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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
hey tis is interesting...
do continue soon n thx fr the pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
Nyc concept n CS
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
this sounds intersting
so anish was manytata sister
so uday use to be manytat brother in law
lol
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14

I hate u....

Chapter 1 ...

Everyone in office ... Do ur work guyz do ur work ... Sir is coming

tomorrow i don't need any drama in this office ... Everyone is bizy

in doing there works suddenly security gaurd enter ... Mam

actually i want to tell u that today yuvraj uday veer singh is

coming !!! WHAT !!! But he told me that he was coming

tomorrow ? Sorry mam he didn't tell me that why he is coming

early !!! Kk leave !!! Now where the hell is shreya ? Mam actually

she have a 1 day leave rember how can i rember anjali ? When

uday is come today and ... The hotal manger is not here ... ?

Mam wait i call her ... !!

...xxx...xxx...xxx...


Manyta beta !!! Yes DS !!!


Ds: manyta today is confress ... !!!


Manyta: i noe ds


Ds: so i wish that u coming wid me as yuvarni of devghar


Manyta: i m sorry ds but u noe i hate this all


Ds: manyta plz beta just for me ... !!!


Manyta: kk fine ds if u want this than i do ... !!! Just for u !!!


Ds: thanqu so much beta n u na ... Today is ...


Sudennly her phone rang


N guess wat manyta ring tone is



Lat lag gayi lag gayi zaman khe lat ye galt lag gayi ...


Wait ds ... !!!


K fine i m going ...


Bye ds


Manyta picup the call


Hey angali wats up !!!


Mat puch !!!


Manyta : y ?


Anjali : shreya problem ho gayi


Manyta : kya hua ?


Anjali : the owner of this hotel yuvraj udayveer singh coming

today not tomorrow


Manyta : wha .. What ?


Anjali : yes !!! I m sorry sherya i noe u take a leave but u want

come to right now


Manyta : its kk i m coming

...xxx...xxx...xxx...xxx..

Haye sir ... This flowers for u !!! THANKU SO MUCH Aditi ...

Did u like it ? I love it !!! sir i just ask u that u told me that u coming

tomorrow but why u coming so early ?

Smirk appeared on his face


I LIKE TO SUPRISE U ... !!!


Aditi now blush blush blush ... She is blushing like hell !!!


Now i m really tired can we r go couz i m not feeling well standing

front of airport


Aditi (blush) : yes sir lets go

...xxx...xxx...xxx...

Wait stop ... Here


But y sir ?


I alwayz go in this church when i come mumbai


Its kk we r waiting outside for u

...xxx...xxx...xxx...

He enter the church join his hands close his n start prayer suddenly

some wierd voice come who disturbe him he open his eyez n he

saw a left side he saw a girl who is standing there chat wid her

self she is wear a white kurtta n jeans n she is like angel uday

can't belive his eyez ... She is so simple n she she luking beautiful ... He is found dumb stuck suddenly he rember


Flash back ...

A girl siting a bench n she is pray silently ... Suddenly uday come

n he seat on left bench ... Suddenly he found a one girl who was

sitting there n prey silently uday luk at ... She is wearing a green

suit ... She have a roses in her right hand ...uday just luk at her

beauty ... Suddenly she stand up n turn back she luk at him n...he

continusely luking at her her eyez were so beautiful small brown

eyez n she avoid him n start walking one rose were fall on her

hands ... N he luk at the rose ... n He stand up ... He pic that rose

n he kissed the rose ... She didn't luk at back also !!!


Flash back ends ...


Suddenly he back his sense

Girl : god plz plz plz mere boss khadus na nikle mai manti hu sare

boss khadus hote but vo cute nikkale or agar esa hua na tho aap

ko 1 month mai 1 choclate chadungi plz

plz


Uday is control his laughter !!!


Uday : or agar vo khadus nikkala tho


Her eyez were closed thats y dhe didn't see him


Girl : agar nikkala na tho mai uska dhokla bnake kha jaungi haa

nhi tho


Uday : fir tho bhgwan bhi kuch nhi kar sakta


She open her eyez n luk at uday like wat the hell !!!


Girl : kar sakta hai !!!


Uday : kya kar sakta ?


Girl : us ghade ko dimag de sakta hai !!!


Uday : agar tum bhgwan ko 1 month mai mai 1 choclate chadogi

tho bhagwan tho bhgwan ghade ko dimag kese dega aaj kal tho

bhgwan ki bhi rquirment zyada hoti hai


Girl : tum preyer ka mazak udane aaye ho ya apna sir fudwane ?


Dono mai se ek liye bhi nhi aya ... !!! Soch lo mere kaam tha

tumhe btana ... Tumhara kaam tha sunna ab tumhe nhi manna tho mat

mano


Girl : bhad mai jao !!!


She try go out side


Uday : tumhara naam kya hai ?


Girl : chandramukhi khush !!!


Uday : kya baat hai ? Konse planet se aai ho ?


Girl jaadu ke planet se aai hu :P


Uday : vese mujhe jadu se milna


Girl : go to hell wid ur jadu


N she left there


Smile appeared on uday face


kritz 😳😳

Edited by -Kritika- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
good.
dont u think chapter is too short.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
Mazaa aagaya ha nhi to... anyways evn I think chapter shuru hote hi khatam ho gaya :-(
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
awww that was so cute!!
lovely update kritzz
wese bahot dino baad!
our han ho sake toh plzz regular update!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
hey really loved the update and cs... loved manveer meeting... manyata is gonebe shocked when she actually finds out the her boss is the person who she met at the church please update soon and can u add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
Very nice. Manveer talk were awesome. Why Manyata is angry to him ? Continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
So cute...bhad mein jao...lol..manya itni kanjoos na bano

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