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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey guys i was bored so i thought why don't i share with you dearies my OS! I hope you like it!!😕😳
Saajna!!
It was bright Monday morning for everyone but for some it wasn't:
Alarming ringing forcing Manyata to wake up; looking beside her there was Akash waiting for her to wake up, reading a book. Getting up she went in the shower; she was weeping since she didn't want to do it but she had to.
Coming out of the washroom wearing normal clothes she spoke in a tired voice "Chala Akash we need to get going"
Grabbing her bag and suitcase Akash n her leave; getting in the car he sat in the driver seat and they drove off to there destination.
In the car:
"Manyata forget him he's not worth it"
-"Akash how can I? I loved him more than myself; I still can't believe he did this to me" Spoke a shattered Manyata eyes getting more red.
Meanwhile somewhere else:
Uday was annoyed into why she left not believing him. Someone tapped him "She leaving this city dadda, she went with Akash, stop her dadda before it's too late, please dadda."
"What?"
"Ha dadda he might do something to her, beside dadda he's not going to take her to the airport he'll take her near some hill side just to let you know"
"How do you know?"
"Dada I heard jai speaking to him, go safe her!" pushing him giving him the reassuring look...
The car came to a haunt but somewhere else near a hill side n Manyata was confused into why he brought her here and not at the airport
"Akash where the hell have you brought me?"
"Surprise right?"
"Meaning?"
"Didn't you get surprise by this place I thought you wanted to go to airport"
"I should have known..." "Should've known what?" he asked curiously
"Akash I don't believe this ...?"
"What anyway forget that lets see the beautiful view of the sky"
"I don't have time for this" about to move he grabbed her hand
"Of course you don't, but now it's no point since you're going to die"
"What? I Believed you more than him for the reason that is I thought you've changed and proves you had that you were innocent.They were so real that I believed you but I was wrong they were fake, how could you Akash?"
-"Well it's not my fault you believed me more than him right?"
Grabbing the knife coming closer to her "Right" repeating himself
-"Akash put that knife down please" she begged
"Akash put knife down please" stepping backwards
But her begging didn't stop him from moving forwards
She couldn't move anymore but he still moved forward making her nearly fall grabbing her hands he barked
"Let me tell you something Manyata, you deserve to die, I'm sorry Manyata don't hate me for it" She begged not to but he was so stubborn that he was about to push her off but got stopped by a voice behind him "Don't you dare Akash otherwise you'll die" pointing his gun on his back
-"Really but I'll kill her first if u dare to shoot" he droped the knife and took out a gun out of his pocket.Putting in her forehead
-"Akash don't be stupid take the gun off her forehead"
-"No I won't" However without realizing by mistake he pressed the trigger n Manyata was about to fall but got caught by Uday; who pushed Akash before she dropped.
Uday placed her on the floor n Akash ran from there; thinking that he might get caught though Uday wanted to stop him but thought forget it...
"Manyata open your eyes please" tapping her so many times but she didn't respond.
She went to a different world away from everyone leaving Uday n all of her family...
6 years later
"Pappa Mamma alive ha" Said a sweet boy
"Ohoh stupid I know that. But did you know what happened to Uday?
Uday had his lovely kids with his Beloved"
"How comes?" He spoke getting confused
... 6 years before
All of a sudden she was breathing returning to her Uday, to her world where her love one's were.
"Manyata" said a surprised Uday not believing she was breathing
"I'm real Uday no need for that touching thing I mean how can you think I would leave you Uday?"
"Yep how can you leave me my Beloved Manyata?" Hugging her tidily
"Hold me tide otherwise phir se" showing her the death face
"Manyata" Both of them laughing at the remark...
6 yrs. later
"They got married then 6 years from now they have beloved son called Arman and..."
"Hey yeh toh mera naam hai?" interrupted Arman
Manyata laughing from the door step spoke coming inside:
"That's because papa is telling a story about me and him and how that devil uncle separated us apart well not all of it but your got school tomorrow and because you had a great fantasy listening to such stories you devil! Now go to sleep let papa go!" Manyata said pinching Arman cheek that he grumbled by his mothers touch. That he ducked his face underneath the blanket. Manyata n Uday was about to move towards the door that they heard a sound...
"Not fair you told him but not me" said a grumpy Anjali coming inside going near Uday. Staring at him with a pleading look.
"Tum bi" Looking helplessly at Manyata for help but Manyata she gave him a no way look
"Poor Uday" said a laughing Manyata going from there. Arman got up from the blanket and gave Uday a wink that he went back to sleep..
...
Please do excuse the mistakes if i did any becuz i posted this even before editing it!!😡😉Stupid computer was playing up that's way it posted it! 😕😆 Thank you, for reading my OS! If you liked please do hit the like button!!😉 And tell me how it was!! 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Bahut acchi OS friend. Write more.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: jagz11

Bahut acchi OS friend. Write more.

Aw!! Thank you dear!😳 Will do!!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Such a beautiful OS. Well-written! Akash , as usual ... up to no good😡. Thank God, Unnati told her brother everything! The end was too cute, Manveer's kiddies pestering their father, was so sweet😳. Really enjoyed it! U should write more😃.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey,
thanks for the pm,
the story was awesome
at one point I thought Manyata
was dead and then again
our hot streaming prince rescued her
awesome
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow.. LOVELY OS!

Our hottie-pie prince was again the "SAVIOUR" here. Fantastic.

Nice work dear. Do write more. Would love to read.

Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...navina...

Such a beautiful OS. Thanks but no thanks i wasn't meant to upload this with this name becuz it doesn't go with it!!😆 What do you think does it?😕Well-written! Thank you!!🤗

Akash , as usual ... up to no good😡. Ik! Akash is a bad a** so wat will u expect from him!😉Thank God, Unnati told her brother everything! Well Unnati is a sweet sister so she'll obv will want the best for her brother😳 The end was too cute. Oh, Thank you!!❤️😳Manveer's kiddies pestering their father, was so sweet😳. Well i'm glad u found it sweet!😃 Really enjoyed it! Glad u did i thought i would bore you with my OS!!😳U should write more😃.Rlly do u think so? Ok then i will do soon then!!😳



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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: perfection

buhuhuhhahahahahahah 🤣

U don't leave anything do you???Get lost you u fat smelly hippo!! 🤣if you not going to comment on the os!!😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: annabh

hey, Hey!!😃
thanks for the pm, Yw!!🤗
the story was awesome Thank you!!❤️🤗
at one point I thought
was dead and then again
Manyata rlly?😆 Manyata can never die leaving her prince charming lonely right!😉
our hot streaming prince rescued her Well Prince ji loves her so obv hes going to save her from the devil uncle Akash!!🤣
awesome Thanks!!😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nash..

Wow.. LOVELY OS! Thank you!!😳🤗

Our hottie-pie prince was again the "SAVIOUR" here. Fantastic. 'Was again' u mean someone has wrote a OS before abt saving Manyata😲 damn lol i didn't know otherwise i would have done something else!! Oh well nvm!😉

Nice work dear. Do write more. Would love to read. Thank you!!❤️🤗 Yeah i will do!!

Thanks for the pm Yw!!😉

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