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Posted: 10 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: alisha_ashiyal

so I'm wrong here.. I hoped and guessed manyata was dating to Aryan 😔... Well Who is The Aryan and why manyata is dating Him. 😡 What's The Reason Behind It.. Plzzz Reveal..Plzzz.. And Really Love Braved Vijay... And totally Loving Vijay Nd Uday's Convo... Sooo Sweet So Cutee.. 😃... Vijay doesn't Want Uday to call him Vijay Banna Kn College Nd how Uday was Replyingg. Really Loved Ittt.. 😊 😃... And thanx for the PM and do continue it soon.. I mean soon could be tonight or tomorrow. 😊 😃


Aww, sorry😒
Lol, Aryan is not a bad character for now, no guarantees for later on😆
Will update soon😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: fireroad99

i am also wondering the same thing
plz update soon


Don't worry, everything will be clear as the story unfolds😉
Will update soon😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: alisha_ashiyal





Reallyyy.. 😊 😃... We Do Have Quite Similarities And Likess... 😊 😃


Lol, looks like you guys do😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: sanghita0000

WOW!! awesome update...loved it dear...
Can u make an index in ur 1st page or give a link at the end of the chapter to go to the next chapter...I had trouble to search for part 2...


Aww, thank you😊
I will make an index soon, sorry for all the trouble
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Posted: 10 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: Maha-Srk

wow

awesome
beautiful story


Thank you😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#57

Totally understand the fact that you are writing exams and I want to wish you all the best😊👍🏼

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Posted: 10 years ago
#58

Chapter 4

Two days later...

Tring, tring...

Uday: Hello Dad. How are you?

Giriraj: Hello Uday, I'm fine and you?

Uday: I'm good, dad.

Giriraj: How's the semester going?

Uday: It's going good, for now. How's the workload and the business, when I last read the newspaper, I saw that you have opened a new business. If you need any help let me know.

Giriraj: Ahh...the workload never changed, it carries on increasing. Yes, I have opened a new business in Chicago and I will need your help.

Uday: What do you need my help with dad?

Giriraj: I need you to go to Chicago.

Uday: What? I mean, how can I leave, the semester just begun and...

Giriraj: Look Uday, I won't lie to you, so here's the thing... as you know, I'm starting my new business in Chicago and I need someone to be there in order to make sure that everything is run smoothly but I can't go there because of my busy schedule... so I have applied for you in the best college in Chicago which obviously has been approved. You can complete your studies there. Don't worry, I have informed your college.

Uday: Ok dad, when do I have to leave?

Giriraj: Next week. I will message you all the details.

Uday: Ok dad, bye.

Giriraj: Bye Uday, take care.

Uday: You too.

End of call.

After five minutes, Uday received a message from his dad with all the details.

Vijay: You won't believe what a madhouse the mall was. (making himself comfortable on couch)

Vijay: What happened Uday Banna, received another text from your so called friend? (looking directly at Uday, who was busy reading the text.)

Uday: No

Vijay: Then?

Uday: I need you to apply at this college now! (handing Vijay his phone)

Vijay: Lol, Uday Banna, you want me to leave you and go to Chicago? (Vijay chuckled)

Uday: Nope, I want to take you with me. (Uday said with a smirk)

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Same day - in the night

Start of text:

Boy: Guess what?

Girl: What?

Boy: I'm coming to Chicago.

Girl: Wow, that great news. Finally I'll be able to meet you.

Boy: Wasn't it your idea not to disclose any personal information?

Girl: I know it was my decision not to tell each other our name or send a picture of how we look. Anyway, how long are you coming for?

Boy: Until I finish my studies.

Girl: When are you coming?

Boy: Next week

Girl: Wow, that's amazing!

Boy: "Wow, that's amazing!" is not going to change anything, I hope you remember your promise and come to receive me from the airport.

Girl: You still remember that promise?

Boy: Yes, I still remember that promise, looks like someone else forgot about it

Girl: Of course I remember the promise after all, I love to keep to my promises.

Boy: How will you find me?

Girl: Since I don't know your name... I'm going to come with a placard saying "Smile Buddy"

Boy: Lol, why would you do that?

Girl: See, I don't know how you look or what's your name and I don't want to find out until I meet you.

Boy: Ok, but why the name "Smile Buddy"?

Girl: You always make me smile.

Boy: Aww, so sweet. I'm sure to get diabetes with this much sweetness.

Girl: I think we should go to sleep now.

Boy: Why?

Girl: I'm tired, had a hectic day and you?

Boy: Nah, my day was amazing

Girl: Your day is always amazing

Boy: Maybe because I'm special

Girl: Definitely, you must be special, in your dreams!

Boy: I'm special because I have amazing friends

Girl: Aww, so sweet

Boy: Lol, I wasn't talking about you

Girl: How rude!

Boy: Just joking, you're my very special friend

Girl: Aww, thank you!

Boy: My pleasure

Girl: Good night, don't let the bed bugs bite

Boy: Bite them back, lol, good night.

End of text.

They both went to bed thinking of how they were going to meet and while thinking, they slowly drifted off to sleep with a smile on their face.

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Posted: 10 years ago
#59
AMAZINGG... REALLY WONDERING THE BOY AND GIRL CONVO.. WHO R THEY
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Posted: 10 years ago
#60
Loved the update Humairaa,short, sweet and EXTREMELY CUTE 😳.The best part was Uday wanting Vijay to come with him.Do continue soon, thanks 4 the PM

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