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Posted: 12 years ago

SHE IS UNATTAINABLE

You have come for me? she looked at the rather disheveled looking villager, her eyes on his rather strange ring.

Bhanasur? Explain yourself oh Lord of the Universe, looking him up and down, her voice lilted with amusement!!!

Have you come to ask her hand in marriage, Narada enquired gently!! Can we see the three things that Shakthi had requested, he continued and stretched out his palm

He heard the muted whispers and laughter from the crowd.

They were laughing at him, his jaw tightened and felt his pulse convulsing with rage

He shivered violently and slowly his form changed, his limbs grew , his hair curled out dark and daunting, his chest widened, his head was soon parallel with the temples high walls. His dark skin glimmered with his sweat.

The crowd moved back in horror, Ammey Parashakthi, they cried seeing the horrendous figure.

Marriage? HHHahahaha, he slapped his thigh and laughed even louder, Marriage, he chortled, NO I am going to drag her to my palace he said and swaggered towards her, his arm outstretched to grab her wrist!!!

She rose from her seat. Power radiating from her small form, a sun like halo around her, the rays flashed and glinted, but her eyes remained calm as she watched him.

He moved closer,

She stood still,

He sneered

She looked amused.

Even before his fingers came near hers, he felt a slow burning and then his fingers caught fire. With a scream of pain he withdrew his hand blowing and defusing the fire.

Bellowing with anger and frustration, he went to grab her again, fire rose around her.

Narad stepped in between. You are wasting your time Bhanasur, go back to your palace, bring back the 3 things Shakthi has asked for, you can take her as your Bride.

Bride!!!! And Me a Groom, slapping his thigh he laughed uproariously, Bhanasur does not take a wife, he keeps women, who will be his slave, he stamped around the courtyard laughing.

Bhhhaaannnaaasur, her voice rippled through the air causing the temple bells to swing, the air pulsed with her anger, the devotees fell down to their knees prostrating as they watched Shakthi emit flame and smoke from her entire body, she stamped one feet causing her silver anklet to break and send a single silver bead to fly towards Bhanasur.

In the silence the Temple bells rang loudly,

Bhanasur stopped mid laughter and turned towards Shakthi only to find himself looking at a huge fire ball that was coming hurtling towards him.

He stood staring at the Glowing Form of divinity, he knew she was unattainable, and his desire to have her increased a thousand fold.

The fire ball was too intense, he knew he will be reduced to ashes.

I AM NOT FINISHED WITH YOU SHAKTHI, he hollered, before disappearing

pritash05 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update she is not attainable that's right 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
aww so beautiful..i can visualize Sona as Kanya..she will look out of the world..we need a strong actor for Baanasur..Rahukall is great for this role ..ohh how i wish to see this
update soon..can't wait
sukhi... thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update...thanks jaya..😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Jaya..I don't want to say great update or beautiful description or anything like that and trivialize what I really feel when I read ur KK updates, so once more u have to make o with 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
Kal El thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Temple bells swinging made me think of old 70s/80s masala films, which is cool in my book 😎
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Posted: 12 years ago
it was a superb update. The last part remided me of this shloka, garja garja kshanah mudha madhur yaavat pivaam yaham mayaa tvaee hatestaiva garjiantyasu devataa.
Edited by Tarakari - 12 years ago
Gopiii thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Jaya super updates. The fire ball coming towards Bhanasur was amazing. Wish to see Shakti like this in her true glory.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update 👏 waiting to see the ultimate faceoff between Shakthi and Bhanasur
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Posted: 12 years ago
Really a very terrific update,😊
Can't wait to read the ultimate face off between calm Shakthi & evil Bhanasur

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