Originally posted by: nityatandon
Hey... Navina...
Hi Nitya ... welcome back 🤗 ... I missed u so much😳.
First of all...
Sorry for the late comment...
Awww - I know why u were late (So I have to forgive you😆)
Both the chappys were navilisious if I may say in Mahi's words... Mahi is not here - we'll keep it between us, that u used her word😉!!
So I'll comment chappy wise Great😎.
Chappy 15
Ohh... I was waiting for this showdown for so long... Hope it was worth the wait😕.
The allegations Uday put against Manyata were true...
It was justified... So happy that u felt so😃.
But what wasn't was that he dragged Akash in between...
Why the hell did he had to do it... When you're in anger - there is no logic in what u say. The only objective u have at that moment , is to hurt the opponent ... and that's what Uday did, by bringing up Akash😉.
Actually I think it was ok of you to write it... So, u approve😆?
If I was in your place I would have done the same thing (If I would have got the idea)... Of-course YOU would've got the same idea .
And I loved the way Manyata boldly said what she thought...
And gave him a piece of her mind...
Because he has no right to point a finger on her character...
She didn't just listened there...
But she also tried to keep her point... I tried making it a fair fight (some people used to say I give unfair advantage to Uday ... haina Nitya😉)
So Uday's heart knows that she can't live without Manyata...
But his mind is not ready to accept it... Correct!
Ohh god... Now they'll live under the same roof...
But lead seperate lives... Right.
I have a feeling that this is some sort of Uday's plan...
Or maybe the writer's... It MUST be the WRITER'S PLAN (she's very evil , I tell u😆)
Chappy 16
Udita's antiques were as usual super cute...
Uday again helped Manyata...
And as much as he can try...
He will never be avle to stop that... He's the KNIGHT IN SHINING ARMOUR - it's a job , he'll never retire from😉.
Manyata's lie was childlike...
But we love her this way... U are right😳.
Haha.. Manyata thought that the job was to kill Stanley...
And what a death you gave to Stanley... A simple death, by INSECT STING😆.
He told Udita about where he was going and not Manyata...
The headline was really like the ones which reporters make... Yep - very dispicable🤢
I wonder what will Manyata do now... Well , u got 12 chapters in which to find that out😆.
Navina I want to tell you something...
You are an amazing writer... Thank you (and so are u)
And you know what...
You are my inspiration for writing my story... Wow , that's quite a compliment, thanxx so much!
And not just your stories but also your comment..
This is a bit funny...
But even if I read your comments...
I love them... U are the 7th person to tell me that.
I love replying to comments - and I'm glad that that everyone values my replies so much😳.
You have so much power in your writing... How come I don't feel that way😕? (don't mind me ... I'm fishing for more compliments 🤣)
Anyways...
Again a very big sorry for the very late cmnt... No problem 😃.
I mean I have to read 12 chappys of book 5... Good luck with that😆.
Thanx for the scrap... Welcome!