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PREVIOUS : CHAPTER 7.3

CHAPTER 8


Uday had finally achieved forgiveness from the kids, elders had not forgiven him & Vijay yet. He had come close to Manu, he for the first time in years was felling a connection to someone the part of him which was lost when HIS PRINCESS was kidnapped. Seeing Manu with boys irrespective it was Rohan,Vijayinder Aditya or Jagat he was getting jealous. Where kids were back to almost normal with each other the elder of Devgargh & Jaigarh were still not forgiven by anyone. The kids are sitting and talking Manu's phone rings. She picks it.

Khush says "Hey SWEETHEART how every thing."

Manu smiles

Manu says "SWEETHEART"

Uday unknowingly gets jealous.Manu adding Manu says "everything is fine I miss you,are you here this time."

Aditya puts it on speaker

Khush says "Sorry SWEETHEART next time 100% promise"

Jagat says "Hmm call us also sometimes..."

Aditya adding

Aditya says "sweetheart"

Khush says "So I am on speaker...Adi, Jaggi you better take care of MY SWEET HEART" Aditya say "YOURS! since when did you get the prime exclusive right."

Jagat says "Ya exactly"

Manu smack them both.

Laxshmi & Saraswati together say "You both had fun"

Surya say Angel how many time have you both had this discussion, it has never helped."

Khush cutting in

Khush says "Hey Jija Bhabhi, Bade Dada, Jijiya Bhabhi, Dada."

Kanika adding

Kanika says "Devarjis you both, he & Manu are like that since I have seen."

Rohan adding

Rohan says "Manu is on with Khushi & soon with."

Looking at Jainandini. Rohan adding
Rohan says some one else & you two are on with him & Karo it will never help.

Khush say "Hey Bade Jiju, Badi Jiji."

Manu asking

Manu says "Where are you?"

Khush says "Singapore"

Manu say "Okay but come soon miss you SWEETHEART."

Uday was so very jealous he walked away to his room. Manu saw this and was confused looked at Vijay, Jainandini & Unnati they were also superised he never acted like this he didn't fell jealous of any girl talking to any guy after MANAYATA was kidnapped. A little while later there a noise of glass breaking. Everyone rush to see what happened.

Unnati says "Dada you hand."

Jainandini asking

Jainandini say "Uday what happened?"

Vijayinder asking

Vijayinder says "Why are you angry?"

Manu brings a first aid box giving it to Unnati.

Manu says "Put some antiseptic before it becomes septic."

Unnati puts cream & a bandage.

Uday says "Leave me alone"

Unnati concerned asking

Unnati says "Dada what happened?"

Uday shouting

Uday says "Unnati just leave."

Vijay & Jainandini are shocked. Uday never calls Unnati by name,pushes Unnati everyone is shocked.

Giriraj asking

Giriraj says "Prithvi Bhaisa, Chote Bhiasahab what happened what did the kids say?"

Prithvi answering

Prithvi says "our kids are not insensitive like you"

Brijraj asking

Brijraj says "did Manasvi say something about Manayata?"

Jai irrited answering

Jai says "Manu isn't insensitive like you all."

Mernalni says "four of you just shut up."

Vijayinder adding

Vijayinder says "but nothing happened"

They all hear Manu talking to Unnati.

Manu says "Unzs shh he is your brother he just angry not that I know why but angry, he will be fine"

Looking at Rohan continuing

Manu says "these elder brothers are unpredictable."

Looking at Jainandini. Manu asks adding

Manu says "what say"

Jainandini look at Vijayinder laughing

Unnati says "Dada"

Manu adding

Manu says "You mean Devdas."

Unnati starts laughing

Jainandini says "that does the magic as always SRK IS THE BEST."

All the girls

They say "YES SRK IS THE BEST."

Vijayinder, Surya, Dharam, Rohan, Aditya & Jagat frustrated

The boys together

They say "NOT AGAIN SRK PURAN."

Mernalni, Rothoregarh Elder, Rajgarh Elders, Devgarh Elders, Jaigarh Elders & the kids laugh together.

Vasundhara, Komal & Menika are outside Uday's room. Uday takes out Manayata's photo

Uday says "PRINCESS what happening to me you know I LOVE YOU ONLY, I don't know I fell like I have a connection with Manasvi, I have never felt like this for any other girl till day when I see her with other boys I fell jealous with so much of effort everyone has forgiven me but today when Manasvi was talking on the phone to God knows who she said SWEET HEART I felt so jealous no body else reacted they all seem to know who that was I don't know anything."

The ladies standing outside had called the three people one being Brijraj second being Giriraj & third being Vijay on their phone were on speaker. Everyone was there heard this except Manu she was on the phone with Kartik. Vasundhara went in the room.

Vasundhara asking

Vasundhara says "Beta what happened."

Uday confused

Uday says "Don't know Mom"

Vasundhara concerned

Vasundhara says "Are you fine."

Uday says "Ya"

Uday looks at his hand

Uday say "Choti, did I say some thing to her, call her mom."

Unnati, Jainandini & Vijay are on the door. Uday see her calls her in.

Menika says "take care there a lot of glass on the ground."

A maid comes from behind

Maid says "Hokum can I clean the room if it is fine."

They nod she cleans

Uday says "Sorry Choti I was angry & confused I shouldn't have been rude to you."

Unnati smiles

Unnati says "It's fine"

Uday concerned

Uday say "What did I say Vijay Banna."

Jainandini answering

Jainandini says "To get lost"

Uday hugs Unnati

Uday say "Komal Aunty I scolded Choti but some one else is being scared."

Vijayinder protectively

Vijayinder says "You were scary Uday."

Menika adding

Menika says "Uday beta."

Looks at Vasundhara. Uday noticing

Uday asks "what did I do except that"

Mernalni answering

Mernalini says "Uday beta you were violent."

Laxshmi protectively

Laxshmi says "Rajmata you are scaring him."

Saraswati adding

Saraswati says "Rajmata let it be glass has been cleared."

Uday scared

Uday says "Jija,Jijiya you both are scaring me more."

Surya smiles & adding

Surya says "These two are in habit of doing this"

Dharam adding further

Dharam says "Over protective sisters."

Uday asking

Uday says "What did I do."

Kanika answering

Kanika says "Nothing just have this."

Uday asking

Uday says "What's this"

Kanika answering

Kanika says "Haldi milk it will reduce pain."

Uday making a face

Uday says "I don't like it."

Rohan laughs

Rohan says "Everyone has to have when some one gets hurt irrespective of you like it or not"

Pragya says "Yuvraj Uday Veer Singh you are surrounded with sisters you can't say no."

Vasundhara says "Just have it."

Vijay say "Out of experience convincing J isn't easy"

Surya adding

Surya says "Convincing the Rajkumari Jainandini might be easy."

Dharam addsing on

Dharam says "But convincing J the sister wouldn't be"

Rohan says "Uday, poor you,"

Uday asking

Uday says "Dada what do you mean"
Vasundhara answering

Vasundhara says "You are stuck on both ends Uday asking "means"

Komal says "You can't say no to elder sisters as they are elder..."

Mernalni adding

Mernalini says "nither can you deny your younger sisters as they are your younger sister."

Uday concluding

Uday says "Basically I have to have it."

Unnati laughs & asking

Unnati says "does this inforcement ever happen here Jija"

Everyone together says "Manu alone is enough no one goes against her orders hum sab to kya pura Pune mein koi nahi"

Vijayinder looking around asking

Vijayinder say "when every one is here, where is Manu."

Rohan answering

Rohan says "Outside talking on the phone."

Everyone is silent. Dharam puts on a small recorded clip Manu says "Hey Sweetheart, Sweet heart are you back, Sweetheart miss you, Sweetheart come back soon it finishes, Kids except Vijay,Jainandini, Unnati & Uday know firstly this is a recorded clip & secondly it is Khush. Uday gets jealous unknowingly everyone notices. Elders move out. Rohan, Surya & Dharam take chairs & sit. Jainandini & Unnati go & stand with Vijay. Uday doesn't know his emotions were in front of everyone & also his fellings for Manu too

Uday says "Rohan Dada where is Manasvi

Rohan answering


Rohan says "She gone to meet her friend."

Uday says "Again"

Surya answering

Surya says "roz jaati hai

Dharam asking

Dharam says "Kya hova?"

Vijay adding

Vijay says Uday Badi Bhabhi was saying aaj toh 'SWEET HEART' bhi vahan hoga."

Saraswati, Kanika & Laxshmi smile. Jainandini adding

Jainandini says "Dada haven't Adi & Jaggi also gone with her."

Unnati adding

Unnati says "Isn't it obvious J they always are with Manu Jiji even in Mumbai they were always there."

Uday asking
Uday says "Where have they gone, how far is it from here."

Surya asking again

Surya says "why do you want know."

Uday ignores and asking

Uday says "When are they back"

Dharam answering

Dharam "Tomorrow Morning."

Uday superised

Uday says "Morning"

Rohan answering

Uday says "Yes"

Kanika asking

Kanika says "Why?"

Uday says "I had to talk to Jaggi."

Laxshmi says "Jaggi... ok I will call him ...after he done he will go back."

Uday happy

Uday says "Jija, okay call him."

Jagat comes

Jagat says "You called Jija...you know Manu she is busy talking aur kisse ko baat karne ki chance khaina milige, after all."

Looking at Uday. Jagat adding

Jagat says "it's her SWEETHEART, why did you call Jija?"

Surya informing

Surya says "Uday wants to talk business."

Jagat sad

Jagat says "Business...but everyone is here & any ways abhi there is a lot of work already."

Uday looking forward

Uday says "Jagat you came alone."

Jagat says "Yes"

Rohan simply says "business happens Jaggi so obviously he will come alone."

Saraswati adds asking

Saraswati says "Were you expecting some else."

Uday nervously

Uday say "Jijiya...Manu."

Jainandini asking

Jainandini says "so you want to talk..."

Unnati adding

Unnati says "Not to Jaggi Dada."

Vijayinder with a sad face adding on

Vijayinder says "Uday Manu"

Rohan says "Vijay"

Vijay realise he gave the wrong signal to Uday
Uday says "Not that Vijay Dada."

Jainandini & Unnati smack him & the other give him a look that said shut up. Jagat straight going to point.

Jagat says "Yuvraj Uday Veer Singh DO YOU LIKE MY SISTER MANU."

Uday realises everyone guessed about his feelings

Uday says "Jaggi not like that."

Surya asking

Surya says "Then like what Yuvraj Uday Veer Singh."

Dharam adding

Dharam says "Be warned Yuvraj Uday Veer Singh you are talking about our sister."

The elders are standing outside.

All the ladies together says "Uday beta a few minutes ago you were surrounded by sisters love & now the brothers, you be man enough to accept your feelings & face the brothers"

The men complete

Men says "you are after all a Rajwade & a Yuvraj so go for it."

Unnati , Jainandini & Vijayinder say together "don't expect help from us, BEST OF LUCK."

Uday asking

Uday says "Where is Aditya he also didn't come."

Laxshmi, Kanika & Saraswati say together "Bad start Yuvraj Uday Veer Singh."

Uday adds asking

Uday says "First the elder leave me alone then Choti, J & Vijay Banna and now you also Jija, Jijiya & Badi Bhabhi you too leave me alone."

Aditya adding

Aditya says "Somebody is missing me."

Uday happy

Uday says "Adi"

Aditya says "Yuvraj Uday Veer Singh you are forgetting the name it's not Adi but Aditya, I never thought Yuvraj of Jaigarh was so dumb, you Yuvraj Uday Veer Singh you are talking about MY SISTER MANAYA ...I am sorry YUVRANI MANASVI KUMARI RAJ SINGH."

Uday realises he is stuck from all side. Uday asking

Uday say "Is Manasvi back,"

Aditya answering

Aditya says "no, Manaya wouldn't be back before morning in any case."

Dharam asking again

Dharam says "You haven't answered me Yuvraj Uday Veer Singh."

Surya warning

Surya says "This is not some business deal...SHE IS OUR SISTER."

Uday says "I like her...but as a friend."

Everyone says "Okay then."

Jagat says with a smirk

Jagat say "Adi, Manu is still talking to HER SWEETHEART' has any body got a chance yet Aditya answering "Not exactly, except you know who?"

Vijayinder, Jainandini, Unnati & Uday asking together.

They say "Who?"

Every one outside & inside together says together "KHUSHI"

Uday smile thinks she might help, everyone looks at Uday & smiles.

Jagat says "Uday Veer Singh if you are smiling thinking KHUSHI will help you any way you are mistaken."

Aditya adding

Aditya says "Khushi & Manu are best friends since school."

Rohan says "Yuvraj Uday Veer Singh face the truth."

Uday says "Dada I want to be friends already things between us started on a bad note."

Laxshmi say "Uday that all Manu has forgotten & forgiven you & Vijay already."

Saraswati adding

Saraswati says "Just forget it."

Kanika adding further

Kanika says "Uday you have cracked many deals till date but I promise cracking this relation will be very heard Yuvraj Uday Veer Singh."

Jagat warning

Jagat says "be warned"

Aditya adds on

Aditya says "you just might fall in love with her."

Rohan concluding

Rohan says "Don't mind but you might get over Manayata also."

Everyone was happy Aditya & Jagat left again. Uday was desperate the whole night waiting for Manu, had a extremely restless sleep.

Edited by JADEKKD - 9 years ago
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Heyyy Sis . I'm Sry I'm Pretty Much Late.. 😔 Now Coming To Updates All Were Very Beautifully Written.. 😊 And My Weak Point At The Start Of The Story Was There Were Too Many Characters To Remeber.. 😔 And Now I'm Okay With It.. 😊 And Now Loved The Improving Relations Of Uday With Manasvi Peoples Or Her Loved Ones.. 😊 Loved The Feeling Of Uday Which He Is Having For Manasvi... 😊 Desparately Waiting For The That Update In Which U Will Reveal Manasvi Real Identity That She Is Long Lost Princess Of Devgarh... 😊 And Uday's Princess.. 😊 Keep Updating The Story... And Plzzz Reveal The TruthAs Soon As Possible.. 😊 Thank U For The Scrap And PM... 😊
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Originally posted by: alisha_ashiyal

Heyyy Sis . I'm Sry I'm Pretty Much Late.. 😔 Now Coming To Updates All Were Very Beautifully Written.. 😊 And My Weak Point At The Start Of The Story Was There Were Too Many Characters To Remeber.. 😔 And Now I'm Okay With It.. 😊 And Now Loved The Improving Relations Of Uday With Manasvi Peoples Or Her Loved Ones.. 😊 Loved The Feeling Of Uday Which He Is Having For Manasvi... 😊 Desparately Waiting For The That Update In Which U Will Reveal Manasvi Real Identity That She Is Long Lost Princess Of Devgarh... 😊 And Uday's Princess.. 😊 Keep Updating The Story... And Plzzz Reveal The TruthAs Soon As Possible.. 😊 Thank U For The Scrap And PM... 😊

do keep reading, commenting & liking... The chapter will be on Sunday...the realisation of her being MANAYATA will come to uday in another 2 to 3 chapters... So keep reading
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do keep reading, commenting & liking... The chapter will be on Sunday...the realisation of her being MANAYATA will come to uday in another 2 to 3 chapters... So keep reading




Ohhh I Will Be Looking Forward Towards It... 😊
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hey dear awesome chapter n promo... update soon 😊
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PREVIOUS : CHAPTER 8

CHAPTER 9.1

Everyone is eating but Aditya, Manu, Jagat are not there. After a few minutes Jagat come

Jagat says "Good Morning"

Then Aditya comes

Aditya says "Good Morning, where is Manaya not here?"

Jagat says "I thought she was with you."

Surya calls the maids

Surya says "where is Angel is she sleeping."

Dharam say "sleeping Pari...not possible."

Laxshmi adding

Laxshmi says "Might have got up late."

Saraswati adding on

Saraswati says "Might be getting ready."

Kanika informing

Kanika says "I went her room she wasn't there."

Rohan stands up call all the maids. Rohan asking.

Rohan says "Where is Manaya."

Rohan, Aditya, Dharam, Surya & Jagat

They says "ANSWER NOW"

Maid 1 says "Hokum Yuvranisa was on the phone when I saw her."

Maid 2 adding

Maid 2 says "Hokum she is in study busy doing some thing she said she doesn't want be distributed."

Prithvi & Jai stand up ordering

They say "Call her to eat food now."

Neelam & Pragya authoritatively

They say "You all start we will go call her."

Everyone understood what she doing, Menika asking

Menika says "What happened?"


All the kids, Jai, Prithvi, Pragya & Neelam give them a look. They all understood. Pragya & Neelam go.

Jainandini asking

Jainandini says "Dada can I go & meet Manu Jiji."

Aditya & Jagat go to Manu with food. Rohan doesn't answer. Khush calls Rohan's phone.

Khush says "Bade Jijusa, it's Khush,is every thing fine."

Rohan puts the phone on speaker.

Khush continuing

Khush says "why is Manaya not picking up her phone."

Rohan is confused. Kanika asking

Kanika says "haven't you talked to Manu in the morning."

Khush answering

Khush says "Bade Jijusa, Badi Jiji that was Pano not me."

Kanika says "Okay, it's almost a month... we did even recover her body ...call her letter."

Khush says "okay"

A little while letter Luv, Khushi, Ashwariya & Arjun come go straight to the study. Neelam & Pragya come to the table and start eating nobody says anything. A little while latter Luv, Ashwariya & Arjun come to table.Everyone looks at them.

They says "She is coming."

Khushi joins them & Jagat sits on the table the food is kept back no one has eaten anything every one is shocked. Aditya & Manu come Manu's eyes are swollen after crying. Vijayinder, Jainandini, Unnati & Uday see her they go towards her Laxshmi & Saraswati stop Jainandini & Unnati they both look at them. Same time Surya & Dharam stop Vijay & Uday they both look at them all the four are confused, shocked, superised, hurt, worried, & tensed. The four are stop. Laxshmi, Saraswati & Kanika are shocked to see Manu like this she was wearing a plain white salwar kamizee & her eyes were swollen.

Manu says "DAATABHAI"

Rohan hugs her

Rohan says "shh! Your Daatabhia is still alive don't worry, stop crying angle today my pari will eat with me."

He makes her eat food with love & care. Aditya, Jaggi, Aru, Luv, Ash, Khushi you all also eat Everyone eats.Vijay, Jainandini, Unnati, Uday are watching this.

Kanika asking

Kanika says "Manu why are you dressed like."

Laxshmi adding

Laxshmi says "This is not good angel."

Saraswati concluding

Saraswati says "Stop punishing yourself Pari."

Kanika, Laxshmi & Sarswati hug her

Surya says "Manu your our angel not good
Dharam continuing

Dharam says "Absolutely Pari not good at all."

Surya & Dharam go hug her tightly

Rohan says "My Angel go & change now."

Manu says "Daatabhia but..."

Prithvi & Jai together cut in

That say "Bacha you heard your Daatabhia."

Manu sad

Manu says "Mamusa, Dadsa but..."

Pragya & Neelam commandingly cut in

They says "Other wise party cancelled."

Manu says "Mamisa, Mamusa but... "

Laxshmi & Saraswati together says "Manu go now."

Manu says "Jija, Jijiya but DI."

Luv, Khushi, Ashwariya & Arjun hug her.

Aditya & Jagat

They says "Absolutely now"

Manu phone rings. Luv takes it & picks it. He had told Khush every thing & send him Manu's photo. On the phone

Khush says "SWEETHEART what's this"

Manu says "hmmm"

Everyone knows who it is, Aditya knows it's is the last resort for making Manu happy.
Khush with concern.

Khush says "SWEETHEART."

Manu says "today... that...month."

Khush says "SWEETHEART what ever happened was an accident stop crying & you better give me back MY SWEETHEART I WANT MY SWEET HEART BACK FAST I AM EXTREMELY SERIOUS ABOUT THIS SWEET HEART."

Manu says "I need you here now"

Luv, Khushi & Ashwariya comes forward & hug her. Manu continuing

Manu says "SWEETHEART are you here for the party."

Khush sad

Khush says "no SWEET HEART & no one will dear thank me I did what I did for MY SWEET HEART."

Prithvi & Pragya laugh

They says "Beta when are you back."

Khush says "don't know Mamasa Mamisa.'

Jia & Neelam adding on

They say "Come early beta."

Khush says I will try Dad & Mom

Khush adding

Manu says "Adi & Jaggi I am highly
disappointed with you both."

Laxshmi & Saraswati together asking

They say "what did they do. "

Khush laughs

Khush says "Over protective elder sister I tell you,them both were supposed to take care of MY SWEETHEART."

Surya & Dharam definitely

They says "But"

Khush says "Now the Jijues will take their side,first that in..."

Rohan & Kanika cuts in

They say "Let that be."

Khush agreeing

Khush says Absolutely Bade Jijusa , Badi Jiji"

Aditya cuts in

Aditya says "That was Jaggi mistake not mine."

Luv says "Here start the blame game."

Manu smiles

Manu says "SWEETHEART let it be

Manu laughs & continuing

Manu say "this will never change."

Khush smile

Khush says "SWEETHEART ARE YOU LAUGHING."

Aditya says "If those two were my mistakes then MR this your mistake..."

Jagat adding

Aditya says "Manu was talking to you in morning."

Manu looking at Aditya

Manu says "Shut up"

Looks at Jagat

Manu says "who told you I was talking to him." Looking at both with fake angry adding on
Manu says "how could you two even think MY SWEETHEART would do anything to make me sad."

Manu adds on asking

Manu say "SWEET HEART what should I do now."

Khush answering

Khush says "SWEET HEART for starters go change now & you better send you pic after you changed."

Manu asking "SWEETHEART are you free."

Khush smiling

Khush says "Yes SWEET HEART for you always was & always will be."

Manu says "Okay then SWEETHEART."

Luv hugging Manu tightly

Luv says "Manu darling fast, you scared me."

Arjun hugging Manu tightly adds on

Arjun says "Me to"

Khushi says "I & Ash will help."

Aditya, Jagat, Luv & Arjun

They say "DISASTER IN THE MAKING I TELL YOU"

Jagat says "You want me to com Manu"

Manu with a smile

Manu says "Actually take my mobile take care of it,"

Looking at Aditya adding

Manu say "Adi your are coming.

Aditya says "Obviously"

Vijayinder, Jainandini, Unnati & Uday wonder why. Every one is happy. Aditya come there. Aditya notice Uday looks at Laxshmi & Saraswati. All kids except Luv & Arjun realise what Adi is trying to say. Jagat & Aditya message Luv & Arjun that they know. Luv notice Jainandini & Unnati approaching Manu's mobile.Unnati picks the mobile. Aditya comes behind them both shouting

Aditya says "cockroach"

mobile fall out of Unnati's hand Jainandini catches it. It rings Jainandini gets scared Uday & Vijayinder go to their rescue. Jagat see whose call it is. The name flashes that is Pano'. Jagat take the call
Kartik says "My RANI, I want to meet you."

Jagat makes a face. Aditya takes the phone

Aditya says "RAJAJI YOUR RANI IS NOT HERE do with me."

Kartik asking

Kartik says "Adi do me favour."

Jagat takes the phone back, Everyone knows who it is & are happy."

Kartik says "get Manaya..."

Jagat cuts in

Jagat says "Manu, where"

Kartik says "Get her to the outhouse"

Jagat asking

Jagat says "WHY?"

Kartik commanding

Kartik says "Just do it."

Jagat says "okay let her come she is changing."

A few minutes later Manu shouting

Manu says "GET LOST"

Ashwariya & Khushi come down. Ashwariya smiles. Kushi looks at Aditya, he looks other side. Khushi hugs Luv

Khushi says "Dada I was just trying to help Manu"

Luv asking

Luv says "what happened Ash."

Ashwariya says "what always happen."

Surya adding

Surya says "Kushi darling how many times."

Dharam adding on

Dharam says "it wouldn't help"

Kanika adding on

Kanika says "Manu & Adi have been like this

Laxshmi says "since for ever."

Saraswati adding

Sarawati says "They are first priority for each other."

From upstairs. Manu shouting

Manu says "ADI"

Aditya goes up. Jagat comes in tell Surya, Laxshmi, Saraswati, Dharam, Rohan, Kanika, Khushi, Luv, Ashwariya, Arjun & messages Aditya about Kartik's call. Aditya & Manu come down as always they are matching. Every one hugs her. Jagat taking her hand

Jagat says "come with me I have some thing for you."

They go outhouse not that he knew what was there.

Edited by JADEKKD - 9 years ago
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Hey sis, so sorry for the late reply
I'm just so busy with tests and projects that I hardly got time to read and reply

Chapter 8
it was so cute
Love the jealous Uday
The part where he broke the glass, reminded me of how Uday was holding a glass tumbler and it broke to pieces in his hand
Love how he was surrounded by the sisters and then by Manu's brothers
Loved the part where he wanted to talk to Mansavi but said Jaggi's name instead
Loved the part when the ladies told Uday to be man enough to except his feelings and the part where he was desperate to see her and couldn't sleep

Promo 9.1
Beautifully written
I feel so bad for Mansavi
Love how Kush tries to cheer her up

Please do update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: humairaa1

Hey sis, so sorry for the late reply

I'm just so busy with tests and projects that I hardly got time to read and reply
Chapter 8
it was so cute
Love the jealous Uday
The part where he broke the glass, reminded me of how Uday was holding a glass tumbler and it broke to pieces in his hand
Love how he was surrounded by the sisters and then by Manu's brothers
Loved the part where he wanted to talk to Mansavi but said Jaggi's name instead
Loved the part when the ladies told Uday to be man enough to except his feelings and the part where he was desperate to see her and couldn't sleep
Promo 9.1
Beautifully written
I feel so bad for Mansavi
Love how Kush tries to cheer her up
Please do update soon


THANKS FOR FEEDBACK...KEEP READING, REVIEWING, COMMENTING & LIKING

Will wait for ur feedback for future chapter do read chapter 9.1

Here is the link

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4299169&TPN=11

It is at end of page

PROMO OF NEXT CHAPTER WILL BE POSTED ON WEDNESDAY & CHAPTER WILL BE POSTED ON SUNDAY
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Posted: 10 years ago
#60

NOTE

DEAR READERS

Hey there are changes in names of characters on PAGE 1...

You can check not of high concern

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