get shocked.. 😊 he used to be a spoilt boy like them too.. but when he saw this girl sakshi and how she stood up to agni and how she went about her life bravely, he falls for her and changes.. leaves his home.. and helps the shramiks.. so now he is an outlaw in the eyes of the law... he neither supports the aryvarts bad rule, nor does he support the revolutionaries extremism to destory all the aryavarts.. he and sakshi are moderates... believe in peaceful means both ways na.. 😊

Bhalla also back-yay! The part where agni taunt Dharam and Dharam comes back with a response that he knows of Veer's whereabouts is good…n wen Bhalla says "its hilarious wen u n veer fight…"that's was so true the brothers can never be angry with each other and they fight over small issues

awwwww yes i guess loads of brothers and even sisters for that matter are that way even today.. 😊

The old messenger who arrived with the message from Sia was very loyal and respectable-hope he doesn't do anything fishy?

no he was just a very loyal friend/servant/worker of the Niphaudi family.. his daughter has grown up in the palace.. and they have supported him always.. 😳

The entire scroll was very realistic and magnificent-where did u get that scroll from

i made it.. picked bits and pieces.. a bit of photoshop.. took a long time... 😆 shaayad future main saare letters ko nahin karoongi 😆

The part DV make up and decide to fight whether to nobles believe them or not is brilliant, very DVish Wow even Dharam is breaking rules…I guess it's the effect of being in Veer's company😆

some effect of veer but ... actually more so the effect of being cornered on all sides by all people and if they didnt do it that way, they would all be dead na.. 😊 so they better act fast..

"Poor girl...how was she to know that she was trying to communicate her feelings with a prince who likes to act like an old man?" 🤣 "Dharam... that's enough... I mean... don't you think she must have got the message…" 🤣 🤣 🤣 this part had me in tears of laughter…it has to be best dialogue in this part

😆 thank you so much


now that is so Dharam like-he does care so much about the way he presents himself to others-I can imagine Dharam saying this

i know i liked this bit.. its these small differences between the two that makes their story interesting 😆 i would love to see this scene

Veer signed off the letter with his name-oops…this will cause another MU naa?

more a sweet mistake 😊

The last bit was very touching…the three friends hugging

awwwww 😳

Shraddha di overall it was an awesome part…I loved each and every bit. Theres some magic about the way u write…it keeps me glued to the computer screen till I finish the whole part…

thank you so much 🤗


One more thing…do u still read Vishvaas…haven't seen u there for ages...

how would i NOT read it hun😳.. since i was unwell for 2 weeks and had a bit of a backlog even before then... i saved all the parts into a word doc... and now commenting simulatenously too... be ready for some lambaaaaaaaaaaa comments 😆

Guess what lashy, your instalment commentator is back 🤗

What I loved :

I like how siya addresses dharam , veer and bhalla so respectfully. 👏 👏
Veer and dharam both at the same time are trying to convey the shocking news they have found out to each other. The way dharam screams aloud "what" is like aab kanuni nayi problem ah gayi hai. I understand both his and veer's concern as they are being attacked by all sides.😭😭
"Reading through the message; he perceives the personal nature of some of its content meant for his brother and hands the scroll back." Veer feels embarrassed at reading personal comments about dharam 😆 😆koi baat nahi, you can let dharam read one of your romantic letter when shera writes to you. 😆
Veer then begins prancing about in fury, as he bickers with Dharam on the most plausible solution to foil the extent of deception they were facing. I can just imagine veer walking round like a caged lion working out how to deal with everything. It is so sweet how veer bellows orders to dharam on not leaving the border – its like he is the older brother. 😆😆Bechara dharam get told by everyone to do something. 😆 🤣I love the brotherly bond between them and how protective they are toward each other. 😍🤗🤗 😍
You are so stubborn...all right Veer...but promise, to take care of yourself...and may the Lord be with you...I will start planning placements against Chatarpur..." I agree dharam a veer is as stubborn as a mule, 🤣🤣🤣
I like how dharam is breaking rules and telling veer to get all regiments and veer for once is asking about authority, normally he does things and then tells 🤣👏👏
I love this line👏"Veer you were right... deceit can only be won with deceit... we have to break the rules sometimes...forge pitaji's seal if you have to... abduct Sanjaya if you have to... but dispatch the regiments and arsenal... I will not allow my kingdom to be vanquished at the hands of traitors!" looks like dharam is becoming like veer, he even told veer to adduct sanjaya to get the seal.🤣 🤣
The way both of them apologies to each other and hug is so sweet. "Dharam I am sorry for having been so rude during all our disagreements too..." glad that veer realises that he has been rude to dharam 👏
Veer bringing shera's story and how she told him to help. The way dharam rolls his eyes and says "Oh Veer! A stranger instigated you and you broke your promise to me...Veer...why would I speak to her about such things." Its like dharam wants to strangle veer for thinking that.😆😆 phir shera ka kya hoga😆
How they both realise that shera heard everything they talked about and veer saying I better not meet her again, because the next time I do, I wouldn't be able to control my anger...I...I..." I bet the minute shera battles her lovely eyes at him, he wont be able to say anything.😆😆
Dharam is too nice as he does not realise how shera is when he says "She must be a mischief monger...always up to no good...some girls tend to eavesdrop, gossip and cause problems wherever they go... it is always better to just keep away from such people... "😊
Yey veer sees the ganapathy and teases dharam and when veer pats Dharam on his shoulder and assures him "No... no... it is all right Dharam... it is understandable... having an idol of the Lord is indeed auspicious... I am sure he will bless you..." veer is thinking mera bhai to pyar main gaya kaam 😆
Veer reply to his bhabi "Talking of which; when you reply to Rajkumari Siya's message tonight...convey my regards to her too..." so sweet😳😳 shukar hai he did not ask dharam to tell siya how much he misses her cooking 🤣🤣
This is the best line🤣 "Stop acting like an ignorant gentleman! She has risked so much sending this secret document to you, while you are ready to give her up to the prince of Chatarpur! Have you even read her message properly? Can't you guess what she wants?" I was in fits when I read this, 🤣🤣🤣even veer understood the scroll and what siya is trying to say aur devdas dharam is slow in understanding it. 🤣
Sheepishly looking up to view their naughty grins, the modest prince stammers "Yes I shall...I shall write back as soon as the war..." awww I can just imagine this scene, dharam happy instead but getting shy and veer and bhalla giving him "I told you so" look 😳😆😆
Kya dialogue hai 👏"Poor girl...how was she to know that she was trying to communicate her feelings with a prince who likes to act like an old man?" reminds me of a song "Main kya karu ra mujhe boodha mil gaya". 🤣🤣I am sure dharam's romantic nature will come out once he sees siya🤣🤣.
I like how veer 🤣convinces dharam to write to siya now as to who know what will happen tomorrow. Aww even bhalla jealously agrees that dharam should thank siya for all the trouble she has gone through 😆👏
Dharam is confused as to what to write in the letter and veer is getting so impatient 🤣🤣 and slaps his forehead in frustration grabs an empty scroll, hastily dabs the quill into the inkpot and stares with an unyielding frown at Dharam, waiting for him to dictate. The way he just grabs an empty scroll is so funny, its like he is think what do I about my slow brother. 🤣So he decides on dharam's behalf and frowns at him to dictate. It takes two guys to write a love letter 🤣
Smiling sweetly at his persistent brother; that is an understatement, 🤣🤣
Dharam writing a full prem kahani by the way veer is writing so fast to keep up and is wondering when will this kahani end as it is still going on. Bechari siya to padh keh takh gaye gi 🤣🤣
Eventually running out of space in the scroll; Veer is forced to interrupt Dharam's thoughts "Dharam... that's enough... I mean... don't you think she must have got the message…" so true of veer's impatient character 🤣🤣but I am sure a few romantic lines by dharam and siya will get the message. Me dying to read what is written in the scroll. 😍
Veer's happiness 🤣🤣as the last line has been dictated and hai raam he signs using his own name. I am laughing so much here 🤣 and don't know who to scream at veer or dharam who instead of checking who has signed the scroll is more worried about the handwriting. He is more worried about the scroll being untidy and what siya would think of this. Uff yeh ladke bhi na, 🤣 I can so imagine siya's reaction when she sees the scroll. She will be so happy reading the message 😆till she reads who has signed it and then either she will faint/scream or personally go to Aryanagar and torture dharam with her singing/cooking.🤣🤣
Can you imagine daksha's reaction if she read the scroll out to siya and thinks that veer has written it. 🤣🤣
Veer's answer "After all that I have done to help you, this is what I get in return...next time when you have the courage to write your own letters... you can take your own time to beautify and decorate it..." like he did dharam a big favour.🤣🤣 He just ended up causing trouble 😆and I bet bechara dharam will get the blame.😆 Me just laughing at what siya will say to him 🤣🤣
It is so good to see them all happy 🤗and now they all will go to fight those evil agni, jai to protect their families, kingdom. 😭😭😭
• they all hug 😭😭. It must be so difficult for them that they have to fight against their own cousin who is trying to kill them and take the kingdom😡. They have no support from the king 😭😭and this is one of the toughtest battle for them. I am sure they both will win and once they capture agni and jai, hang them upside down in a cell for a week 😡

lashy 🤗🤗 you are amazing and the best. love you lots. 🤗🤗

I really want to see the scene where veer signs the wrong name, dharam looking at veers messy handwritting and most of all siya's reaction and what is written in the scroll. 😊

looking forward to next part 😊👏

Originally posted by: lashy

@ shona

Aww Dhruv's back! The kids trying to just get a glimpse of Veer-so cute. I'm glad veer got to know about the revolt and now atleast he will be prepared thank you... 😳ur welcome

I was glad Dhruv never joined Bhimsen-but why though?

dhruv is an amazing person yaar.. he is actually not a shramik na.. he is an aryavrat.. his father is one of the corrupt nobles in the court... remember he told them when he first met them and they get shocked.. 😊he used to be a spoilt boy like them too.. but when he saw this girl sakshi and how she stood up to agni and how she went about her life bravely, he falls for her and changes.. leaves his home.. and helps the shramiks.. so now he is an outlaw in the eyes of the law...he neither supports the aryvarts bad rule, nor does he support the revolutionaries extremism to destory all the aryavarts.. he and sakshi are moderates... believe in peaceful means both ways na..

im so silly...i dont remeber anything other than DV 😆 i never thought all that 😊

Bhalla also back-yay! The part where agni taunt Dharam and Dharam comes back with a response that he knows of Veer's whereabouts is good…n wen Bhalla says "its hilarious wen u n veer fight…"that's was so true the brothers can never be angry with each other and they fight over small issues

awwwww yes i guess loads of brothers and even sisters for that matter are that way even today.. 😊yh i guess
The old messenger who arrived with the message from Sia was very loyal and respectable-hope he doesn't do anything fishy?

no he was just a very loyal friend/servant/worker of the Niphaudi family.. his daughter has grown up in the palace.. and they have supported him always.. 😳thank god nothing fishy there...see like veer im beginning to get suspicious over everything

The entire scroll was very realistic and magnificent-where did u get that scroll from

i made it.. picked bits and pieces.. a bit of photoshop.. took a long time... 😆shaayad future main saare letters ko nahin karoongi 😆lol...its really brillient though
The part DV make up and decide to fight whether to nobles believe them or not is brilliant, very DVish Wow even Dharam is breaking rules…I guess it's the effect of being in Veer's company😆

some effect of veer but ...actually more so the effect of being cornered on all sides by all people and if they didnt do it that way, they would all be dead na.. 😊so they better act fast..lol yh that also i guess
"Poor girl...how was she to know that she was trying to communicate her feelings with a prince who likes to act like an old man?" 🤣 "Dharam... that's enough... I mean... don't you think she must have got the message…" 🤣 🤣 🤣 this part had me in tears of laughter…it has to be best dialogue in this part

😆thank you so much now that is so Dharam like-he does care so much about the way he presents himself to others-I can imagine Dharam saying this

i know i liked this bit.. its these small differences between the two that makes their story interestingyh thats so true😆
i would love to see this sceneme too

Veer signed off the letter with his name-oops…this will cause another MU naa?

more a sweet mistakeok...i want daksha to get the letter...
😊The last bit was very touching…the three friends hugging

awwwww 😳Shraddha di overall it was an awesome part…I loved each and every bit. Theres some magic about the way u write…it keeps me glued to the computer screen till I finish the whole part…

thank you so much 🤗One more thing…do u still read Vishvaas…haven't seen u there for ages...

how would i NOT read it hun😳.. since i was unwell for 2 weeksare u feeling better now?...get well soon hun and had a bit of a backlog even beforethen... i saved all the parts into a word doc... and now commenting simulatenously too... be ready for some lambaaaaaaaaaaa comments 😆

lol will be prepared

Originally posted by: lashy

@ kiran

welcome aboard kiran.. as usual the first one to be here and me love it.. 😛and for a change hun you are going to have to translate your hindi muhawara to me.. i mean i understood the jist of it.. but what is durusat? hee hee aapki pm ki laaj rakh li? 😆 choo chweet...

you know the fact that you were so fond of Dhruv came as a bolt out of the blue to me... i never realized that you liked him.. those were some pretty pleasing words i must say.. 😳 thats why i am reluctant to post a painting of it.. wondering if he would live up to everyone's expectations.. hopefully one day ill find a picture of this handsome 25 year old simple Aryavrat villager.. 😊

and you raised a lovely point about Veer doubting Aryavrat laws... since that is my biggest grudge with the serial where the brothers dont seem to stick to one prototype..

awwww thank you for the Sonu bit... woh nahi hoti tho Samyukta hi nahin hota.. so that was a bit of an ode to that little girl.. and also to remind how Veer had got and still remains strongly attached to that child...😭

awwwww revolutionaries + Agni/Jai - brilliant twist? 😳 thankooo jee..

phew the scroll took me an entire day.. me dont think me going to get so adventurous with future letters...this one was special.. 😆 but thank you so much...

after seeing how no one was on their side, Dharam finally believes that rules should be broken only when necessary (he still has not completely changed to become Veer, but he has shown leeway😆)... agar woh ab bhi nahin maanta... then Aryanagar would be submerged now... but he is a very devoted and capable prince..😊

"Poor girl...how was she to know that she was trying to communicate her feelings with a prince who likes to act like an old man?" -------------------this takes the scene of the epi award👏 Eventually running out of space in the scroll; Veer is forced to interrupt Dharam's thoughts "Dharam... that's enough... I mean... don't you think she must have got the message…" omg omg I was rolling on the floor🤣

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😆 i really enjoyed writing that part.. i could just imagine watching it too... 😆😆

Lashy does ur story lacks twists, its already got so many of them now what new thing is ur wicked mind upto with veer signing of the letter in his name…………………poor dharam 🤣🤣

poor sab ke sab... siya, dharam, veer, daksha.. everyone... 😆 it was more a sweet mistake than a twist.. id say.. 😆

The next one part is obviously serious... par uske baad the story takes a lighter turn...in fact for a long time... 😊since we've been dealing with war for a while now its time for Aryanagar to rebuild itself after the spoils of war, at the hands of its capable princes..

@ Spandy

hello jeeee.. how are you? absolutely fine......its ur haalchaal I shud b asking😆thank you for the complements u deserve more than my simple ones......sum very long words difficult 2 pronounce..probably and hope i maintain some consistency in the storyline and keep up your expectations in the future... 😳U will always continue 2 b ammazzingg 4 me

wow thank God you didnt fall off doesnt matter..I always keep falling😆 Hey Bhagwan Doyle is one of my favourite writersmine 2..hav u read ALL?I read sum...uske saath mat compare karo pleasenot comparing.....he cant b compared...jus giving u the title of QUEEN OF TWISTS..hope u like this😉.... he would be churning in his grave... I am already scared

Veer is an absolute sweetheart... his intentions were absolutely right... but it was an overlook on the part of both Dharam and Veer.. balki Veer ke bagair tho Dharam chitti dhang se bhi nahin padtaayaah he was soo worried abt war... in fact this mistake of filling wrong stuff it is something i do commonly too.. when you write for someone else its only natural you fill your details into it.. 😆 God knows how many forms ive filled female for my brother or written my DOB for my sister.. 😆do all younger siblings hav this misfortune...my Didibhai also does it in school copybuk labels and ID cards

Dharam and Veer are both equally smart.. smart in their own ways and means.. 😆that was no offence meant 2 Veer fans...actually I feel he is not calm and composed naa...so makes mistakes easily..soo much like me..and Dharam is like Didibhai..soo very reserved

awwww thankoo so much for your comments...its my pleasure replying 2 such an ammaazzinngg story 🤗

@ neeri

yayyyyy longgggg time... neeri.. my Jc.. dont worry about siya ka gham me trying to more than make up for it here.. 😭

thank you so much for your complements... i am feeling much better now...😳

Imagine a prince came on a horse to my place.. thats exactly how id be behaving too 😆 awwww it took me a while to pen the orphanage scene cos it was just supposed to be a by-chance thingy.. so didnt want it to seem rushed but couldnt go on and on.. as i sometimes tend to do 😕😆 but yes because of of their MU d and v werent together and D missed it.. 😕 but ahem ahem...a *hint* in a way it was delibrate...it was also to show how veer slowly relates himself more with such things than the life at the palace, administration, etc etc.... hence, how he still couldnt forget Sonu.... 😊

I'm glad to see Dhruv back... and 'Balaram ji' too... 😃

oh Dhruv will always come and go.. his work is always there in the background of Samyukta.. 😊

and 😆 for a change bhalla wasnt talking about food or sleep.. 😆 for a change in some places he was making more sense than D and V atleast till they solved the MU.. 😆

poor DV... how many people do they have to fight against... i hope they'll be able to handle this situation... itni kam umar main becharo ko itni badi musibat main daal diya apne chech... 😆

honey just cos i like them kyaa karein... i cant be partial..😆 they both are in their late teens... how many kings of India ascended the throne by this age, got married had families, wars, fought kingdoms etc etc... dont worry D and V na.. they'll do well.. 😛

sia.. bless that girl... 🤗 her letter reached dharam at the right time... dharam's so innocent... he missed out the hints that sia was giving him - "all through i wondered if i had already met the prince with whome i had had many beautiful moments with and whether i had only failed to realise it, when he was here." 😆 😆 😆 what is going to happen to this boy i dont know...

i can just about feel your protective grip around Dharam saying "What are you doing, my dear? Cant you read properly?" 😆 ok more than Dharam being innocent....while reading the first few lines itself he became heartbroken and resigned himself to becoming a devdaasi sanyaas for the rest of his life.. 😆 plus obviously with his veer MU and his other problems he just didnt bother delving into the lines properly for the first time.. 😊

i loved veer's response to dharam - "Stop acting like an ignorant gentleman!" "Poor girl...how was she to know that she was trying to communicate her feelings with a prince who likes to act like an old man?" 😆 😆 😆 trust veer ( and u? 😉 ) to come up with such things... 😆

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Veer had to stop the rajdhani express - "Dharam... that's enough... I mean... don't you think she must have got the message…" 😆 😆 😆

😆 i enjoyed writing that scene a lot for some reason... how i wish we could get to see something like that on screen.. 😭

but seriously ye dono launde na bilkul hopeless hain... veer signs his name instead of dharam's and dharam ji the great comments on veer's handwriting but does not notice the biggest blunder ever... 😆 😆 😆

omg neeri i was laughing yesterday when i read your comments and still laughing now... what they say....Old habits die hard.... dharam cant stop scolding veer about his careless presentations ever since the gurukul days.. and veer cant help getting done with one work only to jump to the next.. 😆

i cant imagine what sia will think when she reads the letter... poor thing's gonna be maha confused... 😆 😆 😆

😆 i know.... first of all such a messy scroll and to top it all dharam's words with veer's signature...😆 a slight shock

the last part was the best - 😭 😭 😭 dont know how many times i've told u chech that u are an absolutely brilliant writer... 🤗 🤗 🤗

when i have amazingggggggggg readers like you who follow the story faithfully..... words just pour out...🤗