A Manveer Story(SS) Chapter 2 updated pg-5 :) (short update) - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4" color="#ff0000">hey nice cs</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4" color="#ff0000">pls update soon</font>
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Thnx! Sure maybe today or tomorrow.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: ...navina...

<font color="#006633" size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Awesome start!

</div>Little Manyata was really adorable and her interaction with Uday was very cute😳.
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Do continue soon😃.</font>



Thnx Navina! But I am nothing compared to you 😉 You are a totally awesome writer. The promo for Joaw 4 was amazing. Yaar,Viraat ko kyun maar diya?? 😭 Can you plz do something that will save Viraat and invent some other reason for Uday's hatred for Manyata. Please dude. Anyways thnx again!! 😃 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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** Chapter-1**



"Alia!! Jaldi uth yaar! Hamari flight miss ho jayegi!!" Someone shrieked loudly.
"Arre gadhi! Mujhe sone de. Mujhe India jaane main koi interest nahin hai.Bhaad main jaaye flight aur bhaad main jaaye tu,Ria." ,muttered the girl who was rudely disturbed from her sleep by her best friend,Ria.
"Yaar Arina, tere liye sab wait kar rahein hai. Sab airport pahaunch gaye hain. Achha theek hai,main jaa rahi hoon." , said Ria in order to wake Alia up.
Arina put a pillow over her head and closed her eyes.

Ria's POV

"Arina toh uth hi nahin rahi hai, ab kya kare? Idea!!"

End of her POV

"Theek hai,main tumhara phone,yani ki tumhara Galaxy S4 mere saath India le jati hoon! ;) ". Saying this,she smirked and picked up Alia's phone from her table.

Arina jumped out of her bed and snatched the mobile out of Ria's hand.
"Mera pyara phone! Iss pagal ladki ne tumhe kharab toh nahin kar diya na?" ( talks to her phone as if it were a person :P) Then she hugs her phone.
Seeing this,Ria starts laughing loudly.

Arina glares at her.
"Dumbass!! Why the hell are you laughing,huh? I love my phone and I can't bear a single scratch on it. Thats the reason why I've kept it safely for 9 years. Yaad hai? Mujhe yeh phone mila tha jab mein 12 saal ki thi? Aur ek din girkar
iska screen display crack hogaya tha? Usse fix karne ke baad,maine iss par ek bhi noch nahin aane diya.".

Ria: Dude,I know it all. Lekin dekho,tum kuch minute pehle uth nahin rahi thi,toh mujhe yeh strategy use karni padi. She winked at Arina. Arina smiled her cute smile.

"Chalo main jaldi tayaar hokar aati hoon. Tum mera saamaan gaadi main pahaunchao. Chalo India chali jati hoon,Mom-Dad se bhi mil loongi."

((Writer's Note----- They are going to India for the College reunion party, which will last for a month and has all the Indian students coming from Oxford University(Uday's college) and Harvard University(Arina's college).
They have a show-off,like which college has more talented people and stuff.
Arina is 21 years old and is doing her internship at a hospital in the US and Uday is 23 years old and is managing his chain of hotels in India.))

Unnati went inside Uday's room. She saw a girl covered in sheets only and screamed loudly. The girl woke up and started screaming as well.
Uday makes an entry in a black vest and faded jeans.
(Imagine all this to be like the scene in DEK.I will skip this part :P)

Ria:Yay! Hum India pahaunch gaye!! The best place in the whole wide world.
Arina made a face and said sarcastically,"Yeah,yeah hamara Bharat mahaan. More like one of the worst places in the whole wide world."

"Arina,respect your country.",said Ria in a serious tone.
"I do respect it but I can't seem to like it as I rarely come here. Like 1 month in an year is too less,you know.Well,not like I want to come here all the time,anyway. Lekin the maggi here is awesome,I must say." said Arina in a cheeky voice while grinning evily.
"Aargh... Arina,tu bahaut badi dheet hai."
Arina smirked."Woh toh main hoon my darling,woh toh main hoon!"
They both start laughing and hire a cab.

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And thereby,you come to the end of this chapter. Next chapter,will be the meeting of ManVeer. Sorry for grammatical errors, if any.

Do like and comment!!
Alisha :D



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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
loved it alisha.
dis manyata is different.
wanna to read further.
eagerly waiting for manveer meeting.
continue soon dear.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
nice cs & prologue
osum update.
plz continue soon.
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#26
awesome awesome gr8 update yar!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
Nice part
manyata in different interasting concept
love it
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#28
awesome alisha
a very nice SS
do cont soon
and PM me if possible
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#29
awesome chap
wowww
superb
nd
update next chap soon
waiting for manveer meet
update
next chap
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#30
alisha wen will u update next chappy.

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