(J of a Wife 4) Kabhi Khushi Kabhi Ghum ... Last Chapter - Page 146 - Page 23

Originally posted by: catty2000

Originally posted by: andy.a

Hi navi,😃 Hi Andy😊.
i am once again first!!😳 Yep , u made it JUST IN TIME😉.
My luck is back i think. And along with yours ... MINE IS BACK TOO😃.
Awsome and a beautiful update. Thank you 🤗 , I made me teary reading it. How so😕?
When uday said he spotted pirates, i loved manyatas reply, or should i saw the writers thoughts, so naive, she first though of pirates of carribean??/😲 typical manyta!!!!!!!!!!!! Yep , her first thought is JOHNNY DEPP😳.

i could actually feel their tension, their fears when they faced the pirates, hats of to you!!!!!!!👏👏👏👏beautifully written😳 Thanx Andy😳.

my heart was beating with fear whe the pirates boarded the ship😕 the promo did scare me.

poor uday, how he was worried of his family😭 Hmmm , he had a small Baby and pregnant wife to think about.

i wanted to kill the pirates😡😡😡 when they hit uday... i wnat to kill them😡😡 Cool down Andy😆.

if udita had not cried for her papa, maybe it would have been just a setllement between uday and pirates, we would not have seen the heroic nature of uday😳

touch his family and we will see uday's true nature That's why I made her call out to him😉!

Uday was like a bollywood hero😳, fighting those ugly pirates single handed.. and for the first time,The coastal guards came on time, that was what I loved about this part' I'm glad u loved it.

Poor udita, she had to face a lot in that young age, ... and more to come😭.

loved the scene where she fuses about food.my niece too wants her mama's milk, but she is not fuzzy on other food, she is a good girl in that case. All babies aren't so understanding ... if they want MILK - Then they'll cry till they get it😆. vijay bahi is finally learning to stand on his own feet. thats good. Agreed! finally jai is getting mariied, so uday is finally safe. loved manyta's possessive ness very much Hmmm , Uday is only HERS😳!

loved that bad manners scene very much, it was typical uday style Now after a lot of trips to different places, the evil in the writer 😈 has finally emerged!!!!! Yes - she was keeping it for the END😉! So they have to swim back, oh that's so scary.😒 Even udita!!!!!!navi cant you give a consideration to udita at least, please😭 Can't help it.

I tell you I loved the final lines in written sense, not according to the story, looking forward for the ship wreck, but it would only make me cry , keeping my tissues ready😭😭 Keep EXTRA ... just in case 1 is NOT ENOUGH.

I am sorry for editing my comment this late, & I'm replying to it even later😉!!!!!!!! looking forward for a speedy update.😆 Will u be first again?

Hope to keep up my luck for the coming chaps too I hope so too😳.

Love you❤️ Love you 2 ☺️!

PS: andrea said she likes the chap😳, and asked me to ask you if you are still angry with her I saw Andrea's LIKE - thank her for me😉! No - not angry with her!

Originally posted by: Chamakchallo30

Originally posted by: annabh

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Originally posted by: -SuHaaN.R-

Hi Navin , Hi Suhaan😊 . great chapter👍🏼. Thank you 🤗. PIRATES have become a massive threat in the RedSea. Both our countries have had citizens taken hostage , I'm glad that u wrote something real-life in your FF. Yep , the couple from SA that was taken hostage was released only a month ago , so that was kind of fresh in my head , and I decided to write about it! U did a fab job on that concept👏. Thanx😊! Adding in the United nations coastal services , was very realistic and believable! Getting your Hero to do something "heroic" would've been far-fetched and stupid. Yes - I agree totally! Now the forthcoming update indicates disaster. I think manyata will suffer a miscarriage , I hope that doesn't happen ; but I have a strong feeling that the boy won't make it. That's a very good guess - let's wait to see if you're right! Whatever the case , do continue soon! Ya - on Monday. I was number 59 - but I see you've passed 65 now, The last time I checked it was 70😃 , hope the figure is to your satisfaction😃. It is indeed ... however 3 regular readers of mine have not LIKEd or commented😭! Love - SUHAAN😊

Originally posted by: MsLuscious

Heylo navina😊... Hi Sarah😃

hr u? Good , and YOU?

This ff of yours turns out to be more interesting... you always come up with interesting fresh plots... and this plot as you told me will be a mixture of khushi and gham... 😆.. More ghum than khushi though!

CHAPTER TWO: this chapter was out standing navina what i love the most in your ff is the humour... the way u write is fab which u urself know it so i dont need to say it out loud over and over again😉... Thank you😳! The dialogues you write makes me laugh alot... I'm glad about that😊. and this chapter was filled with many cute sweet dialogues ... two dialogue which i liked the most were...

Uday wrapped his arm around Manyata's waist and gave her a slight pinch : 2 down , 8 to go ... right Princess? In your dreams Uday! ...

seriously uday is funny he is planning to kill his better half by demanding so many babies 😆.. Hmmm , poor Manyata☺️.

. Mamma , mum-mum , she'd say and hit Manyata on her chest ... indicating that she was hungry. Princess , mum-mum , Uday would tease - only to get an elbow in his stomach.

🤣🤣🤣 HAWWW Sarah ... Uday didn't get "mum-mum" ; AND YOU'RE LAUGHING SO MUCH!

Ronaldo hayye you mentioned him i thought maybe manyata would meet him but he was out... better luck next time but i dream to meet him one day he is so so so dreamy man... I agree😳!

this chapter was complete entertainment package loved it loads :)I'm very happy that u enjoyed it so much😃!!!

CHAPTER THREE:

God navina you scared the hell out of me... while reading this chapter i was sure someone will get killed... Ummm 🤔 ... not yet (someone will get killed in the next part), n i thought udita will be the one ... you explained everything so nicely... it felt like i was watching movie... but it did scared me alot... Sorry about that! when manveer and udita were saved i sighed of relief...as did everyone else 😆. but the then again the last line scared me

will they be able to reach home safe and sound? i hope they do... I doubt it😭. but then i again will say... whats a story without some drama😉 Exactly ! (afterall your FF is loaded with drama😉) i know you wont kill them... i hope so...NO COMMENT😉!

Navina u r so active yaar giving updates jaldi jaldi... Should I slow down? (I think I should , I could definitely use a break😉)

loved both the chapters continue sooon byeeex🤗 Bye (COME AGAIN)