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Posted: 17 years ago
Wow shona....Awesum Update...!!!👏

Told U Na Dat U R A Brilliant Script Writer {I Wz Serious At Dat Tym...U Really Are...😳😳😳}

Nw Boutt Vishwas...
Entry Of Vishvanathji Maharaj Wz Really Gud....I Mean...His Entry N Then All Probs For VV's Marriage Solved...

His Dialogue For Vishwa That She Wz A Dakoo Be4 N Den VEER Taking Vishwa's Side...N Gave His Best To Prove Dat Vishwa Is A Gud Person...And A True Rajkumari Now...😳😳😳

Btw VEER n Dharam's Rajyabhishek On Different Dayz...???

VV Trying To Control Their Happiness On Listening Dates Of Their Wedding....😳

Liked DS scene...Siya Finding Her Lehnga😳....N It Wz Wid Dharam...😆😆😆....
Dey Having An Eye Lock Session☺️....N Entrance Of A Dasi,As ALways...🤣
Atlast He Got A Kiss...🤣


Vishwa Cuming In VEER's Room N Vishwa Nt Calling Him Wid His Name Bt Saying Him ''Aap''....😆
Loved That She Gave Her One Anklet To Him...😍
Then A Tight Hug Full Of Luv....👏

dV Talking Bout Their Last Days Of Freedom...😆
Veer had planned and taken ages to model out an architect model of a new garden and palace in Vishva's name in Sumaiya😍....Hw Sweet...!!!
Dharam had spent a lot of sleepless nights embroiding Sia's wedding dress himself…👏.....Wow Wat A love....!!!👏
with of course Sanchi's help and Veer's funny remarks😆....VEER Funny Remarks...😆😆😆

Nivriti Remembering His Hubby Wz Realy Emotional..😭
All Dat Lehnga,His Picture N All...😊😊😊
N Den Did Her Best Nt To Break Dwn Jus For VEER....

Overall....Great Work Shona...👏👏👏



living for...😳😳😳
❤️RAJAT ❤️forever
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Posted: 17 years ago
^^^^ This Wasnt Da Nxt Update😆😆😆 Bt Jus A Comment On The Update...😆

Thats Y I take So Much Tym To Comment....😳😳😆{Nt In Reading}😉




living for...😳😳😳
❤️RAJAT ❤️forever
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Posted: 17 years ago
ok last time im updating Vishvaas...hope its gd:

The following morning everyone got up early….DV do the arti with the whole royal family and pray that the new chapter in their life be full of success and happiness…
The boys and everybody else go and get ready
Dharam is wearing a red outfit n Veer is wearing yellow. They take every bit of care that they look absolutely perfect…

DV does their arti along with Sunaina who does their nazar utarna…

Once everyone is ready then they leave for Rajgardh with the barat…all looking very happy…the locals attending the wedding dance and sing and celebrate…

On their arrival in Rajgardh they are given a warm welcome and asked to proceed to the palace…

Maharani Prateeksha and Maharaj Natraj of Avail welcome them in and do Dharam's arti and do a tilak for him…Samar comes and does Veer's tilak and all go in

First it's Dharam and Sia's wedding…Sia is bought to the mandap where Dharam is already waiting for her…She is accompanied by a few friends…Dharam looks up towards her and isn't able to look away…she looked so beautiful in her wedding dress which he had taken ages to design…"agar koi aur pehenta toh uski shobha badh jati par kyunki Sia ne pehana hai is shaadi ke jode ki shobha badh gayi" thought Dharam



Sia took her seat next to Dharam and panditji began reading mantras…then both got up and exchanged garlands and did the pheras…

Once this wedding was over it was Veer n Vishva's turn…Vishva walked down the stairs accompanied by a few friends…she looked stunning in a crimson wedding dress…she has never looked so beautiful before thought Veer…they exchanged garlands


and she sat down n the whole process started again…as Samar did the kanyadan a tear trickled down his cheek…he wiped it immediately…vishva noticed this and fought back her tears…
The pheras and sindoor and all that's follow

Finally its time for Bidaai…Sia hugs her father tightly….and weeps…neither of them are able to speak…only cry silently…Sia hugs her mum and recalls her childhood… and how she used to do shetani n her mum used to chase behind her…on the otherhand Vishva hugs Samar tightly…they both weep…Vishva recalls all the love that Samar had given her compared to all her real dad had given to her…she doesn't want to leave her father…

Both rajkumaris sit in their dolis

Samar to Veer: Veer bhale he mein Vishva ko pal pos kar bada na kiya ho par phir bhi who meri beti hai aur uska dukh mein nahin dekh sakta…mein usko bhi wohi such pate dekhna chahta hoon jo meine Saanvi ko diye…

Veer: maharaj Vishva ab meri zimedari hai…dukh ka saya bhi usstak nahin ponchne dunga mein

Nivi: samara samajlo hum yahan se bahu nahin beti le ja rahe hai
Samar joins his arms n bows slightly

Natraj to Arya: humari sia nadhan hai…abhi bhi bachi hai agar usse koi galti ho jaye toh maaf kardena…

Prateeksha to Dharam: Sia ka khyal rakhna

Dharam: ap nischint rahiye…Sia ke chehre pea p hamesha khushi he payengi

The barat sets back to leave

Back in Aryanagar everyone is ready to welcome the newly weds

Sunaina and Nivi do the artis of newly weds and then the grah-pravesh and all is carried out…

The newly wed brides are in their respective rooms

Veer enters his room…which had never looked so tidy or so decorated ever before…
He looked at the beautiful princess seated on the bed…she stood up as he entered…
Veer walks up to her…Veer lifts up her veil…

Veer: aaj lagta hai chand dharti pe utar aya hai…aur janti ho sabse achi baat kya hai…aaj who chand bhi mera hai aur uski chandni bhi meri hai…hamesha ke liya

Vishva blushes.

Vishva bends down and touches Veer's feet
Veer immediately raises her up

Veer: ye kya Vishva

Vishva: tum humare bhagwan ho Veer…sirf isliye nahin kyun kit um mere pati ho par is liye kyunki tumne humko jeena sikhaya…humare dil ko dhadakna sikhaya….

Veer: vishva ki jag mere dil mein hai…charno mein nahin

He embraces her

On the other hand Dharam enters his room to find his princess infront of the mirror
Dharam: Sia....

Sia is infront of the mirror…she is taking her ornaments off…she goes to take her bangles off
Dharam holds her hand gentaly

Sia: Dharam ye app…

Dharam: ye shringar uttah ne ka haq aaj sirf muhje hai sirf mujhe…

He gentle takes off her bangles and other jewellery while she gazes at him unblinkingly

A few mornings later in Sumaiya it was Veer's Rajyabhishek and all were getting ready for it…

Veer was given a milk bath before and then after the arti he gets ready
Once he is ready then Vishva comes with an arti and does his arti



and both proceed towards the rajsabha where Samar was waiting for them…Vishva stood near the front while Nivi stood next to her

Veer walks up to nivi takes her blessings then Arya's and hugs Dharam and takes Sia's blessings also for now she was his bhabhi

He finally climb the steps where Samar was standing with the priest…he takes his blessing…Samar announces Veer as the new king of Sumaiya and the union of both Sumaiya and Rajgardh...


Veer's grandfather is also there smiling away…Veer takes his blessings too

Samar does Veer's tilak and his grandfather puts on the rajmukut

(i love this pic)
Everyone: Maharaj Veer ki JAI…maharaj Veer ki JAI….maharani Vishva ki Jai

All are happy

2 days later its Dharam's abhishek

Both Sia and Dharam walk into the courtroom where all are waiting for them…Veer n Vishva included

Arya: aaj mujhe kehte bohat garv ho raha hai ke mein aaj singasen choode ke apne bete Dharam ka rajyabhishek kar raha hoon…

Dharam climbs the steps and Arya does his tilak and makes him sit on the throne of Aryanagar

Everyone: Maharaj Dharam ki JAI…Maharani Sia ki JAI…



There is a grand celebration and DV both dance and share their joy of becoming kings and also celebrating their recent unions with their Queens….And all that bought such happiness to their lives was their trust for each other and their relationship…it was their Vishwaas…..


THE END


CREDITS

Pix: VINISHA_rajat- A Huge tahnks to u Vini for the fantastic pics which made Vishvaas even better and colourful…as a prize all I can give is lots of hugs and the official title of being Rajat's Princess

Name: lashy- Thank u Shraddha di for such a beautiful name for my story…im glad it wont be ananika…I feel honoured that u did the naam karan for my script

Making it a success: All my readers …Thank u sooooooooo much everyone for reading and commenting and liking/disliking my work…I love u All


My take on Vishvaas

I don't think it was absolutely brilliant…it was my second Fanfic and I enjoyed Writing it very much…and reading all your comments kept me going…at the beginning I didn't think it wud go on so long but it did and that's all thanks to fellow DVians.

Visvaas was only written as a light-hearted story and was meant to be romantic than anything else n really liked writing it and im hoping to carry on with a second part in a couple of months time

Thanks for bearing me

Shona
Edited by **Shona** - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
awwwwwwwwww brilliant endin

nd overall brillian fanfic

x x x x x x x 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago

Perfect Ending Shona Dear😊👏 🤗😃

GREAT work👏

sooo touchy and detailed... very interesting part as usual😉. perfect description of marriage scene😊 . like veer's and dharm's dialogues. perfect dia. for perfect situations👏. n vishava touches veer's feet..tooo lovely😳 n DV's rajyabhishek was also tooo gud...must say u r a very gud writer👏..will really miss vishvaas😭.. pls come back soon wth vishvaas part 2 .will eagerly wait for that.(now i m also happy that ur show must get success becoz ur team hv script writer like u😉 so i dont need to worry for story😊)

THANK U SOOO MUCH for this lovely story🤗

Edited by jigs_b - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: vinisha_RAJAT

Wow shona....Awesum Update...!!!thankooo👏Told U Na Dat U R A Brilliant Script Writer {I Wz Serious At Dat Tym...U Really Are...😳😳😳}thankooooo...if i were to make this into a show i'll cast u as Vishva...coz ur the RKi 😳 Nw Boutt Vishwas...Entry Of Vishvanathji Maharaj Wz Really Gud....I Mean...His Entry N Then All Probs For VV's Marriage Solved...he was there for onli ending all problemsHis Dialogue For Vishwa That She Wz A Dakoo Be4 N Den VEER Taking Vishwa's Side...N Gave His Best To Prove Dat Vishwa Is A Gud Person...And A True Rajkumari Now...😳😳😳yh Veer definately will stand by her whatever and this was just an exampleBtw VEER n Dharam's Rajyabhishek On Different Dayz...???VV Trying To Control Their Happiness On Listening Dates Of Their Wedding....😳lol they been waiting so longLiked DS scene...Siya Finding Her Lehnga😳....N It Wz Wid Dharam...😆😆😆....Dey Having An Eye Lock Session☺️....N Entrance Of A Dasi,As ALways...🤣Atlast He Got A Kiss...🤣lol...hehe...the dasiyan are his biggest enemies...always disturb at wrong timeVishwa Cuming In VEER's Room N Vishwa Nt Calling Him Wid His Name Bt Saying Him ''Aap''....😆lol...yh he was shocked... 😆 Loved That She Gave Her One Anklet To Him...😍Then A Tight Hug Full Of Luv....👏lol yh that was cute...n a hug full of love..dV Talking Bout Their Last Days Of Freedom...😆yup after that no masti 😆 Veer had planned and taken ages to model out an architect model of a
new garden and palace in Vishva's name in Sumaiya😍....Hw Sweet...!!!he named it Vishvanagri and Vishva ka bagechaDharam had spent a
lot of sleepless nights embroiding Sia's wedding dress himself…👏.....Wow Wat A love....!!!👏yup damn romanticwith of
course Sanchi's help and Veer's funny remarks😆....VEER Funny Remarks...😆😆😆yh can u imagine what Veer wud say if Dharam actually did that 😆 Nivriti Remembering His Hubby Wz Realy Emotional..😭All Dat Lehnga,His Picture N All...😊😊😊N Den Did Her Best Nt To Break Dwn Jus For VEER....yup shes a loving mother and loves Veer dearly and is willing to hide her sorrows for himOverall....Great Work Shona...👏👏👏thankooooooooo vini

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Posted: 17 years ago
brilliant a huge applause for rajkumari shona, raajkumari shona ki JAI thanc shona it was brill. 👏 👏 👏

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Posted: 17 years ago
Waw shona i really liked your work .... you were brilliant..

Your a fantastiche writter AND i surelly will be waiting voor vishwaas 2


This was the perfect ending ever!!! 👏 👏 👏

Edited by aandhanika - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
this is the most brilliant fanfiz ive ever seen!!!! its completely awwwwwwwweeeeeessssssssooooooooommmmmeeeeee!!!!!! u rock shona 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
very gud ending 👏 ......it was soo touching 👍🏼 ......the details were soo perfect 👏 👏 ......I hav fallen in Luv with Vishwaas and its creator 😉 .....best of all Rajkumari was Rajkumari Jyotsna 😛 ......plzz make it in a show sumday and cast the DVians 😆 ....perfect story with perfect ending 👍🏼.....luved Dharam's dialogue at the wedding❤️ ..very smart,as usual 😍 .....pics were 2 gud and nicely matched.thankooo Vinisha ....plzz cum back soon with VIshwaas 2 ⭐️ ...luv u loads 🤗 🤗
btw u said this is ur 2nd FF..wats 1st?
Edited by rock 2 d2v - 17 years ago

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