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Uday was walking around the hall when suddenly Manyata entered andd she was happy to see her bestfriend.Yeah they actually became frnds.Manyata said-"Hi uday I'm glad 2 see you...actually I missed u"hearing this UV cud not help smiling at his princess.He also replied-"I missed u too,princess"Then greeting DS they went 2 M's room.As soon as they entered the 1st thing that drew his attention was a red colured diary...Yes it was her DIARY.Uday took it 4 an usual diary but he grew curious as soon as M made the attempt 2 hide it.He showed no interest in front of her...but luck favoured him as DS called M and sent her out 4 an important meeting...she said she would b back in 1 hour and that was enough 4 him 2 read the precios DIARY..He opoened the diary...and started------"today is the day my life turned upside down...that halkat vere brought me in the palace..I had to leave my bff and dear akash"Reading akash's name UV's heart trembled...he felt sth happening to him...it was his love 4 M which he came 2 confess."Thogh I dreamt of being aprincess but it turned out to b worst than a nightmare...all my dreams of my wedding wid akash shattered...I hate that Uday sooo much"He turned a few pgs and stopped on another date"Today is akash's b'day...I organised a cool party and also succeded in fooling that uday...2day is the happiest day of my life"He turned a few more pages only 2 find a gradual change in the way she called him"today Uday saved me 4m falling and I should thank him...I went 2 thank him bt he was soo bz wid that J"He felt happy as she mentioned Uday not that uday.After sum more pgs he stopped on a certain pg"Finally I think Uday is not that bad as he wants 2 show the world...He too got a soft corner in his heart...and wid that feeling I put forward a hand of friendship...""And he accepted it finally...whoaa I'm So glad...actually I must admit that I like his company and I feel less bored"Uday smiled like an innocent child."Today I felt very bad when he ignored ne and talked wid that J...gosh am I jealOus...but why wud I b jealous!!!!???"UV cud not help smile seeing uday was replaced by he!!he then turned a few more pgs-the day she was stuck in d jungle"I was stuck in the jungle and I hoped that my prince wud come and rescue me...He also helped me in preparing the kheer...His presence excited me sooo much...yesss I was falling 4 him;I finally realized that my so called love 4 A was just infatuation...But I'm never gonna tell him abt my feelings...not until he says anything..."UV was both shocked and happy...tears dropped 4m his eyes...M hurried in the room remembering the disastrous diary but it was too late. She saw the diary in her UV's hand and tears inhis eyes...She wished if the earth wud swallow her right now so she didn't have to face him.Before she could run UV pinned her hands and he was cms apart 4m her.she felt his hot breath on her face and her neck...She screamed-Dont u have the manner...one shud not read others personal diary...before she cud say anything else UV placed a warm kiss on her cheek and finally said"I LOVE YOU My PRINCESS"they hugged each other and felt as if a millenium passed...they had flashbacks of each and every moment they spent together...each bitter-sweet moments.Finally UV knelt on his leg and said-princess will u marry me and accept this halkat vere as your life partner?????and 1 thing she cud do was nod in a yesss...and she did the same.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Guys I tried to write an OS...hope didn't bore u guys to your death...well if u r still alive after reading it then please comment
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Great story
Nice to read an OS on manveer after so long
I wish manyata was like this in the show as well
Continue writing 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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That was lovely!!
Awesome work!
😳👏
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THANX 4 the comments and love

Originally posted by: Anvijanya

Great story
Nice to read an OS on manveer after so long
I wish manyata was like this in the show as well
Continue writing 😛

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GLAD u LIKED IT
Edited by K.K.Monster - 11 years ago
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Good job!
Plese write more 😳
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Awesome OS!!!!!! Could u please write in paragraphs in future 😳.
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I'll TRY...and THANX 4 THE COMMENT

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Awesome OS!!!!!!
<div></div>Could u please write in paragraphs in future 😳.

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Part 2-
The things a diary can cause can't b imagined.Even 3 months ago M was planning 2 kill UV and elope with A and their marrige...M was married indeed but not wid A but her UV which she cud not even think of a few months ago...but all thnx 2 her personal diary...they were married and leading a peaceful life.Though M knew that it was her infatuation 4 A,she still felt guilty on the thought of her leaving A.But least she knew abt her misconception...one day while walking around the mall she saw A and Chiky,hand in hand!!!!2 lovebirds!!!???
She decided 2 find out the matter and started evesdropping.She heard A 2 C"Cmon let's go buy smthng 4 my dear C!!!!though I got a job bt I wish I had M and all her money...silly girl she thought I loved her bt she was nothing compared 2 u"(LOL!!!!wat a misconception)Then C made a 'naughty,wat r u saying' face.M was hurt and shocked 2 hear all those...a remorse overtaking her on the thought that she did so much bad to UV.She felt that she needed 2 apolgise 2 UV 4 such behaviours.M started 2 think of the ways 2 apologise.She then hit upon.a plan.
She decided 2 decorate the palace b4 UV came home...she decorated the palace and the terrcae also.The theme was red so after decorating she also went 2 get ready.She thought wat shud she wear???Then M saw UV coming close 2 her and he told her 2 wear the red saree that he brought 4 her...she was abt 2 say amthng when she saw UV was no where and realised that she was daydreaming bt M wore that red saree.Finally when UV came back home he found the palace full of darkness...he then switched on the lights only 2 b delighted by the decoration..he went 2 their room and found M looking splendid in the red saree...He was really awestruck!!!!!!M then came close 2 UV and told him 2 close his eyes and she led him 2 the terrace...the terrace was looking wonderful wid all the candles and flowers.He saw there was an arrangement 4 candle light dinner for 2.He was truly delighted.
M then came close to him and asked him if he liked it or not.UV answered"Princess I liked it but..."M was nearly getting a heart-attack when he completed"But I like you in this saree more"She was relieved and saidf that she loved the saree bt the prob was the blouse was backless and very tight and short...UV cud not help smiling how innocent M was that ahe was telling him that...seeing her backless he had the desires 2 kiss her passionately.Mayb GOD heard his unsaid prayers and it started raining and M got 2 excited and started dancing and enjoying the rain with her beloved UV and asked him 2 dance wid her.UV cud not say a. no and they start dancing reducing all the distance btween them.The saree was looking like a 2nd skin and her curves were fully visible!!!!UV cud not control anymore and he started 2 place wet kissses on hger cheeks,neck,hands and finally lips...their lips met and they kissed passionately parting 2 breathe only.M then said ina husky voice"I'm SORRY UV 4 all the pains I have caused,all the rude behaviours,I'm sorry 4 all those rude sayings...please 4give me"and told him the mall-A-C matter.UV was so angry on A 4 hurting M's feelings that he wanted 2 kill him bt undestanding the matter M quickly pulled him in a hug 2 calm him down and they shared another passionate kiss and a love making session...
Edited by K.K.Monster - 10 years ago

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