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kritika

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Posted: 12 years ago

CONCEPT

I HATE U </3

A GIRL WHO IS YUVRANI OF DEVGHAR SHE IS NOT STYLISH N ALL SHE BUBBLY SHE HATES MORE ATTENTION SEEKERS ... SHE HAVE ONE BROTHER WHO MAKES ALWAYZ SMILE ON HER FACE ... SHE IS WORKING IN UDAY NIVAS AS A MANGER POST WIDOUT DS KNOWLEDGE IN OFFICE NO ONE NOE ABOUT HER REAL NAME EVERYONE KNOW ABOUT HER AS SHREYA SHEGAL ... she never come front of midia couz she hated to answer them ... so she refused ...

n she never go in any other parties n all like bimbos go :P

in other side ...

a handsome hunk a business tycon in india who is rude ... but behind him he is kind hearted man who alwayz love his family n more than his sister he love just one girl anisha ... or i say miss mharani anisha uday veer singh ... n when he LOST HER ... so he make rude n heart less man ... !!!

I HOPE U LIKE IT ... CAN I CONTINUE THIS STORY ... ? IF ANY ONE WANT PM ... THAN LIKE PM LIST ... !!!

KRITZ 😳😳😳

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kritika

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Posted: 12 years ago

Prologue

I HATE YOU ...

Hey love how r u ...i m fine babiee U rember ... Wat is today? Huh

i forget so mr yuvraaj uday veer singh u rember ? He pull her

waist he make a eye contact to her ...how can i forget today is a

very especial ... Ur b'day ... Anniee N i noe wat is a

perfect gift for my wife... Really ?... yup ... He Took a gift box ...

N than he show her ... Wat is that? ... Wait a sec i open it he open

the wrapper n than finally the box ... In the box a beautiful red

color sariiee waiting for her expressions ... Uday ... This is for me ?

ofcause babiee this for u !!! N she huged him title she kissed him

on his chicks I LOVE U UDAY !!!

FLASH BACK ENDS

HE STANDING front of wordrop he wipe his tears n wisper I

HATE U ... FOR LEAVING ME ALONE IN THIS WORLD ...

N UR HUBBY ALWAYZ TAKE A GIFT FOR U ... He take a

small box in his pocket n open it ...

It is a beautiful diamond ring...

Wify this is for u ... But u r not here to accept this gift i want to see

ur expressions when i gave u this diamond ring ... !!!!

i noe this is impossible but ... I promise u mrs.yuvraj udayveer sing

no one take ur place ... I never grew up ...

In next side ... !!!

Where is manyta ? Ds she is... i m here every one luk at the

direction where a voice come manyta beta humne aapse kha tha

na breakfast ke time pe ... Apko ko late nhi hona ... !!! Ds ... Sorry

tommorrow i will be ready on time... ds manyta beta ye tho

aap humesha hi kheti hai ... Tho ab kar ke dikhayegi na !!!

Everyone luk at vb ... Who wink at her... ha ds pkka don't forget

beta that u r yuvrani of devghar she wispered i wish i could forget

this !!! Did u say something beta ... Ya i m really hungry ...

Thanx vb (she wispred)

Ur welcome ... !!!

U r not late for ur job

No actually tommorow is a very especial day so i take a holiday

Especial day ?

Tommorow a owner of uday niwas is coming

Who ?

I don't noe !!!

I never see his face ... N i don't noe his name also

Manyta bhai taraki pe ho apne boss ka naam nhi pta tumhe oh

hello i noe his name

So tell me

Yuvraaj ...yaaa Something something something !!!!

Something ? This is kind of a name ?

I don't noe ...

Now i understand y u alwayz fail in history

Shut up vb !!!

Every one luk at manyta

Sorry ... N she start eating ...

Kritz 😳😳

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kritika

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Posted: 12 years ago

CHARECTOR SKETCH

charector sketch

YUVRAJ UDAYVEER SINGH (27 years old) : a handsome hunk a BIG business tycon in india who is rude ... but behind him he is kind hearted man who alwayz love his family n more than his sister he love just one girl anisha ... or i say miss mharani anisha uday veer singh ... n when he LOST HER ... so he make rude n heart less man ... !!!😭😭

YUVRANI MANYTA KUMARI / SHREYA SHEGAL(23 years old) : A CUTE BUBBLY SWEET FULL OF LIFE ... SHE HATES MORE ATTENTION SEEKERS ... SHE HAVE ONE BROTHER WHO MAKES ALWAYZ SMILE ON HER FACE ... SHE IS WORKING IN UDAY NIVAS AS A MANGER POST WIDOUT DS KNOWLEDGE IN OFFICE NO ONE NOE ABOUT HER REAL NAME EVERYONE KNOW ABOUT HER AS SHREYA SHEGAL ... she never come front of midia couz she hated to answer them ... so she refused ... n she never go in any other parties n all like bimbos go 😉😉

aditiya kapoor(25 years old) : a family frnd of manyta he chrush on manyta since when he he meet him first time he have no gutz to tell her ... !!! 😳😳😳

mharani anisha veer singh (26 years old) : cute sweet lovely she is like a angel for uday ... uday loved her so much now she is dead ... 😭😭 for some reason ...

vijaybhai(26 years old): a caring brother he always care about manyta ...he noe about her all secrets ... n he always there for manyta when no one there for her ... !!! 😃😃

unnati (24 years old) :who loved her dada n bhabi so much but unfortunatly when uday lost his love she is not see him like this so she decided to go london for studies ... !!!😊😊😊

ds : a true queen ... same chrector as dek

brijraj : he is unknown... for everyone...what he do what he did no one knows manyta don't know about her father ...that he is alive or not ...

komal : a big superstar in bollywood everyone noe her ... !!! komal is a mother of anisha n manyta ... manyta don't noe about her anything

maya : a sweet caring mother of vb n manyta ... !!!

i noe i noe charector sketch is more confusing than ... but in every single chapter u noe about every thing

kritz 😳😳

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Neeraj

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Posted: 12 years ago

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serat

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Posted: 12 years ago

Nice concept
Waiting for the CS

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Jinro Soju

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Posted: 12 years ago

Nice concept kritz... I think my inbox ll get flooded only by urs pm... heheheh... continue soon... n thoda mast wala ladaii n thodasa uday ka obsession bhi add karna towards his princess if possible...