CHAHU MAI YA NA sneak peak please read on pg 3 :D

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haye everyone !!! Do any one miss me 😛 i don't think so 😆😆 well first I'll introduce myself ... for those people who r new in this forums ... my name is kritika ... everyone call me kritz ... i m small writer on this forum ... n i love to read n write those things who connect to manveer... n i m here to update chahu mai ya na (mystery of my life) this is my first story my first attempt ... n i got very good response from my readers thank you so much from ur love and support ... so here i m going to update ... you guyz waiting for so long ... i m really srry for that ... plz forgive me ... n ya if u guyz like this story so plz press like button n if u don't so its my humble request please IGNORE now i m done with my speech ...


chahu mai ya na


( mystery of my life)


chapter 1 ( chapter 13.2)



present

she was lay on the floor ... n crying for her life she want to go home ... but destiny made her here ...
her tears make a way to go out in her eyez ... she luk at the door ... she thought that some one save her soon but how ? they don't noe where she is ? n the best part is she also don't noe where she is !! now who will save her from this DEMON ... YES DEMON when i m in collage i never thought in my wildest dream that i call him this ... i rember our first meeting n that proposing night i never forget

5 years back in (CIITE)

she luk at herself in mirror n luk at her new dress who was gifted ...

WOW AARUOO WHERE U GET THIS ... ? ITS SO BEAUTIFUL

ya i noe ... actually ... (she luk at down )

ARUOO R U BLUSHING ?

ohh comon jiu i m not 19s heroine ... get back in reality ...

jiya luk at aarohi wid doubt full luk aarohi luk at her wid srs luk WAT ?

jiya laughed n said he really likes u ...

oh plz jiu ...if anyone gave me a gift thats not mean that he have a feeling for me HE IS JUST FRND NOTHING ELSE n she luk at another side as she don't want accept the fact ...

thak thak ... someone knock the door jiya open the gate n found a person who was standing front of her wid a bunch of flowers she didn't luk at his face as all flowers were cover his face he put down all flowers his face was visible n jiya luk at him shockingly YOU ?

someone open the gates manyta get back in reality ... he luk at the person who was standing front of her

the person luk at her wid so much love like some precious think he lost but now he found out


he bend down n seat beside her he take his hand on her chicks she closed her eyez n one drop come out in her eyez that drop of water make him realized how much she was in pain he didn't wait for next drop he just go closed to her n suck her tears ... she closed her eyez n feel his touch she bit smiled n said I NEED YOU that think make him realize how much she want him ...



tu hi mera ...
tu hi mera sara jahaan hai ...
tu hi mere rab ki tarha hai ...(2 *times)
tuhi mera... (2*times)
tu hi mera sara jahaan hai ...
tu hi mere rab ki tarha hai ... (male)
tu hi mera sara jahaan hai
tu hi mere rab ki tarha hai (female)
kahi tere dil ki panaho mai
maine paya tujhe meri chahon mai ..
jaise lobaan jalta ho har pal kahi ...
meri khwaish mai u tu jala hai ...
tu hi mera ... (5 *times)
she just huged him like no tommorrow ... manyta's head resting on his shoulder n she is continusly crying ... he just don't want to see her like this he just rubbed her back lightly n she is sobbing like a small child ... he was understand her fear ... couz he was also afraid to loose her R U OK PRINCESS ? manyta didn't said a word she just hugged him more tightly like if she leave him ... so he will be gonna disappear ...he understand her feeing very well n he break that
hug cup her face gentally n kissed her forehead make her realize now he is not gonna disappear .. PRINCESS I M HERE WID U ... as he said manyta again hugged him n said with the sobbing way u...uday i ... i wa.. nna g..go h..home .. ... that words was the first n last words for her n than she closed her eyez ... he just pick her up in his arms n take her out ... make her seat in a car ... he just luk at her eyez her eyez were teary n he just wiped her lightly n take hairs behind her ears ...she luked at him so lovingly he luk at her n said NOW R U KK ? she nodded like a child he just smile at her innocence ...

EXCUSE ME MR. YUVRAJ UDAYVEER SINGH

HE TURN HIS FACE N LUK AT THE PERSON WHO CALLING HIM


YES ...

we will search all over there ... we didn't find anyone

manyta take a relif sign ...

i don't noe take all ur force militry army watever u want but find out the person WHO TRY TO KIDNAPPED MY PRINCESS ... i swear i wana kill that person wid my own hands ...

uday luk at the police man wid blood shot eyez ...

n he just agreed ... uday turn his face n luk at manyta wid smile n said wid lovingly SHALL WE GO ?
she just nod for once

n he just take her out in this mess

past

that was great party I LOVE IT ...

afcouse babes this is royal party ... k luk at her n said wid smrick U WILL THROW A PARTY FOR MANYTA ? DID U REALLY LIKE HER?

j rolled her eyez wid ATTITUDE ...OH COMON DID U REALLY THINK ? I JUST THROW THIS PARTY COUZ I WANT TO REALIZE EVERYONE THAT CHEAP GIRL IS NOT A PRINCESS N SHE NEVER BECAME A PRINCESS ...

hmm .. its gonna be intresting

j luk at k n said wid full attitude it is intresting

l luk at her smile n said HEY BUT J R U SURE THE ADITYA SIGHANIYA IS COMING ? I NOE HE IS BUT HE IS NOT LIKE A PARTY MATERIAL ...

j luk at her wid smrick yes babes he will !!!

oh god i can't belive ... i m so excited ...

j luked at her n said wid smrick MEE TOO BUT FOR MY SO CALLED JIJI ...😈

KRITZ... 😳😳

IF U GUYZ R NOT UNDERSTANDING WHAT IS GOING ON SO HERE IS THE LINK OF CHAHU MAI YA NA THREAD ONE :-

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3578128



ADITIYA SINGHANIYA :

he is the most handsome eligible bechlor of india n one side lover ... u can say that... he have same personality as uday but he have something upto which make manyta life hell or may be destroy ...









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CHAHU MAI YA NA

[ mystery of my life ]

chapter 2

She is sitting in a car looking at outside from the window ... silently not a single word escape from her mouth ... at last uday break the silence ... coz he don't want to look at her like this ..

PRINCESS???

manyta turn her face n look at him

DO U WANT TO EAT SOMETHING ? R U HUNGRY ?

manyta softly say

no !!

n again turn her face ... from window side


I NOE WHAT MY PRINCESS WANT YET ... !!! he said loudly

WHAT ? manyta look at him with confuse expression
uday smirk n stop the car in middle of the road look at her with romenticly n slowly slowly go close to her face manyta make a puupy face coz she got a bad intentions from uday ... 😳
uday come close to her he can feel her breath ... they both look into each other eyes ... there noise were touched by each other ... there lips were just inches a part suddenly manyta close her eyez waiting for the moment 😳

but nothing happens she open her eyes slowly and met with choclaty brown eyes.. who was looking at her so intentionally ...

WHY R U LOOKING AT ME ? LIKE THIS ? she asked

actually she want to noe why he didn't kiss her ?

U NOE PRINCESS WHEN I LOOK AT U FOR THE FIRST TIME REMEMBER THAT CAR FIGHT ?

manyta remember how she grap a stone n threw it on uday's car glass...

manyta nod with the smile on her face

uday said with softly

ON THAT TIME I REALISED I ACTUALLY SEE YOU SOMEWHERE BEFORE

manyta look at him with confused look

WHERE ???

IN A ZOO ... U SITTING BESIDE A MONKEY n uday brust out laugh...🤣

manyta who is shocked and angry in same time look at him with u r so dead look

WHAT ?? she shout out loud ya she is not expecting something like this

I M GONE A KILL YOU MR.YUVRAJ UDAYVEER SINGH

she start hitting him on his chest uday don't mind it... actually he really enjoy her antiques ... n this is the best way to make her happy

...



thank god aroo is ok ...she hugged rahul titly

rahul is shocked n feeling bit shy coz that was there first hug... she is so happy after all her best frnd is safe now ...

rahul hugged her back softly n asked now r u happy ?

she break the hug n look at him ... they both just look at eachother..

suddenly third voice come

cough cough i didn't see anything ( he shouts )

they both just look at the person who is standing front door n they were shocked to see it was none other than vb .He covered his eyez with his hands and pretend he didn't see anything

...

I HATE THAT WITCH ... j threw everything what she have in her hands

HUM USE JITNE NHI DENGE ... SHE CAN'T WIN SO EASILY ... MANYTA JIJI NOW U GONE A PAY FOR THIS
she gave a evil smile


...

HOW COULD U MANYTA ? HOW COULD YOU ?

he look at her picture

NOW WHO WILL SAVE YOU FROM ME !! BE READY MANYTA ... I'LL BE BACK IN YOUR LIFE AGAIN ...

he burned her photograph n throw it on dustbin ...

evil smick appeared on his face

...

DON'T TALK TO ME !!!! DO I LOOK LIKE A MONKEY ?

no who said this ? he said confusingly

YOU SAID .. !!! she look at him with so much anger

NO SWEETIEE I SAID U SITTING BESIDE A MONKEY !!! WAIT A SEC !! IT MEANS YOU KNOW U R MONKEY ... OH YEHH CHOR KI DADI M THINKA ... he said with a chizzy smile

I HATE YOU she said loudly

I LOVE YOU ... N I REALLY DO !!!!


KRITZ ...
😳😳😳

SO THATS IT I M DONE WITH THIS CHAPPY N PLZ DO LIKE N COMMENT

PROMO

UDAY I WANT TO SAY SOMETHING ...I NOE ADITIYA FROM PAST 5 YEARS ... HE IS MY EX BOYFRND UDAY MAINE TUMSE JHOOT KHA THA PLZ PLZ MUJHE MAAF KAR DO UDAY ADITYA N HI MUJHE KIDNAPPED KIYA THA OR AB HE'LL TRY TO KILL YOU!!! TUM SAMJH RHE HO NA WHAT I M TRYING TO SAY

he turn his face with smick

TUM !!!! she shouts 😲

love u all ❤️






























Edited by -Kritika- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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interesting starting
oh hell that j & aditya want to hurt manyata 😡
this time uday came on time to save manyata 🤗
manveer moment was so cute 😉
precap look scary
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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V.nyc start. U & M fight & romance is sth which I always admire & no other has been able to take their place till now. BTW, wht's AS's real name ? He luks lyk a foreginer . One sided luv frm whom ? M or AS? I think whom M told all her secrets is AS. Promo is quite scary[:s]. And don't forget to add me to ur PM list plezzz
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V.nyc start. U & M fight & romance is sth which I always admire & no other has been able to take their place till now. BTW, wht's AS's real name ? He luks lyk a foreginer . One sided luv frm whom ? M or AS? I think whom M told all her secrets is AS. Promo is quite scary😕. And don't forget to add me to ur PM list plezzz
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow.. thanks for pm kritika...
U really are an amazing writer.
This is the first piece of ur work which I read n I m loving it soo much already...
Manveer ka nok jhok always is an entertainment to watch..
Cute n adorable update..👏
Fo update soon n pm me as soon as possible
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awsme i love ian <3 jldi update kro...m very excited :D
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WOW!! fabulous update dear...loved it
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Originally posted by: cuteariya

interesting starting
oh hell that j & aditya want to hurt manyata 😡
this time uday came on time to save manyata 🤗
manveer moment was so cute 😉
precap look scary
continue soon

thank u so much for appriciate my work ya the main villan in this story is none other than aditiya (ian somerhalder / damon salvatore) ... personally he is my crush 😛 ... abselutly he saved her ... after ol he is the main lead 😆😆 thanx for the comment sweety... thanx for such a lovely comment 😳😳

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