I am back to read urs so early.......compared to last time..... 😃
Tumhari Shera 👍🏼...... wow wow..... kya hai yaar..... ekdam bindaas aur hatke......😆 i njoyed reading Veer-Shera's scene.😳 ..... Mujhe Shera bahot mysterious lagi ... , just like Veer even i m a bit confused. She is a flirt, a lier, a thief, she behaves like a spy too..... she is intelligent enough, she is beautiful......... ahhhh i want to read more about her.....
Why was she guided DV in opposite direction or rathe in their own way😕 aur phir jhut pe jhut bolti hai 😆 aur har baar Veer ko nervous karti hai 😆... uske kamre mein hi ghus gayi..... u know what its difficult to imagine Mugs as Shera......... She is so so better than Sagar's Shera...... beyond comparision..... mein yahi dekhna chahti thi,..... tumne meri khwahish puri kar di🤗
Thank u so much for writing and sharing such a brilliant script. A big hug from my side 🤗🤗🤗
And Dharam Veer..... Shradhha I don't understand for whom should I fall😕.... ok decided....... Veer.... I loved and Loved ur Veer..... 😳
That Assembly scene was so brilliantly quoted..... wow 👏.
Hey I prefer ur story to be contined for more long months..... 😃
Keep it up.... I m fan of ur writing skills 🤗keeping posting.... will wait for next parts......
I wnat to write more... i ll wirte later... abhi log off ka waqt aa gaya.....