CHAHU MAI YA NA sneak peak please read on pg 3 :D

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kritika

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: newmoon18
Awsme

thanku 😳😳

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kritika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: ekra101
V.nyc start. U & M fight & romance is sth which I always admire & no other has been able to take their place till now. BTW, wht's AS's real name ? He luks lyk a foreginer . One sided luv frm whom ? M or AS? I think whom M told all her secrets is AS. Promo is quite scary😕. And don't forget to add me to ur PM list plezzz

thank you so much firstly yes u r right no one can take manveer place till now ... u wnt to noe aditya singhaniya's real name so he is ian somerhalder ... yes u r right he is foreginer ... n he is the main lead of the vampire diaries ... girls drool on him ...even he is personal crush of mine 😉 one sided love from which side ? u noe when u read futher ... ya sur i will add u in my pm list don't worry 😳😳😳

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kritika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Zuriah
Wow.. thanks for pm kritika...
U really are an amazing writer.
This is the first piece of ur work which I read n I m loving it soo much already...
Manveer ka nok jhok always is an entertainment to watch..
Cute n adorable update..👏
Fo update soon n pm me as soon as possible

ur most welcome welcome ... thanx for the compliment ... i will pm u for sure ASAP 😳😳😳

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kritika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Ana..
awsme i love ian <3 jldi update kro...m very excited :D

thank you even i also love ian ❤️ i'll update ASAP😳😳

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12Singmeenu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Plzzz update i just cant wait for the next part

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kritika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

chahu mai ya na

[ mystery of my life ]

sneak peak

they both were reached in palace when manyta were getting down but uday stopped her

princess !!!

manyta stopped looking back to uday he looked at her with doubtful look and asked her very softly

princess i know their is lot of problems between us but i want to know about adi how do you know him ?

manyta look at down nervously SHE SAID WITH BIT HESITATION i don't know him properly he is in my college but we never talked as he is very popular guy that's why i know him she complete her self

...

why don't you tell him aroo?

what should i tell jiya you know my past very well you know him very well he is a psychopath you know about that person because of him she is not here the past which i never want to open but now ... he is going to open it ...

...

she turn her face look at his dark blue eyes n asked straight forward

why did you came back ? what you want to know ?

he gave her evil smirk

THE TRUTH ...

...

listen to me uday i m not here because of you i m here because of dadi saabh ... so please leave me alone she went to go another side but stopped by him he grab her waist n pull her forcefully ... look into her light brown once ... angrily she looked at him with teary eyes ... leave me uday YOU HURTING ME!!

he barked loudly TELL ME THE TRUTH MANYTA ... !!!

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HELLO BROTHER !!!

AFTER A LONG TIME WE MET ...

he offered his hand to him

uday looked at him with bit shocked & angrily ...

I NEVER THOUGHT WE MET AGAIN ... !!!

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UDAY I WANT TO SAY SOMETHING ...I DON'T KNOW HOW TO EXPLAIN she take adeep breath and continue I NOE ADITIYA FROM PAST 5 YEARS ... HE IS MY EX BOYFRND BUT I NEVER LOVED HIM UDAY MAINE TUMSE JHOOT KHA THA PLZ PLZ MUJHE MAAF KAR DO UDAY ADITYA N HI MUJHE KIDNAPPED KIYA THA OR AB HE'LL TRY TO KILL YOU!!! TUM SAMJH RHE HO NA WHAT I M TRYING TO SAY

he turn his face with smick

TUM !!!! she shouts 😲

hey guys i m done with the sneek peak this is small promos of coming chapter so please enjoyed n do comment n like ...

kritz😳😳

Edited by -Kritika- - 9 years ago