I HATE U /3 chapter 1 pg 3

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Humairaa

@humairaa1

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Hey, how you? 😊
Sorry for the late reply
Beautifully written 👏
Loved it loads ❤️
Prologue, character sketch as well as chapter one is amazing ⭐️
Loved Manveer's first meeting 😃
Lol, wonder how she's going to react when she finds out that he is her boss 😆
Very eager and excited for next chapter
Please update soon 😃
Thanks for the pm 😊

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Nishaya

@Nash..

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Nice update Kritika!

It was humourous, especially that bhagwan ka requirement wala part,loved it

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-.-SUNSHINE-.-

@-.-SUNSHINE-.-

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

I hate you😆

What a story name 😆😊

I loved it awh Annie She is dead very bad😭

Uday broked fully😊

He is a big flirter uday u r uday😉

Manyata and his talking just amazing totally😳

Jadu and all stuff loved this secene😃

Loved it update soon😳

Edited by -.-SUNSHINE-.- - 11 years ago

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kritika

@-Kritika-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Jane523
nyc concept...

thanx yr ... 😳😳

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kritika

@-Kritika-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: serat
Nice concept
Waiting for the CS

thanqu so much 😳😳

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kritika

@-Kritika-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: marium-zamamii
Nice concept kritz... I think my inbox ll get flooded only by urs pm... heheheh... continue soon... n thoda mast wala ladaii n thodasa uday ka obsession bhi add karna towards his princess if possible...

thanx yr lol 😆😆 than open ur pms n read it 😛😛 its kk i will ..