Vishvaas:PG85The End!-preview of VW2 pg1! - Page 66

Originally posted by: DVrocks

plzzzzz do start d next 1 soooonnnnnnnn!! 😃 😃 😃 will try to

i'm sure dat d next version will b as gud as dis 1 or even better!! 😊 yh hopefully

Originally posted by: meghaparti

Great work once again shona last part was as usual ver intersting.......Will look forward if u write more fanfic for all IF member's u r really great in your script writing 👏

Originally posted by: shruja

NICE ENDING & NIC PICS SHONA. NOT STRENCHENED SHORT BUT SWEET.👏 BUT I AM MISSING MUH DIKHAYEE & RETURN OF PAYAL SCENE. I THOUGHT VEER WILL GIVE ONE PAYAL HE HAD AT MEETING AFTER WEDDING. BOTH DV AFTER WEDDING SCENE ARE SO ROMANTIC.😳 I ALSO LIKE VEER SINGHASAN PIC N VISHWA ARTI PIC

Originally posted by: Girl_2007

comment on part 50: (sorry i cudnt comment on this part) its ok archana
this was a long(wich i like)yh this part was a lil long and fantastic part! 👏 👏 im glad u liked it though i liked the dialogue between VV and vishvanathji maharaj, it was very well did 👏
loved the romantic scene of Dharam Sia 😳 after so long time.. yh managed to get some DS romance after a long while
Veer Vishva talking about her departure, and the whole payal scene.. 😍 aaaw! yh i guess that was a lil sweet...i glad u liked this part as well
nivvi scene was very touchy 😭 and it was really good described 👏 yh the whole disclosure of her past it may play a gd part in Vishvaas 2 coz she still doesnt know Veer is not biological Son-see pg 1 for more if u want

now comment on part 51 (last part 😭 ) dont be sad everything has to come to an end
it was a brillant ending shona 👏 👏 thank u
after marriage, vv vishva blushing at veer comments (wich were so cute 😳 ) yh i too loved writing taht scens and touching is feet was really realistic 👏 i also liked more ds scene 😛 👏 👏 yh me too liked the DS scenes...for once none of the dasis disturbed them 😆
i dont find words to describe ur ff Shona, its really great thankoooo Archana 🤗 🤗 🤗

will miss it aww...

Originally posted by: ektay11

👏
ended 😭 😭 😭

Originally posted by: crazy_kiran

wonderful end 👏 👏 👏 waiting for u to start ur next ff 😊

Originally posted by: **Shona**

how come i didnt know about nivvis mater...she doesnt know veer isnt her biological son😲

this suspense will be here till after 2 months