i never falling for u ... CHAPTER 6 ON PG 14

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Firstly hey guyz whats up ? Today i m

updating i never falling for you.. 3rd

chappy!!! Read n enjoy ... N plz do like n

comment ...

I never falling for you !! Oops i did


Chapter 3


Recap : dr shaab aap kya baat kar rhe hai ? dadishaab luk at him wid

confused expression


komal come inside n luk at dadisaab wid tense luk


kya hua maa shaab


dadishaab turn her face n luk at komal n said


MURARI PAKDA GAYA ... !!!


Present


Kya khe rhe hai aap ??? Brijraj shout loudly on dr shaab ...

Dadishaab look at brijraj n said softly shaant ho jaye brijraj !!!

How can i ? Maashaab ... !!! He found him ... But they didn't find my

daughter yet ... !! I don't noe where she is ? She is alive or not ?

brijraj try to complete his sentence ... But stop in middle ... As he is

really hurt or maybe guilty ... N he take a deep breath griraj come

forward to him n take his hand on his shoulder to console him he

turn his face look at dr shaab and said straight forward to him

" I WANT MY DAUGHTER BACK IN ANY COST WHEATHER

SHE IS ALIVE OR NOT" dr shaab nodded n... Without gave him

a second look he goes out !!!


Komal start crying dadishaabh try to console her don't worry komal

we will find manyta soon ... Just faith on god ... !!


In other side


Manya try to hide herself from uday ... N uday is continue-sly looking at

her... He have a gut felling that she have

something up to !!! but He don't understand what it is ?


In other side


jagat is talking to j but j is not listening ... As she is buzzy to look at

uday n she is trying to figure out what is going on?


N suddenly voice come


BAAM !!! ( bullet sound)


Everyone got scared n look at the main door ... Daadishaabh ,

dr shaabh, brijraj,grijraj,komal,menka everyone just come out

... N they all were looking at the main door


There is a person who is standing front of the main door.He

have a gun in his hand n behind him five mens are standing

with AK47 they look like a bodyguards


Manya just look at the person (SHOCKINGLY) she never

thought he will find her so soon. That time just one word

escape from her mouth n that is (MAJNU BHAI) she mummed

in low voice


Majnu bhai shout out loud NO ONE CAN MOVE !!! HANDSUP


Brijraj shout who the hell are you ? Guards?? Guards???

Where the hell everyone is ?? Tum andar kese aye? Ye

humari party m ho kya rha hai ?


Majnu bhai point his gun toward brijraj n shout SHUT UP !!!


WHERE SHE IS ??


Everyone look at him confusingly as they were not

understanding what he is talking about ?


Brijraj shout who ?


THAT GIRL ... WHAT IS HER NAME ? As he asking for his

gang member


MAJNU BHAI ...MANYA !!!


Manya hide herself in under the table...


Uday go forward ... N asked him WHOM YOU ARE TALKING

ABOUT ? WE DON'T NOE ANY KIND OF MANYA ...


Majnu shouts again SHUT UP !!! I NOE SHE IS HERE !!! SHE

IS SO CLEVER I WANT HER ...IN ANY COST !!! GO N

SEARCH HER as he command his gang member's ...


Dadishaabh came front of him n said BAS BHOTH HUA !!!

AAP YHA SE ABHI ISI WAQT CHALE JAIYE WARNA HUME

MAJBOORAN POLICE KO BULANA PADEGA !!! YHA

HUMARE MHEMAAN AYE HUE HAI ... OR YE HUMARA

GHAR HAI ... NIKAL JAIYE YHA SE ABHI ISI WAQT

DR SHAABH JALDI SE COMISHNER KO PHN LAGAIYE

HUMARE GHAR MAI HUM ESI GUNDA GARDI BARDASH

NHI KARENGE ...


Majnu bhai look at ds angrily ... FINE !!! ABHI KE LIYE M JA

RHA HU US LADKI KI KISMAT BHOTH ACHI HAI JO AAJ

VO BACH GAYI LEKIN ITHNI ASANI SE i can't leave her ...


N he just get out from there ... !!


Manya take a relief sign n get out from the table


She thought NOW I SHOULD LEAVE ...BEFORE SOME

OTHER PROBLEM CREAT ... !!!


She take a back step n try to get out from the house ... Uday

is continue sly watching her behaviour ... She just get out

from the house uday followed her


Outside ... !!!


She take a relief sign THANK GOD I M SAFE


She turn around n look at the chocolaty brown eyes were

glair at her she just dumb stuck


So miss shanya singhaniya ? Where are you going ?


Manya look at another side n said ummm ?? Actually i need

some fresh air .. Thats why !!


Oh no its kk ? So miss shanya singhaniya what you do ?

I mean what is ur profession ?


Cough!!! cough !!! I ...ummm.. I am teacher ?


Oh really in which school ? cough !!! Cough !! Ummm elite

international public school ... !!


Really ? But jagat told me you have a business in new-york !!


Really ?? I have ??? ...yeh i have !!! Actually i m a mullite

talented person i will taught business related things from

new cummers


WOW !!! I M REALLY IMPESSED


But why are you asking me this kind of questions ?


Because i noe you are not shanaya sighaniya !!!


Manya is dumb stuck


Continue ...


Plz do comment n like properly ...


Next update


She is my daughter ... !!! He shouts where she is ?

SHE IS GONE !!!


In other side

She touch on the wall ... Hum ek hi min mai inssan ke bare m

pta lga le te hai par tum humare pale kyu nhi aa rhi ? Phele

khud situation creat karti ho fir problem mai fasti ho Gundo

se ladti ho raat ko night club aati ho AKHIR HO KON TUM ?


Akhir Kon hu mai?? rishte mai tho hum tumhare baap lagte

hai or naam hai shensha !!!


kritz 😳

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Posted: 10 years ago
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if you guyz are confused why in this story there is two threads so i can explain when i write this story i make a one thread i never falling for you ... but unfortunately because of circumstances i couldn't update so that thread is locked than i make a new one ... so here is the link of first and second chapter so please open it read it yourself

this is the link of chapter 1 & chapter 2



http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3948513


chpter 3 on pg 1

chapter 4 on pg 6

Note on pg 9

apologies AND CHAPTER 5 on pg 10
Edited by -Kritika- - 8 years ago
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Awsm dear pls continue soon and do pm me
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WOW!! beautiful update dear...loved it
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Oye Kritz Chap 1 And 2 And Prologue Kidhar Hain... 😛


aND gUYZZZ Here Is Link For Kritz Story Previous Chaps And Prologue... 😊


Edited by alisha_ashiyal - 10 years ago
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And Awesome Chapter... 😊
Edited by alisha_ashiyal - 10 years ago
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hi there... 😊
Awsome story.. 😊 😳
please update soon and pm me too plsss 😊 😃
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Riveting, superb and mindblowing update
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13 Likes Done... 2 To Go For Next Update... 😊 😃
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awesome update
so police found murari 👏
hope they will also find manyata soon
god why that majnu bhai want manya 😡
loll manya got shocked that uday got her lie 😲
precap look interesting
continue soon

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