@ abhy
brilliant di!! mindblasting part! I like this Agni too though he is to be hated!
you like this Agni? well if it meant that you admired the fact that he could stand on his own two feet.. and not be slapped rebuked and offended by everyone else around him everyday.. then yes this Agni is more independant.. 😆 and to be admired for that
Agni's chamber
Did Harsh's 'show-off'ism affect Agni too?It was funny to see how he got almost everything wrong.😆 BTW can we know how Agni and Shera met?
since there are sooo many characters in the story and sooo many things left to happen... i wouldnt go into too many details , but yes a few brief mentions would be made that would be good enough (I hope😭) for everyone to partly understand/partly imagine their history 😊
can't this boys think of anything else I hate it when they proceed towards such things same with that Harsh guy too 🤢 but 'm so glad to know that Shera is witty!
hmmm though many are irritated with Harsh, (me too.. and i grew to irritate him as i wrote about him though I wanted to pen him as perfect as possible...😆 funny isnt it? but i guess thats the subtlety of life!!!) Harsh's intentions were not pleasant but nowhere as bad as Agni's. He is genuinely in love with Siya and has asked her if she was happy to be with him...Harsh's faults mainly being his arrogance/show-offism and insentitivity.. which one can barely state are extremely villanious traits... 😊 however, no doubt that neither Harsh nor Agni can come anywhere close to Dharam or Veer in gallant behaviour, even if they wanted to act so...
and Bhimsen! ooo what's he doing in an Aryavrat's chamber! I hope he doesn't frame Dharam and Veer agaisnt him.
many clues were dropped about him too in past episodes.. when dhruv was speaking to sakshi about the revolutionaries misuing their orphanage or when jai/agni and his friends were talking about their war plans.. 😊 and how the revolutionaries would also attack as planned... basically BS using agni and agni using BS... 😊
Shramik's temple
The surroundings you've described are so appropriate.The way they show in the serial is more like a workshop than some religious palce.
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And isn't it strange that a step mother should feel some close bond which usually doesn't occur?
hmm close bond with a dash of insecurity i'd say. 😛
At Niphaud
Your Sia gets new clothes and jewels in every part!
ahem she is a princess.. we have been "un-spoiled" by the sagars 😆
this Harsh is so possesive grr how could he?? how could he just utter and do foolish things?? poor Sia...since Harsh and Sia met I'm waiting to know how they'll break up ...hope I find my answers soon 😆
yes you would... 😛
...can I have that shawl parcelled?☺️
😆 sure hun
The whole scene where she confesses her love for Dharam was so enchanting! I wanted to see my Dharam gazing at her when she said this.😛
😆 Dharam gazing at her? sab aayegaa... aayegaa..
good lord!! Daksha plans to live with Veer!! 😲 that poor chap can't stand her within feets from him & she is supposed to stay together with him for the rest of life!!
yehi ek tension reh gayee thee Veer ke liye.. thank God he didnt overhear their conversations..😛
and Sia is very thoughtful.She seems to have understood my Dharam so well! and how will she manage to send that scroll across? that too within time and with her feelings hidden in that!!
hmmmm all your queries should be solved by next part i guess.. 😊
thank you for your comments on the Veer-Sakshi scene..😳
His rail of thoughts about the tiff between him & his brother is touching.Poor thing he must be so hurt.And my Dharam was not cosoled in this part! 😔
well.. everything will be solved soon as you might have noticed..
hugely interesting preview! phew so they stick to eahc other once again.I guess now if they recieve Sia's scroll they might hint on something and find out partially the truth about Shera. And they will manage to trick or trap her?? OMG!! I'm standing on my toe nails!!
dont stand on them too long or they might hurt.. 😆thank you to you too hun.. 😳 UMMAAA........
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@ hiri
awww thank you too for reading the script and keeping up with it.. 🤗 sab milke agni ko sabak sikhaayenge tum chintaa mat karo..
@ minoo
😭 ........... Me touched and touched and touched
awwww 😭 me touched that you are touched..
And this Harsh....... How DARE he mess with Sia??!! How well you pen it all Shraddy....... I was squirming in my seat, seathing with anger and disgust at Harsh and his overtures 😡 And this Agni...... he is just like his friend Harsh..... I am glad both the ladies escaped the lusty advances of those deceitful men 👏 .....
hmmm though many are irritated with Harsh, (me too.. and i grew to irritate him as i wrote about him though I wanted to pen him as perfect as possible...😆 funny isnt it? but i guess thats the subtlety of life!!!) Though Harsh's intentions were not pleasant/very noble but nowhere as bad as Agni's. He is genuinely in love with Siya and had asked her if she was happy to be with him...Harsh's faults mainly being his arrogance/show-offism and insentitivity.. which one can barely state are extremely villanious traits... 😊 however, no doubt that neither Harsh nor Agni can come anywhere close to Dharam or Veer in gallant behaviour, even if they wanted to act so... 😊
Hey.........Sia has changed and matured so much....... she is choooooo chweeet 😉 👍🏼 ..... I do hope she is able to get a message across without getting into trouble herself. Aur phir kuch lovely messages exchange ho....... Sia-Dharam ke beech 😍
siya is always sweet 😆 she always knew the right from the wrong.. and knew to accept her mistakes gracefully.. now she has had some higher realizations in life.. 😆 jokes apart.. yes she has understood the true meaning of many ingredients in life i guess.. 😊
Great that Sia finally realized her love for Dharam........ Oh but how will she be able to communicate her feelings to Dharam 😕 ..... I want to lend her my cell 😳 ....... She doesn't even know her prince charming has already had the cupid's arrow 😛 I loved how she confided her feelings to her friends....... and their reactions😉 specially Daksha's- I so like her....... plz plz plz no heartbreaks for her😛😳
🤣 for the comment in red.... and thank you for the rest of the comments.. you found the girl's interactions adorable? 😳 aww thank you so much.. and how can there be no heartbreaks for daksha unless veer agrees to marry twice 😭
But, but but the trunk which was spotted by Veer and which he was unable to find again when in presence of the royals and the soldiers........ was it hidden by Shera? Does it mean Shera has some sort of pass/access card to go in/out of the place at her sweet will? Because surely not everyone can enter the palace? right? didn't anybody question her presence? ........ probably she gets away with her mesmerizing looks 😉
am so glad you raise such points minoo.. shera had nothing to do with the trunk, she met veer at the cliff which was not far from the palace at the capital.. the trunk was in a construction site at sawai, near the border... all she did was overhear veer mumbling to himself and report accordingly... jai and agni have many corrupt soldiers at the border na.. woh trunk wunk kyun hilaayegi.. bahut chaloo cheez hai
and she has only entered the palace twice.. once openly to return veer's knife (actually to meet veer and dharam and confuse their already muddled heads😛) and used veer's royal dagger as a token to gain entry... and the other time now with agni.. for which she uses the weapon of a heavy cloak, including her face all covered.. obviously being agni's spy, agni's private soldiers know her na...
Hey is Bhimsen a negative chracter here.?....... Yaaayyyyyy.... make him negative...... I don't like him🤢
😆 ok... but many clues were dropped about him too.. when dhruv was speaking to sakshi about the revolutionaries misuing their orphanage or when jai/agni and his friends were talking about their war plans.. 😊 and how the revolutionaries would also attack as planned...
Wot an amazing scene between Veer and Sakshi 👏 Wot an amazing scene between Pari and Nivriti 😭 ... I was so touched........But in place of DV serial wali Pari...... I imagined our Kamlavati (during Someshwar era of PRC) 😳 ...........As for Sakshi, I obediently followed the lead given by you........i.e. the same picture.
hee hee thank you so much for your comments on Veer sakshi, pari, nivritti... 😳
Hey.......... this part was the best of all!! 👏
thank you sooooooo much hun.. actually this comment is daunting.. 😭ab what if my next part is not as good..
Edited by lashy - 17 years ago