A Manveer Story(SS) Chapter 2 updated pg-5 :) (short update) - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hai, its an interesting story...continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: ...anju...

alisha wen will u update next chappy.



When I 'll get time! My exams are coming and straight after that I have to go to India for my vacations.I'll try to update soon. :))
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i loved it plz continue its diff n i like it !!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 2 :)


Alia reaches the Mumbai airport along with Ria.Her friends greet her and gossip about random stuff to be done at the university talent show-off. When suddenly-
"Alia dekh, woh hai Yuvraj UV Singh. Oxford se hai.Logg kehte hain ki woh bahaut smart aur egoistic hai.Kisiko bhi apne jaal main fasa sakta hai. Tum uska kuch karsakti ho?",said Karan to Alia.

"Ofcourse dude.Just wait and watch." said Alia smirking.

Uday walking over to his friends(who are standing at a distance) when a girl holding loads of files and books bumps into him.
The girl begins to fall when Uday catches her.

Uday's POV:

"OMG,what a beautiful girl."

End of POV.

The girl has her eyes heavily shut. The girl was wearing a salwar-kameez.Bangles and a bindi were adorning her hands and forehead respectively.
The girl opens her eyes slowly and comes into standing position slowly.She avoids eye-eye contact with Uday and picks up her books and files and says- "Ji,mujhe shama kardijiye.Humne aapko nahin dekha tha. Agar aapko koi kasht pahauncha,hum uske liye bahaut sharminda hain."
The girl then walks away.

"Kasht and all,huh? Wah!Kya ladki hai!." ,he smirks and goes away.

Ria: Oh.Em.Gee. I mean Oh my god! Alia,yeh tune kya kar diya??"

Alia (smiling heavily): Tu dekh main usse kaise fasati hoon.Yeh toh bas shuruaat hai babes.Aage aage dekh hota hai kya!" ,Araina winks at Ria and they both Hi-5.

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Guys,sorry for a super late update and I wish you very merry christmas and a happy new year.Update is short but I don't have time at the moment cuz I am in India. Hope you like it .Pms will be sent out to ppl in my buddy list.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
awesome update yr!!!!
loved it loads!!!!
I'm jus waiting for the moment for Uday to know about manyata!
and manyata omg behengi behavior lolzzz...
u write great
update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
hey
awesome chappy
thanks for the pm
huggs
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: MAHI1198

awesome update yr!!!!
loved it loads!!!!Thankyou!
I'm jus waiting for the moment for Uday to know about manyata!That will be sometime later 😉
and manyata omg behengi behavior lolzzz...
u write great She has to act that way for sometime .
update soon... Sure!

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