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Posted: 17 years ago
#61
thank you for loving it .

i will written more as i get idea

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: pen_786





here is more .

after the fight

shera will tell go sleep tomorrow he go back .

he will tell yes .

and shera wil go .

veer sleep .
and to bed and sleep .

and morning shera will get up and tell veer .

veer have to go i have to and make him up .

and she will go and see ver sleep like small baby .

and smile .

and tell till he get up .

i will get some food form him .
and go away .

and get some food .

and tell i need .

and go to well . try to remove water .

but ca not .

then veer will come form back .

and help her .

and shera will see it veer .
and fell shy .

and then he will remove the water .

and put in post tell .

now it ok .

and shera wil tell you got up .

i came to you get up .
but you was sleeping .

i i think i will go and get some food form you .

that you eat and then go.

veer will smile and tell you even know cook .

shera will became angry and tell yes why .

veer will tell because you first said you don know to cook .

so that why .

shera wil became angry.

and tell yes i said but know i now to know very well .

and then veer wil tell i go fast fast ack .

and shera will tell eat the food and go .

veer but .

shera will tell ok if you don want to eat then ok .

and became sad .

veer will see it and tell i don meanthat i said .
i will take wiht me .

or let be .

i wil eat here only .

and take food .

and start eating .

and tell today after long abck i eat so nice food .

i think i should kiis the hand of yours .

because it so nice .

and shera wil smile and became shy .

and tell veer like it .

thank god .

because for the first time i made it form my hand .

but he liek it .
thne veer finsh the food .

and go away .

and shera will think i should eat .

and she go and eat veer hideing hideing .
se it smile .
shera will tell it so bad .

how did veer it .

and veer keep standing there and smile .

and shera will tell veer did not said one time that it is not nice .

he eat very quite .

and cry .

veer wi see it .

and come .

and tell

how said it is not nice .

it is nice .

shera will tell don tell lie ver .

i now i eat it is not nice .

you telll it nice because to make me happy .

and veerwil tell who just tast it .

but i said nice because you made first time .

so what every you make .

it nice .

and take the hand .

and tell it is nice .

and as i said i want to kiss the hand of yours because it nice .

and take the hand .

and kiss the hand
tell it is very nice .

and shera will run away .

by became shy .

veer will tell shera shera .
very r you going .
shera wil run away .

and go out and tell it was notnice but he said it nice .

and see the hand and kiss the hand .

and veer will see form far .

and smile .

and shera will becme shy by covering the face



i wil write more after soem time




Pen_786 from next time please mind the spelling and gramatical errors.
It is really hard to understand what have you written.
And give special attention whenever you are writting in poetic form.
And don'nt try to match lines with spelling errors for e.g. Really beautifully(it should be beautiful)
Otherwise your poem is good.
(Don't take my advise by your heart.wriiten for your goodness only)
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Posted: 17 years ago
#63
it no poem it predication .

on veer & shera .

it is not poem not at all

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Posted: 17 years ago
#64
oh!!! god...love you for this...wish ...the sagars come across this mail...even if they show 10% of what you predicted....we will be blessed with joy .............great work....do keep writing.....
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Posted: 17 years ago
#65
i will written .


thank you for likening it

eve in want sagar to go the same

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Posted: 17 years ago
#66
oooh ayesha thats very lovly yaar
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thank you for likening it


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