Veer-Shera-A Love Story..Do read!!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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I have an idea for the Veer-Shera love storryyy...i have kinda posted about it in sum other topic too..But here is it in detail...Do read about it n let me know...

Eventually Shera goes for the Khazaane Ki Khoj...n she gets caught mid-way...The Aarya Vardhan Maharaj n all come to know about it..They impose a life time sentence on her...Veer n Dharam also realise Shera's truth...Jai Vardhan puts the blame of the jhoomor falling on Dharam on Shera...😡

Veer, completely agitated, goes with an aim of punishing Shera..but just can't bring himself to do so...n the he realises the kind of atmosphere Shera is born n brought up in...Especially about her mother being no more n her Daaku Dad..for whom Shera, more than a daughter.. was just a money-minting mission...He doesn't know how...but the anger gradually takes the form of pity n sorrow...

Caught up in a mess...he goes to Dharam n pours his heart out to him..Dharam then sits down n explains to him..dat it is not Shera who is at fault..but the atmosphere she has lead her life in...its all because of her Daaku dad..she is no bad person at heart..just a girl needing help...a girl who needs to see a world full of joy, happiness, compassion, love n gud things in life...Veer understands this n vows to help Shera out...

He lets Shera out of prison on a condition dat she will have to stay in Aaryanagar for sum while n obey his commands, n as the term gets over...they will part ways....With no option left,Shera agrees...n being true to her word..does stay there..then as the transformation begins..love lays its seeds...

Veer helps Shera...makes her see the world through his eyes..a fun loving nice world...n one day..as Shera gets out of her attire n adorns a pricess-like attire...Veer immedieately falls for her...realising how beautiful she looks...the chapter unfolds..Shera develops a fondeness for Veer n eventually falls in love with him..along side she shuns all her old ways n adapts to Veer's new ones...😳

She is no longer the girl with evil thoughts..but a peace n serenity surround her..Just being with Veer gives her immense joy..a joy dat she never had the opportunity to experince all her life...as the time of departure dawns nearer n nearer...Veer n Shera, both grow uneasy..unknowingly..both have fallen in love with each other, but both can't bring it on their lips n confess it to one another..Dharam already realises this though!!😉

Finally the dreaded day of Shera's farewell rises...she is about to go...forever...Veer is lying in bed...n he doesn't even know when have the tears wetted his cheeks..Dharam cums in n helps him realise dat he actually is deeply in love with Shera..few instants pass...n down there..Shera is set to go..but her heart lingers for Veer to cum n stop her...anyhow..finally her eyes are met wtth nothing but sheer disappointment...finally accepting the fact dat this was a short-lived lovely life...she is all set to venture out in another realm of her life, not as beautiful as the previous one though..as she turns her back towards the Mahal...her feet seem to stop, unable to move...paralyzed she stands as Veer cums running behind her...She turns...tears dwelling up...Veer cums near...opens his arms out..Shera flungs herelf into them...n the the tears cum..like angry floods ready to savage everything...like they never have cum before..putting an ocean to shame...Words loose their meaning..time stands still..n both, Veer n Shera enveloped in an undying blanket of love...Both wonder..."Is this what it feels to be like in Heaven?"

Plzz post in ur comments..How did u like this???😊

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-Jwalamukhi- thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Aw...such a cute story...too fairytalish! Loved reading! 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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great idea 👏 👏 👏 sagars could definitely use it ....and ur depiction of love is so good 😳 👏 competely amazing... 👏 👏 👏 if sagars show this..they could get a gripping storyline too , and not just depend on Rajat's popularity
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Posted: 17 years ago
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lovely idea and i loved that hug scene reminded me of my all time fav scene in prc 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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very cute!!!!lovlee!!!! 😳
hug wz perfect! 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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grrrrrrrrrrr i typed a reply but everything got lost because my net connection got cut... 😡

wowwwwwwwwwwwwww 👏 anyway what i wanted to say 😭 this is a beautiful story ashi... 😭 the realization...the culmination... the climax..... at this point of time i would call it an idea... it is a beautiful idea.... i wish the sagars realize what we want and follow the same 😳
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shona. thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow that wud be really nice if that was shown
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Awesome Story! Too Good 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thank u all sooo much!!!
Thank u...Shifali. Mad-about-Rajat, Kiran, Minz, Lashy, Shona n Dilbagh...for ur wonderful word of appreciation...thanks a lotttt.... 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow this is really very nicely written story 👏 👏 👏
Thank u so much for posting it here
I hope sagars see this and give us what we want 😃

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