Small steps for sagars- giant leap for DV - Page 3

omg these are the most beautiful set of comments I have seen…. 😳 I thought this thread tho aise hi kahin khoo jaayega… 😆 I was just buy writing what I thought and dekththe dekhthe itnaa lambaa ho gaya…. 😆

Thanks all of you for your wishes and thoughts… 😭

hmmm sending stuff to Sagars.. trust me it doesn't work… I literally wrote a script (For PRC) and sent it to Sagars (both Bombay, Baroda and via email too) and didn't receive any comments on it.. 😭 I was briefly in touch with the creative head too and told him I was sending one.. but no resopnse after that…
😭 So I don't think anyone would take heed…

But the words of minnie, piyu, kai, nishu, reenie, abhy, prcfan all have made me so happy and elated… all this effort was worth it!
🤗

Originally posted by: lashy

omg these are the most beautiful set of comments I have seen…. 😳 I thought this thread tho aise hi kahin khoo jaayega… 😆 I was just buy writing what I thought and dekththe dekhthe itnaa lambaa ho gaya…. 😆

Thanks all of you for your wishes and thoughts… 😭

hmmm sending stuff to Sagars.. trust me it doesn't work… I literally wrote a script (For PRC) and sent it to Sagars (both Bombay, Baroda and via email too) and didn't receive any comments on it.. 😭 I was briefly in touch with the creative head too and told him I was sending one.. but no resopnse after that…
😭 So I don't think anyone would take heed…

But the words of minnie, piyu, kai, nishu, reenie, abhy, prcfan all have made me so happy and elated… all this effort was worth it!
🤗

ur comments and scripts are always much better.........why dont u start writing ur script for dv too just like prc........wld luv to read one😊

Originally posted by: lakshmim_84

lashy, all the points u have mentioned r really great.. n if implemented it cld make much more impact than it is doing now..

😳 thanx laks

Originally posted by: lakshmim_84

actually sagars made this serial for rajat.. so everything that u see.. n will be seeing will revolve around rajat only... they r banking on his popularity n fan following..
now that rajat is in hospital for 21 days.. they r trying to include more flashbacks in each episode.. n trying to twist the story a little.. so other actors might get a chance to prove themselves..
i am sorry if i sound harsh.. but thats a fact.. other actors r now getting a chance to prove themselves bcos rt is in hospital

😭

that is horrible... even if we have 1 man of the match; how can we play a cricket match without 11 players (and even the substitutes)?

Sorry to say but if this is the path they are going to take.. then I much better prefer watching RT in PRC😭 and will treasure the relationship with his family, friendship and the love with sanyo – that was definitely more beautiful to watch…

this is a fan driven-serial.. it's a "serial"… they must remember they are not SBS this is not a flashy documentary on a star.. If this is how its going to continue….I wish RT had chosen another project where he could have displayed his talents much better and where the co-stars would have a nice story too

Originally posted by: kirantarani2007

ur comments and scripts are always much better.........why dont u start writing ur script for dv too just like prc........wld luv to read one😊

Thank you so much kiran hun. 😳. hmm lemme see… maybe could try…😳

Especially the way sagars seem to want to take the story ab lagta hai… ki… 😕

Originally posted by: lashy

Thank you so much kiran hun. 😳. hmm lemme see… maybe could try…😳

Especially the way sagars seem to want to take the story ab lagta hai… ki… 😕

Try out Shradhha....... we r waiting....😉

Very well written post Lashy. 😃 Yes Sagars should have concentrated more on the details and they still can..it's not that late. Only 1 week is over and now that RT is in Hospital, the Sagars can afford to go in Flashbacks with the children and Nivriti and D's mom...I just HOPE that someone from Sagar Arts reads this topic and suggests the Sagars to concentrate on the details more. 😃

awww thank you girls 😳 and piyu tumhaare liye i've penned a short script too... 😛

Btw isko sticky kisne banaaya 😕 😆 hee hee thanx par..

i agree with you lashy di...i found it quite strange too how the sagars were kind of rushing the serial...even though i was too delighted for words when rajjy made his entry..i felt that showing dharam and veer as teens in the 2nd episode was way too soon...it feels as if there's a huge gap between their birth and the present..instead, they should have shown it as a smooth transistion from birth to childhood to teenage..just lyk they did in PRC..or if not, shown few scenes of their childhood

also, what strikes me most is that they didnt show how dharam and veer's relationship developed at all. they should have shown how they grew up together in the gurukul or something and how it shaped the relationship they share now.

hopefully sagars have something planned already in order to compensate for the lack of these details..

Originally posted by: lashy

Since we are coming close to the end of the week… now what are your takes on the serial so far… here's mine - a longggggggg post!!!

Plenty of money for initial sets + plenty of talent = should not lead to a poor serial but because the creative team are either not talented or overworked it is not seeming all right…

There was an adequate foundation provided for the story even before the character of PRC… we knew his father we knew BD we loved kamlavati and rupsundari we knew his dadima… we even knew about his Guruji but here we know no one not even the main protagonist Dharam… 😕

I know that RT fans are very happy about it RT'e entry and his shamik dresse 😛 But even if you do make a fan serial, i.e. just for RT fans; you need high TRPs to sustain viewer interest… as that brings in revenue – the only way that is possible is if you make sure the quality and story is good

I know plenty of us have many questions with regards to DV and these are reltively simpler things to explain – a few minutes of screen explanation = thousands of satisfied viewers👏….

Shamiks -

1) Imagine how much more beautiful the serial would have been if they started a scene showing a small village where the Shamiks lived in their huts😳. They wake up even before sunrise to get to work in fear of the Avs – some with pickaxes (fields), some dressed as cooks and some with their construction tools… that itself would explain many things i.e. reflect that they have something to do other than constructing the same structures for years together!!!

(The current DV sets do look slightly un-finished if you ask me )

2) If they had spent a few minutes showing Veer's father caring for his pregnant wife and daughter before he leaves for work😳… that very gesture would have immediately bonded us to his character.😭. a scene showing a soldier creating trouble for veer's father would mean that they knew he is the revolting type and he has always caused problems for them…

Ths history of the kings –

1) They could have shown an opening scene in a sabha with the sabha complaining about some rumours they heard about jai. Here jai is disrespectful of the assembly. Consequently, the displeased assembly chose arya instead of jai.

2) If Jai was more secretive in what he was doing and bribing the soldiers then arya wouldn't know full truth na😉… and whenever he does learn something abou Jai time and again, they could show arya reprimanding jai for being way word too😛… but at the end of the day he just lets go… because jai is his brother (i.e. a bit of partiality)

Veer being the messiah

a few Shamiks whispering to each other that so and so month (mashi) of so and so year is arriving and so the messiah will be arriving soon😳... but that the messiah's father will die... or something like that... In the palace, even the fortune teller telling the kings "see remember i warned you about the date of the messiah's birth - that is today"

rather than randomly just naming a kid a messiah for no apparent reason.. 😕

Adopting Veer

1) If they showed nivritti secretly going all alone to the lake or just with one daasi that would have been better – she is not going to suicide in front of everyone!!! 😭And there she finds the basket!!

2) If atleast some sort of a celebration was present to welcome Veer😳.. or the kings and queen come seeking Nivritti to the lake worried (as she was in labour and then they received no news of her yet) these small small things explain stuff so much better –

Babies growing up

what about some sort of a sisterly relationship between the queens as they watch their babies fall and grow… 😳

1) What about a few cute scenes of baby veer snatching something from baby dharam and dharam crying while arya and the queens laugh..

2) I was hoping atleast for gurukul scenes.. what about their education? In the gurukul they could have always shown Dharam as being good at his lessons, concentrating and answers lessons, rajnithi etc.. while veer is good at combats and superceeds all other children in sports, Puzzles, games, treasure hunts etc..

Dharam and Veer

Again according to the storyline... dharam and veer are equal contemporaries - their paths separate in life thats all... dharam is quiet, suave, handsome, placid, not ready to mischief slightly more responsible type while veer as the bubbly, naughty, feisty, ready to fight for his rights cute warrior - I am also a big big fan of RT but I really felt Dharam's role should be moulded better… he seems too whiny! He has such a peaceful loveable face and a good actor with no strength in his character at all…. what fun is the serial if we cant watch thakkars between two equals? 😕

Personally I think RT and VM have better chemistry than PRC and his friends – (think of the PRC episodes when they started) but its not being tapped properly. They just including some catchy dialogues which will not work!!!

I so want this serial to do well.. as I am so attached to it because of my friends at IF… because I absolutely love and adore RT (and his jodi with Mug)… Now there is something about vikrant I find nice too (obviously his potential needs to be tapped well by making his character better)…. and I am a BIG TIME sucker for history + romance…

Please yaar don't bring Mugs now… please please don't – it sounds so silly… we dont even know dharam and veer properly.. please dont spoil the romance etc...

please show some more background, take one step at a time and explain happenings better before bringing her in..

lashy di sugg

y dont u become the new script writer?😊