Samyukta Pt 17 -Siya finds Harsh’s scroll - Page 3

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: lashy

@ kiran

is baar aap bahut late aaye 😛 hee hee.. relieved about shera 😆 theek hai.. there will still be some more hatred in store for her.. (dont tell me i didnt warn you) but at the end she will realize na... that transformation should (hopefully) be interesting.. 😛...................uff i hope she transforms soon coz otherwise kiran is going to be very angry with her😆😆

as for harsh, i know... i didnt want to make him too bad at all.. but it just goes to show how some subtle points about one person can really make you admire someone (i.e. D & V) and how some subtle points about someone can really make you hate someone (Harsh) 😛 and harsh is not exactly a gentleman... is he? 😕

thank you so much about your comments on nivritti-pari and veer-sakshi.. i try and not make nivritti and sunanda as terrorists.. and pari and sakshi and wailing banshees hee hee.. 😳

i loved sia saying that it was not the value of the gifts but the intentions behind it which make the gift so very precious, she finds dharam shawl given to her to cover herself up more precious than expensive jewellery 👏👏👏

awwww thank you hun 😳

no no dont worry everyone will talk to veer soon... bichaaraa.. 😭... but he will face a few hurdles still.. 😕

seems now rajkumari sia is going to come to dvs rescue😊

hmmm coming to resuce ka tho nahin pataa.. dont see how it is very plausible for a14th century princess like siya... but she will definitely try her best to help 😊.................well when 11thc sanyo cld go to kanuj and delhi and pushkar all on her own 14th c to chalega😆😆

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Posted: 17 years ago
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I loved this part Shradu.. I myself find it surprising tht I love a chaper tht had zero romance ..😆

I love every scene.. n every dialogue n every detail..👏

  • Sia n Shera 😛both of them were in similar situations with the bad boys Agni and Harsh n they tackle them in their own characteristic manner… Sia so vulnerable n innocent n Shera soo tactful n worldy wise...
  • Aww pooor Sia my doll.. how dare Harsh touches her !😡 Feel like hitting his kuckles with a ruler !! n Agni is more scary than Harsh.. how dare he think abt Shera like tht.. Egoistic male.. cannot take it tht a girl is not interested in his overtures.. I don't think I hate ur Harsh.. Hes a normal guy who thinks hes in love with his fiancee..😕
  • n Shera.. my darling.. "You probably meant Radha, Manu, bade baba, baba, chachi… they are all fine…" Her sarcasm 👏 Her clever practical mind "When two people already have differences in opinions, disagreements are only a matter of time…all I had to do was get my timing right..." 👏👏👏
  • Loved the comic relief in the form on Daksha ""imagine all of us living under one roof...Siya...Rajkumar Dharam...I...Rajkumar Veer...you can come too Nanda..." 😆 n poor hapless Nanda ..
  • Sia going to sleep snuggled in Dharams shawl is sooo sweet n romantic…" 😍 "What beautiful gift Nanda?" showing them the shawl, she continues "are poems and necklaces more beautiful gifts than this timely shawl...till not so long ago, even I would have thought so...but I have now realized that what matters are true intentions!" Nice dialogue but I don't agree 😆 true intentions ka achaar dalegi 😡
  • Thank God ur Sia acts like a proper princess like n sends a message to Dharam.. I was half scared tht she will jump into a buggy like Sanyo n go personally to tell her prince..
  • The small scene between Veer n his didi was the MOST beautiful one 👏.. Thank u from the bottom of my heart n soul n being for posting a pic of Sakshi 🤗.. I would have thrown up if I had imagined tht crooked nose witch behind Veer on horse back ( Hey am I risking a nice warning pm here posting this in the MODS topic 😉 )😆

  • I some how did not like the mention of Sanyos elopement.. I think I am the only reader who did not like it so please ignore this but I felt I had to tell u wot I did not like.. 😳
  • n please please kill bhimsen off 🤢 why did tht big oaf come into the dreamland of Sammi ?
  • Why has Sia degraded to silver jewellery ? 😕 n u did not tell me wot color is Veers horse ??

N OMG OMG ur preview😛.. I think Smart Veer realizes in next part tht Shera is behind all the misunderstanding n his reaction will be WOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWW 😍I am looking forward to some nice mirch masala Veer shera scenes in next part

So you had better start working on meeting ur readers exectations !! 😆 😆😆😆 Ur fault. u raise the bar with every chapter u post..

For ooooooooo 🤗

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Posted: 17 years ago
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@ minzy

arre baba tumhi ne kahaa thaa.. 😆 ye ladki kaafi chalu hai she has her feet in both places and plays around.. ab tumhi surprised manner main pooch rahi ho...even in the last part, it ended with that twist only na.. 😕but still it gave me a surprsiee! hehe! 😆

itnaa sab pataa hoke bhi how it gave your surprise 😆

thnkuuu Lashyyyy chechhh for describin n clearin myy doubt!!!🤗🤗now i get Bhimu n Agni are one Set!😆 Yes! i forgot to mention was really good,making Harsh as medium Sia understood her love for Dharam! 😃

awwww thank you for your comments and you are welcome for clearing your doubts..

Part i loved was were u bought in the idea of Prithviraj Chauhan n Sanyogita! aww! felt like the old days!

awww i know.. dont remind me of that horrid serial now.. 😆horrid??....

i meant currently horrid..

@ spandita

thank you so much for your comments spandy.. i read your comments in that thread too 😳 awwww thank you very very much.. heres a big hug to you 🤗 really made my day.. 😳

american school syllabus? why did you have some bad brushes with their language off late? 😆

@ minoo

well ......... Shraddy I'll still like to believe that Harsh is enamoured by Sia and her beauty........ love? No........If he was, he'll make sure he approaches with caution😕

awwww no i know.. i understand.. for Harsh no one comes before himself.. he loves siya after he loves himself.. thats the difference.. but me no making him out to be great at all.. just that he is not as vile as agni. 😊

well if the next part is not as good.......you will have to contend with lesser claps😈....... Actually I already told you this was the best part......... which means previous parts weren't as good as this one😈😈...... I'm being mean😃

😭 i can see that

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanks to u Shradhha for putting so much efforts in the story and creating a new magic in every new episode. u r an awewsome writer👏. how deeply u can think about the story!! 😊 😊 😊 keep it up 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: lashy

@ minzy

arre baba tumhi ne kahaa thaa.. 😆 ye ladki kaafi chalu hai she has her feet in both places and plays around.. ab tumhi surprised manner main pooch rahi ho...even in the last part, it ended with that twist only na.. 😕but still it gave me a surprsiee! hehe! 😆

itnaa sab pataa hoke bhi how it gave your surprise 😆

thnkuuu Lashyyyy chechhh for describin n clearin myy doubt!!!🤗🤗now i get Bhimu n Agni are one Set!😆 Yes! i forgot to mention was really good,making Harsh as medium Sia understood her love for Dharam! 😃

awwww thank you for your comments and you are welcome for clearing your doubts..

Part i loved was were u bought in the idea of Prithviraj Chauhan n Sanyogita! aww! felt like the old days!

awww i know.. dont remind me of that horrid serial now.. 😆horrid??....

i meant currently horrid..

@ spandita

thank you so much for your comments spandy.. i read your comments in that thread too microscope lekar dhundhna to nahin pada naa......my huuuggee comments😆 😳 awwww thank you very very much.. heres a big hug to you 🤗 bas bas ab haath niche kar lo warna aapke hhathon mein dard hoga to aap likhogi kaise?really made my day.. 😳Wow!! feels nice 2 have made the day of a gr88 writer😉

american school syllabus? why did you have some bad brushes with their language off late? 😆I everyday have bad brushes with their language😡ek period mein shuddh English likhna padta hai(cambridge style)aur agle hi computer period mein color likhna padta hai instead of colour.....aur kahin bhi galti ho gati to me🤢 I get so confused😕

@ minoo

well ......... Shraddy I'll still like to believe that Harsh is enamoured by Sia and her beauty........ love? No........If he was, he'll make sure he approaches with caution😕

awwww no i know.. i understand.. for Harsh no one comes before himself.. he loves siya after he loves himself.. thats the difference.. but me no making him out to be great at all.. just that he is not as vile as agni. 😊

well if the next part is not as good.......you will have to contend with lesser claps😈....... Actually I already told you this was the best part......... which means previous parts weren't as good as this one😈😈...... I'm being mean😃

😭 i can see that

Me in my fav colour😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hello shello ji!!!!!! 😃 i'm back!!!!!!! 😳

wow!!!!! what can i say!!!!! chotu was right.... i totally loooooooved shera n sia... mast hain ye dono ladkiya... 👏 👏 👏 i love shera's intelligence and sia's innocence... they are both completely opposite to each other but equally likable in their own way... hats off to u for the way u have moulded these two characters... 👏 i loved how they bruised agni n harsh's fragile egos in their respective ways.... 😆 serves those two 🐷's right.... 😡 😡 😡

....she comes across Dharam's soft shawl that had been given to Nanda to shield the princess from the chilly winds, a few mornings ago. Gaping at the shawl for a few moments; she whips it open to wrap it around herself. Unable to comprehend the instant calming effect it had on her; the dazed girl wipes her tears and slowly approaches her bed. In spite of lying on the luxuriant silk sheets; Siya strangely experiences greater bliss being tightly huddled within a simple cotton cloth. Feeling as though she were enveloped within Dharam's comforting hug, she recalls his words "Trust me...you will meet your prince...you will still have many beautiful moments with him..."
awwwwwwwww!!!!!!! beautiful scene!!!!! 😍

"What beautiful gift Nanda?" showing them the shawl, she continues "Are poems and necklaces more beautiful gifts than this timely shawl...till not so long ago, even I would have thought so...but I have now realized that what matters are true intentions!" so true... 😳

......"Unfortunately, I have perceived someone's worth only in his absence..."

......I would never have understood how deep my feelings for Rajkumar Dharam actually are..."

.....Siya blushes and confirms their doubts with closed eyes "Nanda...Daksha... I... think I'm in love...in love with Rajkumar Dharam!"
😳
finally she said it!!!!! 🥳
now i cant wait for dharam n sia to meet.... 😳 i luv ya chech.... 🤗 u've made both of them admit atleast to themselves... ab ek doosre ko batane ki deri hain... 😳

the nivriti-pari and veer-sakshi scenes were so sweet...
nivriti's such a darling... 😊
Surveying the fear in the lady's eyes, Nivritti compliments her in a bid to calm her "Pari…your voice is an angelic as your name…" briefly pausing to acknowledge the lady's grateful smile, Nivritti adds "I came to meet you here because I wanted to thank you for the idol that you brought us the other day…I also wanted to apologize for what happened…"
....."Actually on that day...you mentioned that you had lost your son…I...I...noticed you quietly observing Veer...Rajkumar Veer ...my son..." she slowly admits aloud "It felt strange...actually...thinking of your situation, I felt pained...I have been wanting to come and meet you personally ever since..."


and this part was so touching.... 😳
...."So what are you doing alone...near the forest…S...Sakshi...ji..."
Sakshi interrupts him perkily "Rajkumar Veer...please call me didi..." realizing her folly, she abruptly closes her mouth in fright and rectifies her tone "I...I...meant to ask if it was all right for y...you to call me didi?"

He smiles with a slight shrug of his shoulder and agrees "Why not?"
very very sweet interaction between brother n sister... 😊

yay!!!! so according to ur preview dharam n veer have sorted out their differences... i'm so glad ur MU's dont last too long...

take care of ur health and post the next part whenever u can....

🤗

Edited by kunataanya - 17 years ago

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