Immortal Love (Manveer) Chapter 5(updated on 2/20/2017)

IMMORTAL LOVE is a series base on love,hatred , passion and drama. Series revolves around two intense, insane, deeply intimate lovers who fall madly in love which each other forgetting everything and suddenly finds a sudden turn of table, now all the odds are against them, will they conquer their difference in time before they lose each other for good.

Backround:

The Story is about a country with 8 free rural nations or kingdoms ruled by Kings and yuvraj's irrespective of any government in their way. They are the sole leaders and decision makers in their kingdoms with alliances and enmity throughout the nation, many wars took place for the land and its treasure.

Kingdom of Devgard was the most sourceful nation always being the target of its opponent nations .Queen of the state (Mirinali devi) decided to join its state with Kingdom of Jaigard by engagement of the three year old crown princess(Princess Manyata) to the yuvraj(crown prince) but there was a sudden attack on the palace of Devgard on the ceremonial day. A soldier was ordered to flee with the crown princess for her safety but the enemies spotted them. After the incident, King reached to see the princess but all that was found was two unrecognizable corpses. Death of the princess was a dreadful nightmare for the state. But the Queen does not believe the death of the princess, she believed that one day the lost princess will return to perform her rightful duties and meet her DESTINY.

Concept:

Love is the purest relationship of the nature binding two persons in a bond built on the pillars of love, trust, sacrifice ... True love is an immortal bond that can't be broken, finished, . ... it never dies.What if you find out that your true love has a desire to destroy you... or even worse.

She has to meet with her destiny UDAYVEER... strangle through her lyfs hidden dirty secret, a magical tale of two intense, insane lovers strangling through each other.

One should think before one wish for:

"Some Desires Are Dangerous"

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The Story revolves around young and charming Yuvraj Udayveer Singh of Jaigard, arrogant , proud to be a prince doesn't care about emotions and a spoiled brat who likes to roam in disguise to test others with a keen desire of getting whatever he wants. He never lost a battle or a competition and achieved everything he desired for .And Nandani a free spirited damsel of Raigard (Ancestral enemy state of Jaigard) beautiful, elegant ,fearless and has a keen desire of learning martial arts to protect her father from all dangers... and to kill a certain MAN.

So friends .. I am actually new to this forum even on this website ... I really don't know about oss and ff etc. I really hope that you awl will guide me throughout the session with our love and support. Please tell me if you liked the concept or not to make me think of proceeding with the story.
Love Zara.

Hey friends ... I have updated 3rd chapter of the series hope you like it .. 😊😊

Thank you for reading..!!

INDEX:

Chapter 1

CHAPTER 2 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/140428324

CHAPTER 3 https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4803826&PID=140455693&#p140455693

CHAPTER 4 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/140470842

CHAPTER 5 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/140512046

Originally posted by: Twinkle_alisha

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CHAPTER 1

KINGDOM OF RAIGARD was a beautiful place once, filled with chirping of birds... sounds of the animals of the forest made a beautiful morning with the splendor of rising sun showering its light on every creature evenly and lighten up even the smallest particle on the Kingdom... The kingdom was once ruled by Maharaja Devraj Singh after the downfall of the kingdom. It became nothing but a piece of wasteland or rather called by the people of the area A GRAVEYAD embedded on the corpses of the sons of the kingdom.

Years and year of battles made this place crave for Lives, sacrifice and BLOOD. After the Attack by Jaigard the kingdom fall to its knees but the people of the kingdom never lost their hope... they could never let outsiders rule over them so they combined their forces. Even a five year old child was trained to fight for his survival. Except for the women, there was no one that didn't participated in the fight against Jaigard. They all knew a fearsome war was knocking their doors but their keen pride and respect for their homeland helped them to fight for the safely of their generations. Despite all the hard work, they lost the battle as the enemy has an immense amount of violent army. Many peasants died in the battle, lost their families, were beheaded; children were snatched from their mothers to join the army. Women were taken in the slavery ... It was the worst nightmare for the people of Raigard. Then a treaty was placed by Jaigard which declared that Kingdom of Raigard now belongs to Jaigard, even a tiny petal of flower was a servant of Jaigard.

After 13 years

As the shining light of rising sun passed its ray on the forest equalizing the effect of nature as nature fairly exhibits justice, Justice which the land wants. Between Raigard and Jaigard, there was a forest named Phansad which was known for the vicious animals and man eating lions roaming around freely into the luxurious valley of Anamika. There was a village near the valley named PREM NAGAR ,on the fearless lovers that fell from the valley to protect and cherish their love forever as the lovers were banished from the land without any food or water, due to excessive starving the lovers decide to die together instead of living in the fear of getting separated.

On the edge of the village near the valley, a beautiful cottage with ceiling of straws was home of the most beautiful, pure, innocent damsel of the land. Nandani was a fearless, daring and captivating girl with long and silky bronze hair, having hazel upturned charming eyes with arched eyebrow and long captivating eyelashes making a person seduce to death. She had a long and narrow nose with skin as white as snow and naturally fresh red lips making her irresistible. After completing the house chores and preparing breakfast. She went to the waterfall at the edge of the forest to have a deep and relaxing bath with her friend Jaya Lakshmi.

Jaya Lakshmi was her closest friend and a sincere companion of Nandani. She was a pretty girl with clear skin and long glowing hair. Jaya was a calm, shy and sensitive girl like all the other girls of her age. She was the daughter of a rich merchant who came to the hidden village of Prem Nagar after losing her beloved wife in the war. Jaya accompanied Nandani in her every deed like a true bestie, always advising her not to do so but she never left her alone.

As Nandani came to the edge of the forest, she saw Jaya walking in stealth mode covering her face with her chunni (Veil used to cover head and shoulder by women) .She ran towards Nandani as she saw her and hid under a tree.

Jaya: Awww God .. I would have died today... sneaking out like this is danger ... FOR SANE PEOPLES.

Nandani( irritatedly): Awww please Jaya .. don't hide your cowardness in the shades of sensibility.

Jaya: If yew r done talking then may b I should tell you that we r getting late.

Nandani: As you wish your "COWARDNESS".

She chuckled heartily, her purity had a divine place on her face while her eyes glew as she chuckled. Jaya fumed with anger, slapped on her shoulder playfully and turned around as Nandani called her.

Nandani: OUCHH... That hurts ... .Jaya yew know I mean no harm I was just pulling your leg. By the way will you even beat your husband like this.

Jaya blushed red hearing "Husband" from Nandani.

Jaya (Changing the topic): I think we r getting late I have to reach home before father arrives back.

Nandani giggled hearing these words from her mouth and started following her.

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In the Phansad forest near the valley, royal horses were making their way. Preparations were made.

Soldier 1(Eerily) : I feel like fleeing from here, this place is famous for man-eating monsters and fierce animals.

As he spoke he heard a menacing tone of voice echoing in the forest under complete silence.

Soldier 2: Stop being a coward Yuvraj Udayveer Singh is here for a hunt. If you continue your screams you will be thrown in the dungeon forever.

Soldier 1: I would prefer dungeon, rather than becoming ready to be served meal of a savage beast.

Yuvraj, who was listening the conversation, ordered the soldier to come forth.

Soldier 1(Eerily): Forgive me. Your highness

Yuvraj: FEAR is a word unknown to me and my army. There isn't an animal that I couldn't control. Prepare the tents we will be staying in the forest tonight.

Vijay: Do you think we should be staying in the forest. This forest isn't safe for a stay. Your highness

Yuvraj: Vijay, not only that you r my bossom friend you r also my trustworthy companion. I would call it a disgrace to be called Your highness by you.

Vijay(smiling): As you wish ,Udayveer.

Vijendar Singh is the son of the King's most trusted and loyal general Veer Pratap Singh. He is the most closest person to Udayveer.

Vijay: Y r you actually here, Uday I know It's not because of the hunt. Then y ?

Yuvraj: Vijay, This is not just a forest but an enchanted maze full of amazing creature. Other that, you know how much I like traveling around the world, I find this place intriguing, like there is a secret behind these mysterious roots.

Nandani rushes into water as she saw cold, fresh, clear water of the waterfall, to feel the magical wibes of the waterfall, even after forbidding of his father, she always come to this place, as the place sooths her and calm her soul. It's like she is connected to this place. Jaya pulls her out of the water and tells her to change her clothes before going underneath the water. They both wraps themselves up in clothe, brought by Jaya and jumps into the water and started splashing water at each other. Suddenly stops, As they both hear sound of the bushes rustling. Jaya sacredly hid herself behind Nandani and closed her eye with the fear of being caught.

Nandani covered herself with her chunni over the wet clothe and slowly went out of the water to examine the circumstances. Suddenly, she hears a wide scream.

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CHAPTER 2

Nandani covered herself with her chunni over the wet clothe and slowly went out of the water to examine the circumstances. Suddenly, she heard a wild scream and she felt something struck around her waist. She quickly jerked back and saw naughty little Chandu watching her with a confused expression.

Chandu Or Chandra Lukshman was Jaya's younger brother, had a talkative, brave and naughty nature. He was determined to protect Jaya and Nandani at any cost.

Nandani bend down and rubbed his hair. "What's up Nandu? Why did you came here all out of sudden?" she smiled at him.

"Nandani I got selected in Koya Academy. Now I will show Kurwaki(the girl he loved) how brave I am and prove my love towards her". He replied with extreme excite.

Koya Academy was a hidden sword fight training academy that trained people for the protection of the village.

Nandani smiled heartily as she saw innocence in a 10 year old (Nandu), he reminded her of her brother Surya .She placed a tilak of her surma behind his face to keep evil spirits from him.

Jaya came out of the water and came toward both of them. "Why do you always have to scare us like that?" She scolded her brother angrily.

"Because you are so much fun to tease." Nandu answered playfully.

Jaya glared at him as if saying that you are going to pay for that. She winked at Nandani. Nandani knew what she was hinting at. Jaya moved towards the water and splashed at Nandu .Nandu shockingly took an overview of his clothes and ran towards the water. Soon they all found themselves playing in the water splashing water at each other.

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Somewhere else in a room full of darkness sat a person on a chair with an evil smirk lurking on his face with another person on his left knee and left hand on the ground like waiting for an order.

Master: I want the work to be done in complete silence. Kill him or get killed by me.

Man 1: Don't worry Master. I won't disappoint you.

Master: End HIM, as soon as possible.

Saying this, he smiled evilly and Man 1 tightened his grip around the sword.

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Udayveer and Vijay roamed around the forest... exploring ...when they heard chuckles and giggles in the forest. Both of them were astonished to hear such sounds in a forbidden forest filled with horrible creatures. Udayveer followed the voices, Vijay ran after him calling his name, suddenly he stopped, signaled him to keep quiet. Vijay came near him and patted on his shoulder lightly saying "Uday, we shouldn't roam in the forest specially when there are strange voices in a forest." Uday pointed his finger toward a girl in the water near the waterfall and asked Vijay if he knows the girl. Vijay shock his head in a decline.

Uday fall on his left knee and hid behind the bushes to have a clear glimpse of the pretty gal playing in the water, splashing water in the air like a three year old smiling with a shine in her eyes. As the brightening sun ray touched the lady her skin glew like a clear crystal, Uday was head over heels for her, he wanted to talk to the lady of his dreams but vijay persuaded to stay.

After a while, Jaya wore her clothes in the water and came out calling both of them to come out of the water. "Come out both of you, father will be at home soon, hurry up." Jaya said in a worried tone. "Or else HER COWARDNESS will be angry again". Nandani replied innocently and started giggling. Nandu laughed aloud but suddenly stopped as Jaya glared at him in anger. As Nandu came out of the water, Jaya once again pleaded before Nandani to come out of water but she refused her and told her to go as she will stay a little longer. .Jaya knew she won't listen to her to she went away with Nandu towards home.

Nandani stared at the waterfall and moved towards a rock near the waterfall and placed herself on the rock with her feet in the air with water splashing on them.

Uday, who was watching from behind the bushes, was stunned to see such a beauty with an excellent grace, elegance and poise in front of his eyes. He went outside the bushes leaving Vijay behind; Vijay didn't stop him as he knew that when Uday makes up his mind for something, nothing could stop him. Nandani places her long brown hair at one side, closed her eyes to feel the flow of water and the fresh fragrance of wild flowers and bushes near the waterfall and started moving her hands in her hair. For a while, Uday stood at his place and then moved forward towards her.

As he moved in the water, water started moving causing ripples in the fresh, clean water. Nandani got alarmed and opened her eyes instantly because of ripples striking her feet. She saw dashing man with ocean blue sparkling eyes, light skin tone with black shining hair moving in the air with perfect grace having a smirk placed on his face, was moving towards her.

Nandani quickly got up from the rock and signaled the stranger to stop. Who are you stranger? And how dare you come here? She said angrily covering her arms around her chest.

Uday smiled at the beautiful mysterious girl before her. "I think I am the one to ask, came close Nandani and tucked few strands of hair behind her ears making her shiver, she jerked back instantly. Her face fumed with anger, she never expected a stranger to be so close to him, she wanted to hit him hard but couldn't due to the position she was, also being afraid of the clothe and the chunni to might slip due to being wet, she slightly tighten her clothe along with her expressions with a rigid face.

"Beauties like you should not roam around here in the forest. Aren't you afraid of animals? He said giving a wild smirk.

"The only creatures I am afraid of are the monsters hidden in the form of humans". She replied detest fully. "Is that so?" Uday came near her, held her waist tightly and pinned her toward the rocky wall near the waterfall .Nandani tried her best to get rid of him even scratched her nails across his arms but all in vain. The more she tries to get away the more he tightens his grip across his waist and moved his face towards her. At this Nandani grabbed a dagger from his waist and pulled it across his neck.

Beawaaare...!! I am Nandani Kumari who is not scared of anyone, anything, if you tried to come near me ... I will KILL YOU. She said in a threatening tone. Uday was shocked to see her valor as he had never seen a girl with such bravery and beauty. He tried to take the dagger from her hand placing his hand on hers and holding her waist with the other but her resistance was shocking yet intriguing for him. He was amused to see such beauty with such resistance and bravery.

He snatched the dagger from her hand and turned her around with a jerk placing his hand on her abdomen, feeling its warmth and making a close and intense contact with her neck placing the dagger on her neck.

"And I never lost to ANYONE" He said placing a smirk of triumph on his face. He moved the dagger from her neck towards her face, naughtily caressing her abdomen side by side rubbing his nose around his neck, pointing the edge of the dagger from her eyes to her lips at a safe distance. As the dagger moved across her face, she could feel a round of shiver down her spine moving across her body, she closed her eyes tightly which didn't go unnoticed by Uday. Don't worry... Beautiful, I will never kiss you without your permission. He said calmly, she could feel his hot breath while speaking. Slowly, he lightens his grip around her waist ending in leaving her and she turns around.

"Who are you?" She asked desperately. He could feel curiosity in her eyes.

"I m UDAY... Uday Mulkarani, a soldier of the army of Jaigard" He said with a usual smirk on his face which made Nandani nervous.

She moved away but was shocked, the clothe which she used to cover herself was being pulled back, some stopped her from continuing. She turned back with mixed feeling of irritation and shock on her face.

PRECAP :

Nandani moved towards him caressing his chest. "Why did you did this" She said controlling herself.

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Hi guys ... I updated the 2^nd chapter of the series .If you like this story please let me know. I am sorry for any mistake i make i surely hope you guys will guide me through my mistakes🥱😊

LOVE ZARA

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