i never falling for u ... CHAPTER 6 ON PG 14 - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
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i do 😳😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Twinkle_alisha

KRITZ WHERE R U PLZZZ... UPDATE PLZZZ


i'll for sure 😳😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ekra101

nice story, i want pm. plz do add me 2 ur pm list and update soon😛

ya sure i will add u in my list n i'll update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Zuriah

Wow kritz..thnx for pm gal..juat loved it

It was an absolutely amazing update especially the precap. .jt stole tge entire lime light of ur update..
Riste mein to hum tumhare baap lagte hain..n naam hain..KISE PATA🤣

Awesome this story will surely take aplace in.my heart👏🤗


thank you so much for ur lovely comment ... awww this is really sweet of you 😳😳
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😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Kritika-


i'll for sure 😳😳


kab Karhogi Kritz
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Posted: 9 years ago
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haye everyone here i m going to update I M FALLING FOR YOU !!Oops I DID ...


NOTE

IN THIS CHAPTER YOU WILL FIND OUT SOME NEW CHARACTORS WHO MAKE THIS STORY MORE COMPLICATED



INTRODUCTION

NEW CHARACTORS



karan singhaniya (bobo) : he is collage best frnd of manya fun loving ,cute ... but bit immature from his age he make fun of others not purpsly... its just happened...any girl/guy love his personality n personaly manya love to hangout with him he has same charm as uday have and he can do anything for manyta ... he alwayz make her smile with his cracking jokes love her alot ... his family lve her too ... there is reason behind


abhey raichand (abhi) : or i say YUVRAJ ABHEY RAICHAND OF NAVELGHAR he is A ROYAL... LIKE UDAY DID he have introvert personality he has misterious past or i say dark misterious past no one knows about that not even his closest frnds know about that he never shout to anyone if it is not necessary to him.. he is sweet loving polite personality ... he always respect womens like true gentalman... manya love his personality and adore him everytime he have kept a small secreat of his that he have some felling for his best frnd (manya) ... for manya he is a philosopher plus advicer whenever her life messed up by herself so she always take advice for him and it works ... he is also in best frnd LIST OF MANYA any girl can drool on him easily ...!!!

akash verma : he is belong in middel class family he is secreat admire of manyta ..he is work in ABP newz channel but in small post . he know she never accept his proposal if he try to propose her she definatley say NO to him n than hs small middle class heart would shattered into million peaces ... thats why he drop this idea ... he is afraid of her rejection ... but he kept admiring her

LAST BUT NOT THE LEAST

MAYA MHERA

OR I SAY MAHARANI MAYA BRIJRAJ KUMARI
MOTHER OF MANYA MHERA OR I SAY RAJKUMARI MANYTA

NOW YOU CAN READ THE CHAPTER 😳😳


I NEVER FALLING FOR U Oops I DID ...

CHAPTER 4

precap

Outside ... !!!

She take a relief sign THANK GOD I M SAFE

She turn around n look at the chocolaty brown eyes were

glair at her she just dumb stuck

So miss shanya singhaniya ? Where are you going ?

Manya look at another side n said ummm ?? Actually i need

some fresh air .. Thats why !!

Oh no its kk ? So miss shanya singhaniya what you do ?

I mean what is ur profession ?

Cough!!! cough !!! I ...ummm.. I am teacher ?

Oh really in which school ? cough !!! Cough !! Ummm elite

international public school ... !!

Really ? But jagat told me you have a business in new-york !!

Really ?? I have ??? ...yeh i have !!! Actually i m a mullite

talented person i will taught business related things from new cummers

WOW !!! I M REALLY IMPESSED

But why are you asking me this kind of questions ?

Because i noe you are not shanaya sighaniya !!!

Manya is dumb stuck


precent

WHERE SHE IS ???? someone shouts of top of his voice ... make manya n uday's attantion toward him YES YES HE IS NONE OTHER THAN MAJNU BHAI ... he is scolding one of his gang memmber

YOU PEOPLE ARE JUST USELESS !!! YOU PEOPLE DIDN'T CATCH A LITTLE GIRL ... HOW YOU PEOPLE CAN HANDLE ...A LOKHANDWALA ADDA ... everyone just looking at down no one can dare to look into his eyes

he turn his face look at her with his million doller smrick SO YOU WANT TO SAY SOMETHING ? OR I CALLED THAT PERSON HERE ? he pointing his finger to majnu bhai ...

she look at him with bit nervousness... ya now she is scared of his DHAMKI if majnu catch her than god noes what happened to her after all he is a DON ... HEY ... !!! SLEEPING BEAUTY I M TALKING TO U he wave his hand front of her ... that voice came in her reality... she look at him so innocently ...

OK FINE YOUR TIMES UP !!! HEY LISTEN he shouts but before majnu bhai listen and react ... manya took her hand on uday's mouth n they both hide behind the car now there position is manya hands on uday's mouth they kept sitting front of each other look into each other eyes ... now for the first time in history he feel something different he never felt before this kind of feelings he look at her big brown eyes who gave him PLZ DON'T TELL ANYBODY LOOK ... don't noe why but these eyes are really familier to him ... remind him to someone but couldn't figure out WHOM ??? n in other side manya who couldn't beleive after so many years or i say 16 years HE FOUD ME wait did i say he found me not yet !!! I FOUND HIM she correct her self in her mind ... she can't beleive she is sitting front of her fiance ... n here he don't have any idea who am i !!!

they both kept looking at each other past 10 min ... now she broke the silence in wispering way she said OK I TELL YOU WHO I M N WHY I M DOING HERE BUT FIRST YOU PROMISED ME YOU HELP ME OUT TO GETOUT FROM HERE ... !!! in other side don't noe why but HE accept her deal HE NODS ...

in same wispering tone she said HAYE !!! MY NAME IS MANYA I M JOUNRALIST ... N THAT PERSON she pointing her finger to majnu bhai he is a drug dealer n i took some pictures of him with his drugs n i m doing my job very well but my phn buzzed on wrong time n he saw me so i ran away from there n he try to catch me ... before she could complete herself someone took her hand on her sholder ...

her heart stop beating someone caught her she looked at uday n said very softly HE IS BEHIND ME RIGHT ? uday couldn't speak because of her hand who was resting on his mouth he noddes

she closed her eyes n muttered WHY ALWAYS ME ? she take her hand off from uday's mouth she opened her eyes n turn around n look at majnu ... he is smiling at her like an idiot ... so you are here ... he said very softly n in a second his mambers surounded them ... NOW WHO WILL SAVE YOU FROM ME ? majnu said with evil smile


...


WHERE SHE IS ??? he shouts make shivered murari like hell ... I DON'T NOE he clutch his hairs n threw him on the wall U DON'T WHERE SHE IS ? he clutch his coller and punch hard on his face

STOP IT !!! that voice make him stop ... !!! turn around n look at the person who was standing behind the bars ... murari open his eyes n trying to figure out who is he ? that person came inside the bars ... murari eyes just pop out from the sockets he is none other than maharaj brijraj of devghar ... brijraj looks at him wid bloo shot eyes ...

he CLUTCH his coller... titly...

U TAKE MY DAUGHTER AWAY FROM ME WHERE SHE IS ?

murari said loudly SHE IS NOT YOUR DAUGHTER !!!

DON'T TEST MY PATENCE MURARI he barked at him ...

She is my daughter ... !!! He shouts

where she is ?

MURARI LOOK AT HIM WITH EVIL SMIRK N BARKED

SHE IS GONE !!!

...


I WANT MURARI OUT FROM THERE ... she shouts look at another person who was really scared of her ...

MAM ... ITS IMPOSSIBLE ... MAHARAJ BRIJRAJ he try complete his sentence but she cut him off

so that man thoughts he found her with the help OF watchman HUH !!! REALLY ? SHE LAUGHED !!!

she looked at him n said KILLED THAT MURARI !!!! said with evil smirk


...

if u try to touch me than !!! she try to thriting him... majnu looked at her wid are u srs look ?

STOP THRITING HIM he have a guns n we don't have ... anything ... uday said with greeting his teeth ...

she look at uday n said again if u try to touch me than this person will kill you for sure she pointing her fingure on uday ... uday look at her with are u out of ur mind look ? n she gave him a chizzy smile ...

NOW ITS ENOUGH !!! KILLED HER !!! majnu barked

but before one of his gang mamber reached uday came forword like a bodyguard DON'T TRY TO TOUCH HER ... !!! he said with warning tone ...

n than fights begain ...

uday fight like bollywood hero ...

manyta also take danda n try to hit everyone ...

at the end uday won the battle...majnu bhai's gang mammber lay on the floor ... life less.. uday look at majnu with srs look n said dromatic way AB TERA KYA HOGA KALIA


NOW I M DONE WITH THIS CHAPPY ... PLZ DO COMMENT N LIKE


KRITS 😳














Edited by -Kritika- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb update
the new characters are nice
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nyc...
And nt finding words wht 2 tell. I love bobo, even more than UV,even I won't mind in BoYa.😆. Thnks 4 keeping Akash in only secret admirer[seems lyk u also don't lyk Akash like me]😉. And picture choosing & CS was just perfect. Really awsum,kritz di😃 . Hope UV saves Manya, after all he's the hero.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome one kritz..
I m loving the character sketch soo much..especially bobo n abhi..
They both sounds too mysterious😕👏

Mayu does sounds in some deep trouble..where is uv..I missed him..hope he solves this issue soon enough.
Loved it👏

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