Samyukta Pt 16-Scandal scandal everywhere - Page 3

Originally posted by: lashy

@ minoo

Harsh writing that dreamy poetry for Sia.........though aimed well...... the shot missed the mark 😆 Poor Harsh....... But its too late now.... Sia to gai hath se 😛 I liked how Sia missed Dharam while she was with Harsh..... simple, sweet, innocent love 😳

oooo few rare words in praise of siya's story...me will read them over and over again to treasure these 😆.... some ppl just like to pull my poor innocent legs😭...... Kuch achcha bolo tab bhi😭😆

And I was laughing ear to ear when Harsh went ahead while poor Sia hurt her leg....... I half expected him to come back and reprimand her sternly for failing to even walk properly 😛 😆 ...but then he would have become my fav suitor for Sia 😉

minoo 😡 stop abusing her..

😕😔😲..... I m the most misunderstood person under the sun......... wooaah........... I am not blessed with skills of expression like u😭....

I didn't mean it that way....... it brought some lovely memories.....

I also liked how you penned Sia's inner turmoil....... and Dharam missing her amidst all that Hallaballoo around 😍

awwwww😍😍😍 brings back memories does it?

memories of dream sequences😆

Par what do I see here....... DV scuffling away over what seemed like a minor issue 😭 .... Veer hurting his elder bro 😡

minor issue? 😕 arent the two brothers a bit cornered here with an issue as big as war? veer went against the official decree and everyone assumes Dharam planned it.. veer broke his promise.. Dharam is angry for all this... waise bhi they have been arguing quite a bit off late.. when veer was trying to prove his and his brother's innocence, he got cheesed off when dharam candidly replies in the same manner as veer did to him after the assembly.. 😛 very brotherly relationship they share.. 😛

Hey....... Again I m misunderstood😭 Me never belittled their probs..... as in war thats around the corner!! I found D - V smirking at each other to be minor enough for a scuffle. .

And I absolutely love the enigma called Shera.... Agni wud have said "I love u" to any robot who did his job well 😡 .......... Now I'm eagerly awaiting the scandal........ and evil plans and plots of Agni/Jai. Hey I also liked how Agni plans his evil plots on his own.

wow i absolutely loved the underlined line above... 😆

thank God !!*sigh of relief* Kuch to achcha laga😊

lashy 👏 👏 👏

comments continued. What i loved 👏 :

• Wow 👏 👏i like the way how you have revealed the truth about who shera is. 👏I knew that the spy would be shera as she was the one who encouraged veer that its okay to break a promise and find out more. Chorni kahi ke 😆
• As the hefty cloak concealing her hypnotizing visage slips to the floor, Agni observes her long commanding kohl smeared eyes and luscious lips in awe. Her long wavy hair dangles as she walks across the room, while her attentively chosen metallic jewellery gracefully jingles in tune to her steps. Even agni is enchanted with her, Iekin shera to sirf veer ko hi mile gi 😆😆 Agni ke liya koi indravati chalegi 😆
• Gently adjusting her simple blue cotton veil; she slowly smiles at the overjoyed Agni, who stands up fervently with a rare expression of genuine smile on his face, as he greets her "I missed you so much…four days since you came to Aryanagar, but you come to meet me only now Shera…" She smiles at his avid welcome and replies "Rajkumar Agni…I had to set up my shop…I had to look to my tribe…I had to make sure they had settled well…" I like her answer as shera is only here to do her work and go. Agni has become pura latoo over shera 😆

• Agni puts his hand on her shoulders tenderly "I am glad to see you back…you are brilliant shera...you are brilliant...I missed you so much...I love you..."

  Frowning in wonder at his rare pleasant disposition, she acknowledges his heartfelt confessions with a welcome captivating smile and then charmingly removes his hands from her dainty shoulders. me wanted to beat agni here for putting his hand on shera's shoulder 😡 I knew it that shera does not love him as she removes his hand from her shoulder. Shera certainly knows her powers as she does not reply to agni's comment but just gives him her captivating smile. 😆 She reminds me of a mixture of Athena and Aphrodite. When veer finds out her truth he will be very upset with her. 😭

Originally posted by: lashy

A note to my lovely readers - Thank you so much for your continued support... I realize that the last couple of episodes have been slightly depressing, but as discussed before that is essential for the story to move forward and for there to be a good basis for the other more cheerful ingredients in the story like romance and humour. Things will begin to look up for the brothers after this.. yes they will face hurdles in the process, but things will begin to look up... 😊 🤗🤗lashy we undertand that it was essential to show the fight between dharam and veer, arvyavardan not believing his sons and the war that will happen soon. All these aspects make the story complete👏😊

Preview to Part 17

She resumes pacing around the beautiful chamber impatiently twiddling her fingers, until on one occasion she again walks past the scroll and by chance comes across the word Aryanagar in the body of its message. Pondering anxiously on the friendly relationship between the prince of Chatarpur and the cousin that Dharam had mentioned in a negative light, Siya debates for a while if she should read the personal scroll. Siya dont think just read the scroll, you are too nobel 😊 Finally giving in to her curiosity, she opens the scroll carefully and gives the message a very quick browse out of fear that the prince might arrive at the room, any moment now aww siya is so sweet that she is worried about harsh walking in. 😆

"Harsh…Hope you are well….the looming war in Aryanagar will proceed as previously discussed…I have enclosed confirmations for the military placements that should help with Chatarpur's surprise attack…my cousins Dharam and Veer have come to know about the war, but luckily all their efforts have been disproved…the plans will go ahead as charted ...Agni..."

Alarmed at having come across such an important political message about a surprise attack by Chatarpur and how it was connected to people she cared for; Siya stands dumbstruck, not knowing how to react. Abruptly stirred from her thoughts by the sound of rapid footsteps outside the room...

I knew it that siya would get the scroll and now she will do something about getting the scroll to dharam 😊

Me looking forward to reading the next part tomorrow. 😊

see my replies in blue above😊