Samyukta Part 8 - Siya feels cheated.... - Page 2

oooo...oooo......your birthday and we get the gifts.....wow....i jus love it...the perfect and most interesting story i've ever heard....i'm seriously not lying....it fits all my tastes......omg....sakshi's description.....dhruv's concern.......seva marg or siya marg 🤣 that was so funny.......and i love the beginning especially......agni illtreating sakshi and then the orphanage.....i hve a different feeling about sakshi......i want this kinda sakshi in the show too....this one seems soo sooo ummm..colourful...not the crying and rookhi type.....tis beautiful 👏

Happy Birthday lashy, 👏 👏 👏 🤗🤗🤗


What can I say except Wow, brillant to this part. 👏 👏👏 I was expecting that siya and dharma will meet today but am glad that they did not because the way you have described is so perfect. 😍 😍😍👏 It will keep us in suspense and with awaited breath as to how and when will meet again. 😊


What I loved :

• The way you described sakshi bravely fighting back against agni and other. I felt anger at the way they were treating sakshi and wishing how they the four men need a good beating. 😡

• How her face lights up when she sees dhruv and how she tries to hide the bruise from him but he still notices is. I love their love story, it is so sweet and different from sia and dharam's 😍😍😍

• Dhruv's anger at what happened to her and his protectiveness. Its so romantic 😍 and how he touches her bruise tenderly. I also feel his pain at how powerless he feels at not being able to protect her and how she tries to cheer him up by changing the conversation 👏👏

• When dhruv notices a insect on her veil and has a slow smile on his face like he knows what her reaction is going to be like. I loved the way he tries not to alarm her and remove thinking that if she finds out she is going to scream . I know I definitely would 😆😆🤣

• The way sakshi turns when he is trying to remove the insect, she sees it and screams🤣🤣 loooooooool while he is laughing his head off and grabs her hand. This also reminds me of someone I know 😳😳🤣

• The dialogue "No wonder everyone fails to understand women! You will travel alone night or day…you are courageous enough to stand up to beasts like Agnivardhan…you are even brave enough to agree to marry me… but you will run at the sight of an insect…now come on!" is so true as I know I would happily go near a lion that was in a cage but if I see a cockroach I will run as fast as I can. 🤣🤣🤣

• The dialogue you are even brave enough to agree to marry me – she is brave enough to marry an arvyavrat 😍😍😍

• The love they both have for the children and how the children are trying to copy each other throughout the meals. 👏

• Dhruvs compliment to sakshi on her cooking abilities and how the children are so well behaved when she is around as they are frightened of her and so is he. So sweet and loving His sighing of when her mum will fix their marriage date

• Veer happy that he does not have to fast anymore as he loves the food. 😆😆

• Dharma irritated as he cannot find the route where as veer is feeling sleepy and wants his bed. Him teasing dharma that before he could not find the scroll and now the address. The best bit was when dharma saying I cannot find siya marg. Mujhe lagta hai ke he reads and sees siya everwhere now

• Veer looks at the scrolls and checks dharams temperature and saying that he should see a physician as he has gone mad. Dharam getting angry and saying I have been doing all the hard work till veer points out that it is seva marg and they have been circling the same place looking for siya marg. I was so in hysterics when I read this. 🤣

• Veers tublight clicking 🤣 when he realizes that dharma met siya in the garden and has never been the same since. 🤣

• The way you have described the bazaar and how everyone is waiting to get a glimpse of siya. 😊

• Her burgundy attire and especially her jewellery.😍 How she complains to nanda that they delayed her by making her try on blue ,pink, earrings etc and says why blacksmiths and hopes all the dressing is worthwhile awwwwwww siya so wants to meet her prince

• Daksha walking confidently as she wants to see veer again 😆 bechara veer 😆and nanda telling siya that maybe "Dharam has invited you to find out your opinion." She continues dramatically " He is probably having an intricate swing made for you… maybe a large statue of the Lord …even an ornate chest of various alloys so sweet 😊

• Veer inspecting all the weapons so clearly and dharma muttering about if bhalla has fallen asleep or not 😆

• When dharma catches sight of princess siya and is dazed by her beauty and complexion and become aware of his feelings for her. 😍And the he gets distracted by bhalla. Why did he have to come now. 😆

• When dharma turns back to look at siya she is gone and how he rubs his eyes over and again. 🤣🤣 Its like he has seen a dream or he has gone mad by seeing siya everywhere. 🤣🤣 How dharma is trying to think of a reason for the princess to come to the bazaar

• How dharma touches his forehead and telling veer that he needs to see a doctor as he is seeing illusions. Bechare dharma kya haalat ho gayi hai uski pyar main 🤣🤣🤣

• Veer telling him to rest 🤣🤣, little does he know that dharma is thinking about siya

• how when they come out into the main street and dharma tries to see if she can spot siya just to confirm that he has not gone mad 🤣🤣

• Bhalla saying the girls in this place are strange and veer sees daksha few shops away and forgets that he is in disguise and fears for his safety 🤣🤣🤣– grabs bhalla and starts walking towards the cart. I bet he can fight many men but when daksha comes he runs 🤣

• Even dharma agrees that the girls are playing tricks and they cant wait to get back to aryanagar 🤣🤣🤣

• The girls trying to find the princes or blacksmith awwwwwwww and how the girls ask the young girl at blacksmith so many questions. So sad when she tells them that no prince was here and siya face become so sad 😭😭😭

me looking forward to the next part.

that was very nice chapter shrads.. cant wait to find out what happens next!!

lols loved veers reaction on seeing Daksha! 😆 and dharam is so sweet.. 😊

Birthday gal......... I looooooved ur return gift....
I just love the tenderness you put into the story.

I cant even begin to list down all that I loved and recreate the whole story again.

The character sketch is so very well thought out.

Positive characters like Saakshi, Dhruv......even Bhimsen... appear so sensible !! They just fit in at the right plots all at the right time. 👏

Even Agni, the looser, evokes so much of required hatred, unlike contempt and laughter in the Sagar's Saga.

Even JV's endless whips could not cause even a fraction of concern as was caused by one slap from Agni.

Sia, the princess occupies that coveted place in reader's mind, which the serial wali Sia or even PRC ki Sanyo could never acquire.

DV and Bhalla, and their teenish chatter about girls is so endearing 😳

I also loved the description of the happy kingdom Niaphaud. Like a dream 😳

Just loved the script. ⭐️

Awesome update 👏 …………..i just loved the part of saakshi and dhruv 😊 ………..saakshi is shown to be so courageous and u like her standing up for herself………in the serial also she does try to be something like this only but comes out being irritating instead but this saakshi u cant help but admire. 😊 And that insect part was fantastic. 😆 😆

But I was on the floor laughing over sia margh and seva margh confusion………..veer touches the forhead and asks dharam if he is going mad, 🤣 they hv been circling the same place for hours …………….haila lashy that was too good🤣🤣🤣

Hearing daksha voice veer fears for his safety…🤣………………..oh i cant take any more
😆 🤣

awwww minzy

you liked this sakshi and you felt sorry for her... and you liked dhruv and sakshi's chemistry... awwww and i liked how you mentioned the mutiny thingy... awwww brought back your history lessons to you.. i actually wanted to send you a pm minzy.... but i thought i will reply to you here... you have such kind words and you have written so well both here and my birthday thread... now - a - days whenever i write the script.. when i go through some of the scenes i know exactly who enjoys what.. and who would like what... 😳

im glad everyone liked the insect scene, and the Siya marg...

and you loved your bossy veer haan? he is scared of daksha but i am sure he wouldnt be scared of you yaar 😛

glad you liked this birthday gift 😳

@ neeri...

(after your sumputuous dinner 😆) glad you liked dhruv, sakshi and their relationship

you are like my friend neha... she also loves daksha and bhalla 😛 and reads it for them 😆 she doesnt follow DV.. 😆

awwww as for Siya... dont worry... neeri all i can say is nothing happens for nothing😛 par uske beech main poor dharam is left thinking something is wrong with him 😆

@ aashi

dont worry aashu... siya will have to find her prince charming na.. eventually dont worry 😛 and are you scared of insects too? 😆

@ harshada

daksha is not shera 😳

the basis is the same i.e. characters and before starting the foundation was the same.. but from part 1 onwards the story is different.. 😳

...cool 😎 one,di...........loved it as usual 😳 😳 😳 ..keep it u 👏 👏 👏

Originally posted by: lashy

awwww minzy

you liked this sakshi and you felt sorry for her... and you liked dhruv and sakshi's chemistry... awwww and i liked how you mentioned the mutiny thingy... awwww brought back your history lessons to you.. i actually wanted to send you a pm minzy.... but i thought i will reply to you here... you have such kind words and you have written so well both here and my birthday thread... now - a - days whenever i write the script.. when i go through some of the scenes i know exactly who enjoys what.. and who would like what... 😳

im glad everyone liked the insect scene, and the Siya marg...

and you loved your bossy veer haan? he is scared of daksha but i am sure he wouldnt be scared of you yaar 😛

glad you liked this birthday gift 😳

Awwww!!!!!! 😳 Dii choo chweeettt off uuuu 🤗 🤗 🤗

After all uu rr soo speciall for mee!!..isliye even this seems nothingg !!!! 😆 Asie kahke muje shrminda na kariye jiii...😆😆jkinnnnn😆

Yes..and i feel u are includinn thingss of myy likin mostlyy...😆 it cums u knoww unknowinglyyy!!!....😉

Bossyy Veer!!...aaah!!..lovvd himm!!!!! 😛oooh..thnkuuuu!!...hope he zz not scared ff mee....😆 he wont me..cozz mai bhooth se kam dangerous jo dikthi hai....😆

Cant wait for nexxtt update Lashyyyyy diiii 🤗

@ khushi...

awwww those words were so nice.. the most interesting story you have ever read? 😳 you made my day hun... i am happy i was able to bring out the sakshi that many were looking for in the serial.. in the beginning i also thought that sakshi's role would be something like this in the serial but they have made her the most irritating character in the show 😕

hee hee thanx about the siya maarg 😆

@ reens

omg last part tak your comments were as long as the script now they are even longer.. 😆 hai Raaaaam ....

thank you so much for your analysis on all those points.. just love them.. gives me so much pleasure.. am happy that that you liked dhruv and sakshi jodi 😳

Bhalla saying the girls in this place are strange and veer sees daksha few shops away and forgets that he is in disguise and fears for his safety 🤣🤣🤣– grabs bhalla and starts walking towards the cart. I bet he can fight many men but when daksha comes he runs 🤣

so true and dont worry about siya not seeing dharam .. everything happens for a reason.. 😛

@ nehu

thank you hun.. i know you read it only for daksha and bhalla.. 😆

but bless glad you liked dharam too 😳

@ minnoooo

ab kyaa kahein last time i couldnt reply to your comments thank you so much and a very very very very big hug to you... you take time off your busy shramikian schedule to read and comment too... 😭

that is more tender than any story ... I cant even begin to list down all that I loved and recreate the whole story again. omg.... hugggg minnooo

Positive characters like Saakshi, Dhruv......even Bhimsen... appear so sensible !! They just fit in at the right plots all at the right time. 👏

Even Agni, the looser, evokes so much of required hatred, unlike contempt and laughter in the Sagar's Saga.

Even JV's endless whips could not cause even a fraction of concern as was caused by one slap from Agni. 😭

sheesh what a drama queen i am becoming.. but i dont know what other emoticon to put here.. with such lovely complements 😆 and siya better than sanyo *shocked*

wowwwwwwwwww,its toooooooooo goodddddddddd 👏