Samyukta Pt 14 - Veer meets Pari & Sakshi - Page 2

lashy 🤗 see my replies in blue

you are lovely and spoil us. I am happy with you posting two part but only when you have time on saturday and sunday. 🤗

How can you say this "This means I would be submitting you to the torture of two per week instead of one…" 😭😭 You dont know how much we love your scripts. It will be all our pleasure to read two parts in a week .😊🤗🤗

We dont want you to worry too much, just post when you can. 🤗

Preview to part 15

All i can say is subhaan allah 👏👏.

what i loved :

"You steal things off people and yet you are roaming around Aryanagar freely… Veer you either let her go freely or she will stay in the palace and if that happens tumhara kya haal hoga🤣🤣
The girl smiles and replies, gently dangling her legs from the rock "No… I generally don't steal" she ponders deeply to herself and then shrugs her shoulders "Hmmm…it's generally a very rare occasion…I was just hungry that day…" i love this dialogue, kya answer diya hai, it 🤣🤣. its not my fault, my hand just cannot help itself and takes things. Kitni jhooti hai as she says that its only on rare occasions that i steal. 🤣🤣 Ulta choor kotwaal ko daate🤣 i love her character. 👏🤗🤗

Veer laughs in disbelief "You steal only on some occassions…" he pauses and asks her surprised "you do realize that I'm a Rajkumar of Aryanagar…" veer is think this is one dangerous girl and at the same time admires her😆🤣

• i like the way she says her name sanwri 😳 and the minute he hears the word shera he is like yeh to koi gundi ka naam lagta hai 🤣🤣

me looking forward to this part when she tells him her name 😳

😕aur yeh kab raat ko post kiya, now me sabse late 😆 😆

Wowo lashy the first time meeting of veer with pari and saakshi is so emotional, u can really feel paris pain and gratitude in getting a glimpse of her son.😊😊

Veer unwittingly observes her beautiful giggles briefly. Squirming at the thought of having to face her again, he immediately looks around for someone to hand over his duty to,…………..omg here also our prince is confused about his feelings.😆

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I loved that agni although putting on a false face is shown to be able to do all the work handed out to him efficiently and is not a complete pagal as shown in the serial.😆😆

"When her turn eventually comes, she patiently waits to be handed her veil, while Veer curtly thumps the item in her hand; not looking at her face. After a few moments, he notices her still standing there and then advices her sternly "We only give one item per person... I am sorry…I can't give you anymore free clothes...you may leave now..."

She nods her head negatively and smiles indicating to the dress in her hand with her eyes "Rajkumar...you have given me a dhoti...I'll still leave if you want me to..."

Perturbed by how everything always went wrong for him around her, he takes out two veils and thumps it in her hand stating "Here…now... happy?"

She smiles happily and nods her head inquisitively "What about the dhoti?"

Veer sighs "You can have that too..."

Just as she is about to leave, Veer muses for a moment and then calls her back. He whispers to her grimly "I... I... have to ask you something...why are you following me..."

She puts her hand on her mouth surprised and replies "Rajkumar, I have been standing in this queue since morning…you came here much later...so, who is following whom..."

Haial lashy I just loved this cute nok jhok scene, it's the best😉😳

"Every time... every time...she is around me...I face trouble...why…if she steals...I get scolded...even Dharam trusts her over me... and now this...oh Lord...please I beg you...I never want to catch sight of her again...I will fast for one month...no one week...if you fulfil my wishes"…………………….here also rajkumar veer thinking by his stomach😆😆😆

Alas what we all feared and knew that only happened nobody believed dv even they have that contract with them, they are not even given a benefit of doubt, and are punished😕😕

heya chech!!! 😊

awwwwwwww!!!!!! poor poor veer.... its so sweet to see him not being able to behave his cocky self around the girl... 😆 "Every time... every time...she is around me...I face trouble...why…if she steals...I get scolded...even Dharam trusts her over me... and now this...oh Lord...please I beg you...I never want to catch sight of her again...I will fast for one month...no one week...if you fulfil my wishes" poor kid's never before met someone who could do this to him...😆 😆 yayy shera!!! three cheers for girl power... 😉 😆

what a lovely first meeting between pari and veer... 😳 i love the non-melodramatic way you brought in their interaction.. it was just perfect... how sweet of pari to give that idol to nivriti... and nivriti's such a dear too... she spoke so kindly to pari... i love both veer's mothers... 😊 and i liked how you showed both the ladies of the palace distibuting clothes to the shramiks... 👏

ah poor dharam!!!!!! i couldnt bear to see him humiliated in front of his father and the whole assembly... 😭 😭 😭 but he should have listened to veer... accusing his uncle and cousin of such a serious crime without any solid proof was foolish of him... itna impulsive hona acchi baat nahi hain... but this line broke my heart - "Did I deserve all this Veer?" 🥺 such a simple question... but so much sadness in it... 😔

interesting preview chech... 😃 i guess veer will not have to fast for even a day... 😆 i'm really starting to like veer-shera a lot now... and this girl is certainly fast becoming one of my fav characters.. 😃 eagerly waiting for the next part... 🤗

hmmmn... i dont want u to leave the story incomplete... so twice a week wud be nice.. 😊 and u can update any day u want to... not necessarily on a fixed day... i mean sat can be fixed as usual... and the second update can be on any day u want... 😊 but all this totally depends on how much time u have in hand... whatever u do please please give a logical end to the series.. 🤔

before starting a common note to all readers about dharam's dilemma

well though he might have been disproved, his points were not entirely wrong.. when you know a kingdom is going to attack in 3 days, the most practical thing would be to face the situation... where does one have the time to search for clues and evidence now.. actually both of them are right where they stand.. however, veer does have a upper hand in that he has understood the corrupt system much better than dharam has, which i think more than anything.....Dharam is just unable to accept his system as being so corrupt.. 😊

@abhy

Veer offering help it was the other way round and that was so meaningful!

wow i actually never realized... but glad that i managed to come with a hatke scene.. 😃

And here comes the funniest scenes for this week, distribution of clothes 😆 guys are always so clumsy when girls are around na? so what was the extra dhoti for?What will Shera do with it anyway?

omg abhy you sound so cute here 😆 it feels like all personal experiences are pouring out... 😆

That was so soothing! and Veer getting teased

*giggle* i know.. 😆

*mera dil toot gaya* sniff... and oh God!! that Aryavardhan!! man he rises my body temperature!! he can't believe his own son!! grr comparing 40 and 17 yrs relationship!! I wish fathers weren't so harsh in those days.

me have tried answering your Dharam waala dilemaas above.. but yes its true Dharam is extremely patriotic when it comes to Aryanagar....

awwww you have so manyyyyy doubts wrt shera... 😆 its ok... in 3 episodes they will gradually start clearing up 😆 (hopefully😕) and btw the name sanwri was recommended by kiran 😃

and thank you for your advice... but you want me to update only once in 10 days 😭 pata thaa mujhe...ye tortue sehnaa asaan baat nahin hai...😛

Originally posted by: bhuvana3

reserved 😳

😭 ooo neva post...any commens...4 meee...

@ arshoo baba

awww arshoo me still waiting 😆

@harshu

awww so nice to see you hun... 😳 i am so glad you liked the pari...nivritti scene and the pari-veer scene.. i read them and changed them quite a bit before posting them as i wanted it to be touching but not over the top either 😆

awww thank you so much for liking shera in this and the next chapter.. 😳

very elegant and mysterious and calmly unruffled by Veer's taunts and attempts at scolding her like a school-teacher at which he fails horribly 😆 😆

i read through this comment of yours and was laughing out loud 😆 you've put it across so well 😆

we act by the heart rather than with the head and Dharam was a perfect example of it! But it would make things more interesting as Agni and JV would be more alert and upto more tricks from now on.

yes... true...

What about that other shramik leader....when is he going to be introduced into the fray??

do you mean bhimsen? well haan woh bhi aayega.. 😆

awwwww thank you so much for the note and the complements.. 😃 have kept that in mind.. 😊

@ hiri

thank you so much for the comments

@sonu

wowwwww.....great as usual lashy wowwwww...veer was trying to handover his duty to someone but still he had to face her and gave her a dhoti that was funny 🤣

awwww thank you 😳

..i didnt like the way swati treated pari and sakshi..

i know...😕 par it would defeat the purpose to show that aryavrats are afterall aryavrats if everyone was kind.😆..isliye... and swathi is not bad at heart i guess...just a typicall maharani.. 😊

iloved that scene when pari gave the idol of krishna to nivriti why didnt

thanks sonuuu...im glad that pari waala scenes have been appreciated.. 😳

i can imagine agni and jai's xpressions in fear but why maharaja dont trust his son...40 years mai yeh pata nahin chala kitna badmaash hai yeh bhai....

when arya was crowned around 20 years ago, jai was alone... but now he has formed a pretty strong network, has his sons, some nobles, commanders etc for support na.. and yes... he is far more intelligent than arya.. hence..

waiting for next part chalo kaam par lag jao 😆😆😆...dil mange more😆

awwwwww sonu 😆 lag jaati hoon...

awww it was awesome as ever shraddha di...i love it...and the preview was really gd too...cant wait til next saturday!!!

i think u shud do 2 parts a week wenever u can...without rushing it thou...otherwise stick to once a week....it doesnt matter if the story is uncomplete but as long as it sticks to the beauty and flow that makes it so awesome its ok....

@ minoo

What a sweet family ....... Pari, Sakshi and Veer!!😊........

awwww 😳

I was giggling away imagining Veer falling amidst the crowd.😛......

awww bichaara (no wonder someone calls you meanie minnie 😆 - jus kidding😳)

And Nivriti/Swati sound so familiarly harased and over-worked like our own moms at family functions.😊

what a lovely point mentioned here.. in fuctions my mom, mamis, chachis everyone .. how many ever cooks/servants/ phir be unki haalat dekhne laayak hoti hai 😆

Veer's internal turmoil and commotion....... *blush blush*....... so familiar and brings back lovely fond memories☺️...... This gurl is so naughty........ I love her!!🤗......... She is fully aware of the effect she has on the prince 😉!! It was fun reading their part....... I hope she gives that Dhoti to Veer as a gift😛

omggggg minoo 😆 i was laughing out loud reading your comments 😆 everyone bringing out their personal experiences here... 😆 ahem ahem... imagining Mr.Minnie with all his emotional turmoils... on seeing Ms.Minnie giggling to glory 😆

I do hope the plight of shramiks is a little more than just heavy taxes for them to rebel so much !! 😕

yup its toruture + heavy taxes -> money used to bribe/corruption -> again more people tortured/taxes

waise its no secret that there are diff laws for the ruling/working class - and no proper education/health facilities... etc.... but i guess it was all an accepted part our Indian society 😕

Loved reading the whole part Sharaddu........ I knew my Mafia will never disappoint me....update twice a week or face Minnie's unpleasant wrath😈..... he he😃 *dances until the floor shakes*

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What a teaser u r................ Veer -Shera meeting............ she is sitting on a rock😍............ I got butterflies in my stomach already.😳

😆 wait till you see the meeting... you'll be like this -> 😕

@ reena

here you are my friend🤗🤗🤗

here are my comments that i really enjoyed and felt honoured reading 😳

When veer falls on the ground and his mum pari says ""Bless you, my son" with so much love. I like how he gets spellbound by her mothers looks. It's like a natural son and mother bond that is pulling them together. its like there is a really strong bond between them, which he feels but is not aware of the truth 👏

Nivritti the way she is ordering veer about so sweet....(i know typical mother😳 i love the relationship veer has with his mother) He awaits his instructions like he is a king waiting to deliver his speech to the people (hee hee reens🤣) Nivritti knows that if I wait round, yeh veer will ask many questions so its better to leave now (boys do take their time to understand stuff like this 😆)

he looks horrified like he is about to run and hide.🤣 But he notices her beautiful giggles so sweet. (😍-> veer) Everytime I met her something goes wrong and to save my sanity and health I better keep away from this chorni. Veer trying to avoid her and praying for the end to come but at the same time he can't help himself and looks at her. I love the girl she is too clever as she sees him looking at her and is smiling like "now I have you totally under my spell". 😍 (me too -> 😍...what wouldnt i give to see this kind of a chemistry between veer and shera)

he just wants this beautiful bala to go before something else goes wrong yeh dhoti lekar kya karegi. baatein karna to koi iss ladki se sikhe, from the way she turned the whole conversation around and told veer that he is following her. Serves him right after all the trouble he causes and bechara dharam gets it. now its his turn. He is going to fast just so does not see her, I think he is worried about losing his heart. (so true🤣🤣🤣 i feel sorry for the poor thing)

Me so like this nivritti than sagars. How pari looks so lovingly to her son veer and it is so nice of nivritti to ask her what happened. Such a lovely scene. Everyone is moved by what Pari says and her and swati leave there happy that their wishes have come true. (thank you so much - this meant a lot to me😊)

Veer's telling dharam that he will stand by him no matter what happens. The different opinions of dharam and veer about the corrupt nobles (awwww both of them are right in their own ways.. but then again its a difference of opinion 😊)

Dharam and veer having to listen to agni's praises when all the want to do is beat him. 😡 (😆) Jai is so evil, as he is misusing the kings trust in him. It sad that the king and nobles do not believe their princess. Ulta they get told of for lying about their trip to Niphaud. How could the king think of punishing them till they accept their mistakes.😭😭

thank you for all your comments about the Dharam and Veer scenes.. 😳

Agni adding fuel to the fire by calling dharam unprofessional and trying to provoke him. (i am trying to mould this agni so he can think for himself unlike the sagars agni 😊)

Subtlety is not in veer's character when he says "Ashamed?…you deserved it - I told you not to do this, but you didn't listen...what did you want me to say? I knew all this was going to happen…not one of them believed us!" (veer is irritated with Dharam.. 😆)

thank you so much for all your comments reens esp the dharam-veer part as they were the most difficult to script.. 😳 thank you for your suggestions on the two part posting.. will definitely bear that in mind..

i love this dialogue, kya answer diya hai, it 🤣🤣. its not my fault, my hand just cannot help itself and takes things. Kitni jhooti hai as she says that its only on rare occasions that i steal. i love her character.

hee hee... she is badmaash.. 😆

thank you soooo much hun.. *hug*

nooooo me didn't mean it that way...you see I think you'll miss many of your smaller details if you are giong to update twice a week.You can do you best once or twice but from the next time you would be under pressure na to update frequently and in that hurry Sam might lose its charm 😕
chollliiiieeeee if I hurt you!! 😭

Originally posted by: *Jr.Nancy_drew*

nooooo me didn't mean it that way...you see I think you'll miss many of your smaller details if you are giong to update twice a week.You can do you best once or twice but from the next time you would be under pressure na to update frequently and in that hurry Sam might lose its charm 😕
chollliiiieeeee if I hurt you!! 😭

Hey......don't worry Abhy......... I trust my lashy well😳...... quantity will not affect quality....... not here😃

Originally posted by: minnie2308

Hey......don't worry Abhy......... I trust my lashy well😳...... quantity will not affect quality....... not here😃

awwww thank you so much for your support minoo.. and abhy me was only kidding.. if i feel a part has not shaped up well.. i wouldnt post it.. happy?😃 (precisely why this update was a bit late this week😳)

and at the end of the day.. me can only try 😭

btw abhy jaan.. me was only kidding so cheer up 😆

and heres a big hug to both of you 🤗