Immortal Love (Manveer) Chapter 5(updated on 2/20/2017) - Page 3

Your concept is very interesting. I really like Uday's and Nandani's character. The scene between them was amazing.

Originally posted by: Twinkle_alisha

Again beautiful chapter... 😊

and heyyy You posted chap 3 but on title name you wrote you had posted chap 4 so where is chap ... 😉

CHAPTER 4

He smiled remembering the sweet and sour memories of his princess. Uday thought out aloud "My Jungli billi". Vijay could feel deep and intense love in his eyes which sooths him as well as scares him. He knew Uday from his childhood. He never gave up for something he wanted, always fought for what he wanted and if he couldn't get it, he destroys it. It was difficult for him to decide whether he was worried about Uday's cravings or if something about Nandani worried him. "Is this beginning of happy love story or rise of something even greater and intense than a simple love story." He thought worriedly.

Nandani went near the well, a large well surrounded by a rigid stoned wall (to protect from sudden accidents) around it accompanied by a lever rope used to carry water from the well. She saw a crowd of women near the well. As it was afternoon, women used to come besides the well after doing their house chores gossiping and discussing about their problems. She went by, greeting every lady, to a bunch of girls sitting by the well making each other's braids, or other hairstyles and gossiping about their love problems as usual. Nandani sent beside them watching Jaya coming towards her with a wide smile on her face.

Nandi (she used to call Nandani, nandi when she was extremely happy) "Oohhh nandi.. nandi..." She exclaimed with joy. It almost felt like she could starting jumping and dancing with joy. Nandani smiled at her and held her shoulders to calm her down...

"What happened? She asked excitedly. Jaya was so enthusiastic she didn't paid any attention towards her, which was making Nandani annoyed and irritated. "If you are trying to kill me by making such a suspense then let me tell you, you are doing good". Nandani said annoyingly. She hates when Jaya suddenly starts becoming impatient and repeats her name like crazy.

"Come with me." she exclaimed with joy. She took her to her house, not to far the well. Jaya's house was the most beautiful house in the hidden village of Prem Nagar. It was cozy as well as spacious, rigid and a well-ventilated house. As she entered the house, she saw Jaya's father, she greeted him and took his blessing. Jaya's father gave her silver, delicate eye rings as a gift. She smiled with joy and thanked him. Jaya took her in a room. The room was well lit and decorated, luxurious enough to live a decent life in it.

"Is there something you wish to tell me? ... I feel like you are puzzled and lost in some other world, you can share it with me" Jaya said giving a sweet smile away. Nandani stared at her for a moment. She was always amazed by the way Jaya always understood whatever was happening to her.

"Jaya... em ... I ... em ... actually." she started hesitantly, it was not something like that she couldn't tell with comfort and ease, she was the most bold and brave girl of the village but the circumstances were against her this time. She wanted to tell her everything but she couldn't, she could understand her emotions she was feeling shy and hesitant about it. Finally, calming herself and constraining her emotions, she complied her words and began in a strange tone which was even surprising for her.

"Jaya ...has something ever happened to you." Nandani said confusedly. Jaya arched her eyebrows causing several ripple of skin on her forehead. She stared at Nandani like if saying her to continue but Nandani turned away, her cheeks were getting hot blooded red with anger and annoyingness, she herself could sum up her feelings.

"Do I have to wait for another century for a reply... spill it" She said annoyingly, turning Nandani towards her. She could feel the tense expression on her face which was a red signal for Jaya, she suspected something big was up which was making her friend tensed and hesitant.

"Nandani, you are scaring me like that, don't make riddles, Tell me what happened, I have never seen you tensed like this, what is troubling you." Jaya said worryingly. "You know you can tell me anything" she said making Nandani comfortable.

Nandani looked at her in the eye, she could clearly feel worry in her eyes, she hugged her tightly , paused for a second. "A man ... I em ... I met a man by the waterfall today when you left."she said hesitantly, before she could continue Jaya smirked heartily, Nandani can clearly see sparkle of naughtiness in her eyes. "Oohh so it's a man, making you restless." She said naughtily acting to clear her throat. " ehm ehm" She coughed and started giggling, by this time Nandani had stormed her up with thousands of glares which were affectless on her. Nandani smacked Jaya's shoulders and turned to leave angrily.

"Nandani, I am just kidding, you know I mean no harm but will you beat you husband like this" She said repeating her words, word by word teasing her. Nandani fumed with anger and barge out of the room angrily with rigid and deeply narrow facial expressions.

"Nandani... Nandani ... I was just teasing, stop Nandani." She came out of the room calling her name aloud. Nandani turned back with a sudden jerk and glared at her with her eyes as rigid as stone and beaming with anger, she moved towards her.

"I DON'T LOVE THAT STRANGER... Get that in your head" Jaya got scared, she could even swallow her saliva, she looked in her eyes with fear which were red already, she even forgot to blink, Jaya's heart ran fast as a wild deer running for life. Water was collecting in her eyes ready to pour out any moment. Nandani's this side was not new to Jaya but every time she came across this side of Nandani, fear shiver down her spine, thundering every inch of her body. Her passion and anger was both scary as hell and frightening as death. She cupped her face placing both of her hands around her cheeks.

"Nandi, I never said that so, i was just teasing... I am so sorry" she said as softly as she could. Nandani snapped out of anger, she felt sorry looking at her beloved friend scary and frightened, even though she was trying to be normal but still Jaya's voice was shrieking like she was in a vibratory mode, her head was shaking with fear. Nandani held her arm and gave her an intimate side hug tightly to calm her. Jaya started weeping on her shoulder, her body was shaking. Nandani took her in her room and made her sit on the bed, her bed was made of plain wood, comfortable enough for one person to sleep on it. She bend down her knees before her and held her hands in her hands.

"I' m sorry Nandani, I didn't meant to frighten you, I don't know what happens to me. I could not control myself at extreme rage, I'm so sorry...", tears emerged in her eyes. Jaya knew she would never do anything to hurt her, she could understand her position. She stood up and went toward some plates at the corner of the room, covered with a piece of silk cloth embroidered with decent working of thread on it. Jaya took the plates and placed them on the bed; Nandani stood up and came near her with an expression of confusion displayed on her face. Jaya uncovered the plates and beautiful accessories and clothes underneath. Jaya smiled at her and said "This is the reason why I was happy to great extent. Father brought all these when he arrived from the region of Magadha." Nandani could clearly see pleasure in her eyes but the pervious excitement lacked immensely. She could not help but blame herself for her dismay. She hugged her and exclaimed in sadness.

"I don't wanna hurt you ever again, Jaya you know you are the only one for me in this whole world, the only one who understands me, the only one who knows my needs without any description, my only BEST Friend... I never want to lose you or hurt you , you means the world to me. I will always cherish and protect you forever." Emotions were pouring in the form of tears from her eyes.

Jaya could also feel tears flowing from her eyes. The room was heated due to the emotional conversation of two best friends. Jaya broke the hug and turned to a plate filled with jewels and other accessories. She picked up two identical necklaces and brought it towards Nandani.

"These will be our friendship necklaces cherishing the strong bond of friendship between us and make us remember about the friendship we share." Saying this, she smiled at her and placed the necklace on her neck and wore the other. Necklace had a pendant carved in the shape of a heart beautifully studded stones within, necklace was a unique masterpiece. Nandani's eye got filled with immense amount of tears ready to flow out any second and fulfills their destiny. She hugged her and broke into tears. Both friends wept to their heart contents.

So, what's up with the mysterious stranger, what happened? Jaya asked interestedly. Nandani was surprised at her sudden question, she looked at her face, she could see mixed expressions of innocence and interest on her face. She smiled a bit and remembered the stunning stranger who is haunting her soul making her fall for him but he doesn't knows Nandani doesn't fall for anyone, not without her own will. She thought aloud.

Uday looked at the sky, blazing sun was showering its light with keen pride and supreme arrogance. Uday smirks a bit and thought aloud." Only if the sun knew, the radiance of my princess, it would forget shining, her gleaming eyes can intoxicates any soul making thousands of servants on their knees for her, her body is even pure than the holy waters, All this time, the only thought that reigns my mind is yours, the only soul that seals my body is yours, I will make you feel the same for me, that's a promise and a prince never goes back on his promise.

Mansingh (A soldier): Sire, everything is ready for the hunt, it's almost time.

Uday: We will not hunt, not today. Get ready to leave the forest instantly. Only I will stay here, take everyone back to Jaigard.

He ordered aloud with firm expressions on his face. "But sire..."Mansingh exclaimed but kept silent at the glare of Udayveer. Vijay placed his hand on Mansingh's shoulder. "Don't worry, I will be by Yuvraj's side, rest of you prepare to leave." Udayveer nodded at Mansingh who was waiting for an approval from the prince.

"Let's go, Vijay, the time has arrived". Uday said looking at the drowning sun in the midst of evening fading its light.

Nandani narrated the whole scenario of the waterfall word by word. Jaya heard the whole story looking at her with curiosity and burst out laughter at the end. Nandani was stunned at this response, she was confused. "Why are you laughing, Jaya ?" Nandani asked confusedly looking at her with a confused yet innocent face like exploring something from her behavior. Jaya looked at her which was making her laugh even more but looked away trying to calm herself.

"How silly are you Nandi, you are trying to run away from love when you have already fallen in one." Jaya said playfully.

Nandani shock her head , her heart skipped a beat, she was not in a condition in which she could question anything ,she remained silent. She closed her eyes and recalled every moment with the charming stranger , his deep ocean blue intoxicating eyes, muscular body befitting a magnificent man, his grip on her wrist, his touches across her body creating a spark in her body.

"Nandani, Love is a great blessing of God not offered to everyone, if it is knocking at your door than don't turn him away, welcome him with respect and care. I don't know if you wish to meet him tonight but I will say one thing for sure that you have fallen for that guy for sure." Nandani was astonished by her words. She could never expect such deep and intense words from her. Nandani and Jaya shared a deep bond not only because of being childhood friends but also because they both lacked mother's love in their life. They went through a lot for each other, filling each other's life with sisterly love and a bond of angelic friendship.

"I will go tonight" She said in a promising tone. Jaya smiled at her.

PRECAP : "Uday ... uday ... look at me ... Look at me uday (loudly)... You can't leave me like this, you just can't ... be.. beacause( voice shrieking) I love you damn it." she shouted madly placing hands on her face with his face on her lap.

Thank you everyone who liked and read my story ... although it was a boring and kinda emotional part. Tuned in for the next ... Have a good night.

LOVE ZARA

awesome chapter
awe even nandini feeling something for uday 😉
so uday didn't tell nandini as he want to see real nandini 😃
but Vijay was somewhere happy yet worried 🤔
uday believe manyata is dead 🤓
what he will do when she will come back?
love the bonding nandini & jaya share its really beautiful ❤️
jaya is really understanding girl she made nandini to accept the love that knocking at her door 🤗
not to runaway from the love 😃
oh god precap look scary
continue plz

Thank you #cuteariya ... the coming chapter will be interesting 🥱😳

Nice concept dear... Thank you 😛

Again a very beautiful chapter...👏

Originally posted by: Ayeasha

Again a very beautiful chapter...👏

The bonding between Nandini and Jaya was portrayed so nicely. Nandini' s has dangerous anger. Both of them had fallen in love at the first meet. Hmm excited for the next update...

I have read all of the chapters and I must say