Samyukta Pt 17 -Siya finds Harsh’s scroll - Page 2

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Posted: 17 years ago
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wowo lashy nice update, i am so glad to know that shera was not flirting with agni, it was only angi😆much releived.

I hate this harsh, u just made me realise how we can hate someone when they are being just so perfect, on the surface of it he is the ideal fiancee getting a gift and writing a poem, saying the right words abt missing sia and everything but i guess too much sweet also tastes bitter😆😆😆

i liked nivrti and pari bonding with each other, this nivriti sounds so much better than the one standing hysterically with a knife and threatening sunanda that she was goign to kill off veers real mom😆😆

i loved sia saying that it was not the value of the gifts but the intentions behind it which make the gift so very precious, she finds dharam shawl given to her to cover herself up more precious than expensive jewellery 👏👏👏

aaaawwwwwwwwww everyone is still not talking to my veer, but no worries he has many realtions out side the mahal to keep him company😆😆like a sister and i just loved saakshi asking him to call her didi, this scene is just so cute, i liked sagars raki scene too but this one is also very sweet.😊

seems now rajkumari sia is going to come to dvs rescue😊

Edited by crazy_kiran - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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@ shona

awww this time your comments were the first one 🤗

how are you and how is your hand now shona? hope the pain has gone.. 😊 awww am so glad that you like story.. 😳

hmm shera working for agni came as a big shock to you? but actually i thought it was slightly obvious mujhe pataa nahin thaa sabko itni shock lagegi...😆....for example she kept misleading the two brothers and giving them opposite advices.. and even if you remember agni had said that he has a spy trailing dharam and veer... it was shera he was referring to.. 😊

and yes Agni just needs/claims and uses her.. such an intelligent girl.. she is.. and as to why she is working for him.. thats the story na.. you will find out in the next 5-6 episodes all about her... 😳 oh yes she wouldnt respond to agni.. she is used to such guys.. 😆

again bhimsen.. and agni bhi pehle waale part main mention kiyaa thaa.. you remember when d and v confront the assembly and no one believes them.. and then Agni his friends and jai are discussing in the room whether they should go ahead with their plans.. at that time.. agni's friend asks him "what about the revolutionaries..." and Jai replies "what about them... their attacks will go on as planned..."

yes bhimsen bhi agni si mila hua hai... all for their selfish motives.. 😕

thank you so much for your comments on Nivritti-Pari and Veer-Sakshi scenes.. 😳 i was wondering if readers would enjoy them..

actually coming to think of it, i just realised ki ek part main kaafi kuch huaa hai... 😆 yes siya coming across the scroll and realizing her feelings was a BIG thing.. awwww thank so much for your comments about all the siya scenes shona😳.. and yes, she is no jhansi ki rani😆...so i will try and keep her actions as realistic as possible for a 14th century princess... and see what she would do to help the brothers..

and i dislike Harsh too.. as in he is not BAD BAD like agni.. but he is insensitive and slightly arrogant.. he is very proud of himself.. but i guess these are all pretty common qualities that one would have found in princes those days anyway.. 😊

🤗 thank you soooo much for your comments they really brightened up my day hun.. am waiting to read all your parts today and comment on them..

@ minzy

Agni's guarded private chamber

Chech!!! My gawwdd!!!wow!! Shera turned out to be playing for Agni...??U made us all beleieve she was helpin the Two boys!! Gosh!!! this thought neva came to my head! Neva at all!!..Musss sayy u have real magic!! WAT A TWIST!!!! I cant believe this! Great one!

arre baba tumhi ne kahaa thaa.. 😆 ye ladki kaafi chalu hai she has her feet in both places and plays around.. ab tumhi surprised manner main pooch rahi ho...even in the last part, it ended with that twist only na.. 😕

when agni had mentioned the spy in the bar, that he had set to trail dharam and veer it was shera.. 😊 as for her, i dont want to show that a girl has to do weightlifting and always fume and be angry to be strong.. she can be silently very strong too..

But,i am glad Shera is always keepin a distance with Agni.hehe.This Agni too even he is reallyy matlabi!

he is very matlabi no doubt 😉

i didnt quite get Bhimsen part! Why is hemeetin Agni?

again bhimsen.. and agni bhi pehle waale part main mention kiyaa thaa.. you remember when d and v confront the assembly and no one believes them.. and then Agni his friends and jai are discussing in the room whether they should go ahead with their plans.. at that time.. agni's friend asks him "what about the revolutionaries..." and Jai replies "what about them... their attacks will go on as planned..."

yes bhimsen bhi agni si mila hua hai... all for their selfish motives.. 😕 agni is using the revolutionaries and revolutionaries are using Agni..

thank you for your comments on Nivritti and Pari 😳 and on the Veer and Sakshi scene.. 😊

Royal guest chamber

Wow! Sia is a Girl!

ab iskaa kyaa matlab huaa minzy 😆 tumhe doubt thaa?

Cant wait for her trusted sevak to take the message to Dharam!I hate this over possessive Harsh! ooofff!! Good thing he got hurt!

yes Harsh is being mean.. he is basically an arrogant lad.. he is not as bad as Agni et al.. but he is no where in the same plane as D or V.. 😊 but what i wanted to show was how siya slowly understands what she feels for D... and slowly realizes what is actually important Dharam's immaterial care or Harsh materialistic approach.. she is also a teenager afterall and i think she learnt a few valuable lessons in the past few days or so.. 😳

Part i loved was were u bought in the idea of Prithviraj Chauhan n Sanyogita! aww! felt like the old days!

awww i know.. dont remind me of that horrid serial now.. 😆

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: lashy

@ shona


awww this time your comments were the first one 🤗

yup...last week i was busy n didnt have time to comment but this week im first!

how are you and how is your hand now shona? hope the pain has gone.. 😊my hand is much better-dressing coming of on wednesday awww am so glad that you like story.. 😳

i love the story more than the show sometimes!

hmm shera working for agni came as a big shock to you? but actually i thought it was slightly obvious mujhe pataa nahin thaa sabko itni shock lagegi...😆....for example she kept misleading the two brothers and giving them opposite advices.. and even if you remember agni had said that he has a spy trailing dharam and veer... it was shera he was referring to.. 😊

ok now u put it that way i guess it was obvious...i shuda got that 😳

and yes Agni just needs/claims and uses her.. such an intelligent girl.. she is.. and as to why she is working for him.. thats the story na.. you will find out in the next 5-6 episodes all about her... 😳i'll be waiting to find out more about her-she's sucha sophisticated character...and agni is just so matlabioh yes she wouldnt respond to agni.. she is used to such guys.. 😆

yup she probably meets so many guys like that 😆

again bhimsen.. and agni bhi pehle waale part main mention kiyaa thaa.. you remember when d and v confront the assembly and no one believes them.. and then Agni his friends and jai are discussing in the room whether they should go ahead with their plans.. at that time.. agni's friend asks him "what about the revolutionaries..." and Jai replies "what about them... their attacks will go on as planned..."

oh yh im remember now...wow where do u bring such twists n turns from

yes bhimsen bhi agni si mila hua hai... all for their selfish motives.. 😕yh i guess he also wants his motives to be completedthank you so much for your comments on Nivritti-Pari and Veer-Sakshi scenes.. 😳i was wondering if readers would enjoy them..

they were wonderful n plz continue adding such scenes in future too...i think readers like tham too

actually coming to think of it, i just realised ki ek part main kaafi kuch huaa hai... 😆yup quite alot happened but still wen i got to teh end of the page i was like it ended pretty soon 😳 n i was like whens it gonna be saturday agenyes siya coming across the scroll and realizing her feelings was a BIG thing.. awwww thank so much for your comments about all the siya scenes shona😳.. and yes, she is no jhansi ki rani😆...so i will try and keep her actions as realistic as possible for a 14th century princess... and see what she would do to help the brothers..

this is what i love about Samyukta the best...its very realistic...with Vishvaas i think its filmy n not very realistic but with Samyukta its very believable and realistic and im sure what Sia will do next will be very realistic

and i dislike Harsh too.. as in he is not BAD BAD like agni.. but he is insensitive and slightly arrogant.. he is very proud of himself.. but i guess these are all pretty common qualities that one would have found in princes those days anyway.. 😊

yh he isnt evil but he is proud n arrogant

🤗thank you soooo much for your comments they really brightened up my day hun..reading Sam made my saturday am waiting to read all your parts today and comment on them..will wait for ur comments...hope u like it


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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: lashy

@ minzy

Agni's guarded private chamber

Chech!!! My gawwdd!!!wow!! Shera turned out to be playing for Agni...??U made us all beleieve she was helpin the Two boys!! Gosh!!! this thought neva came to my head! Neva at all!!..Musss sayy u have real magic!! WAT A TWIST!!!! I cant believe this! Great one!

arre baba tumhi ne kahaa thaa.. 😆 ye ladki kaafi chalu hai she has her feet in both places and plays around.. ab tumhi surprised manner main pooch rahi ho...even in the last part, it ended with that twist only na.. 😕nut still it gave me a surprsiee! hehe! 😆

when agni had mentioned the spy in the bar, that he had set to trail dharam and veer it was shera.. 😊 as for her, i dont want to show that a girl has to do weightlifting and always fume and be angry to be strong.. she can be silently very strong too..awww!!! Tats wat i want!....😃

But,i am glad Shera is always keepin a distance with Agni.hehe.This Agni too even he is reallyy matlabi!

he is very matlabi no doubt 😉haha!!!...😆

i didnt quite get Bhimsen part! Why is hemeetin Agni?

again bhimsen.. and agni bhi pehle waale part main mention kiyaa thaa.. you remember when d and v confront the assembly and no one believes them.. and then Agni his friends and jai are discussing in the room whether they should go ahead with their plans.. at that time.. agni's friend asks him "what about the revolutionaries..." and Jai replies "what about them... their attacks will go on as planned..."

yes bhimsen bhi agni si mila hua hai... all for their selfish motives.. 😕 agni is using the revolutionaries and revolutionaries are using Agni..thnkuuu Lashyyyy chechhh for describin n clearin myy doubt!!!🤗🤗now i get Bhimu n Agni are one Set!😆

thank you for your comments on Nivritti and Pari 😳 and on the Veer and Sakshi scene.. 😊

Royal guest chamber

Wow! Sia is a Girl!

ab iskaa kyaa matlab huaa minzy 😆 tumhe doubt thaa?I was jusss tellin she reallyy has qualities of a girl! 😆

Cant wait for her trusted sevak to take the message to Dharam!I hate this over possessive Harsh! ooofff!! Good thing he got hurt!

yes Harsh is being mean.. he is basically an arrogant lad.. he is not as bad as Agni et al.. but he is no where in the same plane as D or V.. 😊 but what i wanted to show was how siya slowly understands what she feels for D... and slowly realizes what is actually important Dharam's immaterial care or Harsh materialistic approach.. she is also a teenager afterall and i think she learnt a few valuable lessons in the past few days or so.. 😳Yes! i forgot to mention tat! Tat was really good,making Harsh as medium Sia understood her love for Dharam! 😃

Part i loved was were u bought in the idea of Prithviraj Chauhan n Sanyogita! aww! felt like the old days!

awww i know.. dont remind me of that horrid serial now.. 😆horrid??....🤔


Me in pink!😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
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@ sonu

awww main tho soch rahi thee ki aap kahaan par ho.. 😳

am glad you liked the story and the way its progressing.. 🤗 yes agni is an out and right villain.. cant think straight, can he?

bhimsen was always negative character.. remember in the earlier episodes when dhruv talks to sakshi.. he complains about the revolutionaries.. and says that they are extremists and want to destroy the whole aryavrat clan.. and they are misusing the orphanage for their plans.. 😊

awww am so glad that you liked the sakshi-veer-pari scenes.. i was wondering if people would accept the "didi" part well.. but then i guess that was the most plausible way for veer to adress sakshi.. it was also to show that veer was different from the remaining aryavrats.. 😊

🤗 here's a big hug to you and love you too..

@ reena

hee hee i can see that you are pretty much in dreamland.. 😆

all your comments that made me go awwww 😍😍😍

This part is so full of surprises 👏👏👏as I did not even realise that sia is going to realise her feelings for dharam

yes i didnt want to mention it in the heading or as part of the preview.. soch li ki let readers find out. 😳

Awwwww she may be at the guest chamber but her mind is thinking about dharam. awww siya is so brave so worried about both rajkumar dharam and veer and protective of them 😊 siya is a clever girl as she wants to see if dharam has understood her message and to know how he feels about her. Siya dharam may be silent but he is very romantic 😳 He will not even mind your singing and cooking. 😆

aww I feel for siya as she feels so uncomfortable 😭 when harsh is holding her face. Me personally feel like jinxing harsh😆

Awww I want to go and hug siya. 😭🤗🤗 So romantic that the minute she wraps the shawl around her she feels comforted as if she is being hugged by dharam and remembers his words ❤️ wow, me dancing herethat siya has realised her feelings for dharam. Its true when they say that someone's absence makes you realise their worth. I don't like harsh after what he tried to do to siya but I am glad that because of him siya has realised that the prince of her dreams is dharam😍

all your comments that made me go 😆

anger at that baboon agni and harsh 😡😡Good for shera, this agni is too much, get your hand off her shoulders. rude way he says meera, seeta and geeta like he is not bothered and care about her tribe. 😡what I or my friends haven't succeeded in doing in so many years, you managed to achieve in just a few days!" that's because she is intelligent, beautiful and charming whereas you are not 😆😆 agni gaze as much as you want to or praise or compliment shera but remember that she is one lethal weapon that can only be handled by veer. Now I really want to beat agni, how dare he think that he will destroy shera's pride, I feel like getting a danda and beating him. 😡😡 he just wants to claim that shera belongs to him like a property. 😡Me want to see his face the day he sees veer and shera together.

Awww siya just read it and as long as you put it back I am sure harsh wont notice 😆that bewaqoof harsh does not notice anything but the necklace on her. 😡 Siya is not sad because you are leaving, this guy is so disillusioned 😆. nope she does not feel the same way about you but since is a princess she cannot say that aloud so I said it on her behalf. 😆 siya feels so uncomfortable the minute harsh mentions wife. 😭

loool I knew daksha had a motive for liking dharam, no wonder she is so happy she just wants to go and see veer. 🤣Bechara veer should just start running now because if daksha comes to aryanagar than veer kya haal hoga 🤣🤣

daksha was just hoping for this idea, and from the way she is supporting siya it looks like she already has her belongings packed to see veer. 🤣🤣Then she tells nanda to come as well like nanda needs her permission, has she asked siya on what she would like to do. 🤣

all your comments that made me go 👏 😊

I like the way shera corrected him. 😊shera knows how matlabi agni is and me like her response. 😊

awwwww nivritti understands how pari's feels as she has lost her son. I am so glad that you have showed a scene like this because it shows the motherly bond both of them have with veer. 😊👏 Me so want to see these scenes in Dharam veer than what the sagars are showing. 😭😭

wow nice jewellery, but nothing compared to dharam's gentle manners, honesty and loyalty 😊

awww he is meeting his sister and I must say she looks so beautiful, calm and strong👏👏. The picture is amazing 😊 awww so sweet of veer to help his sister, he can be very helpful and nice when he does not lose his temper. 👏 awww so nice to see brother and sister together, sakshi must be so happy that she is spending some time with her brother😊 I like how veer says that he has no problem riding with shramiks and does not care about anything. Such a lovely scene of a brother helping his sister. yey he is going to call her didi, sakshi must be feeling so happy that her brother will be calling her didi.

Reens thanx so much for 🤗🤗 your lambaaa lovely comments.. love you so much..

Edited by lashy - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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both the parts were fantastic 👏 and 2 hugs 4 2 awesome fantabuluous parts. 🤗 🤗 .
Plzz go 2 that section whose link is provided under ur signature.......Me wrote some comments there by mistake.
I think this story shud b included in American school syllabus..... 👍🏼
Kids will learn sum proper English and also have a very gud idea abt Indian culture and tradition 😊 (which is portrayed so beautifully 😃)
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: lashy

@ sonu

awww main tho soch rahi thee ki aap kahaan par ho.. 😳

am glad you liked the story and the way its progressing.. 🤗 yes agni is an out and right villain.. cant think straight, can he?

bhimsen was always negative character.. remember in the earlier episodes when dhruv talks to sakshi.. he complains about the revolutionaries.. and says that they are extremists and want to destroy the whole aryavrat clan.. and they are misusing the orphanage for their plans.. 😊

awww am so glad that you liked the sakshi-veer-pari scenes.. i was wondering if people would accept the "didi" part well.. but then i guess that was the most plausible way for veer to adress sakshi.. it was also to show that veer was different from the remaining aryavrats.. 😊

🤗 here's a big hug to you and love you

🤗 to u lashy i was waiting for sam thanx for making my weekend so lovely😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
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brilliant di!! mindblasting part! I like this Agni too though he is to be hated!

you like this Agni? well if it meant that you admired the fact that he could stand on his own two feet.. and not be slapped rebuked and offended by everyone else around him everyday.. then yes this Agni is more independant.. 😆 and to be admired for that

Agni's chamber

Did Harsh's 'show-off'ism affect Agni too?It was funny to see how he got almost everything wrong.😆 BTW can we know how Agni and Shera met?

since there are sooo many characters in the story and sooo many things left to happen... i wouldnt go into too many details , but yes a few brief mentions would be made that would be good enough (I hope😭) for everyone to partly understand/partly imagine their history 😊

can't this boys think of anything else I hate it when they proceed towards such things same with that Harsh guy too 🤢 but 'm so glad to know that Shera is witty!

hmmm though many are irritated with Harsh, (me too.. and i grew to irritate him as i wrote about him though I wanted to pen him as perfect as possible...😆 funny isnt it? but i guess thats the subtlety of life!!!) Harsh's intentions were not pleasant but nowhere as bad as Agni's. He is genuinely in love with Siya and has asked her if she was happy to be with him...Harsh's faults mainly being his arrogance/show-offism and insentitivity.. which one can barely state are extremely villanious traits... 😊 however, no doubt that neither Harsh nor Agni can come anywhere close to Dharam or Veer in gallant behaviour, even if they wanted to act so...

and Bhimsen! ooo what's he doing in an Aryavrat's chamber! I hope he doesn't frame Dharam and Veer agaisnt him.

many clues were dropped about him too in past episodes.. when dhruv was speaking to sakshi about the revolutionaries misuing their orphanage or when jai/agni and his friends were talking about their war plans.. 😊 and how the revolutionaries would also attack as planned... basically BS using agni and agni using BS... 😊

Shramik's temple

The surroundings you've described are so appropriate.The way they show in the serial is more like a workshop than some religious palce.

😆

And isn't it strange that a step mother should feel some close bond which usually doesn't occur?

hmm close bond with a dash of insecurity i'd say. 😛

At Niphaud

Your Sia gets new clothes and jewels in every part!

ahem she is a princess.. we have been "un-spoiled" by the sagars 😆

this Harsh is so possesive grr how could he?? how could he just utter and do foolish things?? poor Sia...since Harsh and Sia met I'm waiting to know how they'll break up ...hope I find my answers soon 😆

yes you would... 😛

...can I have that shawl parcelled?☺️

😆 sure hun

The whole scene where she confesses her love for Dharam was so enchanting! I wanted to see my Dharam gazing at her when she said this.😛

😆 Dharam gazing at her? sab aayegaa... aayegaa..

good lord!! Daksha plans to live with Veer!! 😲 that poor chap can't stand her within feets from him & she is supposed to stay together with him for the rest of life!!

yehi ek tension reh gayee thee Veer ke liye.. thank God he didnt overhear their conversations..😛

and Sia is very thoughtful.She seems to have understood my Dharam so well! and how will she manage to send that scroll across? that too within time and with her feelings hidden in that!!

hmmmm all your queries should be solved by next part i guess.. 😊

thank you for your comments on the Veer-Sakshi scene..😳

His rail of thoughts about the tiff between him & his brother is touching.Poor thing he must be so hurt.And my Dharam was not cosoled in this part! 😔

well.. everything will be solved soon as you might have noticed..

hugely interesting preview! phew so they stick to eahc other once again.I guess now if they recieve Sia's scroll they might hint on something and find out partially the truth about Shera. And they will manage to trick or trap her?? OMG!! I'm standing on my toe nails!!

dont stand on them too long or they might hurt.. 😆thank you to you too hun.. 😳 UMMAAA........

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@ hiri

awww thank you too for reading the script and keeping up with it.. 🤗 sab milke agni ko sabak sikhaayenge tum chintaa mat karo..

@ minoo

😭 ........... Me touched and touched and touched

awwww 😭 me touched that you are touched..

And this Harsh....... How DARE he mess with Sia??!! How well you pen it all Shraddy....... I was squirming in my seat, seathing with anger and disgust at Harsh and his overtures 😡 And this Agni...... he is just like his friend Harsh..... I am glad both the ladies escaped the lusty advances of those deceitful men 👏 .....

hmmm though many are irritated with Harsh, (me too.. and i grew to irritate him as i wrote about him though I wanted to pen him as perfect as possible...😆 funny isnt it? but i guess thats the subtlety of life!!!) Though Harsh's intentions were not pleasant/very noble but nowhere as bad as Agni's. He is genuinely in love with Siya and had asked her if she was happy to be with him...Harsh's faults mainly being his arrogance/show-offism and insentitivity.. which one can barely state are extremely villanious traits... 😊 however, no doubt that neither Harsh nor Agni can come anywhere close to Dharam or Veer in gallant behaviour, even if they wanted to act so... 😊


Hey.........Sia has changed and matured so much....... she is choooooo chweeet 😉 👍🏼 ..... I do hope she is able to get a message across without getting into trouble herself. Aur phir kuch lovely messages exchange ho....... Sia-Dharam ke beech 😍

siya is always sweet 😆 she always knew the right from the wrong.. and knew to accept her mistakes gracefully.. now she has had some higher realizations in life.. 😆 jokes apart.. yes she has understood the true meaning of many ingredients in life i guess.. 😊

Great that Sia finally realized her love for Dharam........ Oh but how will she be able to communicate her feelings to Dharam 😕 ..... I want to lend her my cell 😳 ....... She doesn't even know her prince charming has already had the cupid's arrow 😛 I loved how she confided her feelings to her friends....... and their reactions😉 specially Daksha's- I so like her....... plz plz plz no heartbreaks for her😛😳

🤣 for the comment in red.... and thank you for the rest of the comments.. you found the girl's interactions adorable? 😳 aww thank you so much.. and how can there be no heartbreaks for daksha unless veer agrees to marry twice 😭


But, but but the trunk which was spotted by Veer and which he was unable to find again when in presence of the royals and the soldiers........ was it hidden by Shera? Does it mean Shera has some sort of pass/access card to go in/out of the place at her sweet will? Because surely not everyone can enter the palace? right? didn't anybody question her presence? ........ probably she gets away with her mesmerizing looks 😉

am so glad you raise such points minoo.. shera had nothing to do with the trunk, she met veer at the cliff which was not far from the palace at the capital.. the trunk was in a construction site at sawai, near the border... all she did was overhear veer mumbling to himself and report accordingly... jai and agni have many corrupt soldiers at the border na.. woh trunk wunk kyun hilaayegi.. bahut chaloo cheez hai

and she has only entered the palace twice.. once openly to return veer's knife (actually to meet veer and dharam and confuse their already muddled heads😛) and used veer's royal dagger as a token to gain entry... and the other time now with agni.. for which she uses the weapon of a heavy cloak, including her face all covered.. obviously being agni's spy, agni's private soldiers know her na...

Hey is Bhimsen a negative chracter here.?....... Yaaayyyyyy.... make him negative...... I don't like him🤢

😆 ok... but many clues were dropped about him too.. when dhruv was speaking to sakshi about the revolutionaries misuing their orphanage or when jai/agni and his friends were talking about their war plans.. 😊 and how the revolutionaries would also attack as planned...

Wot an amazing scene between Veer and Sakshi 👏 Wot an amazing scene between Pari and Nivriti 😭 ... I was so touched........But in place of DV serial wali Pari...... I imagined our Kamlavati (during Someshwar era of PRC) 😳 ...........As for Sakshi, I obediently followed the lead given by you........i.e. the same picture.

hee hee thank you so much for your comments on Veer sakshi, pari, nivritti... 😳

Hey.......... this part was the best of all!! 👏

thank you sooooooo much hun.. actually this comment is daunting.. 😭ab what if my next part is not as good..

Edited by lashy - 17 years ago
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@ minoo

😭 ........... Me touched and touched and touched

awwww 😭 me touched that you are touched..

we r all getting very touchy indeed😆

And this Harsh....... How DARE he mess with Sia??!! How well you pen it all Shraddy....... I was squirming in my seat, seathing with anger and disgust at Harsh and his overtures 😡 And this Agni...... he is just like his friend Harsh..... I am glad both the ladies escaped the lusty advances of those deceitful men 👏 .....

hmmm though many are irritated with Harsh, (me too.. and i grew to irritate him as i wrote about him though I wanted to pen him as perfect as possible...😆 funny isnt it? but i guess thats the subtlety of life!!!) Though Harsh's intentions were not pleasant/very noble but nowhere as bad as Agni's. He is genuinely in love with Siya and had asked her if she was happy to be with him...Harsh's faults mainly being his arrogance/show-offism and insentitivity.. which one can barely state are extremely villanious traits... 😊 however, no doubt that neither Harsh nor Agni can come anywhere close to Dharam or Veer in gallant behaviour, even if they wanted to act so... 😊

well ......... Shraddy I'll still like to believe that Harsh is enamoured by Sia and her beauty........ love? No........If he was, he'll make sure he approaches with caution😕


Hey.........Sia has changed and matured so much....... she is choooooo chweeet 😉 👍🏼 ..... I do hope she is able to get a message across without getting into trouble herself. Aur phir kuch lovely messages exchange ho....... Sia-Dharam ke beech 😍

siya is always sweet 😆 she always knew the right from the wrong.. and knew to accept her mistakes gracefully If my friend Shraddy says it, it has to be true

.. now she has had some higher realizations in life.. 😆 jokes apart.. yes she has understood the true meaning of many ingredients in life i guess.. 😊

Great that Sia finally realized her love for Dharam........ Oh but how will she be able to communicate her feelings to Dharam 😕 ..... I want to lend her my cell 😳 ....... She doesn't even know her prince charming has already had the cupid's arrow 😛 I loved how she confided her feelings to her friends....... and their reactions😉 specially Daksha's- I so like her....... plz plz plz no heartbreaks for her😛😳

🤣 for the comment in red.... and thank you for the rest of the comments.. you found the girl's interactions adorable? 😳 aww thank you so much.. and how can there be no heartbreaks for daksha unless veer agrees to marry twice 😭...We can find another guy for her na😭

Hey.......... this part was the best of all!! 👏

thank you sooooooo much hun.. actually this comment is daunting.. 😭ab what if my next part is not as good.. well if the next part is not as good.......you will have to contend with lesser claps😈....... Actually I already told you this was the best part......... which means previous parts weren't as good as this one😈😈...... I'm being mean😃

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@ nima

hi.. thank you so much for your comments... am so glad that you enjoyed... this part it was a bit of a roller coaster ride.. 😳 everyone seems to hate agni from the absolute bottom of their hearts.. yes siya has finally realized her love for Dharam.. 😳 par dharam realized already loves siya.. ever since he saw her.. even in last part he confessed to he Lord na.. 😕

aww glad you liked Veer-sakshi bit.. and yes veer-shera love story is a whole sagar ... nothing that will happen too quickly.. but i am hoping something dreamy with a touch of realism to it.. 😊

thank you so much.. your comments meant a lot to me 🤗

@ kiran

is baar aap bahut late aaye 😛 hee hee.. relieved about shera 😆 theek hai.. there will still be some more hatred in store for her.. (dont tell me i didnt warn you) but at the end she will realize na... that transformation should (hopefully) be interesting.. 😛

as for harsh, i know... i didnt want to make him too bad at all.. but it just goes to show how some subtle points about one person can really make you admire someone (i.e. D & V) and how some subtle points about someone can really make you hate someone (Harsh) 😛 and harsh is not exactly a gentleman... is he? 😕

thank you so much about your comments on nivritti-pari and veer-sakshi.. i try and not make nivritti and sunanda as terrorists.. and pari and sakshi and wailing banshees hee hee.. 😳

i loved sia saying that it was not the value of the gifts but the intentions behind it which make the gift so very precious, she finds dharam shawl given to her to cover herself up more precious than expensive jewellery 👏👏👏

awwww thank you hun 😳

no no dont worry everyone will talk to veer soon... bichaaraa.. 😭... but he will face a few hurdles still.. 😕

seems now rajkumari sia is going to come to dvs rescue😊

hmmm coming to resuce ka tho nahin pataa.. dont see how it is very plausible for a14th century princess like siya... but she will definitely try her best to help 😊

@ shona

i am so glad your hand is much better now.. 😳dressing coming off on wednesday? good news hun... 👏

ok now u put it that way about shera i guess it was obvious...i shuda got that 😳 i'll be waiting to find out more about her-she's sucha sophisticated character...and agni is just so matlabi

hee hee dont worry.. you have now got the truth about shera.. 😳 yes she is verrrrry sophisticated. in fact the most sophisticated charac in sam i think 😕


yup quite alot happened but still wen i got to teh end of the page i was like it ended pretty soon 😳 n i was like whens it gonna be saturday agen. this is what i love about Samyukta the best...its very realistic...with Vishvaas i think its filmy n not very realistic but with Samyukta its very believable and realistic and im sure what Sia will do next will be very realistic

hey hey dont dare say anything about viswaas.. aakhir naam hi maine rakhaa thaa.. 😛 everything has got a different set of viewership.. and i think viswaas makes for much more enjoyable reading.. very nice light.. sweet and entertaining.. 😊 thats why it has become sooo popular.. you remember when you started.. did you think it would be so well-read.. congo to you gal.. u shouldnt give up writing... ever.. 😳

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