Samyukta Pt 16-Scandal scandal everywhere - Page 2

@ sonu

awww thank you so much for your complements.. 😳 im happy ki tumhe maza aayaa...yes siyaa can relate to dharam more... but also harsh claims to like her so much and claims to be protective.. but he is more words less actions...he doesnt even notice when she got hurt...😆 dharam is more action less words😳 ...

and Dharam was in love with her from the very moment he saw her.. 😳

yes we all felt sorry for veer 😭 i've posted dharam waala explanation below... but yes.. a misunderstanding was brewing with all that happened offlate with them...but it will get sorted soon dont worry..

and shera so this mysterious girl is with agni but why agni said i love u shera😕...does shera also loves agni😕...i think she is flirting with him...mystery mystery...waiting for the next part lashy😳

ahem.. to answer your question... the following episodes will reveal more, but seeing the shocked expressions on everyone's faces all i can is that not everything is as it seems...obviously there is a reason for shera doing all this... and many episodes from now hopefully most will get to admire her for her tenacity... 😊 hopefully she will be an apt girl for the powerful hero veer...😳

@ neeri

wish you a happy vacation neeri.. and hope you have a lovely time back home.. 😳 ooo and you thought this was a roller-coaster?

thank you for your comments on Harsh and yes as i stated above... Harsh is one of those guys who likes to brag about himself.. 😆 and that can be pretty annoying.. at times.. he is also not as sensitive as Dharam and speaks more tha he actually acts.. warnaa he is pretty all right.. 😛

i loved how sia got reminded of dharam at every point... 😳 that was so beautiful... 😍 so dharam's finally admitted to himself that he's in love.... 😳 ah... if he only knew what's goin on in his rajkumari's mind... 😳

thank you thank you.. it is all very subtle hopefully more in keeping with reality 😳

you are potraying dharam and sia's relationship so beautifully... 😊 their characters and their relationship is so innocent and cute... 😳 just like how they should have potrayed in the show...

precisely dharam right now poor love story se poora ka poora brahmachari ho gayaa hai. 😆

poor veer.... nobody's ready to believe him... atleast dharam should have supported his claims... atleast a little...
well dharam was not giving in to his ego more than anything.. all the way from Niphaud these two have been arguing about how to go about with this new information they learnt...with neither being entirely right or neither being entirely wrong.. plus shera has been misleading/misinforming them..then Dharam didnt feel supported by Veer during the assembly escapade.. uske baad Veer promised Dharam that he wouldnt go and when he found out Veer again broke his promise they started brawling.. this time it was more Dharam's ego not giving in, though he trusts Veer... anyway there was nothing much left there to prove either.. obviously jai and agni have been capable at having everything planned very well and executing it accordingly too. 😊

oh god!!!!!! i cant believe dharam and veer have fought... 😭 i hope they realise soon that fighting with each other is only going to make matters worse for them... they can only fight their enemies and prove themselves right in front of the maharaj if they stay united...

dont worry things will cheer up from next epi hun.. i hate lambaa MUs 😆

but seriously the most shocking part was agni saying 'i love you' to shera... i had expected shera to be with agni and jaivardhan in their plans... but agni being in love with her is something that stumped me... 😆 i love this twist... 😃i wonder what other shocking twists you have in store for your readers... 😉

iske baad koi bade shockers nahin hain 😆 chintaa mat karo..

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@ kiran

hee hee kiran might i say i sense a hint of disgruntled frowns in your comments... 😆

thank you so much for your comments on dharam and siya.. 😳

Dharam does believe Veer.. he is just very angry with him as Veer didnt support him in the assembly, then broke his promise to him and then came here.. and everyone thinks that this was also part of Dharam's plan.. so their fight was basically a battle of egos thats all... dont worry things will cheer up within the next 2 episodes

hee hee now for the shera bit...you dont like shera flirting with agni behind veer's back.. first of all, all i want to say is that; not everything is as it seems...😛

anyway, you probably relate to them as a couple since we know from the beginning that they are meant to be together.. but you forgot kiran.. that at this point of time in the story, veer and shera are still relative strangers.. neither even cares for the other....they dont have any story yet.. their whole chemistry is yet to start... all interactions and what happened so far was mere introductions... samyukta is the whole journey (possibly realistic) of two people with very strange circumstances veer and shera and of two people who are so similar in many things...

in reality and in real life not everything is black and white...😉...i keep you in mind as an ardent veer fan, when i write veer-shera scenes.. you think apne hero veer ki ladi maamooli hogi 😛

dont worry jaan... all this was all planned.. even before i thought id write this story this is how i hoped the sagars would have etched their story too..but then i guess they have plans of faansi and blanket burnings.. so we'll leave that for now😆

i've also quoted bhuvi's explanation here 😆 just in case..

Shera 👏The girl who is the biggest mystery of samyukta… I re read all ur parts to find some explanation for sheras strange behaviour n found it in the bar where Agni brags to harsh "I have found someone who is capable of tracking every move of Dharam and Veer …" That SOMEONE is SHERAAAAAAAAa.. Thts why she is stalking Dharam n Veer n ever since their journey to Niphaud ..its beautiful how you have planned the story in soo much detail n precision.. You have thought it all out soo meticulously…

Yes shera works for agni and she has been stalking them.. obviously all their meetings could not have all been co-incidences na.. 😉 she had it all well planned... as i said... this episode sketched out who she was.. why she is doing all this you would find out over the course of the next 10 episodes.. 😊

🤗heres a big hug to you kiran..

Lashy, 🤗

Wow another wonderful part with full of love, mysteries and arguments. 🤗🤗I loved how you have showed the lovely bond between siya and dharam, the way you have portrayed veer and dharam's fight and the mystery of the spy. 👏 👏 🤗

My comments will be posted little by little this week 😊, I was dying to come and read the part 😆. What I loved :

the beautiful poem you have written👏👏👏, the verses used match siya's beauty perfectly and displays rajkumar harsh feelings so nicely "him "life and feelings...I would never misuse the life or feelings of anyone to do this…"…" As the maid hands her the comb from behind, she awakens from her reverie and tries paying attention to Nanda. 😆😆 there harsh is trying to express his feelings and from his words siya is thinking about what dharam said. bechara harsh, he wrote the poem but its dharam who is in siya's thoughts 😍😍😍 siya ko prem rog lag gaya hai, she's thinking and seeing dharam. 😳😆 so sweet.

"The day I met you…the day I met you at the garden was the first very first time, I ever saw you…"

Siya subconsciously begins comprehending the extent of Dharam's warm nature, till she is brought to her senses on hearing Nanda's excited calls "Siya…Siya… what happened … you seem mesmerized by the effect of this phenomenally expressive poem!" 😍😍 so romantic and lovely that siya is remembering what dharam said. Nanda 😆thinks siya is mesmerised by harsh's poem, little does she know that it is dharam who won over siya's heart. 😍😍😍

Daksha yawns and tells her friends "It felt like I was attending gurukul….why are we revising this poetry in so much detail…" 🤣🤣 daksha sounds like she is being tortured, I bet if it was a letter from veer she would examine and analyse each word till everyone remembered it by heart 🤣

siya being so nice about the poem Harsh has written for her 😊

Siya is being so honest that she can relate more to dharam and remembers his protectiveness, his gentle manner 😳❤️

Nanda trying to explain to siya as to why she likes dharam and daksha slapping her forehead like she has discovered the secret or an answer. 😆😆 I liked daksha's reply that siya likes dharam because he is a simple and caring person. That is so true, as dharam is honest, caring and does not try to show off or boast about his traits. Siya has seen all the kindness dharam has done and is realising that this is more important than poems, jewellery etc👏😍😍

Aww😍 siya feels bad for thinking about dharam and is worried that everyone is expecting her to marry harsh.😊

I feel for dharam, he is upset that no one believes him and now veer is not there to support him😭

This is the best scene 👏👏when he is asking lord ganesh if he will protect his family. So touching and then this line had me dreaming " 👏I hope you are well Rajkumari Siya..." he then smirks sarcastically and thinks to himself "In this myriad of horrible situations that I have been facing off late, you are the most beautiful memory that happened to me…you thought of me as your suitor and wanted my attention during my stay, which I couldn't give you…I'm in love with you, but being entangled in this mess about my kingdom now, I'm unable to do anything to let you know what I feel about you...I wonder what you feel about me!" he then sighs aloud "What am I doing? You probably don't even think about me...I am just being foolish..." I was in dreamland 😍when I read this, it is so sweet and beautifully written. 👏👏Yey me so happy he has realised that he loves siya and how he could not give her more attention when he was there. He is not sure about how siya feels about him but I think they both are made for each other.❤️❤️ Their feelings are connected. 😊Dharam and siya's jodi will be so beautiful and from their marraige i bet daksha will be the most happy as she will get to see veer. bechara veer might as well go and move to his in-laws house 🤣🤣

Oh no, I just hope they did not hear what dharam said. Why is everyone always telling dharam off, its not his fault veer has gone without telling him.😭 He is just as worried about where veer is as anyone else. Its veer who does everything and dharam gets the blame.

harsh totally fida over siya's beauty and siya is shy and nervous 😳

"Suddenly; by chance, a few dried leaves get entangled in Siya's petite fingers and she quietly stops in her tracks when she realizes the place to be exactly the spot that she had her first encounter with Dharam. Recalling Dharam's alluring naivety when he had put the leaves back on her head; she smiles at the leaves in her hand for a brief while, surprised by the coincidence. As the princess begins to dreamily blow the leaves away, she is shaken from her hypnotic state by the feel of the soft touch of fingers around her hand" This is so romantic as siya's fingers get tangled in the same place when she meet dharam. ❤️❤️❤️ Even i remember how dharam started putting the leaves back on her head.

how siya freezes up when harsh tries to touch her hand. dont worry harsh, siya is only made for dharam but i am sure there will another princess out there for you . 😆

awww harsh gets embarassed and siya is so nice that she apologises to him and gives him a honest answer that she gets distracted easily. Koi baat nahi, pyar main aise hi hota hai. Just dont call harsh dharam by mistake or he will not be happy 😆

how siya is complimenting harsh on his poetry and being nice to him. I do feel for siya 😭 when harsh asks her if she is happy with the engagement. talk about putting her on the spot and she is hardly going to turn round and say no. 😭 All she can do is shake her head.

I want to make sure you are safe always…I'll do anything to ensure you are happy...I don't know why…but I feel very protective of you...I'll always be by your side...I wouldn't leave you alone...I don't want you to ever get hurt..." someone tell rajkumar harsh that if you are going to say big words like this at least mean them. He does even realise that siya has fallen and that her toe is bleeding and he is talking about being protective 😆. He is too busy in his own world. Now if Dharam was here, he would have walked slowly with siya and made sure that she felt safe and protected.😍

reminded of Dharam's strong protective grip around her and how he had watched out for her on their way back from the Niphaud spring. me so glad that siya remembers dharam's protective grip 😍 😍❤️❤️.

me glad that veer has found where the money is. 👏👏👏

oh no i can imagine dharam's shock at seeing veer there and than veer has the nerve to ask dharam why he bought everyone there. like dharam had a choice and he could tell the king to leave 😆

veer trying to clear their names but no one is believing him 😭

veer being rude to the king is not nice and dharam is not happy at that which is understandable.

me dont like it when dharam and veer argue 😭

the chest has gone missing, i knew this is a trap. 😕 Now veer understands how dharam felt when he was trying to explain everything.

Dharam replies candidly "Well you did lie to me... I can't believe you did all this behind my back Veer... what made you break your promise to me and come here by yourself?" I really feel for dharam here as he trusts veer so much and how can he support veer now when he has lied and the chest has gone missing. 😭

Dharam turns around and responds gruffly "I don't doubt you...but in your very own words, with hardly any tangible evidence, what can we prove…and Veer…all this serves you right for trying to take things in your own hands...for not listening to me..." Veer wants dharam to support him but he does not realise what tough situation he has put dharam into 😡

• me find it very distressing when dharam and veer are hitting each other 😭😭 and that sick jai and agni are enjoying this 😡

will be back soon with more comments

@ minzy

even i was wondering why you replied twice to the last part 😆 anyway..

- Siya's chamber

loool yes siya.. is still confused about her feelings i guess.. par very jald.. i think she will be pretty sure about em.. 😛 and how could you get confused with Daksha and Nanda dear.. ek Daksho to poora ka poora bindaas female who is fidaa on veer.. and the other one Nanda a nervous jittery simple supportive friend..

– Dharam's chamber

awww thank you about your comments on Dharam 😳 and he was thinking about Siya from the moment he met her not just now.. its siya who has just started.. 😆 and yes all the evil boys know of Veer's whereabouts

– palace gardens

Siya has agreed to Harsh's proposal.Gosh now wat will happen?She will tel him soon 'I love the other boy'.And this sweet Harsh will turn to another Villain.Goossshh...Noo!

you find Harsh sweet? 😕 i actually find him a tad bit annoying.. 😆

Harsh is slowly loosin his vision of sight i guess.I thought painters could see deep into the eharts of other people..but here!..Ermm....Is he evillyyy?????....(has to be after all whoz frnd he is.)
what do you mean he is slowly losing his sight? 😕

Aryanagar – – Royal guest house construction site

I knew Jai will win this time too! Gosh....Poor Veer,even Dahram didnt support him.Wat a silly fight both brothers got engaged onto.Bruising themselves for no use watsoever.Hopefully i see both huggin each other at the soonest.Or else i will get my amnesia more deep.

😆 jaldi ho jaayegaa dont worry

- Agni's private chamber

ooops! So this girlss got herhands onto Agni too...?oops! Gosh! oops...Agni loves her??...haha only to be devastated alter.Lubbb it!

hmmmm its a shocker.. but its not the whole story.. the whole history behind shera will only slowly unfold. 😊

Wait a min..Shera can get info frm agni n givv them to Veer....same wayy Sia can get info frm Harsh n givv them to Dharam...yaaye! some fayda of having gf's!

chee minzy meri female heroines aise nahin hain 😆

I love this Dish u alwayss givv me at myy Weekendzz!!! 😃

🤗 thankoo hun

@ reena

thank you reena for everything 🤗

there harsh is trying to express his feelings and from his words siya is thinking about what 😍dharam said. bechara harsh, he wrote the poem but its dharam who is in siya's thoughts 😆 so romantic and lovely that siya is remembering what dharam said. Nanda thinks siya is mesmerised by harsh's poem, little does she know that it is dharam who won over siya's heart.

yes here Harsh is trying to pataafy her, but everything he does only makes her realize how much more she values Dharam's company thank you for your complements on the poem.. 😳

daksha sounds like she is being tortured, I bet if it was a letter from veer she would examine and analyse each word till everyone remembered it by heart 😆

very true.. 😆

siya being so nice about the poem Harsh has written for her Siya is being so honest that she can relate more to dharam and remembers his protectiveness, his gentle manner. Aww siya feels bad for thinking about dharam and is worried that everyone is expecting her to marry harsh.

she is a darling.. 😳

daksha slapping her forehead like she has discovered the secret or an answer. I liked daksha's reply that siya likes dharam because he is a simple and caring person. That is so true, as dharam is honest, caring and does not try to show off or boast about his traits. Siya has seen all the kindness dharam has done and is realising that this is more important than poems, jewellery etc

yes... she is slowly realizing realities.. 😳

This is the best scene when he is asking lord ganesh if he will protect his family. So touching and then this line had me dreaming " I was in dreamland when I read this, it is so sweet and beautifully written. Yey me so happy he has realised that he loves siya and how he could not give her more attention when he was there. He is not sure about how siya feels about him but I think they both are made for each other. Their feelings are connected. Dharam and siya's jodi will be so beautiful and from their marraige

this seems to be everyone's favourite scene... 😳 i guess the way Dharam spoke to the idol of the Lord, seemed very honest yet cute... and yes Dharam-Siya do seem made for each other dont they... 😊

i bet daksha will be the most happy as she will get to see veer. bechara veer might as well go and move to his in-laws house

dont know if veer would allow that.. 😆

thank you so much for your comments reena..🤗

lashy ke dv gurukul kab jayenge 😆

Originally posted by: crazy_kiran

lashy ke dv gurukul kab jayenge 😆

kiran me no make impractical sagar stuff like going-to-gurukul after boys are in late teens 😆 they finished gurukul... this story started after they came back from gurukul remember? .. here they have plenty of real life adventures.. like all that they have had so far... and loads coming up too... so hope you'll enjoy those hun.. 😆

Originally posted by: lashy

kiran me no make impractical sagar stuff like going-to-gurukul after boys are in late teens 😆 they finished gurukul... this story started after they came back from gurukul remember? .. here they have plenty of real life adventures.. like all that they have had so far... and loads coming up too... so hope you'll enjoy those hun.. 😆

Well I guess even in Sagar's saga, the boys' going to gurukul is like Dhirubahai sending Mukesh for MBA at Oxford( me aiming in dark.......... just to get my silly point across)........ i.e. higher studies😛

but real life adventures are better than gurukul ones........... we've had them enough in PRC and now DV........ me waiting for ur style of adventures😊

Harsh writing that dreamy poetry for Sia.........though aimed well...... the shot missed the mark 😆
Poor Harsh....... But its too late now.... Sia to gai hath se 😛

I liked how Sia missed Dharam while she was with Harsh..... simple, sweet, innocent love 😳

And I was laughing ear to ear when Harsh went ahead while poor Sia hurt her leg....... I half expected him to come back and reprimand her sternly for failing to even walk properly 😛 😆 ...but then he would have become my fav suitor for Sia 😉

I also liked how you penned Sia's inner turmoil....... and Dharam missing her amidst all that Hallaballoo around 😍

Par what do I see here....... DV scuffling away over what seemed like a minor issue 😭 .... Veer hurting his elder bro 😡

And I absolutely love the enigma called Shera.... Agni wud have said "I love u" to any robot who did his job well 😡 .......... Now I'm eagerly awaiting the scandal........ and evil plans and plots of Agni/Jai.

Hey I also liked how Agni plans his evil plots on his own.

By the way I can see how your story has a good effect on some of my dimmy friends......... they can finally realise "Agni was talking about Shera while in bar with his friends" 😛 😆

u said u were planning to post more than 2 episodes per fortnight.......... Kya hua...... 😭

@ reena

Its so romantic that siya's fingers get tangled in the same place when she meet dharam. ❤️❤️❤️ Even i remember how dharam started putting the leaves back on her head.

😍😍 yes...

how siya freezes up when harsh tries to touch her hand. dont worry harsh, siya is only made for dharam but i am sure there will another princess out there for you . someone tell rajkumar harsh that if you are going to say big words at least mean them. He doesn't even realise that siya has fallen and that her toe is bleeding and he is talking about being protective. He is too busy in his own world. Now if Dharam was here, he would have walked slowly with siya and made sure that she felt safe and protected.😳😍😍

hee hee very true... Harsh is a bit of a bragger😆

awww harsh gets embarassed and siya is so nice that she apologises to him and gives him a honest answer that she gets distracted easily. Koi baat nahi, pyar main aise hi hota hai. How siya is complimenting harsh on his poetry and being nice to him. I do feel for siya 😭 when harsh asks her if she is happy with the engagement. talk about putting her on the spot and she is hardly going to turn round and say no. 😭 All she can do is shake her head.

awwww yes Siya is a shy demure and proper girl.. she knows her manners most of the time.. plus she still hasnt realized the obvious.. 😛

oh no i can imagine dharam's shock at seeing veer there and than veer has the nerve to ask dharam why he bought everyone there. like dharam had a choice and he could tell the king to leave 😆 veer trying to clear their names but no one is believing him 😭 veer being rude to the king is not nice and dharam is not happy at that which is understandable. me dont like it when dharam and veer argue 😭 the chest has gone missing, i knew this is a trap. 😕 Now veer understands how dharam felt when he was trying to explain everything. I really feel for dharam here as he trusts veer so much and how can he support veer now when he has lied and the chest has gone missing. 😭 Veer wants dharam to support him but he does not realise what tough situation he has put dharam into 😡 me find it very distressing when dharam and veer are hitting each other 😭😭 and that sick jai and agni are enjoying this 😡

awww dont get frustrated reens.. things will clear up very soon.. 😳 and veer was trying very hard to clear their names so people would believe them and deploy more troops which is needed for the war..

big hug to you *hug*

Originally posted by: minnie2308

Well I guess even in Sagar's saga, the boys' going to gurukul is like Dhirubahai sending Mukesh for MBA at Oxford( me aiming in dark.......... just to get my silly point across)........ i.e. higher studies😛

anything you say hun..

@ minoo

Harsh writing that dreamy poetry for Sia.........though aimed well...... the shot missed the mark 😆 Poor Harsh....... But its too late now.... Sia to gai hath se 😛 I liked how Sia missed Dharam while she was with Harsh..... simple, sweet, innocent love 😳

oooo few rare words in praise of siya's story...me will read them over and over again to treasure these 😆

And I was laughing ear to ear when Harsh went ahead while poor Sia hurt her leg....... I half expected him to come back and reprimand her sternly for failing to even walk properly 😛 😆 ...but then he would have become my fav suitor for Sia 😉

minoo 😡 stop abusing her..

I also liked how you penned Sia's inner turmoil....... and Dharam missing her amidst all that Hallaballoo around 😍

awwwww😍😍😍 brings back memories does it?

Par what do I see here....... DV scuffling away over what seemed like a minor issue 😭 .... Veer hurting his elder bro 😡

minor issue? 😕 arent the two brothers a bit cornered here with an issue as big as war? veer went against the official decree and everyone assumes Dharam planned it.. veer broke his promise.. Dharam is angry for all this... waise bhi they have been arguing quite a bit off late.. when veer was trying to prove his and his brother's innocence, he got cheesed off when dharam candidly replies in the same manner as veer did to him after the assembly.. 😛 very brotherly relationship they share.. 😛

And I absolutely love the enigma called Shera.... Agni wud have said "I love u" to any robot who did his job well 😡 .......... Now I'm eagerly awaiting the scandal........ and evil plans and plots of Agni/Jai. Hey I also liked how Agni plans his evil plots on his own.

wow i absolutely loved the underlined line above... 😆

By the way I can see how your story has a good effect on some of my dimmy friends......... they can finally realise "Agni was talking about Shera while in bar with his friends" 😛 😆

you called her dimmy? Hailaa.. i was busy complementing her to be a genius 😆

u said u were planning to post more than 2 episodes per fortnight.......... Kya hua...... 😭

errmmmm...im trying.. i mean i will try.... im so busy minoo.. mushkil se ek ho rahaa hai.. 😭

Originally posted by: minnie2308

Harsh writing that dreamy poetry for Sia.........though aimed well...... the shot missed the mark 😆
Poor Harsh....... But its too late now.... Sia to gai hath se 😛

I liked how Sia missed Dharam while she was with Harsh..... simple, sweet, innocent love 😳

And I was laughing ear to ear when Harsh went ahead while poor Sia hurt her leg....... I half expected him to come back and reprimand her sternly for failing to even walk properly 😛 😆 ...but then he would have become my fav suitor for Sia 😉

I also liked how you penned Sia's inner turmoil....... and Dharam missing her amidst all that Hallaballoo around 😍

Par what do I see here....... DV scuffling away over what seemed like a minor issue 😭 .... Veer hurting his elder bro 😡

And I absolutely love the enigma called Shera.... Agni wud have said "I love u" to any robot who did his job well 😡 .......... Now I'm eagerly awaiting the scandal........ and evil plans and plots of Agni/Jai.

Hey I also liked how Agni plans his evil plots on his own.

By the way I can see how your story has a good effect on some of my dimmy friends......... they can finally realise "Agni was talking about Shera while in bar with his friends" 😛 😆

u said u were planning to post more than 2 episodes per fortnight.......... Kya hua...... 😭

DONT u call me Dimmy !! U tortoise !! Reading the part whn the next part is due !! 😡 😆 n pretend away tht u knew it all along *rolling eyes

wowo lashy nice preview so sia darling will now come itni badi yatra kar ke 😆 to hand over the info to dv 😆
oh ok so no more gurukul for dv, i really wanted to see a smart guruji not having too much time for veers tantrums 😆 😆 😆