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Heyyy How's U... 😊 I Know I Have Said Earlier That I Will Read Ur Story.. 😊 And Seriously From Where I Left The Story I Forgot It Then Read It Again From The Start... 😔

And Now Coming To Updates... 😊 It Was Interesting... And Loved The Way How U Expressed Each N Every Characters Feeling... 😊 The Way Of Their Talk... 😊 And Their Improved Relations... 😊 Well Precap Hmmm Manu Is Adopted So Is That It Means That Manyata's Truth Will Be Out And They Will Found It The Manu Is The Long Lost Princess... 😲 If U R Writting It Then Plzzz Quick Becox I Can't Wait.. 😃 And I'm Hell Desparate To Know Their Reactions... 😃 And Sorry Dear For Being Much Late ... 😔
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Originally posted by: alisha_ashiyal

Heyyy How's U... 😊 I Know I Have Said Earlier That I Will Read Ur Story.. 😊 And Seriously From Where I Left The Story I Forgot It Then Read It Again From The Start... 😔

And Now Coming To Updates... 😊 It Was Interesting... And Loved The Way How U Expressed Each N Every Characters Feeling... 😊 The Way Of Their Talk... 😊 And Their Improved Relations... 😊 Well Precap Hmmm Manu Is Adopted So Is That It Means That Manyata's Truth Will Be Out And They Will Found It The Manu Is The Long Lost Princess... 😲 If U R Writting It Then Plzzz Quick Becox I Can't Wait.. 😃 And I'm Hell Desparate To Know Their Reactions... 😃 And Sorry Dear For Being Much Late ... 😔


THANKS FOR COMMENTS...

STILL DEVGARGH & JAIGARGH ARE NOT FORGIVEN, NOR DO THE KIDS (Devgargh & Jaigarh) KNOW YET...

ONLY THE AUDIENCE KNOWS FOR NOW...

UDAY WILL REALISE SOON...

UDAY & VIJAY WILL GET TO KNOW SOON MANU IS ADOPTED...

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Dear READERS,

ONLY ONE MORE LIKE TO GO

AS SOON AS THAT COMES I WILL UPDATE
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Originally posted by: simi.k.

nice update... continue soon 😊


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Originally posted by: simi.k.

😃 😳 😊 nice promo...
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PREVIOUS : CHAPTER 10.1

CHAPTER 10.2

Surya, Laxshmi, Saraswati & Dharam come there.

Sarawati says "Daatasahab didn't you these two had secrets."

Laxshmi adds "Jaggi, Adi & Sher wouldn't like having some one exactly their age getting more importance then them in the house."

Flashback stars

In the orphanage

Maansi calling

Maansi says "Mansa

Manu replying

Manu says "Di coming"

Aditya asking

Aditya says "Manaya why don't you come stay with us there is lot of place in the house."

Manu replying

Manu says "Aditya Raj Singh ji, Di say your houses are big but hearts are small."

Laxshmi & Saraswati don't like this they love Manu but didn't like Maansi because they thought her talks will create distance between them & Manu. They both knew Manu didn't know Aditya was related to them.

Laxshmi calling Manu

Laxshmi says "Manu come here."

Aditya was shocked & scared as Jai had told him not to mingle with orphan age kids.
Saraswati asking

Saraswati says "Manu do you know him."

Manu answering "Yes Jijiya he is Rajkumar
Aditya Raj Singh."

Aditya gives her a look

Manu say "Rajkumar Aditya Raj."

Aditya give a look

Manu says "Rajkumar Aditya"
Aditya again gives her a look

Manu says "Rajkumar Adi"
Aditya again give her a look

Manu says "Aditya Raj ji"

Aditya controlling his irritation gives her a look

Manu says "Aditya ji"

Aditya controlling his irritation & anger gives her a look

Manu says "Aditya"

Aditya gives her a looks

Manu says "Adi ji"

Laxshmi & Saraswati were enjoying the conversation between their going to be legal sister & their younger brother. Aditya with irritation & anger

Aditya says "Manaya how many times I have told you call me Adi."

looking in her eyes & holding her hand in his continues

Aditya says "aren't we friends"

Manu says "That actually Di told me either call you Rajkumar Aditya or Rajkumar Adi or Aditya ji or Adi ji."

Manu had tears in her eyes

Manu says "please never say we are not friends you are the only one who understands when Di doesn't."

Aditya hugs Manu

Aditya say "Manaya we aren't friends we are best friends."

Surya & Dharam come there. Manu see Surya & Dharam, Manu runs to them huggig Surya

Manu says "Bade Bhaisa"

Manu hugs Dharam

Manu says "Bhaisa"

Aditya looking at Laxshmi

Laxshmi says Jija you know Manaya, why did you call her Manasvi

Looking at Saraswati adds

Aditya says "Jijiya why did you call her Manu."

Laxshmi says "She our sister we are adopting her,"

Before Aditya could say anything Jagat comes there

Jagat says "Manu now you shut up & come home & now any ways you are my sister legally." Manu asking

Manu says "Jaggi where is Daatabhia he didn't come to pick me up?"

Aditya walk back to his house in haste.

Everyone is confused, Aditya reaches home & see there are pepreations going on. Jai, Neelam & Rohan see him coming.

Rohan asking

Rohan says "Adi what happened."

Aditya asking

Aditya says "why Mom is Jaggi a made the YUVRAJ after Jija wedding & not me

Neelam asking

Neelam says "what happened?"

Aditya says "Why does he take what I want."
Jai says "You want to be the Yuvraj."

Aditya says "no that Dada is I don't want."

Prithvi & Pragya come are confused. Pragya asking

Pragya says "Then what happened."

Aditya says "Dada tell him not take my best friend from me."

Laxshmi & Saraswati come there. Jai asking

Jai asking

Jai says "where were you."

Saraswati answering

Saraswati says "orphanage"

Aditya says "you were also there."

Prithvi says "beta Jaggi is taking you're best friend... who????"

Aditya answering

Aditya says "Dada MANAYA"

Rohan says "So Adi this is the problem."

Aditya says "Yes"

Rohan says "Little bro some times when people close to you go far they come closer aways remember that."

Aditya says "I am going to my don't disturb me
Laxshmi, Saraswati & Rohan together say "Yes Chote Yuvraj Aditya Raj Singh no one dear disturb you."

Jai, Neelam, Prithvi & Pragya are confused. Jai with angry

Jai says "How many times I told him not to go there"

Saraswati & Rohan say together "Daatasahab stop getting anger."

Rohan adding

Rohan says "I knew he was there, but you don't know who is his best friend.""

Saraswati adding

Saraswati says "you know who is MANAYA"

Prithvi, Pragya, Neelam & Jai ask "WHO????"

Laxshmi, Saraswati & Rohan say together "Manaya is none other..."

Laxshmi says "Maansi's Mansa."

Saraswati says "Jija you still going to play games."

Rohan says "Let's end it here Jija, Jijiya, Manaya is our very own Manasvi."

Jai, Neelam, Prithvi & Pragya together say "Seriously"

Rohan says "Daatasahab the first day Adi mentioned her I had checked so I knew."

Laxshmi & Saraswati together asking
They say "why didn't you tell us?"

Rohan answering

Rohan says "what happened there"

Laxshmi & Saraswati told everyone Aditya & Manu's conversation & his irritation when Manu was NOT HIS BUT JAGAT'S BEST FRIEND & NOT ONLY BEST FRIEND BUT SISTER.

Neelam worried

Neelam says "This is scary this will part the brothers."

Pragya says "Jaggi was only pulling Adi's leg nothing else"

It's Raksha Bandhan. Manu is welcomed Maansi was settles in Rajgarh Estate out house. Raksha Bandhan festivities starts Aditya was watching from far both Laxshmi & Saraswati see him standing, that time Manu was tieing rakhi to Surya & Dharam. Aditya forgot what had happened a while ago & was happy his best friend MANAYA was at least here in his house. Laxshmi & Saraswati went to him to tie him rakhi. Till he could see again Manu was tieing rakhi to Jagat he again got angry he threw the flower vase next to him on floor. Every one looked at him the sound scared Manu hugging softly

Manu says "Daatabhia"

Rohan hugs her back.

Neelam & Jai say together "don't be scared Manu he is just angry."

Prithvi & Pragya say together "Manu see who it is"

Jagat shouting seeing Manu is scared

Jagat says "Adi what non sense."

Dharam says "Jaggi chill it..we know Pari caught scared."

Surya adding on

Surya says "Adi is angry"

Aditya says "I am not scared of you JAGAT SINGH RATHORE he walks away."

Hearing Aditya's voice Manu was happy there is some one she actually knows she walks up to him & holds his hand to stop him Aditya without seeing fling her hand. Manu sad

Manu says "Adi I just want to

Aditya turns back to see Manu she looked scared, nervous & had tears in her eyes with a rakhi in her hand. Aditya hugs her.

Aditya says "Manaya stop crying, I am sorry I didn't know you were holding my hand, Manaya why are you scared I am here no."

Manu laughing

Manu says "may I ..."

Aditya asking

Aditya says "what can't hear"

Manu says "I forgot you are heard of heard ... Can I tie you rakhi Adi."

Aditya says "on one condition...you always going to call me Adi no thing else & you are staying her in my house let me see how you go from, Mom, Dad, Mamusa, Mamisa, Jija, Jijiya, Dada THIS IS MANAYA."

Rohan smiles

Rohan says "seriously, but she is Manasvi my younger sister My Manu, My angel, My Pari
Manu says "Daatabhia let it be he is any ways angry with me from before"

Jai & Neelam says together "We adopted Mansa, which we planning for a while."

Laxshmi says "the name is Manasvi not Mansa"

Saraswati & Rohan say together "that is her official name we will call her Manu."

Jagat says "I will call her Manaya like Adi"

Manu says "Jaggi you call me Manu so why change it & Adi always calls me Manaya let it be like that & both of you stop fighting."

Jagat looking at Pragya & Neelam
Jagat says "I am not going to apology this time"

Aditya looking at Jai & Prithvi says "nor am I."

Manu looking at Laxshmi & Saraswati

Manu says "so these two are not going to apology to each other."

Maansi comes there calling

Maansi says "Mansa"

Manu says "Di"

Starts walk towards her both Aditya & Jagat get scared Maansi will take their sister Manu away from them they both hold on to her

Flashback Ends

Saraswati says "But who knew Manu & Adi will be inseparable."

Prithvi asking

Prithvi says "lf Adi wasn't there where was Jaggi."

Pragya says "exactly"

Laxshmi says "Seriously Masahab, didn't you see."

Surya adding

Surya says "Daatasahab, Masahab we all are angry with the guest over but don't blind yourself."

Saraswati says "Mamusahab, Manu is right aap dono bhure hoge ho, Mamisahab you have lost all your capabilities."
Dharam adding

Dharam says "weren't you the first one to catch Saraswati & me,"

Jai says "wait you kids slow down."

Neelam asking

Neelam says "But who, is it one sided"

Aditya seriously

Aditya says "Mom seriously Jaggi one sided crush."

Jai say "Then"

Manu says "Aag dono traf barab lagi hai"

Aditya says "Rajkumari"

Lakshmi & Sarawati together adding

They say "Jai"

Surya & Dharam adding

They say "Nandini"

Manu adding

Manu says "Brijraj Singh."

Prithvi superised asking

Prithvi says "what"

Pragya asking

Pragya says "when?"

Jai adding

Jai say "how?"

Neelam says "J, that's so nice"

Dharam & Saraswati warning

They say "Don't be so happy."

Surya & Laxshmi

They say "because both of them haven't confessed."

Aditya says "Jaggi told me he is falling in love with J, few months ago."

Manu says "J loves Jaggi"

Surya, Laxshmi Saraswati & Dharam together says "Jaggi is an idiot"

Prithvi asking

Prithvi says "Are you sure Manu"

Aditya says "Manu has been playing Cupid between them both for last one year."

Manu asking

Manu says "Where is Daatabhai."

Aditya adding

Aditya says "And Bhabhima"

Laxshmi & Saraswati say together "Kanika is resting"

Surya & Dharam adding

They say "Rohan is working."

Manu asking

Manu says "guests"

Surya, Laxshmi, Saraswati & Dharam

They say "We should go down"

They leave

Manu says "Mamusa, Mamisa, Dadsa you should also go they will need budha supervision."

They leave but Jai stays

Jai says "Manu bacha you not going to keep any secret from me now."

Neelam says "Jai not again."

Aditya says "Dad just go"

Manu says "Adi please you didn't do anything wrong."

Jai says "Jaggi was with J & you were Khushi you both forgot you sister."

Manu hugs Aditya

Manu says "Dadsa"

Looking at Aditya, Manu adding

Manu says "stop getting guilty & angry on your self."

Neelam says "He just like you Jai."

Manu adding "Absolutely"

Jai adding

Jai says "After all he is my son Manu"

Manu went sad.

Aditya says "Dad stop why do you always make Manaya sad first Uday case & now you telling her she is adopted & not your daughter
In anger & guilt starts to go. Manu holding his hand

Manu says "Adi please don't leave me alone stay

Aditya say "I am always with you always sis no matter who says what."

Manu says "Promise"

Aditya hugs Manu

Aditya says "Promise. Mom Dad you should go I am here."

Neelam & Jai leave.

Manu says "Adi you know what happened."
Aditya says "You fainted I should have been with you & I was with Khushi how could I."
Manu says "Adi not that I hug Yuvraj Uday Veer today before you came & I felt a weird connection."

Aditya says "You think you have some connection with Uday."

Manu says "I think I do, I don't know."

Aditya says "We will see"

Manu asking

Manu says "You will help"

Aditya says "Obviously, for years I have been trying to figure out WHO THIS UDAY IS' whose connection is so strong with my sister that she take his name in your sleep as well as in pain."

Manu smiles

Aditya says "THANK YOU ADI."

Aditya with fake irritation

Aditya says "Since when did this thankyou come in between us we are best friends & siblings we share every thing don't we, at least some thing from your hidden past will be clear, I don't know about others but Maansi Di was your elder sister but not you by blood sister."

Manu says "please forgive yourself."

Aditya says "I couldn't protect you Manu just because I was busy helping Khushi & I am guilty for not fulfilling my promise I have always been with you no matter what since childhood who could I."

Manu says "Adi for me JUST STOP!! BEING MY BEST FRIEND & MY DEAREST BROTHER LISTEN."

Aditya hugs Manu tightly

Aditya says "I can do anything for you Manu but what just happened hurt me a lot do you even remember last when some things similar happened."

Manu hugging him back tightly

Manu says "Adi stop remembering bad memories we all have a lot of good memories.

NEXT : CHAPTER 11
Edited by JADEKKD - 9 years ago
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