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Kanika

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

PREVIOUS : CHAPTER7.1

CHAPTER 7.2

The kids are sitting in the hall and talking other then. Manu, Aditya and Jagat.

Jainadini says "Jija, Jijiya, Bhabhi please forgive..."

Laxshmi cutting in

Laxshmi says "J ask for anything but this."

Surya adding

Surya says "Absolutely."

Jainadini says "Jijiya at least Vijay Bhai"

Dharam says "No J he is grown enough to know what's wrong what's right"

Kanika adding

Kanika says "Sister he claims to love so much MANAYATA' she also wouldn't have liked this."

Rohan asking

Rohan says "Is Kanika wrong Rajkumar Vijayinder Pratap Singh."

Vijayinder couldn't answer as a maid comes there.

Maid says looking at Rohan

Maid says "Bade Yuvrajsa, Yuvrajsa & Jagatji is calling you & Badi Yuvranisa."

Rohan & Kanika go from there.

Rohan says "Manu what happened"

Manu says "Raghu Kakasa"

Kanika with conformity

Kanika says "You didn't do anything wrong." They all go from there. Manu, Aditya and Jagat go to change. Rohan & Kanika come back.

Rohan says "Rajkumar Vijayinder come & sit with us."

Jagat comes there after changing. Uday goes to meet him, Jagat ignoring goes & sit with Laxshmi & Surya telling them what Manu told Rohan & Kanika. Aditya comes next goes & sits with Saraswati & Dharam telling what Manu told Rohan. Manu come there. Manu sitting with Rohan

Manu says "Daatabhia"

Everyone looks at Manu.

Rohan says "What happened in Mumbai was wrong..."

Kanika adding

Kanika says "because of that we kids nither have to spoil our mood nor our relationship with each other"

Laxshmi & Saraswati says together "Our families have been close."

Aditya adding

Aditya says "Haven't they Vijay Dada"

Dharam adding

Dharam says "Obviously Raghu Kakasa."

Vijayinder , Jainandini, Unnati & Uday realised the weak point they had was Raghav Pratap Singh i.e Vijayinder's father & Jainandini's Peternal Uncle. Vijayinder thought it is more necessary know it's their weakness or just Manasvi's. Jainandini nudged him."

Vijayinder says "You all are right"

Everyone say together "Vijay you are forgiven."

Vijayinder hugs them all comes to Manu. VijayInder asking

Vijayinder says "Manasvi I know every one forgiven me but what about you."

Manu hugs Vijayinder

Manu says "Ya Vijayinder Banna I have forgiven you."

Jainandini gives her look. Manu asking

Manu says "J what happened?"

They both are hugging. Vijay looks behind

Manu continued

Manu says "Haa when you hugging MY DAATABHIA what about that."

Surya say "Angel chill"

Manu say "Chill me...I forgot."

Looking at Jainandini Manu adding

Manu says "you ALSO HUG MY BADE JIJUSA Makes a face."

Manu say "MY"

Dharam smiles

Dharam says "take chill bill Pari"

Manu again looking at Jainandini

Manu say "MY BHIASA."

Jainandini smiles

Jainadini says "Jiji it not that, this is good you look like long lost sister brother Vijay Bhai"

Manu smirks

Manu says "Not that bad"

Looks at Unnati Manu adding

Manu says "what say Unzs?"

Both Jainandini & Manu smile. Uday realises he missing out on his Choti for while. Uday look at her, she goes & hugs him.

Vijayinder says "Manasvi..."

Manu cutting in

Manu says "Vijayinder Banna, Daatabhia just said you are family."

Jainandini cutting in

Janandini says "So what"

Manu ignoring Jainandini

Manu says "Manasvi is little to long don't you agree Vijayinder Banna"

Jainandini & Unnati

They say "no it's not."

Manu looking at Jainandini & Unnati

Manu say "I was talking to Vijayinder Banna."

Looks at Vijayinder

Manu says "you can call me Manu only Manu don't confuse it with Manaya that only Adi, Daatabhai & bhabhimaa call me no one else here."

Vijayinder says "Manu if Manayata was with us she would be you age, you anyways are elder J & Unzs, she would called me Vijay Bhai."

Jainandini objectingly

Jainandini says "Vijay Bhai"

Manu says "I will give that a thought Vijayinder Banna"

Uday asking

Uday says "Manasvi you forgave Vijay Banna forgive me also."

Manu say "No Yuvraj Uday Veer Singh, you are guest fell comfortable don't expect me to forgive you."

Unnati requesting

Unnati say "Manu Jiji please"

Manu ignoring Unnati, looking at Laxshmi

Manu says "Jija you actually love making everyone sit here"

Looking at Saraswati Manu adding

Manu says "Jijiya shouldn't you be showing them the house"

Looking at Aditya & Jagat Manu adding

Manu says "Get you cloths let's leave, Adi get my cloths also please they are lying on the bed"

Jainandini asking

Jainandini say "Going some where."

Manu say "Yes"

Jainandini , Unnati & Vijay together say "Can we come"

Vijayinder adding

Vijayinder says "Please Manu"

Aditya, Manu & Jagat say together "NO"

Aditya & Jagat go to their rooms.

Manu says "J remember that day when you came to my place"

Uday asks "when"

Manu answering

Manu says "when there was a party at your place."

Unnati says "Yes"

Manu says "you both were not comfortable this will be worse so no"

Manu's phone rings. she picks it.

Luv says "Manu darling what taking you so long."

Manu answering

Manu says "Darling your friend, he take more time to get ready then normal girls would."

Luv smirking."

Luv says "JAGGI that's superising."

Manu clarifies

Manu says "Firstly darling guest are over & don't guess who, & secondly sangati ka azar' you see."

Luv sadly

Luv says "ohhh Devgargh & Jaigargh are here, shameless people, Khush called."

Manu sadly

Manu says "Miss him, Pano..."

Luv cuts in changing the mood

Luv says "I agree Adi has learnt a lot from Khushi."

Khushi irritated

Khushi says "I don't take that long Manu." Manu smirking."

Manu says "Ya right just like you don't love him right."

Khushi irrited

Khushi says "Ash takes longer"

Manu smile

Manu says "Obviously she has to get the nut head dressed before her."

Khushi says "I don't take long."

Luv adding

Luv says "Just about 2 hours oh sorry to be exact three hours five minutes."

Manu superised

Manu says "dude seriously that long for him is a waste of time"

Khushi says "when you will fall in love you will understand."

Manu says "I have him to chooses as always"

Khushi says "HE IS MINE MANAYA."

Manu with authority

Manu says "FIRST MINE THEN YOUR SO GET LOST"

Kanika cutting in

Kanika says "Who is it Manu."

Manu laughing

Manu says "Your devarani."

Jainandini gets jealous doesn't go unnoticed by anyone Manu adding

Manu says "Bhabhima,one."

Looking at Jainandini Manu adding

Manu says "two"

Looking at every one except Uday, Unnati & Jainandini & Vijay. Manu adding

Manu says "Daatabhia now you decide who is first."

Every one laughs. Aditya & Jagat come there

Jagat & Aditya

They say together "what did we miss."

Manu say "Nothing."

Aditya says "you both fought again"

Manu says "She did."

Jagat says "poor her, she will never understand Adi's first lady is only you after that everyone else."

Aditya says "Absolutely"

Manu says "Daatabhia we will be late don't wait."

Looking at Aditya & Jagat. Manu adding

Manu says "let's move."

Manu, Aditya & Jagat leave from there. They all go see the house. Then Surya, Laxshmi, Saraswati & Dharam retire to their rooms to rest.

NEXT : CHAPTER 7.3

Edited by JADEKKD - 9 years ago

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Humairaa

@humairaa1

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Hey, how you? 😊

Love how the story is progressing

It is very beautifully written

Loved every chapter and how everyone loves Mansavi

Loved how everyone phoned the Devgarh and Jaigarh families and cancelled the deals they had with them

Love how everyone were talking to the Devgarh and Jaigarh families

Love how Mansavi is so sweet despite the way they treated her

Their attitude towards her changed when they found out that she was a princess

Love the relationship between Jai, Unnati and Mansavi

Can't wait for Chapter 7.3

Thanks for the pm 😊

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Kanika

@ITV_lover

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: humairaa1
Hey, how you? 😊
Love how the story is progressing
It is very beautifully written
Loved every chapter and how everyone loves Mansavi
Loved how everyone phoned the Devgarh and Jaigarh families and cancelled the deals they had with them
Love how everyone were talking to the Devgarh and Jaigarh families
Love how Mansavi is so sweet despite the way they treated her
Their attitude towards her changed when they found out that she was a princess
Love the relationship between Jai, Unnati and Mansavi
Can't wait for Chapter 7.3
Thanks for the pm 😊

THANKYOU...KEEP READING, REVIEWING, COMMENTING &

LIKING IT'S VERY ENCOURAGING

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Kanika

@ITV_lover

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#44

PREVIOUS : CHPTER 7.2

CHAPTER 7.3

Uday, Unnati, Jainandini & Vijayinder go to Vijayinder's & Uday's room.

Uday says "1st day here was not easy"

Unnati says "This was expected after what ever happened"

Jainandini asking

Jainandini says "Vijay Bhai what happened you look confused?"

Uday & Unnati look at Vijay.

Vijayinder says "do you know there something about Mom & me which makes Manu uncomfortable."

Uday was confused

Uday asking

Uday says "What do you mean?"

Jainandini with conformity

Jainandini says "I noticed"

Unnati says "Dada didn't you notice when it came to Menika Anuty,Manu needed support so Choti Kakisa had go to support not only that Adi had an expression of regret & Kakasa, Chote Kakasa & Kakisa looked worried."

Uday realises

Uday says "Manasvi was hesitating with Menika Anuty."

Vijayinder adding

Vijayinder says "Me to 1st softly she said Vijay Bhai then Vijayinder Bhai, then Vijay Banna then Vijayinder Banna then Rajkumar Vijay then she said Rajkumar Vijayinder & then clearly she said what everyone heard."

Unnati supriesed asking

Unnati says "are you serious but why???"

Jainandini adding

Jainandini says "This is confusing but at the same time Vijay Bhai you look scared too."

Vijayinder answering

Vijayinder says "I am Raghav Pratap Singh's son all of them knew except Manu."

Uday confused

Uday ask "So"

Vijayinder clearifing

Vijayinder say "J how many times you convince dad around this time to be in Mumbai Dad is always in Pune & never there for Manayata's Birthday."

Uday is still confused

Uday says "So"

Vijayinder says "There is this girl who is related to the Bade Kakasa & Kakasa families whose name is Manasvi who he is very close to."

Uday & Unnati superised

They together say "Seriously"

Jainandini says "Vijo Bhai that simply mean Manu Jiji told everyone to forgive you it was initiated by Rohan Dada & Bade Bhabhi then Jaggi & Adi told the others they all pitched."

Unnati adding

Unnati says "J is right."

Komal, Menika & Vasundhara come to Vijayinder's & Uday's room.

Uday says "That's what Aditya would have told Manasvi that's why she hesitating in front of Menika Anuty & Vijay Banna."

Komal asking

Komal says "Vijo what's wrong?"

Jainandini answering

Jainandini says "Mom for the timing being every thing is good."

Vasundhara asking

Vasundhara says "What are you talking about in any case no one is angry with Unzs & J?"

Vijayinder adding

Vijayinder says "Jija, Bade Jijusa, Jijiya, Jijusa, Rohan Dada & Bade Bhabhi are not angry with me."

Komal superised asking

Komal says "Seriously when how?"

Uday answering

Uday say "A little while ago"

Jainandini & Unnati

They say "Because of Manu jiji."

Komal, Menika & Vasundhara asking

They say "She also forgave you Vijo?"

Uday answering

Uday says "She did but only Vijay Banna was forgiven by everyone & Manasvi not me."

Vasundhara comforting

Vasundhara says "Don't worry we are here for few days she & every one will forgive you Uday."

Vijayinder laughs

Vijayinder says "Vasu Aunty worry starts now."

Komal superised

Komal asking

Komal says "What do you mean?"

Vijayinder asking

Vijayinder say "want guess the reason?"

Komal, Menika & Vasundhara asking

They say "WHAT?"

Vijayinder answering

Vijayinder says "DAD"

Komal & Vasundhara

They say "Raghu."

Menika say "OH MY GOD! Manasvi is the girl Maharaj consider equal to Mira."

Vijayinder says "Yes mom I tell you we have to face his angry."

The night passes there's no sign of Aditya, Manu & Jagat. At the dining table.

Mernalni asking

Mernalni says "Neelu, Prago where the kids."

Pragya answering

Pragya say "here they come."

Surya, Laxshmi, Saraswati, Dharam, Rohan and Kanika come sit and have food ignoring the guests.

Vasundhara asking

Vasundhara says "Where is Jaggi."

No one answers. Menika asking

Menika says "Where is Adi why he not here for dinner???is he fine???"

No one answers.

Uday says "Rohan Dada I have a deal for you."

Kanika says "Yuvraj Uday Veer Singh we don't talk work on the dinner table."

Vijay asking

Vijay says "Dada isn't Manu back yet."

Elders are superised with Vijayinder's easy with referring to Manasvi as Manu except Komal, Menika & Vasundhara.

Rohan answering

Rohan says "Vijay she will late, will have dinner there with her friends anyways Adi & Jaggi are also there so don't worry."

Laxshmi & Saraswati

They say "Maasahab."

Laxshmi & Saraswati smile continuing

They say "don't worry they will late,they are together with all their friends & are safe"

Surya & Dharam

They say "Daatasahab."

Surya & Dharam smile continuing

They say "they are not far"

So every one is finishes food.

Prithvi asking

Prithvi says "Do you guys know who told Manu."

Jai answering

Jai says "Isn't it obvious."

Pragya adding

Pragya says "Prithvi didn't you see Adi."

Prithvi says "Yes sorry with every thing I didn't remember Adi never hides any thing or lie to Manu."

Laxshmi adding

Laxshmi says "Both of them are like that since child hood."

Surya adding

Surya says "He wouldn't have realised the consequences."

Sarsswati adding

Saraswati says "especially for Manu"

Dharam says "Pari was uncomfortable, hasitante."

Kanika adding

Kanika says "And guilty

Rohan adding

Rohan ays "That why we all."

Every one who was part of conversation understood the unsaid. On the other hand Vijayinder, Uday, Unnati, Jainandini, Komal, Menika & Vasundhara also understood.

Jainandini asking

Jainandini says "Jijiya can I come over to your place tonight if you don't mind."

Saraswati & Dharam

They say "Ya J why not come over."

Unnati asking

Unnati says "Jija can I also come along."

Laxshmi answering

Laxshmi says "Yes you can Unzs"

Surya adding

Surya say "Vijay you also join in, anyways there is no one here today Manu, Adi & Jaggi have gone."

Looking at Jainandini & Unnati. Dharam adding

Dharam says "they are coming with us."

Looking at Rohan & Kanika. Dharam adds

Dharam says "they both are tired they will sleep." Vasundhara asking."

Vasundhara asking

Vasundhara says "What about Uday."

Surya & Dharam

They say "We are not inviting him at al Maharani Vasundhara Giriraj Singh"

Laxshmi & Saraswati adding

They say "Maharani Vasundhara Giriraj Singh we don't stop guests from coming to our house."

Uday realising getting forgiveness for the slap is difficult

Uday says "I will stay back"

NEXT : CHAPTER 8

Edited by JADEKKD - 9 years ago

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Name.Not.Important

@Super.Slayer

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#45

hey dear amazing chapter 😊 do update soon n pm me if possible

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Humairaa

@humairaa1

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#46

Hey, how you? 😊
Amazing update, very interested to find out what made Mansavi forgive Uday 😃
Loved how they were all trying to figure why Mansavi murmured so many different ways of calling Vijay's and Menika's name before addressing them formally
Loved the shock that was given to Komal, Vasu and Menka when they found out that they forgave Vijay and loved how they put all the pieces together and found out that Vijay's father and Mansavi are close
Loved the way they treated the Devgarh and Jaigarh family on the dinner table and told Uday that they don't discuss work on the table and completely ignored them
Waiting for the promo

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Kanika

@ITV_lover

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: humairaa1
Hey, how you? 😊
Amazing update, very interested to find out what made Mansavi forgive Uday 😃
Loved how they were all trying to figure why Mansavi murmured so many different ways of calling Vijay's and Menika's name before addressing them formally
Loved the shock that was given to Komal, Vasu and Menka when they found out that they forgave Vijay and loved how they put all the pieces together and found out that Vijay's father and Mansavi are close
Loved the way they treated the Devgarh and Jaigarh family on the dinner table and told Uday that they don't discuss work on the table and completely ignored them
Waiting for the promo

Thanks feedback. Keep reading, reviewing commenting & liking

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Humairaa

@humairaa1

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: kanikadrabu
Thanks feedback. Keep reading, reviewing commenting & liking

As long as I'm on India Forums, I will 😊

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Humairaa

@humairaa1

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#49

Hey 😊
Amazing promo 😃
Very interesting...
Love the jealous Uday
It was so cute when he was talking to Manyata's photo
Very excited to know what he had to do in order to be forgiven
Love Manyata's convo with Kush and how Adi and Jaggat were teasing them
Can't wait for Sunday