||The Punishment|| Chapter 3/Note : Page 19 - Page 2

MANYATA SOUND SO EVIL

Nice prolong. Different from the usual ones. Continue with it as it is nice.

That was amazing 👏 Vidhi. 👏
very interesting prologue. they're having enmity, I wonder who was the guy she was staring on, standing in the balcony... 🤔 is uday behaving like a commoner to her 😕.

eager to know further. 😳 update soon 😛.
thanxx for the PM. 😊
Hugs
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Originally posted by: cnibir

Hi vidhi, I have just read the chapter and I think it is great new concept!!!
I love what and how you have done the description...
It seems very suspenseful do far and I would be happy to read further if you continue... Personally I think it is a good track of thought and you should pursue it...
Please do continue if you feel...

Originally posted by: cnibir

Sorry I meant prologue

Originally posted by: -WhisperMahi-

Have read something apart from course books after a long time. At least it feels like its been ages. The prologue is intriguing... mysterious is the word for it. Uday must've hurt Manyata bad since she wants revenge on it. Continue soon, do write a character sketch if the characters here are kind of different or if they have some other qualities as the original DEK characters.

Nice to see someone keeping this forum alive.

Originally posted by: MAHI1198

woah nice
confusion but awesome prologue!!

Nice one Vidhi. I liked the concept. :)

Originally posted by: milhan

so she's the wicked 1 here huh?
nyc start...
do pm me for this story