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Hi friends. I just wrote the beginning of a story. Idk exactly where it's going to go. Hope u enjoy reading!! Apologies for any errors in advance.


1st Chapter

Finally Myrah had managed to escape from the Devgarh Palace . She vowed she would leave before the week had ended. She was out on the sixth day. Five days after she was kidnapped by that arrogant, pig-headed, egocentric masochist Prince Udayveer of Jaigarh. Who the hell was he telling her that she was his Princess who had been missing for 16 long years, and now he thinks he was going to make her is bride...no actually Queen, because of a stupid promise made between both their families. How 18th century was that??

She didn't consider anyone in the Devgarh Palace her family. They were all strangers with titles. Her real family was her Father Murari Lal, a Watchmaker from Bandra. He was now going through hell, because of that beast Udayveer. How could anyone dare accuse her Father of abducting her. The world has definitely gone mad. He was the one that paid for her education and bought her up. She was going to be a journalist until all this drama happened. She didn't want to be a part of any soap opera Royal or not. She just wanted her Dad.

This family was quite a mixed bag of personalites. The Matriarch or Daadisaab, always looking stern and in control of everything and everyone. The wanna be gangsta rapper with his bling , her so called Father Brijraj, he looked like a man with lots of secrets, if anyone was to find out it would tarnish the family honour. The Sati Savitri, her Mother Komal, she must've have suffered being married to that Busta Rhymes wanna be!! Poor woman. Myrah for some strange reason was drawn to her. She was so loving and caring. Then there was Jai, her so called sister. OMG !! She was so full of herself, spoilt rich bitch, always had to have the latest fashions and trends. A total media darling. Her cousin Vijay Bhai, he was quite strange, he seemed to hang around Jai quite a bit just like a lost puppy. Didn't he not have a mind of his own or not? Auntie Menaka, Vijays' mother, well she didn't have much say in the goings on in the Palace, so she might feel slightly ostracized by the family.

Oh she couldn't leave out the family she was going to marry into...or not. Not if she could help it. First impressions of Unati; The Beasts' sister was that she was very understanding, sweet and very grounded. She kind of understood Myrahs' predicament. How on earth did she manage to have a brother like The Beast...ok like the high and mighty Udayveer. She must be just like her late Mother. Last but not least there was Him... Prince Udayveer of Jaigarh also nick named The Beast plus all the other names she had hurled at him when they first met. He was vain, smug, an outrageous flirt and all the ladies and the media loved him. I bet his mobile was full of names from the whole (English) alphabet. She hadn't met His father because he was away on business. She imagined him to a slightly tamer version of Uday. Well she would never know now would she? She also hoped that she'll never see The Beast Uday again...She was going back to get her Father out of jail and get herself a job at The Hindu Times. Noone would get in her way not even that Prince Udayveer!!




















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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey😊
Amazing chapter👏
It's very interesting
Love how she describes the family and refers to Uday as a beast
Lol, it super cute
Please update soon
Please pm me 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I KNOW IM VERY MUCH LATE.. REALLY SORRY FOR THAT.. AND NOW COMING TO UPDATE IT WAS EXCELLENT ... REALLY LOVE THE WAY HOW SHE DESCRIBES THE UDAY'S CHARACTER.. 😊
AND PLZ CONTINUE IT SIS... 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks everyone for ur comments. I haven't been able to update this story because I have been writing this story on my phone and it broke! :'-(. As soon as it's fixed I'll be on it. Much love xx
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Originally posted by: jagz11

Thanks everyone for ur comments. I haven't been able to update this story because I have been writing this story on my phone and it broke! :'-(. As soon as it's fixed I'll be on it. Much love xx




Okayyy.. Will Be Waiting For It... 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Heyy Jagz Plzz Update It... 😊 Plzzz.. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey, how you? 😊
Please update soon
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To all my if buddies . I'm back in the building. Iwill post Chapter 2 very soon. I know some some of you have waiting forever!! Love u all. Xx 😊😛❤️


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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice start. continue soon, and do add me 2 ur pm list😉
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Originally posted by: jagz11

To all my if buddies . I'm back in the building. Iwill post Chapter 2 very soon. I know some some of you have waiting forever!! Love u all. Xx😊😛❤️




Hey, how you? 😊
First of all, welcome back... 😃
We missed you loads and I'm eagerly waiting for chapter 2
So will be waiting
Love you too ❤️
Please do pm 😊

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