my 1st post...plz read it!!!!!

Hi 4nds!!!...this is my 1st post 4 any forum & 4 any couple..it is a poem which i have dedicated 2 our divine couple Mahadev & Sati...plz do read it...😊

lines 4 Mahadev,
aaj tak toh patthar tha
lekin tumse mil ke
aaj phir se jee utha hoon
aaj tak toh sirf muskuraya tha
lekin tumse mil ke
aaj phir yeh naina ro pare hai...

lines 4 Sati,
aaj tak toh sab sukha tha
lekin tumse mil ke
aaj jaise sadiyo baad barish huyi hai
aaj tak toh main tarpi thi
lekin tumse mil ke
aaj jaise dil ko rahat mili hai...

aaj tak toh sirf andhera tha
lekin tumse mil ke
aaj jaise roshni hi roshni hai
aaj tak toh miane dua ye mangi thi
lekin tumse mil ke
aaj jaise sare dua ye puri huyi hai...

lines 4 Mahadev,
aaj tak toh khudse rutha tha
lekin tumse mil ke
aaj phir khud se mil geya hoon
aaj tak toh sine mein dil tha
lekin tumse mil ke
aaj phir se yeh dil dharak utha hai...



kitne barso se ahdoore the dono
aaj ek duje se mil ke pure huye hai dono...❤️


if there is any mistake in my writing plz 4give me as it's my 1st time and i m very nervous...😒

Nice post dear
Keep it up

Well done'👏 beautiful dedication''you inspired me to dedicate one of my fav song to this milan.. Not my words though 'can't write as beautifully as you 😔'

Words might not be appropriate for Mahadev Sati but again there are no words to describe them anywayz'

For Mahadev:

kabhi khwaab mein ya khayal mein

Kabhi Zindgani ke dhar pe

Mein adhoora sa ek geet hoon

mujhe arth de to savaar ke

For Sati:

Woh benaam see koi justjuu woh apne aap se guftagoo

Tumhe choo liya to mujhe laga

Din aa gaye hain karaar ke

For Mahadev:

Na mili thi tum to tha jee raha

Na milo gi to na jee paa-u-ga

Meri tishnagi ko jaga diya tere saath ne tere pyaar ne

For Sati:

Aaj pehli yeh raat hain tere haath mein mera haath hai

Tha bahut dino se yeh faisla

Tumhe jeet loongi mein haar ke

Thank u all 4 liking my writing...😃...n also thank u 4 welcoming me with open arms...😊

WOW this song is awesome ana...😊.it's not like that u can also write well...😃

I m really happy that u read it n liked it...😃..as I m like a fan of your writing.I have read all your posts and loved it...so,it's like a honour 4 me di...😳...can I call u Hema di...????

Originally posted by: jesmin.farjana

I m really happy that u read it n liked it...😃..as I m like a fan of your writing.I have read all your posts and loved it...so,it's like a honour 4 me di...😳...can I call u Hema di...????

Awesm nice nd lovely poem dear:-Ddn't be nervous u've done a fabulous job:-)