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Posted: 10 years ago
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PREVIOUS : CHAPTER 9.1

CHAPTER 9.2

They enter the outhouse it has flowers everywhere and big photo within a heart of Kartik & Manu 'HAPPY BIRTHDAY IN ADVANCE LOVE YOU MY RANI.' Kartik comes from behind nobody see. Manu turns back & hugs him tightly

Manu says "Pano love you a lot thanks for every thing."

Khushi asking

Khushi says "Pano, kab, kasie, khaise"

Kartik answering

Kartik says "Anything for MY RANI."

Ashwariya adding on

Ashwairya says "Other wise you have no time for any one but for MANU."

Manu calls Khush.They all talk. Kartik leaves in the evening. Khush also had some work. By evening they go home. Aditya, Manu, Jagat, Luv, Khushi, Ashwariya & Arjun are sitting & talking. Laxshmi, Surya, Dharam, Saraswati, Rohan & Kanika join them they are talking. Vijayinder, Jainandini, Unnati & Uday hear them, they come out of their rooms & see everyone is home. They come there Jainandini & Unnati hug Manu.

Vijayinder says "Manu where had you gone."

Manu says "Home."

Aditya give her a look. Manu continuing

Manu says "I mean we were in the outhouse."

Unnati asking

Manu says "Did you have food."

Ashwariya answering

Ashwariya says "Obviously we had."

Jainandini asking

Jainandini says "Why didn't you come back? for lunch kabhi toh hum sab ke saath bhi khanaa khaliya karo Manu."

Jagat says "Manu eats here or there it's the same thing food might be different but yehi bhi uss ka aapna ghar hai vohi bhi I mean uss ka ghar ka outhouse."

Surya & Dharam continues

They together says "Stop getting emotional Jaggi."

Laxshmi & Saraswati hugging him.
They say together "Jaggi, J ka voh matlab nahi tha."

Rohan adding

Rohan says "They didn't even know where you guys were."

Kanika smile

Kanika says "J darling they had gone to Mamusahab's outhouse to meet someone there."

By then every one got to know about Uday's fellings toward Manu. Aditya adding

Aditya says "Manaya also had talk to HER SWEETHEART."

Everyone smiles. Uday doesn't react to it, suppressing his jealousy & with concern

Uday says "Manasvi what happened in the morning why were you crying."

No one replied. Manu replies

Manu says "Yuvraj Uday Veer just because I forgive you doesn't mean you have a right to interfere in my personal matter."

Vijayinder with concern

Vijayinder asks "Manu but it was worry some."

Arjun was going to respond but Manu with a look stopped him. Manu smiles adding

Manu says "Vijay Banna I was going through some old photos & got emotional."

Manu sat with Rohan on one side Aditya on the other Jagat & Kanika were standing behind. Jainandini asking

Jainadini says "how was your talk Manu jiji."

Manu answering

Manu says "It was awesome, after long time almost every one was here together I just wish..."

Aditya, Khushi, Jagat, Luv, Ashwariya & Arjun cutting in

They say together "YOUR SWEET HEART was here."

Kanika & Rohan asking

They says "But wasn't he on FaceTime with you guys."

Manu looking at Khushi answering

Manu says "MY SWEET HEART was on FaceTime but you know it would the best if he had been here actually & I also missing Sher, Choti & Ree."

Laxshmi asking "How come was Karo here." This confused Vijay, Jainandini, Unnati & Uday."

Khushi answering

Khushi says "He said he was here for work."

Saraswati hugs Manu

Saraswati says "oof chill next time the whole gang will here with you & specially Karo & YOUR SWEETHEART, Sher, Choti & Ree."
Manu smiles

Manu says "Yes Jijiya that what it should be... Pano is also not there for the party."

Aditya adding

Aditya says "That reminds me don't we have to practice Manu."

Aditya, Manu, Jagat, Luv, Khushi Ashwariya & Arjun go from there. Rajgarh & Rathoregarh elders come there. Uday asking

Uday says "Dada what happened to Manasvi in the morning."

Neelam says "Yuvraj Uday Veer it's almost a month since Mansi's death"

Jai adding

Jai says "Manu would have realised."

Prithvi adding further

Prithvi says "Manu considered her a sister after all"

Pragya adding on

Pragya says "We couldn't even recover her body."

Rohan adding on

Rohan says "Uday don't mind what Manu said to you now this very personal to her."

Uday understanding

Uday says "I understands, but the body didn't reach you with her belongings that's company policy."

Kanika concluding

Kanika says "No"

Mernalni, Brijraj, Komal, Menika, Giriraj & Vasundhara come there.

Mernalni asking

Mernalni says "Prago Beta, Prithvi Beta, Jai Beta, Neelu beta will you never forgive us."

Brijraj & Giriraj adding on

They say "Prithvi Bhaisa, Jai Bhaisa you have forgiven the kids forgive us also."

Edited by JADEKKD - 9 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#62
Hey, sorry for the late reply
Chapter 9.1 was amazing
Felt extremely bad for Mansavi when she was crying
Love Kush, he is such a sweetheart, lol, finally understand why Mansavi calls him sweetheart
Love how Karkit planned the surprise for Mansavvi, it was so sweet
The promo for 9.2 was amazing
The chapter 9.2 was so cute, love how Pando (Karkit) gave Mansavi a surprise birthday party
he is so caring especially when he decorated the outhouse and his entrance
why did Jagat get emotional?
why did Mansavi reply so coldly to Uday?
What are Adi and Mansavi practicing for?
Finally the Devgarh and Jaigarh families asked for forgiveness, I guess it's because they know that their business/estate will suffer
Please do update soon😊
Edited by humairaa1 - 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: humairaa1

Hey, sorry for the late reply

Chapter 9.1 was amazing
Felt extremely bad for Mansavi when she was crying
Love Kush, he is such a sweetheart, lol, finally understand why Mansavi calls him sweetheart
Love how Karkit planned the surprise for Mansavvi, it was so sweet
The promo for 9.2 was amazing
The chapter 9.2 was so cute, love how Pando (Karkit) gave Mansavi a surprise birthday party
he is so caring especially when he decorated the outhouse and his entrance
why did Jagat get emotional?
why did Mansavi reply so coldly to Uday?
What are Adi and Mansavi practicing for?
Finally the Devgarh and Jaigarh families asked for forgiveness, I guess it's because they know that their business/estate will suffer
Please do update soon😊


Hey

Thanks... Jagat was a insecure brother in further chapters you will get to know better...do read promo ch 9.3 that will answer Manu's behaviour towards Uday...They are preparing for the 'BIG PARTY'.

PLEASE DO KEEP READING COMMENTTING & LIKING

KEEP GIVING FEEDBACK

LOVE YOUR FEEDBACK
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey, how you? 😊
Awesome promo
Loved it
It's so exciting especially because I read that Mansavi feels a connection with Uday's name 😃
Loved how the Devgarh and Jaigarh families were finally apologising and I'm glad that they are not forgiven
Loved Kanika's reply to Giriraj
Thanks for the pm 😊
Can't wait for Sunday
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: JADEKKD



Hey

Thanks... Jagat was a insecure brother in further chapters you will get to know better...do read promo ch 9.3 that will answer Manu's behaviour towards Uday...They are preparing for the 'BIG PARTY'.

PLEASE DO KEEP READING COMMENTTING & LIKING

KEEP GIVING FEEDBACK

LOVE YOUR FEEDBACK




Waiting to see more of a insecure brother by Jagat
But I'm still confused about Manyata's reaction towards Uday 😔 hopefully Chapter 9.3 will clear my confusions
Very excited to read more about the big party 😃
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Originally posted by: humairaa1




Waiting to see more of a insecure brother by Jagat
But I'm still confused about Manyata's reaction towards Uday 😔 hopefully Chapter 9.3 will clear my confusions
Very excited to read more about the big party 😃



Manu is just trying to fight her weakness, but soon she will give in & fall for YUVRAJ UDAY VEER SINGH

DO KEEP READING & commenting
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PREVIOUS : CHAPTER 9.2

CHAPTER 9.3

Prithvi simply says "Kids...nobody was angry with J & Unzs

Jai sternly

Jai say "The kids have forgiven Vijay & Uday."

Vijayinder superised asking

Vijayinder says "Kakasa you have not forgiven us."

Jai asking

Jai says "Does your father know all this." Menika says Jai Bhaisa he might..."

Prithvi cuts in

Prithvi says "Is that the reason he isn't here till now."

Pragya adding

Pragya says "Because he is ashamed of his wife."

Neelam adding on

Neelam says "Raghu is always here at this time."

Menika & Vijay were shut they were right he was always here at this time that's was one reason Menika didn't feel the need to inform him they are in Pune.

Menika say "Raghu would be busy as he doesn't know we are here."

Vijayinder informing

Vijayinder says "Mom, he called I had told him we are coming to Pune."

Uday looking at Pragya & Prithvi

Uday says "Kakisa, Kakasa"

Looking at Jai & Neelam adding

Uday say "Chote Kakasa , Choti Kakasa, please forgive me I know in angry what I did was wrong I AM REALLY SORRY."

Pragya & Prithvi says "You're like our son, but learn to control your angry your are forgiven."

Uday happy adding on

Uday says "I will Kakisa & Kakasa.

Vijayinder looking at Jai & Neelam

Vijayinder say Kakasa, Kakisa

looking at Prithvi & Pragya

Vijay says Badi Kakisa & Bade Kakasa please forgive me I should have at least tried to stop everyone."

Jai & Neelam together say "You are forgiven beta."

Both hug Vijayinder

Neelam says "you are like our son try to never to repeat this with any one else."

Prithvi & Pragya hug Vijay

They say "You are forgiven Vijay."

Vijayinder touches feet of all the four & takes their blessing.

Jainandini says "finally every one has forgiven you Vijay Bhai I so happy today."

Aditya, Manu, Jagat, Luv, Khushi, Ashwariya & Arjun come there, Jai & Neelam smile

They say "MANU"

Manu hugs them standing between Prithvi & Jai annoyed

Manu says "Momsa Dadsa, I thought you all had forgiven Vijay Banna long time ago."

Prithvi says "We just did"

Manu laughing

Manu says "I said long ago haven't your grown old."

Makes a face Manu adding

Manu says "or you are ignoring me"

Pragya with fake irritation

Pragya says "Manu"

Manu clarifies adding

Manu says "I am only talking about Mamusa, after all abhi toh."

Looks at Jainandini

Manu says "Jaggi ki shaadi hone aur"

Looking at Aditya adding

Manu says "phir isski bhi."

Jai says "Manu you too"

Manu hugs Rohan

Manu says "Hum shaadi, khabhi bhi nahi, hum Daatabhia ko chorke kabhi bhi nahi jaike."

Rohan hugging her back

Rohan says "Ya whatever when you find a match for yourself you will not only marry but forget me"

Manu makes crying face

Manu says "DAATABHIA that will never going to happen, forget that."

Looking at Kanika Manu adding

Manu say "Bhabhimaa your mean"

Kanika confused asking

Kanika says "what did I do now?"

Manu complaining

Manu says "you went shopping didn't even tell me, how mean"

Laxshmi & Saraswati laughing

They say together "She went with us."

Manu with a sad face

Manu says "what about me?"

Jagat smirking

Jagat say "Drama Queen!"

Aditya smiles

Aditya says "We go today Manaya, you, me & Jaggi will go now."

Luv adding on

Luv says "what about us, me & Khushi are also coming."

Arjun adding on

Arjun says "count me & Ash in."

Jainandini, Unnati & Vijayinder adding on

They say "We will also go with you guys Manu."

Everyone together says "Cool."

They are leaving. Manu notices that Vijayinder stopped.

Vijayinder says "you guys go."

Manu looking at Uday

Manu says "what happened Yuvraj Uday Veer Singh you were speaking so much you wouldn't come along & make your sister shop."

Laxshmi pleading

Laxshmi says "Phuphasahab, Buasahab please forgive him."

Sarawati adding on pleading

Saraswati says "Please Masahab Daatasahab."

Aditya asking

Aditya says "What's this Mom, Dad?"

Manu confused asking

Manu says "Haven't you already forgiven him Momsa Dadsa?"

Jai lovingly

Jai says "Bacha have you forgiven Yuvraj Uday Veer whole heartedly."

Manu conformity

Manu says "Yes"

Jai laughing adds

Jai says "Who are joking with Bacha your dad, why didn't you notice before you have notice first thing if it was Luv beta or Aru beta also Vijay but not Uday, you noticed Vijay stopping without even J realising why not Uday."

Aditya irrited

Aditya says "Dad, Manaya has forgiven Uday that the end of the conversation."

Everyone was shocked to see Aditya so irritated with this where Jai had a point why was Adi so irritated. Neelam remember once she had conversation with Aditya & Manu

Falshback Starts

In Saraswati Niwas

Aditya asking

Aditya says "Manaya what's with the name Uday'

Manu confused

Manu says "I don't know I just go weak"

Neelam asking

Neelam says "Adi, Mananaya the name Uday' brings on a lot of fights between you two ."

Manu answering

Manu says "Momsa I don't know I fell a weird connection with the name."

Flashback Ends

Neelam think my daughter is trying overcome the weakness the sad part is only me & Adi know about it & smile Manu realises Neelam & Aditya realised what she trying to do.

Neelam says "Jai, Adi is right lets end this here & Manaya has forgiven Yuvraj Uday Veer Singh whole heartedly, kids are right it's high time we also forgive him."

Jai not happy & Neelam happily

They together say "We forgive you."

Uday touches their feet they bless him

Uday says "Thanks chote Kakasa & choti Kakisa."

Neelam hugs Manu

Neelam say "Shop as much as you want."

The kids leave for shopping, Jai goes to his room he is little irritated & angry. Neelam telling
Pragya

Neelam says "Bhabhi I will just be back I get Jai back."

She goes to her room tells every thing to Jai they both come out to the sitting room."

Mernalni asking

Mernalini says "Will none of you forgive us."

The elder kids together say "Don't expect us to forgive you all Rajmata Mernalni Devi at all."

Prithvi & Jai supporting

They say "We are with the kids."

Menika with apologetic face

Manik says "I know what happened was wrong, Neelu Jiji."

Looking at Jai adding

Menika says Jai Bhaisa please forgive me
Jai firmly

Jai says "No Maharani Menika Raghav Pratap Singh"

Neelam continuing

Neelam says "we forgave Vijay & Uday that's more then enough."

Brijraj apologisely folding hands

Brijraj says "Kanika beta, Rohan Beta, please forgive me."

Kanika & Rohan looked away

They both together says "NO MAHARAJ BRIJRAJ SINGH"

Komal folding her hands

Komal says "Prithvi Bhaisahab, I am like your sister please forgive your younger sister, please Pra..."

Prithvi cutting in

Prithvi says "WONDERFUL MAHARANI KOMAL BRIJRAJ SINGH WHEN NOTHING WORKS NOW YOU WILL EMOTIONALLY BLACKMAIL US."

Pragya adding

Pragya says "Don't expect forgiveness from us MAHARANI KOMAL BRIJRAJ SINGH."

Giriraj says "Kanu Beta please forgive me for what ever I have done with Manasvi you are like Unzs & Uday for me & I..."

Kanika cuts in

Kanika says "Maharaj Giriraj Singh I as a kid had heard how heartless & cruel businessman are you thank god YOUR SON WHO I CALL MY BROTHER IS WAY MORE SUCCESSFUL THEN YOU BUT NOT LIKE BY YOU WHAT EVER BE THE RESON HIS SISTER OR HIS PRINCESS MANAYATA'."

That leaves the elders shattered.

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Originally posted by: JADEKKD




Manu is just trying to fight her weakness, but soon she will give in & fall for YUVRAJ UDAY VEER SINGH

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Sounds very interesting, thanks for clearing my confusion 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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PREVIOUS : CHAPTER 9.3
CHAPTER 10.1


The kids are at the mall shopping. Manu is coming out trial room Uday is standing there, she scared of darkness she sees Uday & the electricity goes

Kaun mera kya tu laage

Kyun tu baandhe

Man ke man se dhaage


She shivering in fear hugs Uday tightly

Manu says "Yuvraj Uday Veer Singh please
don't leave me it's too dark."

Uday unknowingly hugging her back

Uday says "Princess I am right here don't be scared, and don't cry Princess, nothing will happen Princess."

Vijayinder is coincidentally behind Uday hears him & is superised in years it is the first time Uday has called anyone one like this after Manayata got kidnapped. Aditya also knows where Manu is."

Aditya worriedly shouting

Aditya says "MANAYA"

Manu hears Aditya by then lights come on.
Manu pushes Uday away runs & hugs Aditya.
She is still shivering & tensed.

Manu says "Adi"

Jagat, Luv, Khushi, Ashwariya, Arjun come there. Manu continuing

Manu says "I..."

Manu falls & faints. Aditya commandingly

Aditya says "get water"

Luv adding

Luv says "call the manger now."

Attendant gives water. Vijay, Jainandini, Unnati & Uday are also watching they all are worried,.

Aditya worried

Aditya says "MANAYA"

Looks at Khushi Aditya adding

Aditya says "THIS WHAT BEST BEST FRIEND ARE FOR."

Lifting Manu in his arms adds

Aditya says "THIS ALL IS ONLY BECAUSE OF YOU."

Arjun worried

Arjun says "Manu darling wake up, your scaring everyone."

Khushi scared with tears in her eyes pleading

Khushi says "Adi please"

Looking at Luv & Ashwariya adding

Khushi says "Dada, Ash at lest you two understand."

Luv & Ash worried & angry

They say "JUST SHUT UP KHUSHI."

Aditya says "Jaggi call the car fast MANAYA IS NOT WAKING UP."

Jagat calls for the car. Jagat ,Luv & Arjun shouting together

They say "Call the manager now."

Attantent {lady} comes there

Attantent says "Sir, Manger sir is busy."

Ashwariya angry

Ashwariya says "Do you even know who she is & these three are."

Slapping her hard adding

Ashwariya says "she is YUVRANI MANASVI KUMARI."

Looks at Jagat Ashwariya continuing

Ashwariya says "he is YUVRAJ JAGAT SINGH RATHORE."

Looking at Arjun she continuing

Ashwariya says "he is YUVRAJ ARJUN SINGH."

Looking at Luv Ashwariya continuing

Ashwariya says "He is YUVRAJ LUV RAI SINGH."

Looking at Khushi. Khushi control herself immediately. Ashwariya continuing

Ashwariya says "she is RAJKUMARI KUSHI RAI SINGH."

Ashwariya continuing

Ashwariya says "I am YUVRANI ASHWARIYA KUMARI"

Looking at Aditya continuing

Ashwariya says "HE IS YUVRAJ ADITYA RAJ SINGH brother of YUVRAJ ROHAN RAJ SINGH."

Manager comes running

Manager says " I am so sorry Sir, Ma'am I am sorry

Seeing Manu state gets scared ordering

Manager says "call a doctor right now."

Jagat, Luv & Arjun together angrily shouting

They say "That's why we invest in this mall this the care you have."

Manger says "I am really sorry."

Aditya shouting

Aditya says "That why dada I MEAN YUVRAJ ROHAN RAJ SINGH HAS INVESTED SO MUCH IN THIS MALL."

Manger starts to respond Manu wakes up no one realises.

Manu says "Adi you fool stop shouting in my ear & we in the mall keep me down now

Aditya keeps her down & hugs her

Aditya says "Sis you scared a hell out of me Jagat, Luv & Arjun hug her tightly

They together say "That was really scary."

Manu smiles & sarcastically

Manu says "Jaggi your friends are here."

Everyone smile, looking at Aditya. Manu adding

Manu says "I want go home here go get it billed you're coming with me."

Ashwariya & Khushi come. Khushi looking at Aditya

Khushi says "Adi"

Aditya ignores her & goes for billing, Khushi looks at Jagat

Khushi says "Jaggi Dada"

Jagat ignoring & goes to control the press. Khushi looking at Ashwariya

Khushi says "Ash"

Ashwariya ignores & hugs Manu. Khushi looks at Luv

Khushi says "Dada"

Luv turns away. Khushi looking at Arjun

Kushi says "Aru Dada"

Arjun goes & stands with Ashwariya. Khushi looking at Manu

Khushi says "Manu I am sorry."

Manu looking confused hugs Khushi

Manu says "For what??? Did you turn off the lights you going to have hard time with Daatabhia be ready."

Whispering in Khushi's ear

Manu says "God bless you Khushi darling till Daatabhia doesn't know Adi wasn't with me but with you."

Looking at Luv, Ashwariya & Arjun

Manu says "whats wrong why are you guys ignoring Khushi"

Luv, Ashwariya & Arjun answering

They say "Manu that"

Manu smiles

Manu says "You three stop being angry & stop ignoring her, Luv darling you know if Daatabhia get to knows Khushi will need her Dada & you're ignoring her then you say why Khushi loves Khush more & why Khushi & Ash call Khush, DAATABHIA."

Luv realises hugs Khushi

Luv says "Kushi darling I am sorry."

Manu with shock looking at Ashwariya

Manu says "Ash you too let's wait a little while let Ree come we see what you do???

Ashwariya realising playfully hitting Manu

Ashwariya says "I am also sorry Khushi."

Arjun looking at Manu laughing adding on

Arjun says "Manu scared all of us Khushi."

All four hug each other Jagat comes there

Jagat says "car has come & the manager is handling the press."

Manu looking at Jagat asking

Manu saying "why are you ignoring Khushi?
Jagat angry."

Jagat says "Manu because of her Adi was not with you when he should've been, & she did that because..."

Manu cutting in

Manu says "here we are Luv, Khushi, Ash, Aru that it is TODAY JAGAT SINGH RATHORE COFFESED I NOT HIS RESPONSIBILITY NOR HIS SISTER ."

The four didn't say anything. Manu continuing

Manu says "Jaggi where were you...you weren't you with J... weren't you...shouldn't every one be angry with you."

Jagat has tears in his eyes hugging Manu
Jagat says "Manu stop this YOU KNOW THAT'S NOT IT I DO KNOW ITS WAS MY RESPONSIBILITY TOO."

Holding his ear continuing

Jagat says "I am so sorry."

Jagat hugs Khushi & adding

Jagat says " sorry I was guilty I didn't realise I was hurting you."

All of them hug.

Luv says "is that manager worth any thing you know Adi."

Vijayinder, Jainandini, Unnati & Uday are watching all this & are impressed how easily she convinced every one to forgive Khushi not that they knew why they were angry with Khushi, Manu smiles

Manu says "Don't worry I will take care"

Aditya comes there

Aditya says "Sis let's move."

looking at Jagat asking adding

Aditya says "Press...car."

Jagat replying

Jagat says "Car is outside."

Khushi says "ADI"

Aditya ignores Khushi. Manu looking at Khushi

Manu says "HE IS MINE FRIST KHUSHI."

They all go out press is there waiting. Manu looks at Jagat

Manu says "you friends are waiting so sweet."
Manu covers her face."

Luv says "Seriously the Manager is useless." Reporter 1 says "Yuvrani Manasvi Kumari what was happening to you why you in Yuvraj Aditya Raj Singh arms."

Manu laughing

Manu says "DDLJ was happening & if any of got on camera better not use increase your TRPS otherwise two things will you channel will be sued & your job will go."

Excepting for the reporters & the manager, everyone laughs including Vijay, Jainandini, Unnati & Uday, Manu looking at Jagat.

Manu says "guests"

Looking at Aditya adding

Manu says "I going in the car."

Reporter 2 inquiries "What were you doing here."

Aditya says "This is a mall sensible people shop, eat & watch movies here, why what do you do here"

Jagat goes back to the guests.

Reporter 3 say "why only Yuvrani Manasvi Kumari & Yuvraj Aditya Raj Singh are leaving alone."

Luv angrily

Luv says "What do you mean a brother & sister can't go together."

Reporter 4 says "why none of you leaving with them"

Luv with irritation adding

Luv says "How are we going to fit in one car."

Khushi with irritation adding

Khushi say "I bet you all will be 12 pass & a little sense we all can't fit in one car."

Ashwariya in anger

Ashwariya says "The cars are coming we are leaving also."

Arjun adding

Arjun says "We are royal & we travel Royally." Luv looking at Khushi & Ashwariya."

Luv says "Ash & Kushi go in, help Jaggi & take this get things billed."

Khushi & Ashwariya go inside to Jagat, Vijay, Jainandini, Unnati & Uday."

Ashwariya says "Khushi pick you items here are mine take them & get it billed. Vijay Dada, J...hello...are you done with shopping."

Vijayinder asking

Vijayinder says "Ash what happened?"

Jagat asking

Jagat says "Are you two done with shopping Vijay Dada & J."

Vijayinder answering

Vijayinder says "I am done"

Jainandini adding

Jainandini says "Me to"

Jagat says "get it billed."

Khushi is comes there.

Uday asking

Uday says "Khushi, where is Luv he also went?"

Khushi answering

Khushi says "No he is signing the bills Uday"

Uday asking further "Where is Aru?"

Arjun say "Me Uday...here"

Looking at Jagat

Arjun say "thanks"

Jagat asking

Jagat says "For what?"

Arjun says "For paying for me."

Jagat takes out Arjun's credit card

Jagat says go sign the bill

Arjun says "ok..."

Arjun looking at Unnati adding

Arjun says "Holding everything will not get it billed fast cars are coming in a few minutes."

Luv adding

Luv says "Absolutely Vijay Banna, J, Unzs & Uday go fast & get it billed"

Walking towards the billing counter Unnati asking,

Unnati says "Ash, who paid for Adi & Manu Ashwariya replying

Ashwariya says "Unzs, Adi paid for himself & one fourth of Manu's shopping,one fourth of it on Rohan Dada's credit card, one fourth of it on Nuashera's credit card & one fourth of it on Jaggi credit card.

Vijayinder superised

Vijayinder says "what she shopped was so much."

Uday superised asking

Uday says "Manu shopped so much, Choti stay away from her."

Jagat, Luv, Khushi, Ashwariya, & Arjun laugh."

Jagat says "no Vijay Dada it's not that."

Ashwariya adding

Ashwariya says "The four brothers share her expense."
Khushi adding further
Khushi says "Always"

Jagat says "when we were kids & Rohan Dada also didn't have credit card that time dad would pay one fourth Puphasa would pay two fourths & one fourth Masarsa would pay. Then Rohan dada started paying his one third then me, Adi & Nuashera also started doing it."

Arjun adding

Arjun says "It has always happened, it happens and it will always happen."

Jainandini says "How sweet, learn something Vijo Bhai."

They were at the billing counter.

Luv says "That just one side of the story."

Uday asks "what do you mean?"

Arjun repling says "Jaggi is very jealous of Manu."

Jainandini asking

Jainandini says "Why?"

Khushi says "she never pays from her credit card."

Uday asking

Uday says "Why?"

Ashwariya clarifying

Ashwariya says "When she is with Prago Mom or Neelu Buasa they pay."

Khushi adding

Khushi says "when she is with Prithvi Mamasa or with Jai Dad they pay."

Luv adding on

Luv says when she is with Bade Dada & Jija Bhabhi, Bade Dada pays & when Dada & Jijiya Bhabhi, Dada pays."

Luv, Khushi & Ashwariya say together "When she is with Bade Jijusa & Badi Jiji, then Bade Jijusa pays."

Arjun adding

Arjun says "when she shop with Jaggi, Adi & Nuashera, the four divide"

Unnati & Jainandini say together "How sweet" Uday & Vijay say "So that why you are jealous because no one pays for you"

Vijay adding

Vijay says "one thing for sure both the girls you three will date they will have a problem."

Uday adding

Uday says "Obviously girls mind every thing." Khushi says "not necessarily."

Jagat looking both at Khushi & Jainandini adding

Jagat says "The three must accept for Adi, Naushera & me Manu is first priority like in Rohan Dada case Bhabhi has accepted they will also have to accept."

Vijay looking at Jainandini

Vijay says "That would be difficult,talking about dating."

Looking at Ashwariya asks adding

Vijayinder says "are you dating"

Ashwariya replying

Ashwariya says "Yes Vijo poor you"

Unnati smiles. Walking towards the mall exist

Vijayinder asking

Vijayinder says "Who are dating Ash"

Jainandini says "Are you blind Vijo Bhai."

Arjun smiles

Arjun says "Vijay Dada me & Ash are getting engaged soon."

Jainandini asking

Jainandini says "Khushi are you also dating some one?"

Ashwariya superised asking

Ashwariya says "seriously you don't know who?"

Uday asking

Uday says "who?"

Ashwariya says "Vijay Dada you saying a minute ago about the girl who will dating Adi, Nuashera & Jaggi, Khushi help you there." Uday says "Ohh Jaggi your dating Khushi." Luv says "No Uday not Jaggi, Khushi is dating Adi."

Jainandini say "Adi Dada"

Vijayinder, Jainandini, Unnati & Uday understand when this happened Adi had to be with Manu he was with his girlfriend Khushi helping her shop.

Khushi says "Yuvraj Uday Veer Singh are you trying to ask if MANU IS IN A RELATIONSHIP WITH SOMEONE."

Uday realising he was caught

Uday says " no... not exactly."

Arjun, Ashwariya, Luv & Khushi say together) "This will not help..."

Luv nudges Jagat. Jagat realising

Jagat says "Wouldn't help knowing who is MANU'S SWEETHEART."

While they are the mall Adi & Manu reach home. Aditya, Manu, Neelam & Jai were in Manu's room talking.


IN MANU'S ROOM

Jai says "Manu Bacha what happened?"

Manu says "Dadsa you know I scared of dark, the electricity in the mall went off."

Jai asking

Jai says "Adi why are you so angry & guilty."

Aditya replying

Aditya says "nothing dad."

Jai says "Neelu both my kids don't trust me or even love me they just love you."

Neelam says "Jai stop being melo dramatic." Jai asking again."

Jai says "Manu have you seriously forgiven YUVRAJ UDAY VEER SINGH."

Aditya angrily

Aditya says "Dad not again we had finished this topic, hadn't we."

Jai says "I am talking to Manu not you Adi." Aditya says "Manu needs rest dad so please stop this right here."

Jai looking at Aditya

Jai says "Neelu how protective is he is of Manu, he can even forget me."

Neelam says "Jai stop it."

Jai say "Adi, Manu do you both trust me."

Aditya say Dad

Manu at the same time


Manu say "Dadsa"

They together say "Obviously"

Jai say "Do you both love me"

Aditya says "Dad"

Manu at the same time

Manu says "Dadsa"

They say together "Obviously."

Jai say "so you Both trust & love you mother more."

Manu & Aditya asking together

They say "what you mean"

Jai say "Manu why was it necessary for Neelu to tell me the fact that your uncomfort with the name Uday'."

Aditya says "Mom you promised didn't you."
Jai says "here it goes Adi also knows, looks like only I don't know."

Aditya says "No dad only Sher, mom & me know not even dada does not know. Dad in any case you are always busy with work & Mom also knows because she has heard me & Manu fight about it time & again."

Neelam says "Jai, I never felt the need to disturb you."

Jai & Neelam together say "You both & Sher seem to have many secrets then anyone knows."

Adi & Manu says "Yes we do, not even

Aditya says "Dada"

At the same time

Manu says "Daatabhia"


Edited by JADEKKD - 9 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I love your ff please update the next part soon

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