My 2nd poem on Rajat

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Posted: 17 years ago
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My poem:-

Lakhon ke cheharon par muskaan hai laata,

Hum sabhi ke dilon ko khoob hai bhaata,

Tv par anek kirdaar hai nibhaata,

Apni acting se hum sabko hai lubhaata,

Apne kaam mein apni je-jaan hai lagaata,

Khatarnaak stunts karne mein bhi wo kabhi nahi ghabraata,

Award functions mein inaam hai pata,

Aur usse ek baar milne ko hum sabka mann hai chahta,

Wo Rajat Tokas ke naam se puri duniya mein jana hai jata,

Dua hai hamari ki use mile hamesha safalta ka raasta.

do share ur views😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: ANSHU015

gr8 👍🏼 keep it up

Thank you!😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
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gvery beautifully written 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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less people r sharing there views.😭 😭 😭

why?dont u guys like my poem?

Edited by anjali83192 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Wow!! 😛I wish..I had been like u... 😭
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: anjali83192

less people r sharing there views.😭 😭 😭

why?dont u guys like my poem?

Dun cry,dear!! We'll have more ppl now...Ok!!😃

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nandini Bhat

Dun cry,dear!! We'll have more ppl now...Ok!!😃

thanks for appreciating😛,it encourages me to write more
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Loved ur poem ... Thanks for sharing this with us 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thank you all for appreciating! 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: anjali83192

My poem:-

Lakhon ke cheharon par muskaan hai laata,

Hum sabhi ke dilon ko khoob hai bhaata,

Tv par anek kirdaar hai nibhaata,

Apni acting se hum sabko hai lubhaata,

Apne kaam mein apni je-jaan hai lagaata,

Khatarnaak stunts karne mein bhi wo kabhi nahi ghabraata,

Award functions mein inaam hai pata,

Aur usse ek baar milne ko hum sabka mann hai chahta,

Wo Rajat Tokas ke naam se puri duniya mein jana hai jata,

Dua hai hamari ki use mile hamesha safalta ka raasta.

do share ur views😊

hi anjali..m new 2 d 4um..shall v b frndz plz?? 😉 newyz, gr8 poem...😃

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