Veer-Shera-A Love Story..Do read!! - Page 2

kashh aisa hi dekhne mile DV mein 😍

wow!!! 👏
that was beautiful 😊

Thank u soo much...Pruthaxi...Moremix n Kunataanya!!! 😊

beautifully written! 👏 👏

Originally posted by: **Shona**

wow that wud be really nice if that was shown

i agree

tht wuz ah-mazing

too good

👏👏👏

Wow Aashi😃, Like ur story and loved the way u wrote 👏 specially the last para....

Finally the dreaded day of Shera's farewell rises...she is about to go...forever...Veer is lying in bed...n he doesn't even know when have the tears wetted his cheeks..Dharam cums in n helps him realise dat he actually is deeply in love with Shera..few instants pass...n down there..Shera is set to go..but her heart lingers for Veer to cum n stop her...anyhow..finally her eyes are met wtth nothing but sheer disappointment...finally accepting the fact dat this was a short-lived lovely life...she is all set to venture out in another realm of her life, not as beautiful as the previous one though..as she turns her back towards the Mahal...her feet seem to stop, unable to move...paralyzed she stands as Veer cums running behind her...She turns...tears dwelling up...Veer cums near...opens his arms out..Shera flungs herelf into them...n the the tears cum..like angry floods ready to savage everything...like they never have cum before..putting an ocean to shame...Words loose their meaning..time stands still..n both, Veer n Shera enveloped in an undying blanket of love...Both wonder..."Is this what it feels to be like in Heaven?"

Amazing👏

Good Job Aashi 👏 but but but.......I am going to stick to my philosophy of "No Hopes from Sagar's"...so I will read urs and lashy's FF's and enjoy it but won't expect anything happening in the serial.....good for me 😆

will read after my exams 😃

hey dear aashi really good and interesting, as we all know Sagar is lucking story so i hope he gets it, 😳

Originally posted by: ppiyu

Wow Aashi😃, Like ur story and loved the way u wrote 👏 specially the last para....

Finally the dreaded day of Shera's farewell rises...she is about to go...forever...Veer is lying in bed...n he doesn't even know when have the tears wetted his cheeks..Dharam cums in n helps him realise dat he actually is deeply in love with Shera..few instants pass...n down there..Shera is set to go..but her heart lingers for Veer to cum n stop her...anyhow..finally her eyes are met wtth nothing but sheer disappointment...finally accepting the fact dat this was a short-lived lovely life...she is all set to venture out in another realm of her life, not as beautiful as the previous one though..as she turns her back towards the Mahal...her feet seem to stop, unable to move...paralyzed she stands as Veer cums running behind her...She turns...tears dwelling up...Veer cums near...opens his arms out..Shera flungs herelf into them...n the the tears cum..like angry floods ready to savage everything...like they never have cum before..putting an ocean to shame...Words loose their meaning..time stands still..n both, Veer n Shera enveloped in an undying blanket of love...Both wonder..."Is this what it feels to be like in Heaven?"

Amazing👏

Thank uuu sooo much Ppiyu!!!😃

i am gald u liked the last part soo much...😉